Run: 2026-04-24-01KQ06VES9QGH7EFHXH1G806BK

Run Details

Duration:
2m 57s
Cost:
$0.010587
Provider:
Z.AI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The green neon sign cast its glow across The Raven's Nest, illuminating walls covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs. Aurora Carter sipped her gin and tonic, the ice cubes clinking against the glass. She'd finished her delivery shift an hour ago but had stayed, enjoying the quiet atmosphere. The bar was nearly empty except for a few scattered patrons nursing their drinks. Aurora traced the crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist with her thumb, a familiar gesture when she was lost in thought. Her straight black hair fell across her shoulders as she leaned forward, resting her elbows on the polished wooden bar. The scent of aging wood and faint traces of cigar smoke hung in the air. The bar door opened, letting in a gust of cold London air that made Aurora shiver slightly. She glanced up as a figure entered, scanning the room before their eyes locked on hers. "Aurora?" The voice came out as a question, disbelieving. Aurora turned, her bright blue eyes widening in recognition. "Liam? Liam Davies?" Liam approached, a mixture of emotions playing across his face. He looked older, the carefree university student replaced by someone bearing the weight of years. His hair was now peppered with grey at the temples, and lines fanned out from the corners of his eyes. His shoulders seemed broader, the frame of a man who had endured physical labor rather than intellectual pursuits. "It's been what, seven years?" Liam asked, sliding onto the stool beside her. "Eight," Aurora corrected, her voice quiet. "Since graduation." Liam ordered a whiskey from Silas, who nodded without speaking before moving down the bar to polish glasses. The silence between them stretched, filled only by the soft jazz music playing in the background. A couple in the corner laughed loudly, their voices echoing slightly in the small space. "You look different," Liam said finally, his gaze appraising her. "More... settled." Aurora laughed without humor. "Settled is one word for it. I work delivery now, for Yu-Fei Cheung's restaurant." She gestured vaguely with her glass. "The hours are flexible, which is good for when I'm studying." Liam frowned. "Studying what? I thought you were going to law school. Your dad was so proud when you got into Cardiff." "I left," Aurora said, taking a sip of her drink. "Couldn't handle the pressure." The conversation fell silent. They stared into their glasses, the memories of their shared past hanging unspoken between them. The jazz music seemed to grow louder, filling the space where words should have been. "What about you?" Aurora asked, breaking the silence. "Last I heard, you were traveling the world. The great adventure, you called it." Liam smiled, his eyes crinkling at the corners. "I did. For a few years. Backpacking through Southeast Asia, volunteering in South America. Saw some incredible things. Temples in Cambodia, beaches in Thailand, the Amazon rainforest." He leaned closer, his eyes gleaming with remembered excitement. "There was this one time in Vietnam, I was trekking through these remote villages and got caught in a monsoon. Thought I was going to die, but the locals took me in, fed me, dried my clothes. Best experience of my life." "And now?" Aurora prompted when he fell silent. "Now I'm back. Taking over the family business." He gestured vaguely toward the door. "Davies Engineering. My father retired last year. It's not as glamorous as backpacking through jungles, but it pays the bills." Aurora nodded. "That's... good. Congratulations." They fell silent again, the years pressing down on them. The bar had filled slightly more, the low murmur of conversation providing a backdrop to their discomfort. Silas moved between patrons, refilling glasses with practiced efficiency. "You know," Liam began, "I thought about you often after you left Cardiff. Tried calling a few times, but your number was disconnected. Then I heard through mutual friends that you'd moved to London. Every time I came up here for business, I half-expected to run into you." "I moved around a lot," Aurora said, her gaze fixed on her glass. "Needed a clean break from everything. From Cardiff, from my family, from... him." Liam's expression darkened slightly. "Evan. I never liked him. Even when you two were together, there was something about him that rubbed me the wrong way." Aurora's fingers tightened around her glass. "Don't." "I'm sorry, Aurora. I should have known. Should have seen it." He leaned in closer, lowering his voice. "When I heard what happened... what he did to you... I wanted to track him down." Aurora shook her head. "It's in the past now. I'm here. I'm safe." Silas approached, placing fresh drinks in front of them. "Another round?" he asked, his eyes flicking between them. "Just another gin and tonic, please," Aurora said. Liam nodded. "Make it two." Silas moved away, leaving them alone once more. "I made some mistakes too, after you left," Liam said quietly, swirling the ice in his glass. "Lost some friends. Nearly lost myself. There was this period... maybe a year after you left... I drank too much. Partied too hard. Woke up more than once with no memory of the night before." Aurora studied his face, seeing the lines that hadn't been there before, the weariness in his eyes. "We all do," she said softly. "The important thing is what we do after." Liam met her gaze, his expression earnest. "It took me a while to figure that out. To grow up. To realize that life's too short for regrets and too precious for wasted time." The tension between them crackled, the years of separation and change collapsing into this single moment. The jazz music swelled slightly, then faded again. "You know what I regret most?" Liam asked, breaking the silence. "Not telling you how I felt before you left." Aurora blinked, taken aback. "What are you talking about?" "I was in love with you, Aurora. For years. But I was too afraid to say anything. Then you left, and it was too late. I never even got to say goodbye properly." The admission hung in the air between them, unexpected and raw. Aurora didn't know how to respond, the years of separation and change suddenly collapsing into this single moment. She stared at Liam, the boy she had known so well now a man she barely recognized. "I'm sorry," Liam whispered. "I shouldn't have said that." "No," Aurora said, finding her voice. "It's... okay. We've both changed." Liam nodded, a sad smile playing on his lips. "Time changes everything, doesn't it? People, places, dreams. The only thing that stays the same is the regret." The door to the bar opened