Run: 2026-04-24-01KQ069Q9S75SD03YXZJ536WNR

Run Details

Duration:
24.6s
Cost:
$0.004030
Provider:
Xiaomi

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The air in the Fae Grove tasted of damp earth and a sweetness that wasn't floral. It coated the back of Rory’s throat. She stood just inside the boundary of ancient oak standing stones, the ones that looked like weathered grey teeth biting into the turf. Behind her, the dark, managed sprawl of Richmond Park was silent. Ahead, within the stones, the wildflowers bloomed in impossible profusion for a February night, their colours muted and strange in the starlight. She came because the Heartstone had finally done more than just pulse. It had grown warm in her pocket, then hot, a feverish throb that mirrored the frantic beat of her own heart. Yu-Fei had mentioned the Grove in passing, a story to fill the quiet moments between orders. *A place that doesn’t keep to our clock.* Rory hadn’t believed him, not really. She believed in the pendant now. The pendant was a deep crimson teardrop against her palm, its faint inner glow barely a whisper of light. The silver chain was cool, the gem warm. She stepped further in, her boots silent on the thick, springy moss that carpeted the clearing. The standing stones loomed at her periphery, a ragged circle. Inside, the world felt muffled, the distant hum of London traffic completely erased. She counted her steps. Fifty paces from the stones should have put her near the center, where Yu-Fei said the air was thinnest. At forty-seven, she stopped. The pendant’s heat flared, a sharp sting. Something was wrong with the light. The stars above the canopy of bare branches seemed… fixed. Not twinkling, but pinned like specimens. She looked down at her shadow, thrown long and skeletal by a moon that was a smudged pearl behind clouds. It stretched towards a hawthorn bush on the far side of the clearing. As she watched, the tip of her shadow’s hand twitched. Not with her own movement. It curled, slowly, like a beckoning finger. Rory’s breath hitched. She stared at the bush. The leaves were a tangled, thorny mass. Nothing there. She looked back at her shadow. It lay flat and still, a perfect duplicate of her posture again. *Wind,* she told herself. *A trick of the light through branches.* But there was no wind. The flowers didn't sway. The silence was a physical weight, pressing on her eardrums. Then she heard it. Not a sound, exactly. An absence. A single, sustained note just beyond the range of hearing, a pressure that made her teeth ache. It wavered, dipped, and then resolved into something else. A soft, wet sound. A rhythmic *shuck-shuck-shuck*, like someone dragging a heavy bag of wet sand through the grass. It came from the direction of the hawthorn. Her fingers tightened around the Heartstone. Its heat was a steady, urgent pulse now. *Portal. Close.* That’s what Yu-Fei had said. The pendant pulled you toward a Hel portal. Was that what the Grove was? A place where the walls wore thin? She took another step. Her foot didn't sink into the moss. It met solid, cold ground. Stone. She looked down. Beneath a thin layer of green velvet, the earth was grey flagstone, seamlessly fitted. She scraped at it with her boot. Moss flaked away, revealing more stone, inscribed with faint, spiraling patterns that seemed to shift if she looked at them too long. The *shuck-shuck* sound stopped. The silence that rushed back in was worse. It was a listening silence. Rory turned in a slow circle. The standing stones were still there, but they seemed further away. The gap between the nearest two had widened, showing a slice of the dark park beyond that looked… different. Flatter. Less real. At the edge of her vision, near a clump of bluebells that glowed with a faint phosphorescence, something moved. It wasn't a shape, more a distortion, a ripple in the air like heat off tarmac. It folded itself behind the flower stems and was gone. Her heart hammered against her ribs. She wasn’t alone. The thought wasn’t a fear; it was a fact, as solid as the unexpected stone under her feet. She was being watched. Measured. "Hello?" Her voice came out flat, swallowed by the grove. No echo. The word just died. She focused on the pendant. Its glow pulsed in time with her pulse. It wanted her to go forward, toward the hawthorn. The source of the sound. The site of the distortion. Every instinct screamed at her to turn, to run for the gap in the stones, to break back into the mundane world of sodium streetlights and distant sirens. But the pendant was a brand in her hand, a promise or a threat. And Rory had never been good at running from the wrong thing. She walked toward the hawthorn. The stone path guided her, the moss peeling back as if