Run: 2026-04-24-01KQ06MY0Q8BZQB46K9S0HNPE2

Run Details

Duration:
2m 45s
Cost:
$0.000977
Provider:
Io Net

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain hammered the cobblestones of Soho, turning the alleyways into slick mirrors of neon. Harlow Quinn pulled her coat tighter, leather creaking against the worn leather watch on her left wrist. The second hand ticked louder than the distant hum of traffic, each pulse a reminder of the three years since Morris vanished, the cold case that still gnawed at the edges of her mind. She rounded the corner of Dean Street just as a silhouette ducked beneath a dripping awning. The suspect—tall, hooded, movements too fluid for a human—merged with the shadows, a flash of green neon from the sign above The Raven’s Nest flickering across his back. “Stop!” Quinn hissed, voice edged with rain and resolve. Her boots splashed, sending water into the gutters, the sound cutting through the night like a knife. The figure didn’t pause. He vaulted over the low wall that separated the sidewalk from the alley, his boots barely making a sound on the wet stone. Quinn’s breath fogged in the chill, her eyes catching the glint of something metallic at his throat—a pendant perhaps, or a talisman. She pushed forward, muscles coiled from eighteen years of disciplined training. A narrow passageway led her into the backstreets behind the bar. The Raven’s Nest loomed ahead, its green sign buzzing erratically, casting an eerie glow over the cracked pavement. Inside, the low hum of conversation mixed with the clink of glasses, the air thick with stale smoke and the scent of spilled whiskey. Old maps and black‑and‑white photographs patched the walls, each frame a silent witness to some forgotten crime. She slipped through the doorway, rain dripping onto the polished wood floor. The patrons glanced up, eyes narrowing; a few muttered under their breath, aware that a police detective didn’t just stroll in unannounced. Quinn moved like a predator, scanning each table, each shadowed corner. The suspect had vanished. A barmaid brushed a rag over the polished counter, eyes flicking to the detective’s badge. “Looking for trouble?” she whispered, voice hushed. Quinn’s jaw tightened. “Someone slipped through your back‑room. I need to know where.” The woman’s hand trembled. “Back‑room’s off‑limits. You don’t want to—” A metallic click echoed from the bookshelf on the far wall. The rows of dusty tomes shifted, revealing a narrow gap. The barmaid’s eyes widened, then darted away. Quinn didn’t hesitate. She nudged the hidden door, feeling the cool air that sighed from the passage beyond. The space was cramped, walls lined with crates and old bottles huddled together like conspirators. The floor sloped down, a gentle descent that led away from the bar’s noisy din into a subterranean silence. A low murmur rose as she emerged into a corridor lit by flickering orange bulbs. The walls were plastered with faded graffiti—cryptic symbols, sigils, and a single phrase scrawled in crimson: “Pay the price or pay the price.” The smell of damp earth mixed with incense, a heady combination that hinted at something older than the city above. She followed the corridor until a heavy iron door barred her path. A brass plate beside it read: VEIL MARKET – ENTRY BY BONE TOKEN ONLY. The words glowed faintly, casting a pale light on the wet tiles. A figure stepped out of the shadows, his face half‑masked, eyes glinting like polished stone. He held out a small, ivory bone, polished smooth, the edges etched with runes. “You shouldn't be here,” he said, voice resonant, a low chuckle vibrating the air. “The market doesn’t welcome police.” Quinn’s hand instinctively tightened around her watch, feeling the worn leather beneath her fingers. “I’m looking for a man who stole something from a dead officer.” The man’s smile didn't reach his eyes. “Dead officers don’t have much to lose. What’s your stake?” She glanced past him: stalls lined up, each draped with black velvet, displaying jars of glowing fluid, talismans that pulsed with a faint light, and cracked mirrors that seemed to reflect not just the present but something else. A woman in a long coat haggled over a vial, her voice a whisper that cut through the humid air. “Do you have a token?” Quinn asked, voice flat, eyes never leaving the man's face. He tapped the bone, then lifted his hand, revealing a smaller fragment tucked beneath his cuff. “I could give you