| 0.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 2 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "she whispered back [back]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 3 | | tagDensity | 0.667 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.5 | | effectiveRatio | 0.5 | |
| 85.09% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1341 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 4 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "really" | | 1 | "completely" | | 2 | "slowly" | | 3 | "slightly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 10.51% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1341 | | totalAiIsms | 24 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "pulse" | | 1 | "throb" | | 2 | "whisper" | | 3 | "loomed" | | 4 | "perfect" | | 5 | "silence" | | 6 | "weight" | | 7 | "wavered" | | 8 | "resolved" | | 9 | "rhythmic" | | 10 | "velvet" | | 11 | "measured" | | 12 | "echo" | | 13 | "pulsed" | | 14 | "warmth" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 151 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 95.55% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 5 | | narrationSentences | 151 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 152 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 28 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 12 | | markdownWords | 37 | | totalWords | 1341 | | ratio | 0.028 | | matches | | 0 | "A place that doesn’t keep to our clock." | | 1 | "Wind," | | 2 | "A trick of the light through branches." | | 3 | "shuck-shuck-shuck" | | 4 | "Portal. Close." | | 5 | "shuck-shuck" | | 6 | "Rory." | | 7 | "Jennifer Carter," | | 8 | "Why did you leave, Rory?" | | 9 | "him" | | 10 | "He misses you. He’s looking." | | 11 | "Not him. This." |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 2 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 26 | | wordCount | 1333 | | uniqueNames | 12 | | maxNameDensity | 0.6 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1 | | worstWindowName | "Grove" | | discoveredNames | | Fae | 1 | | Grove | 4 | | Rory | 8 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | February | 1 | | Heartstone | 3 | | London | 1 | | Yu-Fei | 3 | | Hel | 1 | | Welsh | 1 | | Isolde | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Heartstone" | | 2 | "Yu-Fei" |
| | places | | 0 | "Fae" | | 1 | "Grove" | | 2 | "Richmond" | | 3 | "Park" | | 4 | "London" | | 5 | "Hel" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 97.37% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 95 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "looked like weathered grey teeth biting i" | | 1 | "patterns that seemed to shift if she looked at them too long" |
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| 50.86% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 1.491 | | wordCount | 1341 | | matches | | 0 | "Not twinkling, but pinned like specimens" | | 1 | "Not a shadow cast by something, but a hole in the light itself" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 152 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 35 | | mean | 38.31 | | std | 21.8 | | cv | 0.569 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 79 | | 1 | 69 | | 2 | 66 | | 3 | 34 | | 4 | 77 | | 5 | 35 | | 6 | 11 | | 7 | 19 | | 8 | 63 | | 9 | 42 | | 10 | 63 | | 11 | 4 | | 12 | 13 | | 13 | 39 | | 14 | 45 | | 15 | 32 | | 16 | 16 | | 17 | 32 | | 18 | 54 | | 19 | 38 | | 20 | 63 | | 21 | 26 | | 22 | 31 | | 23 | 1 | | 24 | 35 | | 25 | 5 | | 26 | 25 | | 27 | 13 | | 28 | 15 | | 29 | 18 | | 30 | 62 | | 31 | 60 | | 32 | 50 | | 33 | 54 | | 34 | 52 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 151 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 199 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 0 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 1 | | totalSentences | 152 | | ratio | 0.007 | | matches | | 0 | "The thought wasn’t a fear; it was a fact, as solid as the unexpected stone under her feet." |
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| 88.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1340 | | adjectiveStacks | 2 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "steady, blood-red brilliance," | | 1 | "same flat, light-drinking" |
