Run: 2026-04-24-01KQ06K4QQ7A830YKPKK2XQ63P

Run Details

Duration:
52.8s
Cost:
$0.007226
Provider:
Xiaomi

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The air tasted wrong. Not just cold—Richmond Park at midnight was always damp and chill—but *old*, like opening a tomb that hadn't been disturbed for centuries. Aurora Carter pulled the collar of her jacket tighter, the fabric whispering against her neck. The map on her phone was useless here. The signal had died the moment she'd stepped between the two largest oaks, their branches knitting together like a gnarled doorway. She'd come for Eva. The cryptic text had been enough: *The Grove. After midnight. I found it.* No follow-up. No answer to Aurora’s frantic calls. Just three words that sent a spike of ice through her veins. Eva didn’t play games like this. The standing stones were supposed to mark the boundary. They weren't stones at all, but ancient oaks, their trunks twisted into unsettling shapes that, in the shifting moonlight, looked like hunched figures or grasping limbs. Wildflowers carpeted the ground beneath them, their petals open and luminous in the dark—violets, foxglove, flowers that shouldn’t exist in January. Their perfume was cloyingly sweet, a scent of decay folded into honey. "Okay, Eva. Not funny." Her voice sounded flat, swallowed by the silence. The normal nocturnal orchestra of the park—the rustle of deer, the distant hum of London—had vanished. Here, the silence was a presence. It pressed against her eardrums. She took a step forward, her boots sinking into soft, damp earth that felt almost like moss. A flicker of movement to her left. She snapped her head around. Nothing. Just the shadow of a branch swaying in a breeze she couldn't feel. "Hello?" The word dropped into the quiet like a stone into a well. No echo. Just absorption. The Heartstone Pendant lay cold against her skin beneath her shirt. No warmth. No glow. It was just a piece of jewelry. She shoved the thought away. She wasn't here for that. The grove, as Eva’s text called it, was a clearing, but it felt more like a bowl. The twisted oaks rose up around the edges, forming a natural amphitheatre. The moonlight here was different, too. Sharper. It etched the scene in silver and black, bleaching the wildflowers to bone-white and deepening every shadow to an inky void. Then she heard it. A giggle. High-pitched, childlike, but layered with something brittle, like dry twigs snapping. It came from everywhere and nowhere. "Eva?" Aurora called, her voice tight. She turned in a slow circle, scanning the tree line. The giggle faded, leaving a ringing in its wake. She pushed forward, towards the centre of the clearing where the grass grew longest. Each step felt deliberate, loud. The ground here was uneven, treacherous. She almost stumbled over a root, catching herself with a hand against a nearby oak. The bark was unnaturally smooth, like polished stone. And it was warm. She snatched her hand back. A whisper. Not words, but the cadence of speech. A sibilant rush of air that sounded like her name. *Ror-eee.* Her throat went dry. "Who's there?" The silence that answered was deeper than before. It hummed. She felt it in her teeth. She checked her phone again. 12:47 AM. She’d been here for less than twenty minutes. But it felt like hours. The time distortion. The lore in the codex file had been clear about that. An hour inside could be minutes or days outside. How long had Eva been here? Days? A chill unrelated to the temperature traced a line down her spine. This place wasn't just strange. It was *watching*. Her gaze drifted to the far edge of the clearing. A shape, dark and low, huddled at the base of one of the twisted oaks. A person? "Eva?" No movement. Aurora took a hesitant step closer. The shape resolved itself. Not a person. A pile of… something. Leaves? No. It was a mound of shed antlers, bleached white, piled in a grotesque nest. Dozens of them. From deer, but also from things she couldn't identify—spirals, forks, too many points. Bile rose in her throat. She backed away, her boot crunching on something hard. She looked down. A small, flat stone lay in the grass, carved with a spiral that seemed to spin in the moonlight if she looked at it from the corner of her eye. There were others, she realized. Scattered throughout the clearing. Not arranged in a pattern, but there. Markers. Or offerings. The giggle came again. This time it sounded closer, coming from just behind the antler pile. Aurora’s breath hitched. She fumbled inside her shirt, her fingers closing around the Heartstone. It was ice-cold. Dead. A branch snapped in the woods. The sound was sharp, explosive in the stillness. She spun towards it, heart hammering against her ribs. Two points of light, low to the ground, reflected the moonlight. Eyes. They blinked. Then they were gone. She wasn't alone. The certainty settled in her bones, cold and heavy. Something was in the trees, circling the clearing, staying just at the edge of her perception. It had been there since she arrived. It had let her in. "Eva!" she shouted, her voice cracking. "If you can hear me, we need to go! Now!" Her own words bounced back at her, distorted, as if the clearing itself were mocking her. *Go… go… go…* She took a step towards the path she'd come from, the direction of the oaken doorway. The wildflowers at her feet rustled. She looked down. They were turning. The luminous heads of the flowers were tracking her movement, their petals curling like hungry mouths. A sound began, a low thrum that vibrated up through the soles of her boots. It was the heartbeat of the grove. And it was speeding up. From the corner of her eye, she saw one of the twisted oaks *lean*. It was subtle, a slow, impossible tilt of the trunk, its branch-limbs reaching. Then another groan of wood, from the other side. They were closing in. The whispers were back, a chorus now, overlapping and urgent. Not her name. Other words. *Stay. Tasted. Sweet.