| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 16 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Quinn said quietly [quietly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 32 | | tagDensity | 0.5 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.063 | | effectiveRatio | 0.063 | |
| 94.64% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1866 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 70.53% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1866 | | totalAiIsms | 11 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "echoed" | | 1 | "weight" | | 2 | "whisper" | | 3 | "etched" | | 4 | "intricate" | | 5 | "quivered" | | 6 | "could feel" | | 7 | "pristine" | | 8 | "flickered" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "eyes widened/narrowed" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 123 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 2 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 123 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 139 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 61 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1858 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 18 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 50.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 47 | | wordCount | 1451 | | uniqueNames | 14 | | maxNameDensity | 1.72 | | worstName | "Quinn" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3.5 | | worstWindowName | "Quinn" | | discoveredNames | | Harlow | 1 | | Quinn | 25 | | Camden | 1 | | Tube | 1 | | Morris | 1 | | Kowalski | 1 | | Latin | 1 | | Oxford | 1 | | Ancient | 1 | | History | 1 | | Eva | 10 | | Metropolitan | 1 | | Police | 1 | | Shade | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Harlow" | | 1 | "Quinn" | | 2 | "Morris" | | 3 | "Kowalski" | | 4 | "Eva" | | 5 | "Police" |
| | places | | 0 | "Latin" | | 1 | "Oxford" | | 2 | "Ancient" |
| | globalScore | 0.639 | | windowScore | 0.5 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 81 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "looked like the work of a falling girder" |
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| 92.36% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 1.076 | | wordCount | 1858 | | matches | | 0 | "not as a scene of random violence but as an object placed with deliberation" | | 1 | "not as a mystery of ghosts and sigils, but as a transaction gone wrong, staged with just enough theater" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 139 | | matches | | 0 | "learned that the" | | 1 | "conclude that the" |
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| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 44 | | mean | 42.23 | | std | 32.94 | | cv | 0.78 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 126 | | 1 | 7 | | 2 | 49 | | 3 | 106 | | 4 | 65 | | 5 | 4 | | 6 | 111 | | 7 | 18 | | 8 | 58 | | 9 | 59 | | 10 | 55 | | 11 | 60 | | 12 | 6 | | 13 | 2 | | 14 | 40 | | 15 | 30 | | 16 | 78 | | 17 | 33 | | 18 | 39 | | 19 | 5 | | 20 | 105 | | 21 | 44 | | 22 | 6 | | 23 | 54 | | 24 | 18 | | 25 | 109 | | 26 | 9 | | 27 | 28 | | 28 | 19 | | 29 | 66 | | 30 | 4 | | 31 | 53 | | 32 | 69 | | 33 | 24 | | 34 | 44 | | 35 | 45 | | 36 | 29 | | 37 | 16 | | 38 | 14 | | 39 | 32 | | 40 | 18 | | 41 | 79 | | 42 | 5 | | 43 | 17 |
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| 76.74% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 10 | | totalSentences | 123 | | matches | | 0 | "were found" | | 1 | "was caved" | | 2 | "been carried" | | 3 | "were curled" | | 4 | "been removed" | | 5 | "was disturbed" | | 6 | "been killed" | | 7 | "been brought" | | 8 | "was meant" | | 9 | "been moved" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 231 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 5 | | semicolonCount | 2 | | flaggedSentences | 7 | | totalSentences | 139 | | ratio | 0.05 | | matches | | 0 | "At forty-one, with eighteen years of decorated service behind her, Quinn had learned that the dead did not lie—but the places they were found often did." | | 1 | "The worn leather satchel slung across her body bulged with books, one of them poking out at an angle—something with a cracked spine and a title in Latin that spoke of her Oxford training in Ancient History." | | 2 | "The platform was filth; even the uniformed officers by the ladder had tracked black smears across the tile." | | 3 | "The halogen lamps did not reach here; the shadows thickened, cold and damp, prickling the skin at the nape of her neck." | | 4 | "The man had been killed elsewhere—his pristine shoes and unblemished coat proved transit after death." | | 5 | "Then he had been moved, rolled face-up, his chest crushed afterward—or before, but not in this spot." | | 6 | "The lamps flickered overhead, and in the space between light and shadow, Quinn began to see the shape of it all—not as a mystery of ghosts and sigils, but as a transaction gone wrong, staged with just enough theater to make a reasonable investigator blink and turn back." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1471 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 46 | | adverbRatio | 0.03127124405166554 | | lyAdverbCount | 15 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.010197144799456152 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 139 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 139 | | mean | 13.37 | | std | 10.4 | | cv | 0.778 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 27 | | 1 | 21 | | 2 | 23 | | 3 | 1 | | 4 | 26 | | 5 | 28 | | 6 | 2 | | 7 | 5 | | 8 | 21 | | 9 | 19 | | 10 | 9 | | 11 | 24 | | 12 | 21 | | 13 | 13 | | 14 | 5 | | 15 | 5 | | 16 | 5 | | 17 | 33 | | 18 | 18 | | 19 | 9 | | 20 | 11 | | 21 | 25 | | 22 | 2 | | 23 | 4 | | 24 | 9 | | 25 | 8 | | 26 | 15 | | 27 | 15 | | 28 | 27 | | 29 | 37 | | 30 | 6 | | 31 | 12 | | 32 | 32 | | 33 | 26 | | 34 | 3 | | 35 | 7 | | 36 | 10 | | 37 | 2 | | 38 | 18 | | 39 | 19 | | 40 | 8 | | 41 | 14 | | 42 | 33 | | 43 | 2 | | 44 | 14 | | 45 | 4 | | 46 | 3 | | 47 | 4 | | 48 | 25 | | 49 | 8 |