| | adverbCount | 37 | | adverbRatio | 0.027611940298507463 | | lyAdverbCount | 11 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.008208955223880597 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 152 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 152 | | mean | 8.82 | | std | 5.99 | | cv | 0.679 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 16 | | 1 | 7 | | 2 | 23 | | 3 | 11 | | 4 | 22 | | 5 | 12 | | 6 | 21 | | 7 | 16 | | 8 | 14 | | 9 | 6 | | 10 | 19 | | 11 | 8 | | 12 | 16 | | 13 | 10 | | 14 | 13 | | 15 | 4 | | 16 | 19 | | 17 | 4 | | 18 | 7 | | 19 | 6 | | 20 | 9 | | 21 | 1 | | 22 | 6 | | 23 | 20 | | 24 | 13 | | 25 | 10 | | 26 | 5 | | 27 | 7 | | 28 | 3 | | 29 | 5 | | 30 | 7 | | 31 | 2 | | 32 | 6 | | 33 | 12 | | 34 | 4 | | 35 | 7 | | 36 | 5 | | 37 | 4 | | 38 | 10 | | 39 | 4 | | 40 | 4 | | 41 | 2 | | 42 | 17 | | 43 | 9 | | 44 | 4 | | 45 | 15 | | 46 | 8 | | 47 | 6 | | 48 | 8 | | 49 | 1 |
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| 41.45% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 17 | | diversityRatio | 0.3157894736842105 | | totalSentences | 152 | | uniqueOpeners | 48 | |
| 74.63% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 134 | | matches | | 0 | "Then she heard it." | | 1 | "Only the pendant, the hole," | | 2 | "Then another followed." |
| | ratio | 0.022 | |
| 70.75% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 50 | | totalSentences | 134 | | matches | | 0 | "It coated the back of" | | 1 | "She stood just inside the" | | 2 | "She came because the Heartstone" | | 3 | "It had grown warm in" | | 4 | "She believed in the pendant" | | 5 | "She stepped further in, her" | | 6 | "She counted her steps." | | 7 | "She looked down at her" | | 8 | "It stretched towards a hawthorn" | | 9 | "It curled, slowly, like a" | | 10 | "She stared at the bush." | | 11 | "She looked back at her" | | 12 | "It lay flat and still," | | 13 | "It wavered, dipped, and then" | | 14 | "It came from the direction" | | 15 | "Her fingers tightened around the" | | 16 | "Its heat was a steady," | | 17 | "She took another step." | | 18 | "Her foot didn't sink into" | | 19 | "It met solid, cold ground." |
| | ratio | 0.373 | |
| 71.94% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 104 | | totalSentences | 134 | | matches | | 0 | "The air in the Fae" | | 1 | "It coated the back of" | | 2 | "She stood just inside the" | | 3 | "She came because the Heartstone" | | 4 | "It had grown warm in" | | 5 | "Yu-Fei had mentioned the Grove" | | 6 | "*A place that doesn’t keep" | | 7 | "She believed in the pendant" | | 8 | "The pendant was a deep" | | 9 | "The silver chain was cool," | | 10 | "She stepped further in, her" | | 11 | "The standing stones loomed at" | | 12 | "She counted her steps." | | 13 | "The pendant’s heat flared, a" | | 14 | "Something was wrong with the" | | 15 | "The stars above the canopy" | | 16 | "She looked down at her" | | 17 | "It stretched towards a hawthorn" | | 18 | "It curled, slowly, like a" | | 19 | "Rory’s breath hitched." |
| | ratio | 0.776 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 134 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 64.94% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 55 | | technicalSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "She stood just inside the boundary of ancient oak standing stones, the ones that looked like weathered grey teeth biting into the turf." | | 1 | "It had grown warm in her pocket, then hot, a feverish throb that mirrored the frantic beat of her own heart." | | 2 | "A single, sustained note just beyond the range of hearing, a pressure that made her teeth ache." | | 3 | "Moss flaked away, revealing more stone, inscribed with faint, spiraling patterns that seemed to shift if she looked at them too long." | | 4 | "At the edge of her vision, near a clump of bluebells that glowed with a faint phosphorescence, something moved." | | 5 | "The stone path guided her, the moss peeling back as if reluctant to hide it any longer." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 2 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "she whispered back, her throat tight" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 1 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she whispered back (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 3 | | tagDensity | 0.333 | | leniency | 0.667 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.667 | |