Run: 2026-04-24-01KQ06980CPAGAN0REHMEXPVXC

Run Details

Duration:
44.2s
Cost:
$0.006356
Provider:
Xiaomi

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The path into Richmond Park should have been familiar. Aurora had taken deliveries through these gates dozens of times, knowing the way the sodium lamps cut through the dusk, the smell of damp earth and distant traffic. Tonight, the air tasted different. Ozone, maybe. And old copper. She held the Heartstone pendant in her fist, its silver chain wrapped tight around her fingers. It was warm, a steady, puling heat against her palm that had been growing more insistent for the last hour, leading her off the main paths, deeper into the park’s western stretches. The standing stones appeared not as a gradual reveal but as a sudden, silent punchline. One moment, dense tree line. The next, a clearing ringed by enormous, ancient oaks, their trunks thicker than her flat’s doorframe. They weren’t arranged in a circle, but in some irregular, sprawling pattern that felt less like a monument and more like a wound in the land. The air inside the ring was still. No wind. The sounds of the city—the distant rumble, the bark of a dog—vanished, swallowed by the trees. The silence pressed against her eardrums. The pendant pulsed, hotter. *Here. Go in.* She stepped between two of the stones. The sensation was like walking through cold cobwebs that weren't there. One step: park. Next step: somewhere else. The grass under her boots was impossibly soft, springy. Wildflowers, pale blues and violets, bloomed in defiance of the season, their scent cloying and sweet, like funeral lilies. The moonlight, which had been a pale smudge behind London’s glow, now streamed down, unnaturally silver, casting sharp, black shadows from the standing stones. They stretched like grasping fingers. Her reason for being here, the one Eva had sworn was vital, suddenly felt flimsy. *“The pendant knows, Rory. It hums for a reason. Silas said the grove answers those who are called.”* A reason to stand alone in a place that didn’t obey the clock. She moved toward the centre, her boots making no sound on the strange grass. The Heartstone’s glow was visible now, a faint, deep crimson light seeping between her knuckles. It pulsed in time with the warmth. *Thump-thump. Thump-thump.* A sound. She froze. It was distant, a soft, rhythmic scraping. Like long nails on rough bark. It came from the north side of the grove, beyond the nearest oaks. Aurora held her breath. The sound stopped. Silence rushed back in, heavier than before. *Just an animal. A fox.* She told herself, but the thought felt hollow here. Her skin prickled. She scanned the tree line, the deep shadows between the massive trunks. Nothing moved. The wildflowers, headless and pale, nodded in a breeze that didn't touch her hair. She took another step. The scraping resumed, closer now. To the west. She whipped her head around. A tree branch, thick as her thigh, swayed gently, forty feet up, though the air was still. She watched it, counting the seconds. It stilled. Had it moved before she looked? The certainty that she’d caught it mid-motion settled in her stomach like a cold stone. The pendant’s pulse quickened. *Thump-thumpthump. Thump-thumpthump.* A flicker at the edge of her vision. To the left. She snapped her head to the side, staring hard into the gloom between two standing stones. Nothing. Just more pale flowers and silver grass. But the impression lingered—a shape, low to the ground, that was there and then wasn’t, leaving no rustle, no sign. Like a thought glimpsed and forgotten. Her breath felt too loud. She could hear her own heartbeat in her ears, a frantic counter-rhythm to the pendant’s steady, eerie heat. The wrongness wasn’t a single thing. It was a collage. The impossible flowers. The silent, watching stones. The scraping that circled. The sense that the grove itself was holding its breath, waiting for her to do something. She started moving again, faster, her goal the vague centre of the clearing. The pendant was a hot coal in her hand now. The scraping followed. It wasn’t circling anymore. It was keeping pace. Off to her right, just out of sight. A dry, repetitive *shhhk… shhhk… shhhk…* like something dragging itself through the leaves that weren't there. “Who’s there?” Her voice was a croak, swallowed by the unnatural quiet. No echo. The scraping stopped. In the silence that followed, she heard breathing. Not hers. It was wet, ragged, coming from all around her, from the stones themselves. In. Out. A laboured, hungry sound. A shape detached from the shadow of the nearest oak. It was tall, impossibly thin, with limbs like gnarled branches. It didn't walk. It unfolded. Its head, a featureless lump, tilted. Aurora’s heart hammered against her ribs. She stumbled back, her heel catching on the spongy grass. The shape didn't advance. It simply stood, its form wavering