| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 15 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Isolde turned away [away]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 44 | | tagDensity | 0.341 | | leniency | 0.682 | | rawRatio | 0.067 | | effectiveRatio | 0.045 | |
| 88.24% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1275 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "tightly" | | 1 | "quickly" | | 2 | "slowly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 52.94% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1275 | | totalAiIsms | 12 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "shimmered" | | 1 | "mosaic" | | 2 | "whisper" | | 3 | "comforting" | | 4 | "quickened" | | 5 | "cascading" | | 6 | "weight" | | 7 | "warmth" | | 8 | "dancing" | | 9 | "trembled" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 77 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 68.65% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 4 | | narrationSentences | 77 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 106 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 40 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1263 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 6 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 64.29% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 43 | | wordCount | 875 | | uniqueNames | 9 | | maxNameDensity | 1.71 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Aurora | 15 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Grove | 5 | | Nyx | 10 | | Ripples | 1 | | Half-Fae | 1 | | Isolde | 7 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Aurora" | | 1 | "Heartstone" | | 2 | "Nyx" | | 3 | "Isolde" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Grove" |
| | globalScore | 0.643 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 20.69% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 58 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "symbols that seemed to shift when Aurora looked directly at them" | | 1 | "seemed barely there at all" | | 2 | "seemed borrowed from observing humans rather than instinctive" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.792 | | wordCount | 1263 | | matches | | 0 | "not the shifting symbols of the standing stones, but something older, more deliberate" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 106 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 50 | | mean | 25.26 | | std | 18.64 | | cv | 0.738 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 48 | | 1 | 25 | | 2 | 16 | | 3 | 25 | | 4 | 4 | | 5 | 6 | | 6 | 43 | | 7 | 4 | | 8 | 63 | | 9 | 9 | | 10 | 42 | | 11 | 2 | | 12 | 42 | | 13 | 44 | | 14 | 2 | | 15 | 24 | | 16 | 5 | | 17 | 33 | | 18 | 12 | | 19 | 38 | | 20 | 6 | | 21 | 47 | | 22 | 50 | | 23 | 4 | | 24 | 2 | | 25 | 9 | | 26 | 67 | | 27 | 9 | | 28 | 63 | | 29 | 2 | | 30 | 28 | | 31 | 24 | | 32 | 47 | | 33 | 44 | | 34 | 26 | | 35 | 4 | | 36 | 34 | | 37 | 22 | | 38 | 55 | | 39 | 29 | | 40 | 1 | | 41 | 36 | | 42 | 7 | | 43 | 29 | | 44 | 41 | | 45 | 19 | | 46 | 26 | | 47 | 12 | | 48 | 22 | | 49 | 11 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 77 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 156 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 11 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 11 | | totalSentences | 106 | | ratio | 0.104 | | matches | | 0 | "The air tasted different here—sweet, heavy, like honeyed wine and crushed petals." | | 1 | "Wildflowers carpeted the ground in impossible colours—blue that verged on silver, purple so deep it hurt to look at, gold that shimmered with its own light." | | 2 | "She looked behind her—no footprints." | | 3 | "She knelt beside it, and her reflection stared back—except the woman in the water had shadows behind her eyes that didn't match the fading daylight." | | 4 | "The proportions were wrong—the limbs too long, the angles too sharp." | | 5 | "\"Your heart races. Your breath has quickened. The pendant around your neck pulses like a second heartbeat.\" Nyx stepped onto the water's surface—and didn't sink." | | 6 | "The woman stood between the trees as though she had always been there—silver hair cascading to her waist, pale lavender eyes that saw too much, a face that held the weight of centuries without showing a single line." | | 7 | "She had no choice—literally no choice, her feet moving of their own accord, drawn forward by some compulsion she couldn't name." | | 8 | "Carvings covered every surface—not the shifting symbols of the standing stones, but something older, more deliberate." | | 9 | "She gasped, doubling over, and the Grove seemed to lean in—trees bending, flowers reaching, the carved faces on the trunks turning toward her with hollow eyes." | | 10 | "She blinked, and her eyes returned to normal—or as normal as they ever appeared." |
