Run: 2026-04-24-01KQ06HTR9ASTRGZWJ00SQM639

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Duration:
45.7s
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$0.006762
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Xiaomi

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System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The bone token left a chalky residue on Harlow's palm as she descended the cracked concrete steps. Abandoned Tube stations had a particular smell—damp iron, mildew, and the ghost of a million cigarettes smoked by commuters decades dead. This one carried something else underneath. Incense. Charcoal. The faintest trace of something sweet that made her sinuses ache. "Watch your step." The uniformed constable ahead of her clicked on a torch, sending a beam cutting through the dark. "The platforms are uneven. Homeless folk have been tearing up the tiles." Harlow didn't respond. She'd called in the favour to get here twenty minutes after the tip came through, before Camden CID could claim jurisdiction. Before someone could scrub whatever waited below. The tunnel yawned open. Emergency lighting flickered in weak amber pulses along the ceiling—someone had tapped into the old power grid, jury-rigged it to work. Market stalls lined both sides of the platform, draped in black cloth, stacked with jars and bones and things she couldn't identify in the strobing light. The scene was crawling with uniforms who looked like they'd rather be anywhere else. DS Chen met her at the platform edge. His tie was loosened, his face the colour of old putty. "Body's down the far end. Female, mid-twenties by the look of it. No ID." "Cause?" "That's the thing, ma'am. There's no visible cause." They walked past the stalls. Harlow catalogued what she could see—bundles of dried herbs hanging from hooks, a table of glass vials filled with liquids in colours that didn't exist in any chemistry textbook she'd studied. One stall had been knocked over, its wares scattered across the concrete in a fan pattern. Deliberate. Staged. The body lay on the tracks between the rails. Young woman, red hair matted with grime, round glasses askew on her face, a leather satchel still clutched against her chest like a shield. Her eyes were open, staring at the curved ceiling of the tunnel with an expression Harlow recognized from her nightmares. Complete and total surprise. "Jesus," Chen muttered. "She looks like she just—stopped." Harlow crouched beside the body. The woman's skin had an odd pallor, grey at the edges, like frost creeping inward from her extremities. No ligature marks. No puncture wounds visible at the neck or arms. The satchel was unclasped, a corner of a leather-bound journal poking out from between the flaps. "Don't touch that yet." "Forensics is en route." "En route isn't here." She studied the woman's hands. No defensive wounds. No dirt under the fingernails. Those hands were clean—too clean for someone who'd been in this place, surrounded by dust and decay. Either she'd been placed here after death, or she hadn't struggled at all. Harlow stood and walked back to the overturned stall. Knelt again. The items scattered on the ground weren't random—she could see it now in the way they fanned out. The spacing between each object was too regular, too deliberate. A brass compass with a green-crusted casing lay furthest from the stall, its face etched with symbols she didn't recognize. Its needle spun lazily, despite there being no magnetic source she could identify. "What's the theory so far?" Harlow didn't look up. "Probably a user. This whole place is a drugs den, right? Underground rave scene, someone buys something bad, drops dead. Happens." "This isn't a drugs den, Chen." "Respectfully, ma'am—look at this place." She did. She looked at the stalls, at the carefully arranged bottles, at the symbols chalked on the walls in repeating patterns. At the bone tokens everyone carried in and out—she still had the warm weight of hers in her pocket. The officer at the door had accepted it without question, which meant it was currency here. The emergency lighting tapped into an old grid meant to be dead for twenty years. Someone maintained this place. Organized it. "This is a market," she said. "Running underground. Literally." "A market for what?" That was the question. Harlow returned to the body. Chen hovered behind her, radiating the particular discomfort of a man who wanted to solve a case without examining the inconvenient parts. "Who found her?" "Anonymous tip. Called it in from a payphone in Kentish Town. Male voice, no accent trace." "A payphone." "Yes, ma'am." Harlow exhaled through her nose. Nobody used payphones. Nobody called in bodies from payphones unless they wanted to make sure the call couldn't be traced back to a mobile. Or unless they were old enough—or paranoid enough—to default to analogue. She crouched again, closer this time. The woman's glasses. Round frames, wire-rimmed, slightly too large for her face. The kind of frames an academic would choose—functional, distinctive. Harlow leaned in. The lenses caught the amber light and threw it back at her, and she saw the faintest scratch in the corner of the right lens. Not a scratch. An engraving. Tiny, almost invisible. She moved to the satchel. Without touching it, she angled her head to read the journal's spine. The leather was worn smooth at the edges from years of handling, the kind of patina that didn't come from casual use. This was someone's life companion. The journal's cover bore a small embossed crest—a serpent coiled around a pillar. Harlow had seen it before. Three years ago, in the forensic report on Morris's case, in photographs that had been sealed and classified before she could challenge them. The crest appeared in the margins of notes Morris had kept in his personal folio—notes that disappeared from evidence forty-eight hours after his death. Her pulse stayed level. Her hands didn't shake. Eighteen years of service