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| 53.00% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 8 | | diversityRatio | 0.35251798561151076 | | totalSentences | 139 | | uniqueOpeners | 49 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 101 | | matches | | 0 | "Just a dry, meaty crater" | | 1 | "Then he had been moved," | | 2 | "Then she tucked that same" | | 3 | "Instead, she saw a door." |
| | ratio | 0.04 | |
| 93.27% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 32 | | totalSentences | 101 | | matches | | 0 | "Her boots struck the platform" | | 1 | "She ducked beneath the fluttering" | | 2 | "Their light carved out harsh" | | 3 | "He lay near the tunnel" | | 4 | "His chest was caved inward," | | 5 | "It looked like the work" | | 6 | "She was twenty-six, barely five-foot-four," | | 7 | "Her round glasses had slipped" | | 8 | "It came out flat, a" | | 9 | "She circled the body, her" | | 10 | "Her voice dropped to that" | | 11 | "She leaned closer, peering at" | | 12 | "She dropped her satchel and" | | 13 | "It quivered, angling sharply toward" | | 14 | "She stepped past the body," | | 15 | "Her closely cropped salt-and-pepper hair" | | 16 | "She ran her gloved hand" | | 17 | "She crouched, angling her penlight" | | 18 | "She turned back to the" | | 19 | "He had been brought here" |
| | ratio | 0.317 | |
| 73.86% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 78 | | totalSentences | 101 | | matches | | 0 | "Detective Harlow Quinn descended the" | | 1 | "Her boots struck the platform" | | 2 | "She ducked beneath the fluttering" | | 3 | "The last time she had" | | 4 | "Some clocks never stopped ticking." | | 5 | "The station platform curved in" | | 6 | "Their light carved out harsh" | | 7 | "He lay near the tunnel" | | 8 | "His chest was caved inward," | | 9 | "It looked like the work" | | 10 | "Quinn approached slowly, her sharp" | | 11 | "The absence of blood was" | | 12 | "A trauma that violent should" | | 13 | "The floor around him was" | | 14 | "The voice came from the" | | 15 | "Quinn’s hand twitched toward her" | | 16 | "Eva Kowalski stepped into the" | | 17 | "She was twenty-six, barely five-foot-four," | | 18 | "Her round glasses had slipped" | | 19 | "The worn leather satchel slung" |
| | ratio | 0.772 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 101 | | matches | | 0 | "Even from three feet away," | | 1 | "Because the killer could not" | | 2 | "Because the other side had" |
| | ratio | 0.03 | |
| 46.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 59 | | technicalSentenceCount | 8 | | matches | | 0 | "Detective Harlow Quinn descended the maintenance ladder with the controlled efficiency of a woman who had learned long ago that hesitation invited gravity to te…" | | 1 | "Her boots struck the platform of the abandoned Camden Tube station with a sharp report that echoed down the derelict tunnel." | | 2 | "The station platform curved in a sickle of crumbling white tile, illuminated by portable halogen lamps that hummed like angry wasps." | | 3 | "His chest was caved inward, a single catastrophic depression that had pulverized the sternum and driven bone shards toward the collar." | | 4 | "Just a dry, meaty crater and a face frozen in an expression of startled indignation, as if he had opened a door and found something he had not expected on the o…" | | 5 | "The worn leather satchel slung across her body bulged with books, one of them poking out at an angle—something with a cracked spine and a title in Latin that sp…" | | 6 | "On a metal evidence tray beside the corpse sat a small brass compass, its casing mottled with a patina of verdigris that spoke of years in damp pockets." | | 7 | "Half-buried in the grit, she spotted it: a sliver of bone, whittled smooth, its surface etched with markings that mirrored the chalk sigils on the tile." |
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| 62.50% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 16 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "Quinn stood, her military bearing rigid, shoulders square" | | 1 | "she said, not turning around" |
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| 56.25% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 13 | | fancyCount | 3 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Eva continued (continue)" | | 1 | "Quinn murmured (murmur)" | | 2 | "Quinn continued (continue)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 32 | | tagDensity | 0.406 | | leniency | 0.813 | | rawRatio | 0.231 | | effectiveRatio | 0.188 | |