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| 95.63% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 889 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 40 | | adverbRatio | 0.04499437570303712 | | lyAdverbCount | 10 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.01124859392575928 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 106 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 106 | | mean | 11.92 | | std | 8.26 | | cv | 0.693 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 25 | | 1 | 23 | | 2 | 21 | | 3 | 4 | | 4 | 6 | | 5 | 7 | | 6 | 3 | | 7 | 19 | | 8 | 6 | | 9 | 4 | | 10 | 6 | | 11 | 5 | | 12 | 12 | | 13 | 26 | | 14 | 4 | | 15 | 26 | | 16 | 17 | | 17 | 20 | | 18 | 1 | | 19 | 1 | | 20 | 7 | | 21 | 11 | | 22 | 13 | | 23 | 18 | | 24 | 2 | | 25 | 15 | | 26 | 5 | | 27 | 7 | | 28 | 15 | | 29 | 16 | | 30 | 25 | | 31 | 3 | | 32 | 2 | | 33 | 8 | | 34 | 16 | | 35 | 5 | | 36 | 13 | | 37 | 1 | | 38 | 11 | | 39 | 8 | | 40 | 8 | | 41 | 4 | | 42 | 19 | | 43 | 19 | | 44 | 6 | | 45 | 25 | | 46 | 7 | | 47 | 15 | | 48 | 3 | | 49 | 11 |
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| 55.66% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 6 | | diversityRatio | 0.36792452830188677 | | totalSentences | 106 | | uniqueOpeners | 39 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 71 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 19 | | totalSentences | 71 | | matches | | 0 | "She paused at the threshold," | | 1 | "She stepped between two of" | | 2 | "They bloomed in spirals, following" | | 3 | "They had vanished again, but" | | 4 | "She looked behind her—no footprints." | | 5 | "She knelt beside it, and" | | 6 | "She stood quickly, backing away" | | 7 | "Their violet gaze held no" | | 8 | "She moved away from the" | | 9 | "She reached for one." | | 10 | "Her hand froze." | | 11 | "She wore a gown the" | | 12 | "Her feet made no sound" | | 13 | "They left no prints." | | 14 | "She had no choice—literally no" | | 15 | "She held something red and" | | 16 | "She gasped, doubling over, and" | | 17 | "She blinked, and her eyes" | | 18 | "Her hand found Aurora's arm," |
| | ratio | 0.268 | |
| 0.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 69 | | totalSentences | 71 | | matches | | 0 | "The standing stones rose from" | | 1 | "She paused at the threshold," | | 2 | "Nyx materialised from the shadow" | | 3 | "Aurora's fingers closed around the" | | 4 | "The silver chain bit into" | | 5 | "Nyx drifted toward the circle" | | 6 | "Aurora sucked in a breath." | | 7 | "The air tasted different here—sweet," | | 8 | "She stepped between two of" | | 9 | "The Grove swallowed her." | | 10 | "Wildflowers carpeted the ground in" | | 11 | "They bloomed in spirals, following" | | 12 | "The trees arched overhead, their" | | 13 | "The sun had been setting" | | 14 | "Nyx's whisper came from everywhere" | | 15 | "They had vanished again, but" | | 16 | "Aurora walked deeper, her boots" | | 17 | "She looked behind her—no footprints." | | 18 | "The wildflowers remained undisturbed where" | | 19 | "The crescent scar on her" |
| | ratio | 0.972 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 71 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 37.82% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 34 | | technicalSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "They bloomed in spirals, following patterns that made Aurora's eyes water when she tried to trace them." | | 1 | "Aurora walked deeper, her boots sinking into soft moss that sprang back without leaving impressions." | | 2 | "She knelt beside it, and her reflection stared back—except the woman in the water had shadows behind her eyes that didn't match the fading daylight." | | 3 | "The woman stood between the trees as though she had always been there—silver hair cascading to her waist, pale lavender eyes that saw too much, a face that held…" | | 4 | "Scenes of feasting and dancing, of battles and betrayals, of figures with too many eyes and mouths that opened into voids." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 15 | | uselessAdditionCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "Nyx materialised, their violet eyes catching the last rays of sunset" | | 1 | "Nyx drifted, their form flickering between solid and smoke" | | 2 | "Isolde stopped, her lavender gaze boring into Aurora's" | | 3 | "Isolde turned away, her silver hair catching light that had no source" | | 4 | "Nyx's voice grew, as though the whisper came from far away" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |