Run: 2026-04-24-01KQ06N4XP8CMKG63EX5460FGC

Run Details

Duration:
33.1s
Cost:
$0.005607
Provider:
Xiaomi

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The rain had let up by the time Rory pushed through the heavy oak door of The Raven's Nest, but the scent of it—wet asphalt and cold stone—still clung to her jacket. She hung it on the peg by the door, the damp fabric heavy against the wood. The bar was quiet, as it always was on a Tuesday evening before the late crowd drifted in. Silas was polishing glasses behind the counter, his movements economical, the silver signet on his right hand catching the low light from the green neon outside. The glow painted the edges of the old maps on the walls in a sickly emerald hue. “Quiet night,” Rory said, sliding onto her usual stool. Silas set a glass down. “The city’s holding its breath.” He poured her a measure of the cheap whiskey she favored, no ice. “Yu-Fei called. Said you almost got taken out by a taxi on Shaftesbury.” “It swerved to avoid a pigeon. The pigeon was unharmed.” She took the glass, the burn familiar. “I’m fine.” He gave her a look, one that said he’d be the judge of that, but let it go. The door opened again, letting in a gust of damp air and a figure in a well-cut charcoal coat. The man shook the rain from his shoulders, water droplets sparkling briefly in the neon before being swallowed by the dark wool. He moved with a confidence that was new, a kind of measured grace that hadn't been there before. Rory’s fingers tightened on her glass. The man turned, scanning the room, and his eyes—once a startled, guileless brown—found hers. They held a sharp, assessing intelligence now. The recognition hit him a half-second later. A flicker of something unguarded crossed his face, a ghost of the boy she’d known, before the composed mask settled back into place. “Rory?” The name felt strange on his tongue. He used to call her something else, a childhood nickname that had grown tired and thin years ago. “Oliver.” She didn’t move from the stool. “I thought you were in Edinburgh.” He crossed the room, his shoes silent on the worn floorboards. He didn’t sit. He stood there, looking down at her, and she saw the fine lines around his eyes, the way his hair was cut shorter, tidier. The easy smile was gone, replaced by something more deliberate. “Moved back six months ago. Work.” He gestured vaguely, as if the word explained everything. “I saw the sign. Didn’t know this was… your place.” “It’s not mine. It’s Silas’.” She nodded toward the bar. Silas had resumed his polishing, but his attention was elsewhere. Oliver pulled out the stool beside her. The wood scraped against the floor. “Is this a bad time?” “You tell me. You’re the one who sat down.” He flinched, a small tightening around his mouth. He ordered a single malt, neat. When Silas placed it before him, Oliver’s hand went to his pocket, but Silas just shook his head once and moved away. “You look good,” Oliver said, lifting his glass. The compliment was a reflex, an old habit. Rory turned her glass slowly on the bar top, watching the amber liquid cling to the sides. “You look different.” “Is that a polite way of saying old?” “Polished.” She met his gaze. “There’s a difference.” He drank. The silence between them stretched, filled by the low hum of the cooler and the distant sound of a siren wailing its way across the city. Rory remembered him at twenty, all nervous energy and loud opinions, sleeping on her sofa for a week while he decided whether to drop out of his sociology degree. He’d been a storm of feeling then. Now, he was still water, deep and unreadable. “Last I heard,” Rory said, “you were shacked up with Nadia. Working at that bookshop in Camden.” A muscle jumped in his jaw. “That ended. Four years ago. Nadia’s married now. Two kids, I think.” He said it flatly, like a report. “The bookshop went under. I got into consulting. Risk assessment for financial firms. It’s… stable.” “Stable.” She tested the word. It suited the suit, the haircut, the quiet confidence. Oliver had never valued stable. He’d called it a cage. “What about you?” he asked. “Still writing those angry poems? Still convinced the system was going to eat us all?” The question was a probe, searching for the girl he’d left behind. The girl who’d believed in things fiercely, violently. Rory thought of the stack of unpaid bills on her kitchen table, of the ache in her shoulders after ten hours of cycling through London’s streets. She thought of the flat above this bar, the single window that looked out onto a brick wall. “I work for Yu-Fei,” she said. “Delivery. And I live upstairs.” His eyebrows lifted. “Delivery? Like… bikes and bags?” “Exactly like that.” He studied her face, his eyes tracing the line of her jaw, the small crescent scar on her wrist she’d gotten when she was seven, falling off a wall. “Why?” The word was so full of genuine, baffled pity that it almost made her laugh. “Why not? It pays. It’s straightforward. I see the city.” “Rory, you were the smartest person I ever knew. You were top of the class in everything. You could have been… anything.” He leaned closer, his voice dropping. “What happened after London? After you and Evan?” The name landed in the quiet space between them like a stone. Rory didn’t react, but her fingers stilled on the glass. “Evan happened. Then London happened. Then time happened. You know how it is.” “I don’t, actually.” Oliver’s gaze was intense, unwavering. “I