had taught her that. "Chen, I need you to find out who holds the lease on this station." "It's an abandoned Tube station." "Someone pays the electricity bill." Chen pulled out his phone and walked toward the entrance, his relief at having a task that took him away from the body almost comical. Harlow was alone with the dead woman. She looked at those open eyes again. The surprise. Not fear—surprise. Whatever killed her hadn't threatened her first. It had simply happened, between one breath and the next, and she hadn't had time to register danger because there had been no danger to register. Or the danger had worn a familiar face. The brass compass on the ground caught Harlow's eye again. Its needle had stopped spinning. It pointed directly at the body. Harlow reached into her coat pocket and pulled on a latex glove. She picked up the compass. The verdigris was real—the brass casing had genuine age, decades at minimum. The sigils etched into the face were precise, cut with tools she couldn't identify. The needle held steady, oriented toward the dead woman's chest. She moved. The needle tracked her. Not north. Not magnetic. Harlow set the compass down on the nearest flat surface—a stack of old crates—and watched. The needle swung back to the body. The sweet smell grew stronger. She turned. Behind the nearest stall, half-hidden beneath a fallen drape of black cloth, she spotted a glass jar. It had rolled against the wall, its stopper still sealed with wax that bore the same serpent-and-pillar imprint as the journal. Inside, a pale liquid shifted in a way that liquid shouldn't—curling against the glass, pressing, like something alive trying to find a way out. Harlow looked at the jar. Looked at the compass. Looked at the body. This woman hadn't come here to buy drugs. She'd come here for something specific, something connected to symbols and sigils and a crest that had appeared in her dead partner's files. And whatever she'd found—or whatever had found her—had ended her between one heartbeat and the next, with no violence, no struggle, no evidence of any force a coroner would understand. Chen's voice carried from the entrance. "Ma'am? Station's on a defunct commercial lease. Last renewal was eight months ago. Shell company called Veil Holdings Limited." Veil. Harlow's jaw tightened. She stood, leaving the compass where it sat, its needle still fixed on the dead woman with green eyes and round glasses and a satchel full of secrets. "I want the CCTV from every station within a mile radius. Every camera. Every angle. And get me everything you can on Veil Holdings—incorporation documents, directors, registered address. Everything." "What about the body?" "Nobody touches it until I say." She stared down at the woman. The grey creeping at her fingertips had reached her wrists now, spreading in fine branching patterns like frost on a window. Harlow had seen those patterns before. In the photographs they'd shown her of Morris, dead in his flat with no cause of death and no explanation and a face full of surprise. They'd told her it was natural causes. They'd told her to stop asking questions. She looked at the journal in the dead woman's satchel. She didn't stop.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags4
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences28
tagDensity0.143
leniency0.286
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
89.98% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1497
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"lazily"
count1
1
adverb"carefully"
count1
2
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"lazily"
1"carefully"
2"slightly"
80.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found
0"Chen"
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
69.94% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1497
totalAiIsms9
found
0
word"flickered"
count1
1
word"etched"
count2
2
word"magnetic"
count2
3
word"weight"
count1
4
word"traced"
count1
5
word"pulse"
count1
6
word"familiar"
count1
highlights
0"flickered"
1"etched"
2"magnetic"
3"weight"
4"traced"
5"pulse"
6"familiar"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences123
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences123
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences147
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen32
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1477
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions11
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
79.02% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions28
wordCount1268
uniqueNames5
maxNameDensity1.42
worstName"Harlow"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Harlow"
discoveredNames
Harlow18
Tube1
Camden1
Chen5
Morris3
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Chen"
2"Morris"
places(empty)
globalScore0.79
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences73
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"looked like they'd rather be anywhere els"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1477
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences147
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs62
mean23.82
std21.8
cv0.915
sampleLengths
057
132
231
365
419
514
61
78
854
953
104
118
1251
134
144
154
1643
1772
189
1921
206
215
2278
239
244
254
2627
273
2816
292
302
3140
3263
3344
3465
3516
3614
375
385
3925
407
4144
428
4321
4453
4510
4622
475
4864
4913
91.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount5
totalSentences123
matches
0"was loosened"
1"been knocked"
2"was unclasped"
3"been placed"
4"been sealed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs220
matches
0"was crawling"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount18
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences15
totalSentences147
ratio0.102
matches
0"Abandoned Tube stations had a particular smell—damp iron, mildew, and the ghost of a million cigarettes smoked by commuters decades dead."
