Run: 2026-04-24-01KQ06FDJ9X2ZJC31PR5GXWHYQ

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Duration:
34.7s
Cost:
$0.005732
Provider:
Xiaomi

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The triple click of the bottom deadbolt echoed through the narrow stairwell. Rory twisted the middle one, then the top, and pulled the door open, expecting the curry smell from the restaurant below to hit her like it always did. It didn't. The hallway carried something else — cedar and smoke and the faintest trace of bergamot. She knew that combination. Knew it the way you know a song you haven't heard in years the instant the first note plays. Lucien Moreau stood on the landing, his platinum blond hair slicked back with its usual precision, his charcoal suit immaculate despite the drizzle that clung to his shoulders like a second skin. The ivory handle of his cane caught the weak light from the bare bulb overhead. His mismatched eyes — amber on the left, black as pupilless glass on the right — fixed on her face with the steady attention of someone cataloguing every microexpression. Her hand tightened on the door. She hadn't seen him in eleven months. Not since the night he'd walked out of her life with nothing but a backward glance and a promise he never intended to keep. "You're soaked," she said. "Observant as ever." His French accent curled around the words, warm and measured. He didn't smile. He didn't step back. "May I come in?" "No." She started to close the door. His palm — bare, no glove — pressed flat against the wood and stopped it. The contact was brief, incidental, but it sent a current through her arm that she hated herself for registering. "Rory." "Don't use that name with me." She stepped back, not to let him in but to put distance between his body and hers. "You lost the right to that the night you vanished off the face of the goddamn city." "I didn't vanish. I left. There's a distinction." She crossed her arms. The flat behind her was a mess —外卖 containers from the Golden Empress stacked by the kitchenette, a half-read case file from one of her delivery jobs scattered across the coffee table, her coat draped over the single chair. Not that cleanliness had ever stopped Lucien. The man had once organized her bookshelf by color and called it a gift. "What do you want?" He held her gaze. Rain collected at the tips of his hair and traced down the line of his jaw. He should have looked pathetic, dripping and uninvited on her threshold at nine o'clock on a Tuesday night. He looked like a painting. She wanted to hate him for that too. "A favor," he said. "You come to my flat — unannounced, after nearly a year of silence — and you want a favor." "Life rarely arranges itself according to our preferences." She laughed. It came out sharper than she intended, and she saw something shift in his amber eye — a flicker of acknowledgment, maybe. He'd always been fluent in her anger. Had always known when it was real and when it was the smoke screen for something deeper. "You can't come in," she said. "My flat is —" "Cluttered. Yes, I remember." "Your flat was cluttered." Something crossed his face then. Quick and low, like a fish breaking the surface. She caught it before he smoothed it away. He removed his hand from the door and took one step back. The gesture should have felt like a concession. It felt like a withdrawal. "Then let me state my business from here," he said. "There's a woman. Eva Maddox. She's in danger, and she may not know it yet." The name hit her like a bucket of ice water. She reached for the door frame to steady herself. "Eva?" "You know her." "Of course I know her. She's my—" Rory stopped. Her throat tightened around the word *friend*, the way it always did now, tangled with guilt and old fear. Eva was the one who'd pulled her out of Evan's orbit. Eva, who'd given her this flat, this life, this second chance. "What kind of danger?" Lucien studied her. The hallway light carved hard shadows beneath his cheekbones. "The kind that doesn't announce itself. The kind that wears a familiar face." "That's not an answer." "It's the only one I have right now." He shifted his weight to his cane. The blade inside was silent, still sheathed. "I received word this evening. Someone has been asking about her — specifically about her research, her work with the scrolls. Questions asked in places where questions should not be asked." "What kind of places?" "The kind where I do my business." His black eye caught the light and went flat. "The kind where information is currency and silence is bought with blood." Rory stepped out into the hallway and pulled the door shut behind her. The curry smell rose from below as if summoned — cumin and cardamom and the slow burn of chili. The stairwell was narrow enough that their shoulders nearly touched. She could smell the rain on his suit, the cedar beneath it, and underneath all of that something older, something