Run: 2026-04-24-01KQ06C6Y7ZRVZPSEV7S1EYQ1H

Run Details

Duration:
25.0s
Cost:
$0.003853
Provider:
Xiaomi

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The rain came down in sheets, turning the street into a river of fractured neon and oil-slick black. Harlow Quinn’s shoes slapped against the wet pavement, a steady, punishing rhythm that matched the beat of her heart. Ten yards ahead, the suspect wove through the thinning night crowd, a shadow in a grey hoodie moving with an unnatural fluidity. He didn’t stumble on the slick stones. He didn’t look back. He simply flowed. Her worn leather watch was heavy on her wrist, its face blurred with condensation under the cuff of her rain-spattered coat. 11:47 PM. The pursuit had started three blocks ago, outside a pub where a confidential informant had pointed out Silas—the quiet one who never paid in cash, the one who always seemed to know things he shouldn’t. One look, one sharp, evaluative glance from Silas, and he’d been gone, melting into the drizzle. Quinn had followed without a second thought. Now, the familiar streets of Soho were falling away. They sprinted past the glowing green sign of The Raven’s Nest—Silas’ bar, a place Quinn had watched for months from a parked car, its secrets locked behind old wood and older glass. The suspect didn’t slow. He rounded the corner into a narrow, unlit alley that stank of stale beer and refuse. Quinn’s lungs burned, a controlled fire from eighteen years of chasing men far less elusive. She dug deeper. The alley dead-ended at a high brick wall, a dead end. But the suspect was there, his hand pressed flat against a section of the wall. It wasn’t a door. It was a solid expanse of grime-streaked brick. He looked back then, his face a pale smear in the gloom, eyes wide and devoid of panic. Almost… amused. A sound like grinding stone, soft but undeniable, and a section of the wall swung inward, revealing a slice of absolute darkness. He slipped inside. The gap began to close. Quinn didn’t hesitate. Hesitation was a luxury for rookies and desk jockeys. She launched herself forward, her shoulder hitting the closing edge of the brick. Pain flared, sharp and hot, but the wall shuddered, stalled. She forced her way through the narrowing gap, scraping plaster and brick dust from her coat, and stumbled into the dark. It was a plunge into silence. The city’s roar—the rain, the distant sirens, the thump of music—vanished. The air was cool, dry, and carried the scent of dust, ozone, and something else. Something vaguely metallic and organic, like old blood and burnt sugar. Her eyes, still adjusting, saw only a steep, rough-hewn stone staircase descending into a soft, amber glow. She could hear him. Not the slap of shoes, but a faint, quick scuff of fabric on stone. He was going down. Her hand went to the SIG Sauer holstered under her arm. The grip was cold, familiar. This was not protocol. This was not an approved operation. This was a dive into a hole that had appeared where a wall should be, chasing a man who might not even be human. The memory of DS Morris flashed—his laughter, the sudden, inexplicable way he’d been torn from her during a case that had no explanation, only a blood-spattered file stamped classified. She’d been chasing the edges of that same shadow ever since. *Unexplained circumstances. Supernatural origins.* She descended. The steps were uneven, worn smooth in the center by countless feet. The amber light grew, resolving into a series of bare Edison bulbs strung along a vaulted brick ceiling. The passage opened up, the confined stairwell giving way to a vast, subterranean cavern. Quinn stopped, her breath catching in her throat. It was a market. But no market she had ever seen, and she’d walked the grimiest corners of this city. It sprawled beneath the city like a cancerous dream, a maze of stalls and tables under the ghostly glow of gas lamps and the harsh flicker of neon signs advertising things in languages she didn’t recognize. The air was thick with competing smells: herbs, frying meat, incense, and the sharp tang of alchemical reagents. Figures moved through the dimness. Not just people. A tall, willowy being with skin the texture of birch bark haggled over a jar of something that pulsed with its own light. A stout woman with multiple sets of arms stacked small, carved tokens on a counter. A pair of men in long coats traded hushed words near a stall selling what looked like bottled shadows. This was it. The whispers, the rumors that had only hardened her resolve these past three years. The Veil Market. Her suspect, Silas, was halfway across the central clearing, moving with purpose toward a narrower alley between stalls that bristled with strange, metallic sculptures. He was getting away. He was home here. Quinn’s training warred with a primal, survivalist instinct. *Follow. He’s the link. He’s the key.