1"Emergency lighting flickered in weak amber pulses along the ceiling—someone had tapped into the old power grid, jury-rigged it to work."
2"Harlow catalogued what she could see—bundles of dried herbs hanging from hooks, a table of glass vials filled with liquids in colours that didn't exist in any chemistry textbook she'd studied."
3"Those hands were clean—too clean for someone who'd been in this place, surrounded by dust and decay."
4"The items scattered on the ground weren't random—she could see it now in the way they fanned out."
5"At the bone tokens everyone carried in and out—she still had the warm weight of hers in her pocket."
6"Or unless they were old enough—or paranoid enough—to default to analogue."
7"The kind of frames an academic would choose—functional, distinctive."
8"The journal's cover bore a small embossed crest—a serpent coiled around a pillar."
9"The crest appeared in the margins of notes Morris had kept in his personal folio—notes that disappeared from evidence forty-eight hours after his death."
10"Not fear—surprise."
11"The verdigris was real—the brass casing had genuine age, decades at minimum."
12"Harlow set the compass down on the nearest flat surface—a stack of old crates—and watched."
13"Inside, a pale liquid shifted in a way that liquid shouldn't—curling against the glass, pressing, like something alive trying to find a way out."
14"And whatever she'd found—or whatever had found her—had ended her between one heartbeat and the next, with no violence, no struggle, no evidence of any force a coroner would understand."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1293
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount29
adverbRatio0.02242846094354215
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.0038669760247486465
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences147
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences147
mean10.05
std7.82
cv0.779
sampleLengths
017
121
26
31
41
511
620
712
83
921
107
114
1221
1326
1414
158
1611
1714
181
198
205
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2216
231
241
259
2624
2720
284
293
305
315
3218
333
349
3516
364
374
384
395
403
415
4217
4313
449
452
4618
4710
4820
4913
61.90% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats14
diversityRatio0.42857142857142855
totalSentences147
uniqueOpeners63
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences106
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount24
totalSentences106
matches
0"She'd called in the favour"
1"His tie was loosened, his"
2"They walked past the stalls."
3"Her eyes were open, staring"
4"She studied the woman's hands."
5"Its needle spun lazily, despite"
6"She looked at the stalls,"
7"She crouched again, closer this"
8"She moved to the satchel."
9"Her pulse stayed level."
10"Her hands didn't shake."
11"She looked at those open"
12"It had simply happened, between"
13"Its needle had stopped spinning."
14"It pointed directly at the"
15"She picked up the compass."
16"It had rolled against the"
17"She'd come here for something"
18"She stood, leaving the compass"
19"She stared down at the"
ratio0.226
77.92% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount81
totalSentences106
matches
0"The bone token left a"
1"This one carried something else"
2"The faintest trace of something"
3"The uniformed constable ahead of"
4"Harlow didn't respond."
5"She'd called in the favour"
6"The tunnel yawned open."
7"Emergency lighting flickered in weak"
8"The scene was crawling with"
9"DS Chen met her at"
10"His tie was loosened, his"
11"They walked past the stalls."
12"Harlow catalogued what she could"
13"The body lay on the"
14"Her eyes were open, staring"
15"Harlow crouched beside the body."
16"The woman's skin had an"
17"The satchel was unclasped, a"
18"She studied the woman's hands."
19"Those hands were clean—too clean"
ratio0.764
94.34% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences106
matches
0"Before someone could scrub whatever"
1"Either she'd been placed here"
ratio0.019
60.44% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences52
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"The officer at the door had accepted it without question, which meant it was currency here."
1"Chen hovered behind her, radiating the particular discomfort of a man who wanted to solve a case without examining the inconvenient parts."
2"The leather was worn smooth at the edges from years of handling, the kind of patina that didn't come from casual use."
3"The crest appeared in the margins of notes Morris had kept in his personal folio—notes that disappeared from evidence forty-eight hours after his death."
4"It had rolled against the wall, its stopper still sealed with wax that bore the same serpent-and-pillar imprint as the journal."
5"She'd come here for something specific, something connected to symbols and sigils and a crest that had appeared in her dead partner's files."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags4
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Chen muttered (mutter)"
dialogueSentences28
tagDensity0.071
leniency0.143
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.071
86.8183%