| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 13 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Half-trampled nearly [nearly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 25 | | tagDensity | 0.52 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.077 | | effectiveRatio | 0.077 | |
| 89.09% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1834 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 4 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "gently" | | 1 | "tightly" | | 2 | "very" | | 3 | "quickly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 70.01% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1834 | | totalAiIsms | 11 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "pumping" | | 1 | "gloom" | | 2 | "mechanical" | | 3 | "magnetic" | | 4 | "measured" | | 5 | "methodical" | | 6 | "whisper" | | 7 | "apprehension" | | 8 | "facade" | | 9 | "traced" | | 10 | "weight" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 143 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 82.92% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 4 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 143 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 156 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 40 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 2 | | markdownWords | 2 | | totalWords | 1823 | | ratio | 0.001 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 13 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 83.33% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 46 | | wordCount | 1577 | | uniqueNames | 14 | | maxNameDensity | 1.14 | | worstName | "Quinn" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Quinn" | | discoveredNames | | Harlow | 1 | | Quinn | 18 | | Transport | 1 | | London | 3 | | Victorian | 2 | | Bombardier | 1 | | Kowalski | 1 | | British | 1 | | Museum | 1 | | Eva | 12 | | English | 1 | | Cold | 1 | | Morris | 2 | | Shade | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Harlow" | | 1 | "Quinn" | | 2 | "Kowalski" | | 3 | "Museum" | | 4 | "Eva" | | 5 | "Cold" | | 6 | "Morris" |
| | places | | 0 | "Transport" | | 1 | "London" | | 2 | "British" | | 3 | "English" |
| | globalScore | 0.929 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 52.91% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 103 | | glossingSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "looked like a knife or perhaps a narrow b" | | 1 | "sigils that seemed to squirm when she tilted the glass toward the torchlight" | | 2 | "felt like soapstone" | | 3 | "as if naming the thing might summon it" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.549 | | wordCount | 1823 | | matches | | 0 | "not with Eva’s apprehension, but with the cold attention of a woman who understood staging" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 156 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 44 | | mean | 41.43 | | std | 31.73 | | cv | 0.766 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 107 | | 1 | 23 | | 2 | 61 | | 3 | 10 | | 4 | 99 | | 5 | 109 | | 6 | 7 | | 7 | 55 | | 8 | 23 | | 9 | 8 | | 10 | 31 | | 11 | 65 | | 12 | 12 | | 13 | 28 | | 14 | 66 | | 15 | 59 | | 16 | 10 | | 17 | 33 | | 18 | 23 | | 19 | 25 | | 20 | 45 | | 21 | 23 | | 22 | 61 | | 23 | 62 | | 24 | 26 | | 25 | 57 | | 26 | 6 | | 27 | 2 | | 28 | 52 | | 29 | 96 | | 30 | 89 | | 31 | 7 | | 32 | 6 | | 33 | 98 | | 34 | 65 | | 35 | 7 | | 36 | 62 | | 37 | 9 | | 38 | 8 | | 39 | 81 | | 40 | 20 | | 41 | 19 | | 42 | 55 | | 43 | 13 |
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| 88.09% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 7 | | totalSentences | 143 | | matches | | 0 | "been killed" | | 1 | "was mottled" | | 2 | "been sealed" | | 3 | "been torn" | | 4 | "was disturbed" | | 5 | "been killed" | | 6 | "been executed" | | 7 | "were traded" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 244 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 10 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 9 | | totalSentences | 156 | | ratio | 0.058 | | matches | | 0 | "The beam caught flaking Victorian tilework—Bombardier cream and sage green, cracked in spider-web patterns—and then the pale, outstretched hand of the deceased." | | 1 | "The purplish settling of blood stained his shoulder blades and the backs of his thighs—the dependent surfaces of a corpse that had lain on its back for some time." | | 2 | "Then, as the torch shifted, like something else entirely—lines that seemed to skate away from direct observation, defying the geometry of the blade that had cut them." | | 3 | "The pockets were empty of wallet or phone—no convenient identification." | | 4 | "The casing was mottled with verdigris, green as a weathered copper roof, and the face was crowded with tiny, recessed etchings—sigils that seemed to squirm when she tilted the glass toward the torchlight." | | 5 | "But the mortar was the wrong color—too pale, too clean, almost buff-colored against the weathered stone." | | 6 | "The fingers, she noticed now, were ink-stained at the tips, and the left cuff bore a residue of something coppery and faintly phosphorescent where her torch beam struck it—an alchemical stain, perhaps, that smelled of ozone and cloves." | | 7 | "Three years ago, DS Morris had died in a warehouse that appeared on no planning document, in a case file thick with photographs of similar symbols—chalk on concrete, dismissed by the coroner as teenage occult fetishism." | | 8 | "But Quinn saw the architecture of conspiracy—the staged body, the hidden door, the meticulous attempt to make a murder look like something unknowable." |