at the edges as if it were made of smoke and moonlight. The Heartstone flared. A silent, crimson pulse illuminated the clearing, a wave of ruby light. In that brief, bloody glow, she saw them. Dozens of them. Standing in the spaces between the oaks, pressed against the standing stones, their tall, twisted forms frozen in the act of watching. Motionless. Except for their heads, which all tilted in unison, a faint, dry clicking sound accompanying the movement. The light faded. Darkness, deeper than before, rushed back. But she’d seen. The wet breathing resumed, louder now, overlapping. A chorus of gurgling inhalations. She ran. The direction didn't matter. Back toward where she’d entered. Her boots pounded the silent earth. The wildflowers crushed underfoot released their sickly sweet scent in waves. The scraping started again, on all sides, a frenzied, gibbering sound. The shapes were moving with her now, keeping pace in the trees, flitting between the stones. She caught glimpses of them—long, pale limbs, the flash of something dark where a mouth should be. The standing stones blurred past. Which way was out? They all looked the same, ancient and grim, their shadows merging into a black labyrinth. The pendant burned, a brand on her skin. It wasn’t guiding her anymore. It was an anchor, a hot, angry pulse that said *here, you are here, they see you.* She risked a glance over her shoulder. One of them was closer, just a dozen yards back, moving with a lurching, broken gait. Its head was thrown back, and a sound escaped it—not the breathing, but a low, vibrating keen, like a saw through bone. A root, black and thick, erupted from the ground in front of her. She vaulted it, landing hard, pain shooting up her ankle. The keening grew louder, joined by others. The grove was waking up, and it was hungry. Ahead, a gap between two oaks. It looked narrower than the others, a dark slit. The Heartstone’s glow illuminated it for a second—a path, maybe. The stones there were different, more uniform. A possible exit. She poured everything she had into the sprint, lungs burning, the coppery taste of fear thick on her tongue. The shapes in the trees paralleled her, their scraping a deafening rattle. The one behind her was gaining. She could feel its presence, a cold spot in the air, a focus of wet, desperate intent. She plunged into the gap. The oaks pressed close, their bark slick and wrong to the touch. The passage twisted. Moonlight vanished. The sounds cut off abruptly, as if snuffed out. Silence again. Her own ragged gasps echoed in the tight space. She sagged against a trunk, her chest heaving. The pendant’s heat was fading, subsiding to a dull, residual warmth. She was out. She had to be. She looked down at it, nestled in her palm. Its faint crimson glow showed the bark under her fingers. Deep grooves were carved into the wood, in a pattern that made her breath hitch. They were the same shape as the scar on her wrist. A perfect crescent moon. A long, cold finger traced the line of her jaw. A whisper, dry as autumn leaves, brushed her ear. *You left the path.*
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags1
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences2
tagDensity0.5
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
92.58% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1348
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"suddenly"
count1
1
adverb"gently"
count1
highlights
0"suddenly"
1"gently"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
3.56% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1348
totalAiIsms26
found
0
word"familiar"
count1
1
word"silence"
count4
2
word"pulsed"
count2
3
word"warmth"
count2
4
word"rhythmic"
count1
5
word"scanned"
count1
6
word"stomach"
count1
7
word"pulse"
count3
8
word"quickened"
count1
9
word"flicker"
count1
10
word"gloom"
count1
11
word"echo"
count1
12
word"wavering"
count1
13
word"lurching"
count1
14
word"could feel"
count1
15
word"echoed"
count1
16
word"perfect"
count1
17
word"traced"
count1
18
word"whisper"
count1
highlights
0"familiar"
1"silence"
2"pulsed"
3"warmth"
4"rhythmic"
5"scanned"
6"stomach"
7"pulse"
8"quickened"
9"flicker"
10"gloom"
11"echo"
12"wavering"
13"lurching"
14"could feel"
15"echoed"
16"perfect"
17"traced"
18"whisper"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences162
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences162
filterMatches
0"see"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences162
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen32
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans8
markdownWords44
totalWords1342
ratio0.033
matches
0"Here. Go in."
1"“The pendant knows, Rory. It hums for a reason. Silas said the grove answers those who are called.”"
2"Thump-thump. Thump-thump."
3"Just an animal. A fox."
4"Thump-thumpthump. Thump-thumpthump."
5"shhhk… shhhk… shhhk…"
6"here, you are here, they see you."
