Run: 2026-04-24-01KQ06P1PDJZV8MPXWQE1EJWTX

Run Details

Duration:
1m 1s
Cost:
$0.003027
Provider:
Z.AI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The green neon sign above The Raven's Nest cast a sickly glow across the wet pavement as Aurora pushed open the heavy oak door. The bell chimed softly, announcing her arrival to the handful of patrons scattered around the dimly lit space. She shrugged off her damp jacket, revealing the Golden Empress delivery uniform underneath, and hung it on the hook by the door. "Rough night?" Silas called from behind the bar, polishing a glass with a worn cloth. "Just the usual," Aurora replied, sliding onto a stool at the far end of the bar. "Traffic was brutal." He nodded, moving to pull her usual whiskey from the shelf. "You look tired." "I am tired," she admitted, rubbing her eyes. "Long week." Silas set the glass in front of her. "On the house. You earned it." Aurora offered a small smile. "Thanks, Silas." The bar was quiet tonight, just the low hum of conversation from a couple in the corner and the clink of glasses as Silas worked. Aurora traced the rim of her glass, watching the amber liquid swirl. She hadn't meant to stay out late, but the thought of returning to the empty flat above the bar felt suffocating. The bell above the door chimed again, and Aurora didn't look up, assuming it was another late-night patron seeking refuge from the rain. But then a familiar voice cut through the low murmur of the bar. "Aurora? Is that you?" Aurora froze, her fingers tightening around the glass. The voice belonged to Liam Davies, someone she hadn't seen in five years. She took a breath before turning, forcing a neutral expression onto her face. "Liam," she said, her voice even. "What are you doing here?" He stood there, looking older somehow, with streaks of grey in his dark hair that hadn't been there when she'd last seen him. His tailored suit looked expensive, a stark contrast to her delivery uniform. "Business meeting," he replied, sliding onto the stool beside her. "Couldn't believe it when I saw you. You look... different." "Different how?" Aurora asked, taking a sip of her whiskey. The burn helped center her. "Just... more settled, I think. Less like you were always waiting for the other shoe to drop." Aurora laughed, a short, sharp sound. "And you look exactly like I expected. Corporate lawyer written all over you." Liam grinned, the same easy smile that had charmed everyone in their university days. "Guilty as charged. Cardiff paid well, so I took the plunge." "Must be nice," Aurora said, swirling her drink again. "Stability." "You sound surprised." "I'm not," she said. "Just... envious." Silas approached, sensing the tension. "Another for your friend, Rory?" Aurora nodded. "Please. Whatever he's having." Liam ordered a gin and tonic, then turned back to Aurora. "How long have you been in London?" "Five years," she said. "Left right after graduation." "And you never came back?" "I couldn't," Aurora replied, her gaze fixed on her glass. "Too many ghosts." "Like Evan?" Liam asked, the name hanging in the air between them. Aurora's jaw tightened slightly. "We don't need to go there." "Right," Liam said, holding up his hands. "Sorry." "No," Aurora said, shaking her head. "It's fine. It's just... complicated." "I can imagine," Liam replied. "When I heard you'd left Cardiff without a word, I figured something bad happened." "Something did happen," Aurora said, her voice low. "I needed a clean break." Liam nodded slowly. "I always wondered why you disappeared." "I didn't want anyone to find me," Aurora admitted. "Not even you." "Why not me? We were friends, Rory. Best friends." "Were we really?" Aurora countered, finally meeting his eyes. "Or were you just Evan's friend who tolerated me?" The question hung between them, heavy with unspoken history. Liam looked away first, tracing the condensation on his glass. "That's not fair," he said quietly. "Isn't it?" Aurora stood up suddenly, her stool scraping against the floor. "I have to get up early." "Liam, wait," he said, reaching out to stop her. She pulled away, avoiding his touch. "I can't do this right now," she said, grabbing her jacket. "Maybe some other time." "Rory, please," he called after her, but she was already halfway to the door. "It's just... I've missed you." The words stopped her cold. She turned back, her expression unreadable in the dim light. "You have a strange way of showing it, Liam. Five years. Five years and you just waltz in here expecting everything to be the same?" "I didn't expect anything," Liam said, his voice earnest. "I just wanted to see you." "Well, you've seen me," Aurora said, her voice flat. "Now I'm going home." She pushed through the door, leaving Liam sitting alone at the bar, his untouched gin and tonic growing warmer by the second. Silas approached, wiping down the bar in front of where Liam sat. "Want that in a to-go cup?" Silas asked, his voice gentle. Liam shook his head, staring at the door where Aurora