* But another part of her brain screamed *Abort. Wrong place. Wrong world.* This was the threshold. Beyond it lay the unknown, the things that had taken Morris, the things her badge and her pistol were utterly unequipped to quantify. She took a step forward, the sole of her shoe gritty on the strange, compacted earth of the market floor. The sound was minuscule, but a head turned near her. A vendor with milky, cataract-blank eyes fixed on her, though she was sure he couldn’t see her. He smiled, a slow crack in a parchment face, and the fine hairs on Quinn’s arms stood on end. Silas paused at the entrance to the alley, glancing back one last time. He saw her there, a rigid figure of trench coat and duty, silhouetted against the impossible light of the market. He gave a small, almost sorrowful shake of his head, then vanished into the shadows beyond. Quinn stood frozen for a long second. The sounds of the market washed over her: the clink of bone tokens, the murmur of deals made in the dark, the soft, unsettling hum of something contained and potent. She could feel the weight of the bone token in the pocket of her coat—the one she’d confiscated from a pickpocket last month, a flat, inscribed disc the size of a silver dollar, a curious, unremarkable thing until now. Entry requirement. The knowledge clicked into place with a chill. Her hand left her gun and went to her face, pressing against her closed eyes. The image of Morris, the wall, the impossible staircase. She could still turn back. Climb the stairs, leave this place, and file a report that would be buried in minutes, marking her as unstable, obsessed. The investigation into the clique, into all of it, would end. Her career might even survive. But Morris wouldn’t. The truth wouldn’t. And the shadow that had taken him would keep moving, keep feeding, just beneath the skin of the world she knew. She opened her eyes. The fear was still there, a cold stone in her gut, but it was joined by something else. The iron-hard certainty that had made her a detective in the first place. This was the case. This was the path. Quinn’s jaw tightened. She adjusted the lapels of her raincoat, her fingers brushing the worn leather of her watch. Time to clock in. Stepping fully into the Veil Market, she moved toward the alley where her quarry had disappeared, the ambient glow of the unnatural world painting long, dark shadows behind her. The market seemed to quiet slightly in her wake, the hum of a thousand secret transactions dimming to watch the newcomer pass. She ignored them, her focus narrowing to the dark maw ahead. The air grew colder. The smell of ozone intensified. She was no longer on the street. She was in the abyss. And she was going in, eyes open, to see what lived there.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags1
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences0
tagDensity1
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
92.38% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1313
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"utterly"
count1
1
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"utterly"
1"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
50.50% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1313
totalAiIsms13
found
0
word"fractured"
count1
1
word"familiar"
count2
2
word"gloom"
count1
3
word"silence"
count1
4
word"resolving"
count1
5
word"flicker"
count1
6
word"pulsed"
count1
7
word"resolve"
count1
8
word"could feel"
count1
9
word"weight"
count1
10
word"chill"
count1
11
word"maw"
count1
highlights
0"fractured"
1"familiar"
2"gloom"
3"silence"
4"resolving"
5"flicker"
6"pulsed"
7"resolve"
8"could feel"
9"weight"
10"chill"
11"maw"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"air was thick with"
count1
1
label"without second thought"
count1
highlights
0"The air was thick with"
1"without a second thought"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences113
matches(empty)
79.65% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences113
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences113
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen40
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans3
markdownWords16
totalWords1307
ratio0.012
matches
0"Unexplained circumstances. Supernatural origins."
1"Follow. He’s the link. He’s the key."