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| 98.26% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1310 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 55 | | adverbRatio | 0.04198473282442748 | | lyAdverbCount | 15 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.011450381679389313 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 156 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 156 | | mean | 11.69 | | std | 8.35 | | cv | 0.715 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 32 | | 1 | 15 | | 2 | 32 | | 3 | 6 | | 4 | 22 | | 5 | 6 | | 6 | 4 | | 7 | 8 | | 8 | 5 | | 9 | 12 | | 10 | 20 | | 11 | 8 | | 12 | 9 | | 13 | 12 | | 14 | 10 | | 15 | 30 | | 16 | 12 | | 17 | 21 | | 18 | 7 | | 19 | 10 | | 20 | 18 | | 21 | 1 | | 22 | 13 | | 23 | 14 | | 24 | 29 | | 25 | 30 | | 26 | 5 | | 27 | 1 | | 28 | 17 | | 29 | 7 | | 30 | 4 | | 31 | 7 | | 32 | 12 | | 33 | 10 | | 34 | 2 | | 35 | 20 | | 36 | 6 | | 37 | 15 | | 38 | 2 | | 39 | 2 | | 40 | 6 | | 41 | 20 | | 42 | 11 | | 43 | 4 | | 44 | 23 | | 45 | 6 | | 46 | 5 | | 47 | 27 | | 48 | 12 | | 49 | 4 |
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| 49.36% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 13 | | diversityRatio | 0.34615384615384615 | | totalSentences | 156 | | uniqueOpeners | 54 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 5 | | totalSentences | 133 | | matches | | 0 | "Even crouched three feet away," | | 1 | "Instead, the stain was compact." | | 2 | "Then, perhaps, like a code." | | 3 | "Then, as the torch shifted," | | 4 | "Then she looked at the" |
| | ratio | 0.038 | |
| 93.68% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 42 | | totalSentences | 133 | | matches | | 0 | "She clicked on her own" | | 1 | "She checked her worn leather" | | 2 | "She called it a refusal" | | 3 | "It looked like a knife" | | 4 | "She played her light across" | | 5 | "She pulled a pen from" | | 6 | "He had been killed elsewhere," | | 7 | "she murmured to the dark" | | 8 | "She tucked a curl behind" | | 9 | "They looked at first like" | | 10 | "She clutched her satchel strap." | | 11 | "She snapped on latex gloves" | | 12 | "It was heavier than it" | | 13 | "It lay stubbornly aimed toward" | | 14 | "She had spent eighteen years" | | 15 | "She took three measured strides" | | 16 | "Her watch stuttered." | | 17 | "She played her torch across" | | 18 | "She rapped her knuckles against" | | 19 | "She walked the platform’s length," |
| | ratio | 0.316 | |
| 80.30% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 101 | | totalSentences | 133 | | matches | | 0 | "Detective Harlow Quinn dropped from" | | 1 | "Dust rose around her boots," | | 2 | "She clicked on her own" | | 3 | "The beam caught flaking Victorian" | | 4 | "She checked her worn leather" | | 5 | "The body lay near a" | | 6 | "Quinn circled clockwise, her torch" | | 7 | "Military precision, her old superintendent" | | 8 | "She called it a refusal" | | 9 | "The dead man’s wool coat" | | 10 | "It looked like a knife" | | 11 | "She played her light across" | | 12 | "She pulled a pen from" | | 13 | "Rigor had fixed his limbs" | | 14 | "The purplish settling of blood" | | 15 | "He had been killed elsewhere," | | 16 | "she murmured to the dark" | | 17 | "A leather satchel creaked." | | 18 | "Quinn’s torch snapped toward the" | | 19 | "A woman stepped out of" |
| | ratio | 0.759 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 133 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 31.25% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 64 | | technicalSentenceCount | 10 | | matches | | 0 | "Above her, the constable’s torchbeam pulled back toward the street-level manhole, leaving her alone with the subterranean dark of a station that had vanished fr…" | | 1 | "Male, mid-thirties, with the kind of hollow cheeks and expensive tailoring that spoke of private clubs rather than homeless encampments." | | 2 | "The purplish settling of blood stained his shoulder blades and the backs of his thighs—the dependent surfaces of a corpse that had lain on its back for some tim…" | | 3 | "She tucked a curl behind her left ear with a nervous habit that looked well-practiced." | | 4 | "Then, as the torch shifted, like something else entirely—lines that seemed to skate away from direct observation, defying the geometry of the blade that had cut…" | | 5 | "The casing was mottled with verdigris, green as a weathered copper roof, and the face was crowded with tiny, recessed etchings—sigils that seemed to squirm when…" | | 6 | "She had spent eighteen years on the force dismissing the superstitions of witnesses who claimed to see patterns in chaos." | | 7 | "A bone token slid into her gloved palm, carved with the same irresolvable symbols that haunted the compass face." | | 8 | "Then she looked at the wall again, not with Eva’s apprehension, but with the cold attention of a woman who understood staging." | | 9 | "Three years ago, DS Morris had died in a warehouse that appeared on no planning document, in a case file thick with photographs of similar symbols—chalk on conc…" |
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| 48.08% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 13 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "Quinn said, though her voice had lost some of its certainty" | | 1 | "Eva’s voice had, as if naming the thing might summon it" |
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| 70.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 7 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she murmured (murmur)" | | 1 | "She pressed (press)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 25 | | tagDensity | 0.28 | | leniency | 0.56 | | rawRatio | 0.286 | | effectiveRatio | 0.16 | |