had disappeared. "No. I think I've had enough for one night." Silas nodded, understanding in his eyes. "She's been through a lot since she left Cardiff." "I know," Liam said, running a hand through his hair. "I should have known." "Most people don't understand what she went through," Silas said, polishing a glass with unnecessary force. "Not really." "Did she ever talk about it?" Liam asked, his voice hopeful. "Some," Silas admitted. "Enough to know she's stronger than she looks." Liam sighed, draining his glass in one go. "I should go." "Probably wise," Silas said quietly. "Give her some space." Liam nodded, pulling out his wallet to pay for his drink. "Thanks." "Of course," Silas replied. "Come back anytime. Rory does too." As Liam left the bar, Silas watched him go, then turned to clean up the stool Aurora had vacated. He remembered her first day working at the bar, how skittish she'd been, how she jumped at sudden movements. Five years later, she carried herself differently, but the shadows remained, just beneath the surface. Upstairs in her flat, Aurora leaned against the door, her heart pounding against her ribs. Seeing Liam after all these years had opened wounds she thought had healed. She traced the crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist, a reminder of the night she'd finally decided to leave Evan, to leave everything behind. The phone rang, breaking her concentration. She considered ignoring it, but knew it was probably Silas checking on her. With a sigh, she answered. "You okay?" Silas asked, his voice gentle. "I'm fine," Aurora replied, though she knew he could hear the tremor in her voice. "He caught you off guard." "Something like that," Aurora said, sinking onto the sofa. "It's been years, Silas. Why now?" "People have a way of turning up when you least expect them," Silas said. "Especially when they're carrying their own regrets." Aurora was quiet for a moment. "Do you think he actually missed me?" "That's not for me to say," Silas replied. "But I do know he came looking for you before. A few times, actually." Aurora sat up straighter. "He did?" "After you left Cardiff," Silas explained. "He showed up at the bar asking about you. Told me you were his best friend." Aurora closed her eyes. "I never knew." "People don't always share everything," Silas said. "Not even with those closest to them." The line was silent for a long moment. "I should go to bed," Aurora said finally. "Early shift tomorrow." "Get some rest, Rory," Silas said. "And maybe consider giving him a chance. Five years is a long time to hold onto anger." "I'll think about it," Aurora said, though she wasn't sure if she meant it. As she ended the call, Aurora stared out the window at the rain-slicked streets below. The city lights blurred together, just like her thoughts. Part of her wanted to reach out to Liam, to understand why he'd never tried to contact her before now. Another part wanted to slam that door shut forever, to keep her past buried where it belonged. She ran a hand through her black hair, the familiar weight of it a small comfort. Five years in London, five years of building a new life, and one chance encounter threatened to unravel it all. With a sigh, Aurora turned away from the window and headed to her bedroom, the ghost of Liam's voice echoing in her mind.
created_at"2026-04-24T16:55:32.823Z" 4/24/2026, 4:55:32 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags41
adverbTagCount4
adverbTags
0"Aurora countered finally [finally]"
1"he said quietly [quietly]"
2"Silas said quietly [quietly]"
3"Aurora said finally [finally]"
dialogueSentences96
tagDensity0.427
leniency0.854
rawRatio0.098
effectiveRatio0.083
78.66% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1406
totalAiIsmAdverbs6
found
0
adverb"softly"
count1
1
adverb"slightly"
count1
2
adverb"slowly"
count1
3
adverb"really"
count2
4
adverb"suddenly"
count1
highlights
0"softly"
1"slightly"
2"slowly"
3"really"
4"suddenly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
43.10% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1406
totalAiIsms16
found
0
word"traced"
count2
1
word"familiar"
count2
2
word"stark"
count1
3
word"charged"
count1
4
word"tension"
count1
5
word"unspoken"
count1
6
word"tracing"
count1
7
word"unreadable"
count1
8
word"pounding"
count1
9
word"reminder"
count1
10
word"weight"
count1
11
word"encounter"
count1
12
word"unravel"
count1
13
word"echoing"
count1
highlights
0"traced"
1"familiar"
2"stark"
3"charged"
4"tension"
5"unspoken"
6"tracing"
7"unreadable"
8"pounding"
9"reminder"
10"weight"
11"encounter"
12"unravel"
13"echoing"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences96
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences96
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences151
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen25
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1406
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions32
unquotedAttributions1
matches
0"With a sigh, she answered."
