| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 16 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 27 | | tagDensity | 0.593 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1468 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 11.44% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1468 | | totalAiIsms | 26 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | | 20 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "pulse" | | 1 | "reminder" | | 2 | "resolve" | | 3 | "chill" | | 4 | "glint" | | 5 | "loomed" | | 6 | "predator" | | 7 | "scanning" | | 8 | "trembled" | | 9 | "echoed" | | 10 | "silence" | | 11 | "glinting" | | 12 | "etched" | | 13 | "velvet" | | 14 | "pulsed" | | 15 | "whisper" | | 16 | "mechanical" | | 17 | "echoing" | | 18 | "flickered" | | 19 | "weight" | | 20 | "shattered" |
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| 66.67% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 3 | | maxInWindow | 2 | | found | | 0 | | label | "eyes widened/narrowed" | | count | 2 |
| | 1 | | label | "sent a shiver through" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "eyes widened" | | 1 | "eyes narrowed" | | 2 | "sent a shiver through" |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 89 | | matches | | |
| 62.60% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 3 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 89 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 101 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 44 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1460 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 13 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 87.74% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 28 | | wordCount | 1285 | | uniqueNames | 7 | | maxNameDensity | 1.25 | | worstName | "Quinn" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Quinn" | | discoveredNames | | Soho | 1 | | Quinn | 16 | | Morris | 3 | | Dean | 1 | | Street | 1 | | Raven | 3 | | Nest | 3 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Quinn" | | 1 | "Morris" | | 2 | "Raven" | | 3 | "Nest" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.877 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 85.06% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 77 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "mirrors that seemed to reflect not just the present but something else" | | 1 | "whispers that seemed to chant names: The neon glow of The Raven’s Nest disappeared behind her, replaced by the amber light of lanterns dangling from the ceiling" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.685 | | wordCount | 1460 | | matches | | 0 | "not just the present but something else" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 101 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 42 | | mean | 34.76 | | std | 18.19 | | cv | 0.523 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 65 | | 1 | 44 | | 2 | 26 | | 3 | 60 | | 4 | 70 | | 5 | 49 | | 6 | 15 | | 7 | 7 | | 8 | 13 | | 9 | 10 | | 10 | 28 | | 11 | 52 | | 12 | 58 | | 13 | 38 | | 14 | 29 | | 15 | 19 | | 16 | 26 | | 17 | 17 | | 18 | 58 | | 19 | 15 | | 20 | 30 | | 21 | 65 | | 22 | 21 | | 23 | 40 | | 24 | 49 | | 25 | 56 | | 26 | 28 | | 27 | 6 | | 28 | 23 | | 29 | 41 | | 30 | 48 | | 31 | 46 | | 32 | 29 | | 33 | 46 | | 34 | 16 | | 35 | 59 | | 36 | 29 | | 37 | 21 | | 38 | 20 | | 39 | 21 | | 40 | 57 | | 41 | 10 |
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| 93.44% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 89 | | matches | | 0 | "were plastered" | | 1 | "was embossed" | | 2 | "was pulled" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 226 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 10 | | semicolonCount | 2 | | flaggedSentences | 10 | | totalSentences | 101 | | ratio | 0.099 | | matches | | 0 | "The suspect—tall, hooded, movements too fluid for a human—merged with the shadows, a flash of green neon from the sign above The Raven’s Nest flickering across his back." | | 1 | "Quinn’s breath fogged in the chill, her eyes catching the glint of something metallic at his throat—a pendant perhaps, or a talisman." | | 2 | "The patrons glanced up, eyes narrowing; a few muttered under their breath, aware that a police detective didn’t just stroll in unannounced." | | 3 | "The walls were plastered with faded graffiti—cryptic symbols, sigils, and a single phrase scrawled in crimson: “Pay the price or pay the price.” The smell of damp earth mixed with incense, a heady combination that hinted at something older than the city above." | | 4 | "A brass plate beside it read: VEIL MARKET – ENTRY BY BONE TOKEN ONLY." | | 5 | "She paused at a stall draped in deep violet, its proprietor—a woman with pale skin and eyes like cracked glass—holding a small metallic box." | | 6 | "Instinct spiked her heart; the suspect’s silhouette burst through a side hallway, clutching a small, leather‑bound ledger." | | 7 | "The ledger’s cover was embossed with a sigil—a skeletal hand holding a watch." | | 8 | "He held a pistol—old, brass, the kind that clicked when the trigger was pulled." | | 9 | "She flipped the watch open, revealing a thin, silver blade hidden within—an old trick from a retired operative." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1215 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 25 | | adverbRatio | 0.0205761316872428 | | lyAdverbCount | 6 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.0049382716049382715 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 101 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 101 | | mean | 14.46 | | std | 7.93 | | cv | 0.548 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 14 | | 1 | 17 | | 2 | 34 | | 3 | 16 | | 4 | 28 | | 5 | 9 | | 6 | 17 | | 7 | 4 | | 8 | 23 | | 9 | 22 | | 10 | 11 | | 11 | 11 | | 12 | 18 | | 13 | 24 | | 14 | 17 | | 15 | 12 | | 16 | 22 | | 17 | 11 | | 18 | 4 | | 19 | 15 | | 20 | 7 | | 21 | 3 | | 22 | 10 | | 23 | 4 | | 24 | 6 | | 25 | 11 | | 26 | 10 | | 27 | 7 | | 28 | 3 | | 29 | 15 | | 30 | 15 | | 31 | 19 | | 32 | 15 | | 33 | 43 | | 34 | 12 | | 35 | 14 | | 36 | 12 | | 37 | 15 | | 38 | 14 | | 39 | 14 | | 40 | 5 | | 41 | 14 | | 42 | 12 | | 43 | 7 | | 44 | 10 | | 45 | 38 | | 46 | 20 | | 47 | 15 | | 48 | 16 | | 49 | 14 |
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| 40.10% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 10 | | diversityRatio | 0.26732673267326734 | | totalSentences | 101 | | uniqueOpeners | 27 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 89 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 26 | | totalSentences | 89 | | matches | | 0 | "She rounded the corner of" | | 1 | "Her boots splashed, sending water" | | 2 | "He vaulted over the low" | | 3 | "She pushed forward, muscles coiled" | | 4 | "She slipped through the doorway," | | 5 | "she whispered, voice hushed" | | 6 | "She nudged the hidden door," | | 7 | "She followed the corridor until" | | 8 | "He held out a small," | | 9 | "he said, voice resonant, a" | | 10 | "She glanced past him: stalls" | | 11 | "He tapped the bone, then" | | 12 | "She considered the bone." | | 13 | "Her wristwatch ticked, counting down" | | 14 | "He slid the bone token" | | 15 | "She moved past stalls where" | | 16 | "She paused at a stall" | | 17 | "She felt a sudden urge" | | 18 | "He tossed the ledger to" | | 19 | "He thrust a bundle of" |
| | ratio | 0.292 | |
| 0.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 86 | | totalSentences | 89 | | matches | | 0 | "Harlow Quinn pulled her coat" | | 1 | "The second hand ticked louder" | | 2 | "She rounded the corner of" | | 3 | "The suspect—tall, hooded, movements too" | | 4 | "Quinn hissed, voice edged with" | | 5 | "Her boots splashed, sending water" | | 6 | "The figure didn’t pause." | | 7 | "He vaulted over the low" | | 8 | "Quinn’s breath fogged in the" | | 9 | "She pushed forward, muscles coiled" | | 10 | "A narrow passageway led her" | | 11 | "The Raven’s Nest loomed ahead," | | 12 | "She slipped through the doorway," | | 13 | "The patrons glanced up, eyes" | | 14 | "Quinn moved like a predator," | | 15 | "The suspect had vanished." | | 16 | "A barmaid brushed a rag" | | 17 | "she whispered, voice hushed" | | 18 | "Quinn’s jaw tightened." | | 19 | "The woman’s hand trembled." |
| | ratio | 0.966 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 89 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 72.60% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 61 | | technicalSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "He vaulted over the low wall that separated the sidewalk from the alley, his boots barely making a sound on the wet stone." | | 1 | "She nudged the hidden door, feeling the cool air that sighed from the passage beyond." | | 2 | "She glanced past him: stalls lined up, each draped with black velvet, displaying jars of glowing fluid, talismans that pulsed with a faint light, and cracked mi…" | | 3 | "Quinn lunged, weaving between stalls, her coat flapping like a dying flag." | | 4 | "The suspect’s finger twitched, the pistol’s barrel flashing a brief arc of light, a spark that didn’t ignite the weapon but sent a shiver through the market’s a…" | | 5 | "The suspect slipped, his gun clattering across the floor, the barrel skidding into a pool of the luminous fluid." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 16 | | uselessAdditionCount | 9 | | matches | | 0 | "Quinn hissed, voice edged with rain and resolve" | | 1 | "she whispered, voice hushed" | | 2 | "he said, voice resonant, a low chuckle vibrating the air" | | 3 | "Quinn asked, voice flat, eyes never leaving the man's face" | | 4 | "Quinn asked, eyes narrowed" | | 5 | "the woman replied, voice thin" | | 6 | "Quinn barked, her voice echoing off the vaulted ceilings" | | 7 | "he sneered, voice dripping with contempt" | | 8 | "she replied, eyes flicking to the ledger hidden in the vendor’s crate" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 12 | | fancyCount | 7 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Quinn hissed (hiss)" | | 1 | "she whispered (whisper)" | | 2 | "Quinn muttered (mutter)" | | 3 | "Quinn barked (bark)" | | 4 | "he sneered (sneer)" | | 5 | "Quinn shouted (shout)" | | 6 | "The metal sang (sing)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 27 | | tagDensity | 0.444 | | leniency | 0.889 | | rawRatio | 0.583 | | effectiveRatio | 0.519 | |