one, but you’ll owe me. The market has its rules.” She considered the bone. The market was a labyrinth of forbidden items, a place where even the law bent. The suspect she chased could be lurking among those stalls, hidden behind a veil of enchantments, selling whatever had driven him to darkness. Her wristwatch ticked, counting down seconds as the rain continued its relentless percussion above ground, each drop a reminder of time slipping away. “Tell me why you sold your soul to the darkness,” Quinn muttered, stepping forward. “I need to know where he went.” The man leaned in, his breath scented with copper and incense. “Sometimes the only way out is through." He slid the bone token across the iron door. "Take it. The market opens for those bold enough to walk its veins." The iron door groaned, hinges protesting as it swung inward. A rush of warm, humid air hit her, carrying whispers that seemed to chant names: “Doom, Mercy, Shadow.” The neon glow of The Raven’s Nest disappeared behind her, replaced by the amber light of lanterns dangling from the ceiling. Quinn entered, her boots splashing in a shallow pool of water that clung to the stone floor. She moved past stalls where a cloaked figure offered “Memory Erasers” in glass bottles, a boy with a mechanical arm hawked “Silenced Guns.” The market thrummed with a life of its own, patrons exchanging hushed curses for stolen artifacts. She paused at a stall draped in deep violet, its proprietor—a woman with pale skin and eyes like cracked glass—holding a small metallic box. The box hummed faintly. “What’s this?” Quinn asked, eyes narrowed. “‘The Locket of Lost Voices,’” the woman replied, voice thin. “Wear it, and the dead speak to you. Useful for detectives, I suppose.” Quinn’s mind flashed to Morris, his face a ghost behind the rain‑smudged window of her memory. She felt a sudden urge to reach out, to ask the dead for guidance, but the locket sat on a velvet cushion, tempting but dangerous. A sudden clatter erupted from the far end of the market. A scream rose, sharp as a knife. Instinct spiked her heart; the suspect’s silhouette burst through a side hallway, clutching a small, leather‑bound ledger. The ledger’s cover was embossed with a sigil—a skeletal hand holding a watch. Quinn lunged, weaving between stalls, her coat flapping like a dying flag. The suspect slipped, ducked under a low arch, then vaulted onto a platform where a crowd gathered, trading a crate of blackened bones. He tossed the ledger to a vendor, who swallowed it whole. “Give it back!” Quinn barked, her voice echoing off the vaulted ceilings. The vendor’s eyes flickered, then hardened. He thrust a bundle of dried herbs forward, a warning perhaps. The suspect turned, his hood falling back to reveal a scarred jaw, eyes like wet coal. He held a pistol—old, brass, the kind that clicked when the trigger was pulled. The gun felt out of place among the arcane wares, a relic of the world above. “Detective,” he sneered, voice dripping with contempt. “You’re out of your depth. This isn’t your precinct.” Quinn’s jaw set. She reached into her coat, fingers brushing the worn leather watch. The watch had been a gift from Morris, a reminder of precision, of orders. She felt the weight of it, the pulse of the ticking second hand. She flipped the watch open, revealing a thin, silver blade hidden within—an old trick from a retired operative. The suspect’s finger twitched, the pistol’s barrel flashing a brief arc of light, a spark that didn’t ignite the weapon but sent a shiver through the market’s ambient hum. “Stop!” Quinn shouted, pressing the blade against the barrel. The metal sang, a high‑pitched note that cut through the patrons’ chatter. The suspect laughed, a hollow sound that bounced off the walls. “You think you can stop me with a watch?” “Not a watch,” she replied, eyes flicking to the ledger hidden in the vendor’s crate. “A reminder that I’m not alone.” A sudden crash erupted as a stall collapsed, knocking over a tower of glass bottles that shattered, spilling a luminous liquid onto the floor. The liquid seeped into the cracks, turning the stone into a slick, glowing surface. The suspect slipped, his gun clattering across the floor, the barrel skidding into a pool of the luminous fluid. The market fell silent for a heartbeat, then erupted into
created_at"2026-04-24T16:54:56.292Z" 4/24/2026, 4:54:56 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags16
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences27
tagDensity0.593
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1468
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
11.44% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1468
totalAiIsms26
found
0
word"pulse"
count2
1
word"reminder"
count4
2
word"resolve"
count1
3
word"chill"
count1
4
word"glint"
count1
5
word"loomed"
count1
6
word"predator"
count1
7
word"scanning"
count1
8
word"trembled"
count1
9
word"echoed"
count1
10
word"silence"
count1
11
word"glinting"
count1
12
word"etched"
count1
13
word"velvet"
count2
14
word"pulsed"
count1
15
word"whisper"
count1
16
word"mechanical"
count1
17
word"echoing"
count1
18
word"flickered"
count1
19
word"weight"
count1
20
word"shattered"
count1
highlights
0"pulse"
1"reminder"
2"resolve"
3"chill"
4"glint"
5"loomed"
6"predator"
7"scanning"
8"trembled"
9"echoed"
10"silence"
11"glinting"
12"etched"
13"velvet"
14"pulsed"
15"whisper"
16"mechanical"
17"echoing"
18"flickered"
19"weight"
20"shattered"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches3
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count2
1
label"sent a shiver through"
count1
highlights
0"eyes widened"
1"eyes narrowed"
2"sent a shiver through"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences89
matches
0"g with contempt"
62.60% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount3
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences89
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences101
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen44
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1460
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions13
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
87.74% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions28
wordCount1285
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity1.25
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Soho1
Quinn16
Morris3
Dean1
Street1
Raven3
Nest3
persons
0"Quinn"
1"Morris"
2"Raven"
3"Nest"
places
0"Soho"
1"Dean"
2"Street"
globalScore0.877
windowScore1
85.06% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences77
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"mirrors that seemed to reflect not just the present but something else"
1"whispers that seemed to chant names: The neon glow of The Raven’s Nest disappeared behind her, replaced by the amber light of lanterns dangling from the ceiling"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.685
wordCount1460
matches
0"not just the present but something else"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences101
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs42
mean34.76
std18.19
cv0.523
sampleLengths
065
144
226
360
470
549
615
77
813
910
1028
1152
1258
1338
1429
1519
1626
1717
1858
1915
2030
2165
2221
2340
2449
2556
2628
276
2823
2941
3048
3146
3229
3346
3416
3559
3629
3721
3820
3921
4057
4110
93.44% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences89
matches
0"were plastered"
1"was embossed"
2"was pulled"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs226
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount10
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences10
totalSentences101
ratio0.099
matches
0"The suspect—tall, hooded, movements too fluid for a human—merged with the shadows, a flash of green neon from the sign above The Raven’s Nest flickering across his back."
1"Quinn’s breath fogged in the chill, her eyes catching the glint of something metallic at his throat—a pendant perhaps, or a talisman."
2"The patrons glanced up, eyes narrowing; a few muttered under their breath, aware that a police detective didn’t just stroll in unannounced."
3"The walls were plastered with faded graffiti—cryptic symbols, sigils, and a single phrase scrawled in crimson: “Pay the price or pay the price.” The smell of damp earth mixed with incense, a heady combination that hinted at something older than the city above."
4"A brass plate beside it read: VEIL MARKET – ENTRY BY BONE TOKEN ONLY."
5"She paused at a stall draped in deep violet, its proprietor—a woman with pale skin and eyes like cracked glass—holding a small metallic box."
6"Instinct spiked her heart; the suspect’s silhouette burst through a side hallway, clutching a small, leather‑bound ledger."
7"The ledger’s cover was embossed with a sigil—a skeletal hand holding a watch."
8"He held a pistol—old, brass, the kind that clicked when the trigger was pulled."