that lived in the space between her ribs and made no sense after what he'd done. "Why didn't you call me?" she asked. "You have my number." "I used it. Once. Fourteen times." He didn't look at her. "You never answered." Her stomach dropped. She had blocked his number after the third week. Changed it entirely after the sixth month. She'd told herself it was self-preservation. It had felt like amputation. "I didn't check," she said. "Clearly." They stood there in the half-light. A car horn blared somewhere on Brick Lane. The bass throb of music bled up from the curry house's Saturday night crowd. Through the wall, she could hear Ptolemy yowling from Eva's flat two floors up — Eva wasn't home yet, and the cat hated an empty space almost as much as Rory did. "Tell me everything," she said. He turned to face her. This close, she could see the fine lines at the corners of his eyes, the faint bruise beneath his left ear that his collar was meant to conceal. He'd been in a fight recently. He'd lost. "Inside," he said. "Not in the stairwell." She hesitated. Then she opened the door and held it wide enough for him to pass. He did, his cane tapping against the wooden floor as he crossed the threshold. She watched him navigate the narrow space between the kitchenette and the sofa with the practiced ease of someone who had been there before. Who had once sat at that table and helped her translate a contract for Yu-Fei. Who had once stood in this exact kitchen and kissed her with a gentleness she hadn't known he possessed. He turned in the center of the room. His eyes swept the mess — the containers, the papers, the coat on the chair — and returned to her. No judgment. No surprise. He'd seen worse. He'd caused worse. "Eva's been translating a set of scrolls from the Vael collection," he said. "Sumerian. Pre-dynastic. You know this." "She told me they were routine." "Nothing about the Vael scrolls is routine. They describe a summoning — a way to bridge the realm of Avaros into this plane permanently. Not as a possession, not as a fleeting intrusion. As a door. A lasting one." Rory felt the floor tilt beneath her. Avaros. The name lived in the back of her throat like ash. She knew it because Lucien had told her once — on a night very different from this one, in this very flat, his voice low and rough and honest in a way he never permitted in daylight. "The scrolls are in Eva's flat," she said. "They are." "Someone wants them." "Someone wants them destroyed. Someone else wants them completed." He moved to the window and parted the curtain with two fingers. The street below was dark, wet, alive with the glow of takeaway signs and the scatter of footsteps. "Eva is caught between those two forces. She doesn't know it yet." "Then we tell her." "We tell her what? That an information broker with a demon father and a part-time delivery driver have decided she's in danger based on a whisper in a bar?" He released the curtain and faced her. "She'll think we're insane. Or worse — she'll think we're using her." The word landed between them like a stone dropped in still water. *Using.* Rory felt the heat rise in her chest. "I never used you," she said. "I didn't say you did." "You implied it." He set his cane against the wall and moved to the kitchenette. His hands found the kettle without looking — muscle memory, the ghost of a hundred mornings she'd rather forget — and filled it at the tap. "Tea," he said. Not a question. A deflection. "I don't want tea." "You always want tea." He clicked the kettle on. "And I owe you a proper explanation. The real one. Not the clipped version I left behind." She sat down on the edge of the sofa because her legs had decided, without consulting her, that standing was no longer an option. The cushions still held the impression of his last visit. She'd never been able to plump them back to shape. "You don't owe me anything," she said. "You're here for Eva." He stood with his back to her, waiting for the water to heat. The muscles in his shoulders pulled against the damp fabric of his jacket. She watched the tendons in his hands flex as he reached for two mugs — hers, the chipped blue one with the Cardiff University crest; his, the plain white he'd claimed without asking. "I'm here for both of you," he said. The kettle began its slow climb toward boiling. "But yes. Primarily for Eva. For now." He turned around and set the mugs on the table. The kettle clicked off. Neither of them moved. "How long have you been watching her?" Rory asked. "Three weeks. Since the first question was asked." "You could have told me then." "I could have done many things three weeks ago." He sat down in the chair — her chair, the one with the coat — and folded his hands over the head of his cane. "I chose the worst possible option, as I am apparently inclined to do." She waited. "Rory." He said her name the way he always had, as if it were something he'd discovered