* The scent of the wildflowers intensified, rotting and rich, making her head swim. Panic, cold and sharp, pierced through her shock. The reason for being here—Eva—fought with a primal, screaming instinct to flee. But flee where? The path was gone. The standing oaks had shifted, their positions rearranged into a solid, impenetrable wall of gnarled wood. The way out had been swallowed. She was trapped in the bowl. With them. The moon vanished behind a cloud. For a second, total blackness swallowed the grove. In that pitch dark, the whispers stopped. The thrumming stopped. Even the cloying sweetness in the air paused. Then, all at once, the world *reasserted* itself. The moonlight returned, stark and cruel. But it illuminated a new feature in the centre of the clearing. Where there had been only long grass, there now stood a circle of stones. They rose from the earth like broken teeth, grey and moss-covered. And sitting in the middle of the circle, her back to Aurora, was a figure. Long hair, blonde and tangled with leaves, hung down her back. She wore Eva’s favourite blue jacket. "Rory." The voice was Eva’s, but flat, drained of all colour. "You came." "Eva?" Aurora took a step forward, relief warring with a screaming, primal fear. The Heartstone against her skin gave a single, weak, cold pulse. "What is this place? We have to leave. *Now.*" The figure didn’t move. "Leaving is hard. They don't like it when you leave." Her head began to turn, just a fraction, the movement stiff, unnatural. "They liked my taste." Aurora froze. In the stark moonlight, she saw the roots. They snaked out from the base of the circle stones, thick and woody, and they were tangled around Eva’s ankles, her wrists, creeping up her arms like parasitic vines. They pulsed with a faint, sickly light. Eva’s head completed its turn. Her face was pale, her eyes wide and blank, pupils dilated into vast black pits. A thin trickle of something dark, like sap, ran from the corner of her mouth. "They’re hungry, Rory," Eva said, her voice a monotone echo of itself. "And you’re here." The circle of stones began to hum. The wildflowers at the perimeter of the clearing began to glow, a collective, eerie radiance that cast moving, distorted shadows. The twisted oaks groaned, their bark splitting in places to reveal a pale, pulsing wood beneath, like flesh. From the shadows between the trees, shapes began to detach themselves. Not animals. Not people. Silhouettes that bent and folded in ways geometry didn’t allow. They were made of the darkness and the twisted wood, and they moved with a silent, predatory grace into the clearing, circling, closing the distance. Aurora’s hand went to the Heartstone. It was still cold. Useless. She looked at Eva’s trapped, ruined form, then at the encircling shapes. The wrongness wasn’t just a feeling anymore. It was a physical thing, a tightening net of ancient hunger and silent malice. The grove wasn't just a place. It was a mouth. And it was about to feed.
created_at"2026-04-24T16:53:57.633Z" 4/24/2026, 4:53:57 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags7
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences15
tagDensity0.467
leniency0.933
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1530
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
31.37% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1530
totalAiIsms21
found
0
word"chill"
count2
1
word"silence"
count3
2
word"flicker"
count1
3
word"echo"
count2
4
word"warmth"
count1
5
word"etched"
count1
6
word"scanning"
count1
7
word"treacherous"
count1
8
word"whisper"
count1
9
word"traced"
count1
10
word"down her spine"
count1
11
word"resolved"
count1
12
word"vibrated"
count1
13
word"stark"
count2
14
word"pulse"
count1
15
word"pulsed"
count1
highlights
0"chill"
1"silence"
2"flicker"
3"echo"
4"warmth"
5"etched"
6"scanning"
7"treacherous"
8"whisper"
9"traced"
10"down her spine"
11"resolved"
12"vibrated"
13"stark"
14"pulse"
15"pulsed"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences188
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount5
narrationSentences188
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences195
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen30
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans9
markdownWords19
totalWords1522
ratio0.012
matches
0"old"
1"The Grove. After midnight. I found it."
2"Ror-eee."
3"watching"
4"Go… go… go…"
5"lean"
6"Stay. Tasted. Sweet."