2"Abort. Wrong place. Wrong world."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions1
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions26
wordCount1286
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity0.7
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Quinn9
Silas4
Soho1
Raven1
Nest1
Sauer1
Morris4
Edison1
Veil2
Market2
persons
0"Quinn"
1"Silas"
2"Raven"
3"Sauer"
4"Morris"
5"Edison"
6"Market"
places
0"Soho"
1"Veil"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences72
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"looked like bottled shadows"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.765
wordCount1307
matches
0"Not the slap of shoes, but a faint, quick scuff of fabric on stone"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences113
matches(empty)
82.42% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs24
mean54.46
std23.88
cv0.438
sampleLengths
073
181
261
376
430
556
660
722
890
94
1046
1182
1285
1332
1454
1566
1649
1786
1866
1927
2043
2123
2271
2324
95.95% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences113
matches
0"been gone"
1"been torn"
2"was joined"
96.91% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs194
matches
0"were falling"
1"was going"
2"was going"
16.43% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences113
ratio0.044
matches
0"The pursuit had started three blocks ago, outside a pub where a confidential informant had pointed out Silas—the quiet one who never paid in cash, the one who always seemed to know things he shouldn’t."
1"They sprinted past the glowing green sign of The Raven’s Nest—Silas’ bar, a place Quinn had watched for months from a parked car, its secrets locked behind old wood and older glass."
2"The city’s roar—the rain, the distant sirens, the thump of music—vanished."
3"The memory of DS Morris flashed—his laughter, the sudden, inexplicable way he’d been torn from her during a case that had no explanation, only a blood-spattered file stamped classified."
4"She could feel the weight of the bone token in the pocket of her coat—the one she’d confiscated from a pickpocket last month, a flat, inscribed disc the size of a silver dollar, a curious, unremarkable thing until now."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount177
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount3
adverbRatio0.01694915254237288
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.005649717514124294
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences113
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences113
mean11.57
std8.58
cv0.742
sampleLengths
018
119
222
37
44
53
621
72
835
916
107
119
1232
134
1416
1515
163
1711
1815
194
208
2118
221
231
2422
253
265
273
289
2913
3010
3121
326
3311
3415
3511
3617
374
3814
394
4011
415
424
436
4424
4529
4611
472
482
492
33.19% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats19
diversityRatio0.2920353982300885
totalSentences113
uniqueOpeners33
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences104
matches(empty)
ratio0
70.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount39
totalSentences104
matches
0"He didn’t stumble on the"
1"He didn’t look back."
2"He simply flowed."
3"Her worn leather watch was"
4"They sprinted past the glowing"
5"He rounded the corner into"
6"She dug deeper."
7"It wasn’t a door."
8"It was a solid expanse"
9"He looked back then, his"
10"He slipped inside."
11"She launched herself forward, her"
12"She forced her way through"
13"It was a plunge into"
14"Her eyes, still adjusting, saw"
15"She could hear him."
16"He was going down."
17"Her hand went to the"
18"She’d been chasing the edges"
19"It was a market."
ratio0.375
32.12% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount89
totalSentences104
matches
0"The rain came down in"
1"Harlow Quinn’s shoes slapped against"
2"He didn’t stumble on the"
3"He didn’t look back."
4"He simply flowed."
5"Her worn leather watch was"
6"The pursuit had started three"
7"Quinn had followed without a"
8"They sprinted past the glowing"
9"The suspect didn’t slow."
10"He rounded the corner into"
11"Quinn’s lungs burned, a controlled"
12"She dug deeper."
13"The alley dead-ended at a"
14"It wasn’t a door."
15"It was a solid expanse"
16"He looked back then, his"
17"A sound like grinding stone,"
18"He slipped inside."
19"The gap began to close."
ratio0.856
48.08% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences104
matches
0"Now, the familiar streets of"
ratio0.01
92.73% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences57
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"Harlow Quinn’s shoes slapped against the wet pavement, a steady, punishing rhythm that matched the beat of her heart."
1"The memory of DS Morris flashed—his laughter, the sudden, inexplicable way he’d been torn from her during a case that had no explanation, only a blood-spattered…"
2"The whispers, the rumors that had only hardened her resolve these past three years."
3"The iron-hard certainty that had made her a detective in the first place."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags1
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
81.9003%