rather than been given. "The night I left — I left because I found out what the Vael scrolls contained. I left because if anyone connected me to them, connected *you* to them —" He broke off. His amber eye caught the light and burned. "There are people who would use you to get to me. And there are people who would use me to get to the scrolls. I thought distance would be protection." "Distance." The word tasted like iron. "You thought disappearing — no call, no note, just *gone* — was protection." "I thought wrong." The simplicity of it stopped her. No eloquence, no carefully constructed French deflection. Three words, bare and unadorned. She looked at the mugs on the table. Steam curled from both, blurring the space between them. "You look terrible," she said. His mouth twitched. Not a smile. Something adjacent to one. "You look —" He stopped. Started again. "The scar on your wrist. Is it still there?" She glanced down. The crescent shape curved against her skin, pale and permanent. His thumb had traced it once, late at night, while she lay with her head on his chest and told him about the fall from the garden wall in Cardiff, the blood, her mother's panicked voice. "It's a scar," she said. "It doesn't go away." He nodded, as if she'd confirmed something he already knew. The kettle clicked again — a phantom sound, nothing more. The rain pressed against the window. "Tell me about the scrolls," she said. "From the beginning. And this time, you stay until you finish."
created_at"2026-04-24T16:51:55.608Z" 4/24/2026, 4:51:55 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags30
adverbTagCount3
adverbTags
0"His French accent curled around [around]"
1"She stepped back [back]"
2"The word tasted like [like]"
dialogueSentences79
tagDensity0.38
leniency0.759
rawRatio0.1
effectiveRatio0.076
92.49% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1998
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"very"
count2
1
adverb"carefully"
count1
highlights
0"very"
1"carefully"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
57.46% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1998
totalAiIsms17
found
0
word"echoed"
count1
1
word"measured"
count1
2
word"traced"
count2
3
word"silence"
count2
4
word"flicker"
count1
5
word"familiar"
count1
6
word"weight"
count1
7
word"stomach"
count1
8
word"throb"
count1
9
word"navigate"
count1
10
word"practiced ease"
count1
11
word"fleeting"
count1
12
word"footsteps"
count1
13
word"whisper"
count1
14
word"constructed"
count1
highlights
0"echoed"
1"measured"
2"traced"
3"silence"
4"flicker"
5"familiar"
6"weight"
7"stomach"
8"throb"
9"navigate"
10"practiced ease"
11"fleeting"
12"footsteps"
13"whisper"
14"constructed"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"stomach dropped/sank"
count1
highlights
0"stomach dropped"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences141
matches
0"d with guilt"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences141
filterMatches
0"know"
hedgeMatches
0"tended to"
1"started to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences190
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen40
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans4
markdownWords4
totalWords2023
ratio0.002
matches
0"friend"
1"Using."
2"you"
3"gone"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions31
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions30
wordCount1423
uniqueNames16
maxNameDensity0.49
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Moreau1
French2
Golden1
Empress1
Lucien4
Tuesday1
Evan1
Rory7
Brick1
Lane1
Saturday1
Ptolemy1
Eva4
Yu-Fei1
Cardiff2
University1
persons
0"Moreau"
1"Empress"
2"Lucien"
3"Evan"
4"Rory"
5"Ptolemy"
6"Eva"
places
0"Golden"
1"Brick"
2"Lane"
3"Saturday"
4"Cardiff"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences87
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"felt like a concession"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords0.989
wordCount2023
matches
0"Not since the night he'd walked out of her life with nothing but a backward glance"
1"not to let him in but to put distance between his body"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences190
matches
0"knew that combination"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs84
mean24.08
std22.52
cv0.935
sampleLengths
040
12
238
376
437
54
624
71
840
91
1040
118
1264
134
1451
154
1619
178
1848
1910
204
214
2247
2325
2419
251
263
2754
2825
294
3053
314
3228
3378
3411
3514
3630
375
381
3960
405
4141
427
4388
4438
4518
466
4739
4856
498
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences141
matches
0"was meant"
1"been given"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs237
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount18
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences13
totalSentences190
ratio0.068
matches
0"The hallway carried something else — cedar and smoke and the faintest trace of bergamot."