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions77
wordCount916
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity3.38
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity6.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Aurora31
Golden1
Empress1
Silas19
Liam20
Davies1
Evan1
London1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Aurora"
3"Silas"
4"Liam"
5"Davies"
6"Evan"
places
0"London"
globalScore0
windowScore0
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences62
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1406
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences151
matches
0"slam that door"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs77
mean18.26
std13.73
cv0.752
sampleLengths
064
115
219
314
410
514
67
758
836
94
1034
1111
1235
1320
1415
1517
1619
1725
1810
193
206
2110
226
2318
248
255
2613
2712
2810
298
3011
3119
3213
339
3412
359
3618
3719
386
3918
4015
4115
4219
4340
4415
4513
4634
4711
4821
4915
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences96
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs191
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences151
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount919
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount31
adverbRatio0.03373231773667029
lyAdverbCount13
lyAdverbRatio0.014145810663764961
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences151
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences151
mean9.31
std5.77
cv0.62
sampleLengths
024
118
222
315
416
53
611
73
88
92
108
116
125
132
1425
1512
1621
1723
1813
194
208
2113
2213
236
245
2523
2612
2710
2810
2910
305
3117
326
3313
3414
3511
369
371
383
394
402
415
425
432
444
4511
467
474
484
495
71.74% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.4503311258278146
totalSentences151
uniqueOpeners68
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences84
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount20
totalSentences84
matches
0"She shrugged off her damp"
1"He nodded, moving to pull"
2"she admitted, rubbing her eyes"
3"She hadn't meant to stay"
4"She took a breath before"
5"she said, her voice even"
6"He stood there, looking older"
7"His tailored suit looked expensive,"
8"he replied, sliding onto the"
9"he said quietly"
10"he said, reaching out to"
11"She pulled away, avoiding his"
12"she said, grabbing her jacket"
13"he called after her, but"
14"She turned back, her expression"
15"She pushed through the door,"
16"He remembered her first day"
17"She traced the crescent-shaped scar"
18"She considered ignoring it, but"
19"She ran a hand through"
ratio0.238
13.57% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount75
totalSentences84
matches
0"The green neon sign above"
1"The bell chimed softly, announcing"
2"She shrugged off her damp"
3"Silas called from behind the"
4"Aurora replied, sliding onto a"
5"He nodded, moving to pull"
6"she admitted, rubbing her eyes"
7"Silas set the glass in"
8"Aurora offered a small smile."
9"The bar was quiet tonight,"
10"Aurora traced the rim of"
11"She hadn't meant to stay"
12"The bell above the door"
13"Aurora froze, her fingers tightening"
14"The voice belonged to Liam"
15"She took a breath before"
16"she said, her voice even"
17"He stood there, looking older"
18"His tailored suit looked expensive,"
19"he replied, sliding onto the"
ratio0.893
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences84
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences34
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"Liam grinned, the same easy smile that had charmed everyone in their university days."
27.44% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags41
uselessAdditionCount8
matches
0"Liam asked, the name hanging in the air between them"
1"Aurora said, her voice low"
2"Aurora stood up, her stool scraping against the floor"
3"Liam said, his voice earnest"
4"Aurora said, her voice flat"
5"Silas asked, his voice gentle"
6"Liam asked, his voice hopeful"
7"Silas asked, his voice gentle"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags39
fancyCount4
fancyTags
0"she admitted (admit)"
1"Aurora admitted (admit)"
2"Silas admitted (admit)"
3"Silas explained (explain)"
dialogueSentences96
tagDensity0.406
leniency0.813
rawRatio0.103
effectiveRatio0.083
81.1506%