Run: 2026-04-24-01KQ06PM97ZFNBQY86YEM80G66

Run Details

Duration:
50.2s
Cost:
$0.007352
Provider:
Xiaomi

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The green neon of the Raven’s Nest sign bled into the damp London night, painting the wet pavement with a sickly hue. Aurora Carter pushed through the heavy oak door, the familiar scent of old wood, whiskey, and something faintly metallic hitting her. The bar was quieter than she remembered, a low murmur of conversation under the dim lights. Her delivery bag hung heavy on her shoulder, two containers of Yu-Fei’s best Szechuan chicken cooling against her back. She was scanning the room for the usual Tuesday drop, a gruff accountant named Greg who always tipped in coin, when her gaze snagged on a figure at the far end of the bar. Not Greg. A man with his back half-turned, nursing a glass of something amber. The line of his shoulders, the way he held the glass—deliberate, contained, like it was a tactical object—triggered a deep, dormant circuit in her memory. He turned slightly, the light catching the silver of a signet ring on his right hand, a neatly trimmed beard streaked with grey against auburn hair. Rory’s breath hitched. Silas Blackwood. Here. Not just *here*, as the owner she occasionally saw flitting through the back, but present, drinking at his own bar like a common punter. He hadn’t seen her. She could bolt. Just drop Greg’s order with the bartender and disappear. That was the smart play. The old Rory, the one who ran from Cardiff, would have already been back on her bike. She took a step forward instead. He sensed the approach, a slight stiffening of his frame before he turned fully. His hazel eyes, which she remembered as sharp and assessing, were now tired at the edges. Recognition flickered, then settled into something cautious. “Rory Carter,” he said. Not a question. His voice was rougher than she remembered, a gravelly texture she’d only heard once before, when he’d pulled her out of a rain-soaked alley after her first disastrous attempt at free-running years ago. “Silas.” She let the delivery bag slide to the floor between her feet. “I didn’t know you held court out here.” He gave a half-shrug, a ghost of a smile not reaching his eyes. “The back room gets stuffy.” He gestured to the stool beside him. “Yu-Fei’s finest?” “Greg’s Tuesday special.” She sat, the stool creaking. The silence between them stretched, thick with the things they weren’t saying. She watched his hands. The right one, bearing the ring, rested on the bar. The left was hidden below it. She’d heard rumors after Prague. A limp. A retirement. “You’ve filled out,” he said, his gaze clinical but not unkind. “The shoulders. Less like a frightened bird.” “I deliver fifty pounds of noodles and soy sauce a day. Builds character.” She flagged down the bartender, pointed at Silas’s glass. “Whatever he’s having. And put this on Greg’s tab.” She slid a slip of paper across the oak. Silas watched the exchange. “You’re still running deliveries. Eva said you were looking at internships.” “Eva worries too much.” The bartender placed a glass before her. The whiskey smelled of peat and smoke. “Plans change.” “Indeed they do.” He lifted his glass in a faint, ironic toast before drinking. She took a sip. The whiskey burned a clean, hot line down her throat. “You look tired, Si.” “The bar keeps hours.” He turned on the stool, facing her more directly. A slight movement, but it put his left leg in the light. He was favoring it, even seated. The knee. “You look… less haunted.” The observation landed like a stone in still water. She thought of Evan’s voice, the careful way she’d learned to navigate a room. She thought of the flat above this very bar, the three sturdy locks on the door. “I’m not in Cardiff anymore,” she said. “No.” His eyes held hers. “You’re not.” The air thickened again. She could feel the unspoken *why* hanging between them. Why she’d really left. Why he’d been the one to give Eva the nod to get her out. Why she’d never once come down to this bar to thank him. “I read about it,” she said, her voice low. “The inquest. ‘Operational failure in an unspecified Eastern European location.’ Very tidy.” Silas’s knuckles whitened around his glass. He looked past her, at the old map of 1940s Berlin pinned to the wall. “It was messy. Most things that matter are.” He turned back, the mask of the genial bar owner slipping. “What’s not tidy is you still working for Yu-Fei when you should be in a courtroom.” “Maybe I don’t want a courtroom.” The words came out sharper than she intended. “Maybe I’m done with things that are ‘operational failures’.” He let that hang. He knew what she meant. The failed operation that was her relationship with Evan. The failed operation that was her pre-law degree, abandoned in a flurry of packing boxes. “People change, Rory. Circumstances force it.” He tapped his ring on the bar. “I was a man who jumped off buildings in Berlin for a living. Now I track inventory and argue with suppliers about gin prices.” “And that’s enough?” “It’s what there is.” He finished his drink. “Sometimes, the quiet aftermath is the mission. The part where you just… exist. Without a target.” She thought of her daily route: the Golden Empress, the sterile office buildings in Canary Wharf, the cycle back to the Nest. The safe, unvarying loop. “Existing feels a lot like hiding.” A flicker of something—respect, maybe—crossed his face. “Is that what you’re doing here? Hiding?” “I live here, Silas. Upstairs. Have for two years.” She watched the information process. He knew, she realized. Of course he knew. The Spymaster. He’d probably vetted her tenancy. “You never said anything.” “You never came down.” The simplicity of it was brutal. The weight of unmade steps, unasked questions. He’d given her a sanctuary and then left her to it. Perhaps that was the final gift of a retired spy: the gift of not being observed. “I was scared,” she admitted, the words tasting like rust. “Of seeing you. Of having to… acknowledge this. All of it.” “The running? The hiding?” “*You*.” She met his gaze. “You saw what he did. You saw me when I was… less filled out. When I was just a scared bird. I didn’t want to be that person in front of you again.” Silas was quiet for a long moment. He signaled for another drink. The bartender brought it, refilled Rory’s. “Prague,” he said finally, his voice barely above a whisper. “I failed a team. Good people. Because I overthought. Because I hesitated.” He took a slow drink. “Afterwards, I didn’t want to be looked at either. I didn’t want to see the pity, or the blame. So I came here, and I built this.” He gestured vaguely at the dim room. “A place where people come and go, and their eyes slide off you. You become part of the furniture. Part of the dim light.” She understood. The maps on the walls weren’t just decor. They were history. Over. Done. His own history was pinned up here, under glass. “I don’t see a failure,” she said. “I’m sitting in a bar I own, talking to a delivery driver I rescued from a metaphorical rain, and my knee is a weather vane for damp.” He gave a dry, humorless chuckle. “What do you see?” “I see someone who gave me a place to land when I had nowhere. I see someone who’s still watching. Still assessing.” She pointed at his hand on the bar. “You’ve been tracking my shifts. You know when I come and go. You just let me come and go.” He didn’t deny it. “Protection is a habit. It’s also a cage, for both parties.” He looked at her, and for a second, the hazel eyes held a flicker of the old, sharp intelligence. “So, are you still running, Rory Carter?” The question hung in the smoky air. She thought of her bike outside, of the lock on her flat door, of the life she’d built in a careful orbit around this very spot. She looked at the green neon sign outside, its reflection swimming in a puddle on the floor. She looked at the old, tired spymaster who still watched from the shadows of his own retirement. She finished her whiskey. “I’m starting to think,” she said, her voice steady, “that I might be stopping.”