1"His mismatched eyes — amber on the left, black as pupilless glass on the right — fixed on her face with the steady attention of someone cataloguing every microexpression."
2"His palm — bare, no glove — pressed flat against the wood and stopped it."
3"The flat behind her was a mess —外卖 containers from the Golden Empress stacked by the kitchenette, a half-read case file from one of her delivery jobs scattered across the coffee table, her coat draped over the single chair."
4"It came out sharper than she intended, and she saw something shift in his amber eye — a flicker of acknowledgment, maybe."
5"The curry smell rose from below as if summoned — cumin and cardamom and the slow burn of chili."
6"Through the wall, she could hear Ptolemy yowling from Eva's flat two floors up — Eva wasn't home yet, and the cat hated an empty space almost as much as Rory did."
7"His eyes swept the mess — the containers, the papers, the coat on the chair — and returned to her."
8"She knew it because Lucien had told her once — on a night very different from this one, in this very flat, his voice low and rough and honest in a way he never permitted in daylight."
9"His hands found the kettle without looking — muscle memory, the ghost of a hundred mornings she'd rather forget — and filled it at the tap."
10"She watched the tendons in his hands flex as he reached for two mugs — hers, the chipped blue one with the Cardiff University crest; his, the plain white he'd claimed without asking."
11"\"I could have done many things three weeks ago.\" He sat down in the chair — her chair, the one with the coat — and folded his hands over the head of his cane."
12"The kettle clicked again — a phantom sound, nothing more."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount839
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount26
adverbRatio0.03098927294398093
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.007151370679380214
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences190
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences190
mean10.65
std8.83
cv0.829
sampleLengths
012
128
22
315
44
519
632
715
829
96
107
1124
124
1313
143
154
164
171
186
1915
2019
211
2223
2317
248
254
2639
277
2814
294
304
3116
3218
335
348
354
3619
378
382
3922
407
4117
426
434
444
454
465
479
488
4912
41.58% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats16
diversityRatio0.29473684210526313
totalSentences190
uniqueOpeners56
29.76% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences112
matches
0"Then she opened the door"
ratio0.009
12.86% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount58
totalSentences112
matches
0"She knew that combination."
1"His mismatched eyes — amber"
2"Her hand tightened on the"
3"She hadn't seen him in"
4"His French accent curled around"
5"He didn't smile."
6"He didn't step back."
7"She started to close the"
8"His palm — bare, no"
9"She stepped back, not to"
10"She crossed her arms."
11"He held her gaze."
12"He should have looked pathetic,"
13"He looked like a painting."
14"She wanted to hate him"
15"It came out sharper than"
16"He'd always been fluent in"
17"She caught it before he"
18"He removed his hand from"
19"It felt like a withdrawal."
ratio0.518
26.96% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount97
totalSentences112
matches
0"The triple click of the"
1"Rory twisted the middle one,"
2"The hallway carried something else"
3"She knew that combination."
4"Lucien Moreau stood on the"
5"The ivory handle of his"
6"His mismatched eyes — amber"
7"Her hand tightened on the"
8"She hadn't seen him in"
9"His French accent curled around"
10"He didn't smile."
11"He didn't step back."
12"She started to close the"
13"His palm — bare, no"
14"The contact was brief, incidental,"
15"She stepped back, not to"
16"She crossed her arms."
17"The flat behind her was"
18"The man had once organized"
19"He held her gaze."
ratio0.866
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences112
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences50
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"Lucien Moreau stood on the landing, his platinum blond hair slicked back with its usual precision, his charcoal suit immaculate despite the drizzle that clung t…"
1"Eva, who'd given her this flat, this life, this second chance."
2"She could smell the rain on his suit, the cedar beneath it, and underneath all of that something older, something that lived in the space between her ribs and m…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags30
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"He said, as if it were something he'd discovered rather than been given"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags19
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences79
tagDensity0.241
leniency0.481
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
82.0371%