lost track. After I went to Edinburgh, the calls got less frequent. Then they stopped. I looked for you, a few years back. Couldn’t find anything. You vanished.” “You weren’t looking very hard.” She pushed her empty glass forward. Silas, without a word, refilled it. “People don’t vanish, Oliver. They just stop broadcasting their location.” “That’s a bitter way to put it.” “It’s an accurate way.” She took a slow sip. The whiskey warmed a path down to her stomach. “You changed the subject. You asked about Evan.” He looked away first, down into his own glass. “I heard… things. That he’d gotten rough. That you’d left in the middle of the night.” “I left. That’s the part that matters.” “I should have called. After.” His voice was low, thick with something heavy. “I should have done something.” “Done what?” Rory turned on her stool to face him fully. “What would you have done, Oliver? Come down from Edinburgh to lecture me? Tell me I should have seen it coming? That my judgment was flawed?” The questions hung in the air, each one a precise strike. He had no answer. His reflection stared back at him from the mirrored shelf behind the bar, distorted and dark. “Everyone has a plan for someone else’s disaster,” she said, her voice quiet but hard. “But they’re never there for the slow, ugly part. The part where you pick the pieces up and try to remember which way is forward. They’re only there for the dramatic exit.” “And you think I was like that?” “I think you were my friend. And then you weren’t. That’s all the information I have.” He ran a hand over his face. The gesture was new too. The old Oliver would have raked his fingers through his hair, messing it up. This Oliver smoothed it back. “I was scared, Rory. After everything with Evan, I didn’t know what to say. I felt… useless. So I did nothing. It was easier.” “There it is.” She nodded, a short, sharp movement. “The honest bit. It was easier. That’s the whole story, isn’t it? It was easier to forget than to remember. Easier to pretend the past is a different country.” “Is that what you do? Pretend?” Rory looked past him, at the dark maps on the wall. Spidery lines of old trade routes and forgotten empires. “I work. I pay rent. I don’t pretend. I just don’t have the energy to perform grief for things that died a long time ago.” He was silent for a long moment. The neon sign outside buzzed, a green pulse in the dim room. “I’m different now,” he said finally. “You’re right. I’m not that boy anymore. I have a pension plan. I worry about mortgage rates. I haven’t written a poem since I was twenty-three. I buried that part of me.” “Why are you telling me this?” “Because I’m sitting here with you, and you’re looking at me like I’m a stranger. And I realize I am.” He leaned in, his voice raw. “I miss being someone who knew you. I miss that version of myself, the one who got to be your friend. The one you trusted.” Rory held his gaze. She saw the regret there, clear and deep, but it was a polished stone now, something he’d carried and smoothed over with years. It wasn’t the jagged, fresh wound it had been. For him, the time for raw apology had passed. This was something else—an accounting, a neat closing of a ledger. “That person is gone, Oliver.” Her voice was gentle, and that was the cruelest part. “You buried him. I moved on. We’re just two people who used to know each other, sitting in a bar because it’s raining outside.” He looked as if she’d struck him. The composed mask cracked, and for a second, she saw the frightened boy beneath it. Then it was gone. He drained his glass, set it down with a definitive click. “Right,” he said, his voice flat. He pulled his wallet out, placed a twenty-pound note on the bar. Silas was already there, pushing it back toward him with a single finger. “The house,” Silas said, his voice a low rumble. It wasn’t an offer. It was a statement. Oliver nodded at him, then back at Rory. “I’m at the Marriott on Wardour Street. For another week. If you… if you wanted to talk more.” “We are talking,” Rory said. He understood. He stood up, buttoning his coat. The charcoal wool settled around him like armor. “Goodbye, Rory.” “Goodbye, Oliver.” He walked to the door without looking back. It closed behind him, leaving only the faint scent of expensive cologne and rain. Rory stared at the space where he’d stood. The stool was empty. The note lay forgotten on the bar. Silas collected the glasses. “Old friend?” “An old story,” Rory said. She pulled her own money from her pocket, a crumpled fiver, and placed it on the bar. He waved it away. “Your tab,” he said. “You look like you need it.” She nodded, her throat tight. She pulled on her damp jacket, the chill seeping back in. The green neon buzzed outside, a constant, low-frequency ache. She stepped out into the night, leaving the warmth of The Raven’s Nest behind her. The city was still holding its breath, but the rain had started again, a fine mist that beaded on her skin and blurred the edges of the world.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags26
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"He gestured vaguely [vaguely]"
1"he said finally [finally]"
dialogueSentences72
tagDensity0.361
leniency0.722
rawRatio0.077
effectiveRatio0.056
94.65% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1869
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
1
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