9"She flipped the watch open, revealing a thin, silver blade hidden within—an old trick from a retired operative."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1215
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount25
adverbRatio0.0205761316872428
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.0049382716049382715
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences101
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences101
mean14.46
std7.93
cv0.548
sampleLengths
014
117
234
316
428
59
617
74
823
922
1011
1111
1218
1324
1417
1512
1622
1711
184
1915
207
213
2210
234
246
2511
2610
277
283
2915
3015
3119
3215
3343
3412
3514
3612
3715
3814
3914
405
4114
4212
437
4410
4538
4620
4715
4816
4914
40.10% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats10
diversityRatio0.26732673267326734
totalSentences101
uniqueOpeners27
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences89
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount26
totalSentences89
matches
0"She rounded the corner of"
1"Her boots splashed, sending water"
2"He vaulted over the low"
3"She pushed forward, muscles coiled"
4"She slipped through the doorway,"
5"she whispered, voice hushed"
6"She nudged the hidden door,"
7"She followed the corridor until"
8"He held out a small,"
9"he said, voice resonant, a"
10"She glanced past him: stalls"
11"He tapped the bone, then"
12"She considered the bone."
13"Her wristwatch ticked, counting down"
14"He slid the bone token"
15"She moved past stalls where"
16"She paused at a stall"
17"She felt a sudden urge"
18"He tossed the ledger to"
19"He thrust a bundle of"
ratio0.292
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount86
totalSentences89
matches
0"Harlow Quinn pulled her coat"
1"The second hand ticked louder"
2"She rounded the corner of"
3"The suspect—tall, hooded, movements too"
4"Quinn hissed, voice edged with"
5"Her boots splashed, sending water"
6"The figure didn’t pause."
7"He vaulted over the low"
8"Quinn’s breath fogged in the"
9"She pushed forward, muscles coiled"
10"A narrow passageway led her"
11"The Raven’s Nest loomed ahead,"
12"She slipped through the doorway,"
13"The patrons glanced up, eyes"
14"Quinn moved like a predator,"
15"The suspect had vanished."
16"A barmaid brushed a rag"
17"she whispered, voice hushed"
18"Quinn’s jaw tightened."
19"The woman’s hand trembled."
ratio0.966
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences89
matches(empty)
ratio0
72.60% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences61
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"He vaulted over the low wall that separated the sidewalk from the alley, his boots barely making a sound on the wet stone."
1"She nudged the hidden door, feeling the cool air that sighed from the passage beyond."
2"She glanced past him: stalls lined up, each draped with black velvet, displaying jars of glowing fluid, talismans that pulsed with a faint light, and cracked mi…"
3"Quinn lunged, weaving between stalls, her coat flapping like a dying flag."
4"The suspect’s finger twitched, the pistol’s barrel flashing a brief arc of light, a spark that didn’t ignite the weapon but sent a shiver through the market’s a…"
5"The suspect slipped, his gun clattering across the floor, the barrel skidding into a pool of the luminous fluid."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags16
uselessAdditionCount9
matches
0"Quinn hissed, voice edged with rain and resolve"
1"she whispered, voice hushed"
2"he said, voice resonant, a low chuckle vibrating the air"
3"Quinn asked, voice flat, eyes never leaving the man's face"
4"Quinn asked, eyes narrowed"
5"the woman replied, voice thin"
6"Quinn barked, her voice echoing off the vaulted ceilings"
7"he sneered, voice dripping with contempt"
8"she replied, eyes flicking to the ledger hidden in the vendor’s crate"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags12
fancyCount7
fancyTags
0"Quinn hissed (hiss)"
1"she whispered (whisper)"
2"Quinn muttered (mutter)"
3"Quinn barked (bark)"
4"he sneered (sneer)"
5"Quinn shouted (shout)"
6"The metal sang (sing)"
dialogueSentences27
tagDensity0.444
leniency0.889
rawRatio0.583
effectiveRatio0.519
70.6551%