7"You left the path."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions1
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions14
wordCount1322
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity0.3
worstName"Heartstone"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"One"
discoveredNames
Richmond1
Park1
Heartstone4
London1
Eva1
Aurora3
One3
persons
0"Heartstone"
1"Eva"
2"Aurora"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"London"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences92
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
50.97% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.49
wordCount1342
matches
0"not as a gradual reveal but as a sudden, silent punchline"
1"not the breathing, but a low, vibrating keen, like a saw through bone"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences162
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs31
mean43.29
std25.42
cv0.587
sampleLengths
095
193
27
382
446
538
62
742
845
963
106
1161
1260
1358
1414
153
1629
1769
1866
1924
2072
2154
2245
2339
2435
2554
2631
2737
2849
2919
304
98.77% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences162
matches
0"were made"
1"was thrown"
2"were carved"
0.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount9
totalVerbs203
matches
0"was like walking"
1"wasn’t, leaving"
2"was holding"
3"wasn’t circling"
4"was keeping"
5"were moving"
6"wasn’t guiding"
7"was waking"
8"was gaining"
54.67% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences162
ratio0.031
matches
0"The sounds of the city—the distant rumble, the bark of a dog—vanished, swallowed by the trees."
1"But the impression lingered—a shape, low to the ground, that was there and then wasn’t, leaving no rustle, no sign."
2"She caught glimpses of them—long, pale limbs, the flash of something dark where a mouth should be."
3"Its head was thrown back, and a sound escaped it—not the breathing, but a low, vibrating keen, like a saw through bone."
4"The Heartstone’s glow illuminated it for a second—a path, maybe."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1332
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount36
adverbRatio0.02702702702702703
lyAdverbCount8
lyAdverbRatio0.006006006006006006
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences162
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences162
mean8.28
std6.29
cv0.759
sampleLengths
09
128
25
32
43
516
632
715
85
916
1026
117
122
1316
146
154
161
172
187
1911
203
214
229
2319
2424
255
2615
2731
2814
2915
307
311
321
332
342
357
366
3713
384
393
407
413
4211
433
4412
452
4614
474
485
493
33.95% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats26
diversityRatio0.25925925925925924
totalSentences162
uniqueOpeners42
47.96% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences139
matches
0"*Just an animal."
1"Just more pale flowers and"
ratio0.014
78.99% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount49
totalSentences139
matches
0"She held the Heartstone pendant"
1"It was warm, a steady,"
2"They weren’t arranged in a"
3"She stepped between two of"
4"They stretched like grasping fingers."
5"Her reason for being here,"
6"She moved toward the centre,"
7"It pulsed in time with"
8"It was distant, a soft,"
9"It came from the north"
10"Her skin prickled."
11"She scanned the tree line,"
12"She took another step."
13"She whipped her head around."
14"She watched it, counting the"
15"She snapped her head to"
16"Her breath felt too loud."
17"She could hear her own"
18"It was a collage."
19"She started moving again, faster,"
ratio0.353
42.73% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount116
totalSentences139
matches
0"The path into Richmond Park"
1"Aurora had taken deliveries through"
2"Tonight, the air tasted different."
3"She held the Heartstone pendant"
4"It was warm, a steady,"
5"The standing stones appeared not"
6"The next, a clearing ringed"
7"They weren’t arranged in a"
8"The air inside the ring"
9"The sounds of the city—the"
10"The silence pressed against her"
11"The pendant pulsed, hotter."
12"She stepped between two of"
13"The sensation was like walking"
14"The grass under her boots"
15"Wildflowers, pale blues and violets,"
16"The moonlight, which had been"
17"They stretched like grasping fingers."
18"Her reason for being here,"
19"A reason to stand alone"
ratio0.835
71.94% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences139
matches
0"To the west."
1"To the left."
ratio0.014
63.49% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences54
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"It was warm, a steady, puling heat against her palm that had been growing more insistent for the last hour, leading her off the main paths, deeper into the park…"
1"They weren’t arranged in a circle, but in some irregular, sprawling pattern that felt less like a monument and more like a wound in the land."
2"The moonlight, which had been a pale smudge behind London’s glow, now streamed down, unnaturally silver, casting sharp, black shadows from the standing stones."
3"The sense that the grove itself was holding its breath, waiting for her to do something."
4"shhhk…* like something dragging itself through the leaves that weren't there."
5"It was an anchor, a hot, angry pulse that said *here, you are here, they see you.*"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags1
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
81.3208%