67.90% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1869
totalAiIsms12
found
0
word"familiar"
count1
1
word"measured"
count1
2
word"scanning"
count1
3
word"flicker"
count1
4
word"silence"
count1
5
word"unreadable"
count1
6
word"tracing"
count1
7
word"unwavering"
count1
8
word"stomach"
count1
9
word"pulse"
count1
10
word"chill"
count1
11
word"warmth"
count1
highlights
0"familiar"
1"measured"
2"scanning"
3"flicker"
4"silence"
5"unreadable"
6"tracing"
7"unwavering"
8"stomach"
9"pulse"
10"chill"
11"warmth"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences120
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences120
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences163
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen34
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1864
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions22
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
87.81% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions38
wordCount1206
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity1.24
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Rory15
Raven2
Nest2
Tuesday1
Silas9
Oliver8
London1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Raven"
2"Silas"
3"Oliver"
places
0"London"
globalScore0.878
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences88
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1864
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences163
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs65
mean28.68
std21.97
cv0.766
sampleLengths
0109
19
236
319
4104
530
61
725
813
948
1025
1120
1218
139
1436
1516
1620
178
188
1972
2017
2140
2224
2320
2464
2511
268
273
2830
2925
3036
3135
3237
3327
347
3526
3625
377
3818
3937
4031
4147
427
4316
4455
4538
466
4745
4857
496
96.49% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences120
matches
0"being swallowed"
1"was gone"
2"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs206
matches
0"was polishing"
1"was still holding"
90.27% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount5
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences163
ratio0.018
matches
0"The rain had let up by the time Rory pushed through the heavy oak door of The Raven's Nest, but the scent of it—wet asphalt and cold stone—still clung to her jacket."
1"The man turned, scanning the room, and his eyes—once a startled, guileless brown—found hers."
2"This was something else—an accounting, a neat closing of a ledger."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1215
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount35
adverbRatio0.02880658436213992
lyAdverbCount10
lyAdverbRatio0.00823045267489712
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences163
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences163
mean11.44
std7.57
cv0.662
sampleLengths
032
116
218
326
417
59
65
718
813
917
102
1118
1219
1322
1418
156
1614
177
187
1923
201
217
2218
237
246
2511
263
2724
2810
2915
3010
3110
3210
337
346
355
369
378
386
3922
408
418
4217
433
448
455
463
472
4826
4929
40.80% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats15
diversityRatio0.27607361963190186
totalSentences163
uniqueOpeners45
29.76% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences112
matches
0"Then it was gone."
ratio0.009
27.14% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount54
totalSentences112
matches
0"She hung it on the"
1"He poured her a measure"
2"She took the glass, the"
3"He gave her a look,"
4"He moved with a confidence"
5"They held a sharp, assessing"
6"He used to call her"
7"She didn’t move from the"
8"He crossed the room, his"
9"He didn’t sit."
10"He stood there, looking down"
11"He gestured vaguely, as if"
12"She nodded toward the bar"
13"He flinched, a small tightening"
14"He ordered a single malt,"
15"She met his gaze"
16"He’d been a storm of"
17"He said it flatly, like"
18"She tested the word"
19"It suited the suit, the"
ratio0.482
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount108
totalSentences112
matches
0"The rain had let up"
1"She hung it on the"
2"The bar was quiet, as"
3"Silas was polishing glasses behind"
4"The glow painted the edges"
5"Rory said, sliding onto her"
6"Silas set a glass down."
7"He poured her a measure"
8"She took the glass, the"
9"He gave her a look,"
10"The door opened again, letting"
11"The man shook the rain"
12"He moved with a confidence"
13"Rory’s fingers tightened on her"
14"The man turned, scanning the"
15"They held a sharp, assessing"
16"The recognition hit him a"
17"A flicker of something unguarded"
18"The name felt strange on"
19"He used to call her"
ratio0.964
44.64% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences112
matches
0"Now, he was still water,"
ratio0.009
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences44
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"He used to call her something else, a childhood nickname that had grown tired and thin years ago."
9.62% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags26
uselessAdditionCount6
matches
0"He gestured vaguely, as if the word explained everything"
1"He leaned, his voice dropping"
2"she said, her voice quiet but hard"
3"He leaned in, his voice raw"
4"he said, his voice flat"
5"Silas said, his voice a low rumble"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags13
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences72
tagDensity0.181
leniency0.361
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
82.9694%