reluctant to hide it any longer. Ten paces. Twenty. The air grew colder, carrying a smell of ozone and deep, damp cellars. The hawthorn was ancient, its trunk twisted and split. Thorns as long as her finger protruded from its branches. And nestled in a fork of the trunk, at eye level, was a darkness. Not a shadow cast by something, but a hole in the light itself. A perfect circle of utter black, no bigger than her fist. It seemed to drink the starlight. The Heartstone in her hand flared into a steady, blood-red brilliance, casting sharp shadows across her face. The warmth was a fever now, burning her palm. From the hole in the light, a sound finally emerged. Not the dragging noise. A whisper. It was dry and soft, like dead leaves skittering across pavement, but it formed words. *Rory.* She froze. The voice was her mother’s. *Jennifer Carter,* gentle and lilting with the Welsh valleys. But it was wrong. The cadence was slightly off, the vowel in her name stretched a fraction too long. *Why did you leave, Rory?* The whisper came from the hole, but it also seemed to come from all around her, from the stones, from the earth beneath her feet. "I didn't leave you," she whispered back, her throat tight. "I left *him*." A sound from the hole now. A slow, wet inhalation. *He misses you. He’s looking.* The pendant pulsed, a sharp, warning beat. *Not him. This.* She lifted the glowing stone toward the hole. The darkness inside the hawthorn didn’t react to the light. It absorbed it. And as she held it there, the world at the edges of her vision began to go soft and grey, like a photograph left in the sun. The stars blurred. The trees lost their definition. Only the pendant, the hole, and the twisted hawthorn remained sharp and terribly clear. Something pale slid from the black circle. Not a hand. Not a tendril. It was a finger, long and smooth and alabaster-white, with a joint in the middle that bent the wrong way. It probed the air, feeling for purchase on the bark. Then another followed. They gripped the edges of the hole, and with a slow, deliberate motion, pulled. A face began to emerge. It was a woman’s face, beautiful and blank, with hair like spilled ink. Its eyes were open, but they were the same flat, light-drinking black as the hole. It had no mouth. Its smooth features ended in a chin that tapered to a fine point. It looked at her. It saw her with those empty eyes, and Rory felt a cold certainty settle in her bones. This thing wore a face like a stolen mask. It wasn’t Isolde, or any fairy tale creature. It was something else. Something that lived in the spaces between, and it had been waiting. The last of the park’s reality bled away. She stood on the flagstones, in the heart of the Grove, under a sky of fixed and dying stars. Alone with the thing that wore a face and the pendant that burned like a brand. The silence was absolute, waiting for her next move.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
0.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags2
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"she whispered back [back]"
dialogueSentences3
tagDensity0.667
leniency1
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.5
85.09% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1341
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"really"
count1
1
adverb"completely"
count1
2
adverb"slowly"
count1
3
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"really"
1"completely"
2"slowly"
3"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
10.51% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1341
totalAiIsms24
found
0
word"pulse"
count3
1
word"throb"
count1
2
word"whisper"
count3
3
word"loomed"
count1
4
word"perfect"
count2
5
word"silence"
count4
6
word"weight"
count1
7
word"wavered"
count1
8
word"resolved"
count1
9
word"rhythmic"
count1
10
word"velvet"
count1
11
word"measured"
count1
12
word"echo"
count1
13
word"pulsed"
count2
14
word"warmth"
count1
highlights
0"pulse"
1"throb"
2"whisper"
3"loomed"
4"perfect"
5"silence"
6"weight"
7"wavered"
8"resolved"
9"rhythmic"
10"velvet"
11"measured"
12"echo"
13"pulsed"
14"warmth"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences151
matches(empty)
95.55% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount5
narrationSentences151
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences152
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen28
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans12
markdownWords37
totalWords1341
ratio0.028
matches
0"A place that doesn’t keep to our clock."
1"Wind,"
2"A trick of the light through branches."
3"shuck-shuck-shuck"
4"Portal. Close."
5"shuck-shuck"
6"Rory."
7"Jennifer Carter,"
8"Why did you leave, Rory?"
9"him"
10"He misses you. He’s looking."