7"reasserted"
8"Now."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions3
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions31
wordCount1469
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity0.75
worstName"Eva"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
Richmond1
Park1
Carter1
Eva11
Grove1
Aurora9
January1
London1
Heartstone4
Pendant1
persons
0"Carter"
1"Eva"
2"Aurora"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"Grove"
3"January"
4"London"
5"Heartstone"
globalScore1
windowScore0.833
81.19% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences109
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"looked like hunched figures or grasping l"
1"sounded like her name"
2"spiral that seemed to spin in the moonlight if she looked at it from the corner of her eye"
68.59% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.314
wordCount1522
matches
0"Not words, but the cadence of speech"
1"Not arranged in a pattern, but there"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences195
matches(empty)
87.21% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs42
mean36.24
std16.5
cv0.455
sampleLengths
070
143
268
339
443
517
632
757
823
925
1057
1120
126
1316
1450
1520
1628
1751
1866
1934
2041
2140
2216
2319
2444
2527
2640
2731
2849
298
3032
3126
3257
3313
3433
3530
3646
3735
3815
3945
4050
4160
90.33% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount8
totalSentences188
matches
0"been disturbed"
1"were supposed"
2"were gone"
3"was gone"
4"been swallowed"
5"was trapped"
6"were tangled"
7"were made"
32.64% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount6
totalVerbs239
matches
0"was *watching"
1"were mocking"
2"were turning"
3"were tracking"
4"was speeding"
5"were closing"
69.60% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount8
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences195
ratio0.026
matches
0"Not just cold—Richmond Park at midnight was always damp and chill—but *old*, like opening a tomb that hadn't been disturbed for centuries."
1"Wildflowers carpeted the ground beneath them, their petals open and luminous in the dark—violets, foxglove, flowers that shouldn’t exist in January."
2"The normal nocturnal orchestra of the park—the rustle of deer, the distant hum of London—had vanished."
3"From deer, but also from things she couldn't identify—spirals, forks, too many points."
4"The reason for being here—Eva—fought with a primal, screaming instinct to flee."
88.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1483
adjectiveStacks2
stackExamples
0"lay cold against her"
1"single, weak, cold pulse."
adverbCount44
adverbRatio0.029669588671611596
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.0026972353337828725
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences195
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences195
mean7.81
std5.81
cv0.744
sampleLengths
04
122
215
38
421
54
68
72
85
96
1012
116
129
1326
1421
1512
1612
1716
186
195
2017
217
225
231
2413
2513
262
272
2811
292
302
317
325
335
3417
3512
366
371
3821
394
402
4111
426
436
4410
459
4614
475
486
4915
44.62% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats18
diversityRatio0.3230769230769231
totalSentences195
uniqueOpeners63
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount7
totalSentences154
matches
0"Just three words that sent"
1"Just the shadow of a"
2"Then she heard it."
3"Then they were gone."
4"Then another groan of wood,"
5"Even the cloying sweetness in"
6"Then, all at once, the"
ratio0.045
84.94% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount52
totalSentences154
matches
0"She'd come for Eva."
1"I found it.* No follow-up."
2"They weren't stones at all,"
3"Their perfume was cloyingly sweet,"
4"Her voice sounded flat, swallowed"
5"It pressed against her eardrums."
6"She took a step forward,"
7"She snapped her head around."
8"It was just a piece"
9"She shoved the thought away."
10"She wasn't here for that."
11"It etched the scene in"
12"It came from everywhere and"
13"She turned in a slow"
14"She pushed forward, towards the"
15"She almost stumbled over a"
16"She snatched her hand back."
17"Her throat went dry."
18"She felt it in her"
19"She checked her phone again."
ratio0.338
73.64% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount119
totalSentences154
matches
0"The air tasted wrong."
1"Aurora Carter pulled the collar"
2"The map on her phone"
3"The signal had died the"
4"She'd come for Eva."
5"The cryptic text had been"
6"I found it.* No follow-up."
7"Eva didn’t play games like"
8"The standing stones were supposed"
9"They weren't stones at all,"
10"Wildflowers carpeted the ground beneath"
11"Their perfume was cloyingly sweet,"
12"Her voice sounded flat, swallowed"
13"The normal nocturnal orchestra of"
14"Here, the silence was a"
15"It pressed against her eardrums."
16"She took a step forward,"
17"A flicker of movement to"
18"She snapped her head around."
19"The word dropped into the"
ratio0.773
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences154
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences56
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"Not just cold—Richmond Park at midnight was always damp and chill—but *old*, like opening a tomb that hadn't been disturbed for centuries."
1"Wildflowers carpeted the ground beneath them, their petals open and luminous in the dark—violets, foxglove, flowers that shouldn’t exist in January."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags7
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"Aurora called, her voice tight"
1"she shouted, her voice cracking"
2"Aurora took, relief warring with a screaming, primal fear"
3"Eva said, her voice a monotone echo of itself"
83.33% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she shouted (shout)"
dialogueSentences15
tagDensity0.2
leniency0.4
rawRatio0.333
effectiveRatio0.133
80.6262%