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags27
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"he said finally [finally]"
1"He gestured vaguely [vaguely]"
dialogueSentences53
tagDensity0.509
leniency1
rawRatio0.074
effectiveRatio0.074
78.81% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1416
totalAiIsmAdverbs6
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"very"
count3
2
adverb"really"
count1
3
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"very"
2"really"
3"barely above a whisper"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
50.56% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1416
totalAiIsms14
found
0
word"familiar"
count1
1
word"scanning"
count1
2
word"flickered"
count1
3
word"silence"
count1
4
word"navigate"
count1
5
word"sturdy"
count1
6
word"could feel"
count1
7
word"unspoken"
count1
8
word"aftermath"
count1
9
word"flicker"
count2
10
word"weight"
count1
11
word"sanctuary"
count1
12
word"whisper"
count1
highlights
0"familiar"
1"scanning"
2"flickered"
3"silence"
4"navigate"
5"sturdy"
6"could feel"
7"unspoken"
8"aftermath"
9"flicker"
10"weight"
11"sanctuary"
12"whisper"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences107
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences107
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences131
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen35
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans3
markdownWords3
totalWords1412
ratio0.002
matches
0"here"
1"why"
2"You"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions14
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions31
wordCount961
uniqueNames21
maxNameDensity0.52
worstName"Silas"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Greg"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest2
London1
Carter1
Yu-Fei1
Szechuan1
Tuesday1
Greg3
Blackwood1
Rory3
Cardiff1
Prague1
Silas5
Evan2
Eva1
Berlin1
Golden1
Empress1
Canary1
Wharf1
Spymaster1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Carter"
2"Yu-Fei"
3"Greg"
4"Blackwood"
5"Rory"
6"Silas"
7"Evan"
8"Eva"
places
0"Nest"
1"London"
2"Cardiff"
3"Prague"
4"Berlin"
5"Canary"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences65
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.708
wordCount1412
matches
0"Not just *here*, as the owner she occasionally saw flitting through the back, but present, drinking at his own bar like a common punter"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences131
matches
0"let that hang"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs45
mean31.38
std22.07
cv0.703
sampleLengths
078
199
23
365
46
537
640
721
827
949
1018
1140
1215
1320
1414
1518
1637
1739
187
197
2043
2121
2256
2323
2433
2537
263
2724
2832
2914
3033
3144
3221
334
3438
3518
3685
3724
387
3937
4049
4141
4267
434
4414
98.70% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences107
matches
0"was hidden"
1"was pinned"
66.67% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs150
matches
0"was scanning"
1"weren’t saying"
2"was favoring"
99.24% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences131
ratio0.015
matches
0"The line of his shoulders, the way he held the glass—deliberate, contained, like it was a tactical object—triggered a deep, dormant circuit in her memory."
1"A flicker of something—respect, maybe—crossed his face."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount970
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount38
adverbRatio0.03917525773195876
lyAdverbCount15
lyAdverbRatio0.015463917525773196
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences131
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences131
mean10.78
std8.03
cv0.745
sampleLengths
022
121
216
319
434
52
612
725
826
93
102
111
1224
134
143
159
165
1717
186
1914
2016
217
224
233
2433
2513
268
2713
2812
292
308
3112
324
3310
346
355
362
372
3811
397
4022
4118
424
4311
4411
457
462
4714
484
4910
41.48% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats14
diversityRatio0.31297709923664124
totalSentences131
uniqueOpeners41
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences94
matches
0"Just drop Greg’s order with"
1"Of course he knew."
2"Perhaps that was the final"
ratio0.032
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount55
totalSentences94
matches
0"Her delivery bag hung heavy"
1"She was scanning the room"
2"He turned slightly, the light"
3"He hadn’t seen her."
4"She could bolt."
5"She took a step forward"
6"He sensed the approach, a"
7"His hazel eyes, which she"
8"His voice was rougher than"
9"She let the delivery bag"
10"He gave a half-shrug, a"
11"He gestured to the stool"
12"She sat, the stool creaking"
13"She watched his hands."
14"She’d heard rumors after Prague."
15"he said, his gaze clinical"
16"She flagged down the bartender,"
17"She slid a slip of"
18"He lifted his glass in"
19"She took a sip."
ratio0.585
2.55% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount86
totalSentences94
matches
0"The green neon of the"
1"Aurora Carter pushed through the"
2"The bar was quieter than"
3"Her delivery bag hung heavy"
4"She was scanning the room"
5"A man with his back"
6"The line of his shoulders,"
7"He turned slightly, the light"
8"Rory’s breath hitched."
9"He hadn’t seen her."
10"She could bolt."
11"That was the smart play."
12"The old Rory, the one"
13"She took a step forward"
14"He sensed the approach, a"
15"His hazel eyes, which she"
16"Recognition flickered, then settled into"
17"His voice was rougher than"
18"She let the delivery bag"
19"He gave a half-shrug, a"
ratio0.915
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences94
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences30
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"The failed operation that was her pre-law degree, abandoned in a flurry of packing boxes."
32.41% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags27
uselessAdditionCount5
matches
0"She sat, the stool creaking"
1"he said, his gaze clinical but not unkind"
2"she said, her voice low"
3"he said finally, his voice barely above a whisper"
4"she said, her voice steady,"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags8
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she admitted (admit)"
dialogueSentences53
tagDensity0.151
leniency0.302
rawRatio0.125
effectiveRatio0.038
82.3474%