11"Not him. This."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions2
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions26
wordCount1333
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity0.6
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Grove"
discoveredNames
Fae1
Grove4
Rory8
Richmond1
Park1
February1
Heartstone3
London1
Yu-Fei3
Hel1
Welsh1
Isolde1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Heartstone"
2"Yu-Fei"
places
0"Fae"
1"Grove"
2"Richmond"
3"Park"
4"London"
5"Hel"
globalScore1
windowScore1
97.37% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences95
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"looked like weathered grey teeth biting i"
1"patterns that seemed to shift if she looked at them too long"
50.86% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.491
wordCount1341
matches
0"Not twinkling, but pinned like specimens"
1"Not a shadow cast by something, but a hole in the light itself"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences152
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs35
mean38.31
std21.8
cv0.569
sampleLengths
079
169
266
334
477
535
611
719
863
942
1063
114
1213
1339
1445
1532
1616
1732
1854
1938
2063
2126
2231
231
2435
255
2625
2713
2815
2918
3062
3160
3250
3354
3452
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences151
matches
0"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs199
matches
0"was being"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences152
ratio0.007
matches
0"The thought wasn’t a fear; it was a fact, as solid as the unexpected stone under her feet."
88.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1340
adjectiveStacks2
stackExamples
0"steady, blood-red brilliance,"
1"same flat, light-drinking"
adverbCount37
adverbRatio0.027611940298507463
lyAdverbCount11
lyAdverbRatio0.008208955223880597
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences152
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences152
mean8.82
std5.99
cv0.679
sampleLengths
016
17
223
311
422
512
621
716
814
96
1019
118
1216
1310
1413
154
1619
174
187
196
209
211
226
2320
2413
2510
265
277
283
295
307
312
326
3312
344
357
365
374
3810
394
404
412
4217
439
444
4515
468
476
488
491
41.45% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats17
diversityRatio0.3157894736842105
totalSentences152
uniqueOpeners48
74.63% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences134
matches
0"Then she heard it."
1"Only the pendant, the hole,"
2"Then another followed."
ratio0.022
70.75% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount50
totalSentences134
matches
0"It coated the back of"
1"She stood just inside the"
2"She came because the Heartstone"
3"It had grown warm in"
4"She believed in the pendant"
5"She stepped further in, her"
6"She counted her steps."
7"She looked down at her"
8"It stretched towards a hawthorn"
9"It curled, slowly, like a"
10"She stared at the bush."
11"She looked back at her"
12"It lay flat and still,"
13"It wavered, dipped, and then"
14"It came from the direction"
15"Her fingers tightened around the"
16"Its heat was a steady,"
17"She took another step."
18"Her foot didn't sink into"
19"It met solid, cold ground."
ratio0.373
71.94% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount104
totalSentences134
matches
0"The air in the Fae"
1"It coated the back of"
2"She stood just inside the"
3"She came because the Heartstone"
4"It had grown warm in"
5"Yu-Fei had mentioned the Grove"
6"*A place that doesn’t keep"
7"She believed in the pendant"
8"The pendant was a deep"
9"The silver chain was cool,"
10"She stepped further in, her"
11"The standing stones loomed at"
12"She counted her steps."
13"The pendant’s heat flared, a"
14"Something was wrong with the"
15"The stars above the canopy"
16"She looked down at her"
17"It stretched towards a hawthorn"
18"It curled, slowly, like a"
19"Rory’s breath hitched."
ratio0.776
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences134
matches(empty)
ratio0
64.94% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences55
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"She stood just inside the boundary of ancient oak standing stones, the ones that looked like weathered grey teeth biting into the turf."
1"It had grown warm in her pocket, then hot, a feverish throb that mirrored the frantic beat of her own heart."
2"A single, sustained note just beyond the range of hearing, a pressure that made her teeth ache."
3"Moss flaked away, revealing more stone, inscribed with faint, spiraling patterns that seemed to shift if she looked at them too long."
4"At the edge of her vision, near a clump of bluebells that glowed with a faint phosphorescence, something moved."
5"The stone path guided her, the moss peeling back as if reluctant to hide it any longer."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags2
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"she whispered back, her throat tight"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she whispered back (whisper)"
dialogueSentences3
tagDensity0.333
leniency0.667
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.667
75.0359%