again, letting in another gust of cold air. Aurora glanced up as a group of people entered, their laughter filling the space. "I should probably go," Liam said, finishing his whiskey. "It was good to see you, Aurora." "You too, Liam," she replied, watching as he stood up. He reached into his wallet and pulled out a card, placing it on the bar. "My number. In case you ever want to... catch up properly." Aurora nodded, pocketing the card when she thought he wasn't looking. Liam paused at the edge of the bar, his hand resting on the polished wood. "Good to see you're okay, Rory." The use of her nickname caught her off guard. It had been years since anyone had called her that. The name carried so many memories—late nights studying, shared lunches in the quad, whispered secrets in the university library. "You too," she said, her voice barely above a whisper. With one last look, Liam turned and walked out of the bar, leaving Aurora alone with her thoughts and the growing noise of the evening crowd. The neon sign cast its green glow across the room, illuminating the walls covered with old maps and photographs that seemed to watch her from their frames. Aurora picked up her glass, the ice cubes clinking softly as she took a sip. The taste of gin and tonic filled her mouth, bitter yet familiar. Outside, the London lights blurred into streaks of gold and red as she stared through the bar window, seeing reflections of herself and the ghost of a friendship that had once been everything. She ran her fingers over the crescent-shaped scar on her wrist, the familiar a comfort in the overwhelming flood of memories. Eight years. Eight years since she had last seen Liam, since her life had taken such a different turn than anyone had expected. The bar door opened again, and Silas approached, wiping down the bar in front of her. "Another one?" he asked, his eyes sympathetic. Aurora shook her head. "I should probably get back. Early delivery tomorrow." "Need a lift?" Silas offered. "It's starting to rain." Aurora smiled faintly. "Thanks, but I'll walk. Clears the head." She left a few notes on the bar and stepped out into the London night, the cold air hitting her like a physical blow. The city lights blurred as she walked, her thoughts consumed by the unexpected encounter with Liam and the passage of time that had passed between them.
created_at"2026-04-24T16:58:30.092Z" 4/24/2026, 4:58:30 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
21.43% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags25
adverbTagCount5
adverbTags
0"Liam said finally [finally]"
1"She gestured vaguely [vaguely]"
2"He gestured vaguely [vaguely]"
3"Liam said quietly [quietly]"
4"she said softly [softly]"
dialogueSentences56
tagDensity0.446
leniency0.893
rawRatio0.2
effectiveRatio0.179
70.47% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1524
totalAiIsmAdverbs9
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count5
1
adverb"softly"
count2
2
adverb"suddenly"
count1
3
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"softly"
2"suddenly"
3"barely above a whisper"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
50.79% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1524
totalAiIsms15
found
0
word"traced"
count1
1
word"familiar"
count3
2
word"scanning"
count1
3
word"weight"
count1
4
word"silence"
count3
5
word"echoing"
count1
6
word"unspoken"
count1
7
word"gleaming"
count1
8
word"tension"
count1
9
word"whisper"
count1
10
word"encounter"
count1
highlights
0"traced"
1"familiar"
2"scanning"
3"weight"
4"silence"
5"echoing"
6"unspoken"
7"gleaming"
8"tension"
9"whisper"
10"encounter"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count2
highlights
0"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences88
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences88
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences119
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen49
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1523
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions18
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions56
wordCount981
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity2.45
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Carter1
London3
Aurora24
Liam20
Silas6
persons
0"Carter"
1"Aurora"
2"Liam"
3"Silas"
places
0"Raven"
1"London"
globalScore0.277
windowScore0
74.24% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences66
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"seemed broader the frame of a man who had endured physical labor rather than intellectual pursuits"
1"photographs that seemed to watch her from their frames"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.657
wordCount1523
matches
0"not as glamorous as backpacking through jungles, but it pays the bills"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences119
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs57
mean26.72
std18.27
cv0.684
sampleLengths
063
156
233
39
412
563
613
78
849
912
1035
1122
1214
1334
1422
1586
168
1734
185
1936
2048
2126
2226
237
2434
2513
2618
278
285
298
3052
3131
3233
3324
3420
359
3633
3746
389
3911
4027
4128
4216
4310
4426
4511
4621
4738
4810
4953
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences88
matches
0"was lost"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs184
matches
0"wasn't looking"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences119
ratio0.008
matches
0"The name carried so many memories—late nights studying, shared lunches in the quad, whispered secrets in the university library."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount986
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount35
adverbRatio0.035496957403651115
lyAdverbCount18
lyAdverbRatio0.018255578093306288
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences119
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences119
mean12.8
std8.54
cv0.667
sampleLengths
020
114
215
314
421
520
615
717
816
99
109
113
1210
1315
1420
1518
1613
176
182
1918
2016
2115
2210
232
244
2520
2611
272
2820
2910
304
314
3215
3315
348
3514
368
3736
3842
398
4014
4120
422
433
4410
4517
469
4748
4813
4913
55.74% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.3697478991596639
totalSentences119
uniqueOpeners44
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences80
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount22
totalSentences80
matches
0"She'd finished her delivery shift"
1"Her straight black hair fell"
2"She glanced up as a"
3"He looked older, the carefree"
4"His hair was now peppered"
5"His shoulders seemed broader, the"
6"She gestured vaguely with her"
7"They stared into their glasses,"
8"He leaned closer, his eyes"
9"He gestured vaguely toward the"
10"They fell silent again, the"
11"He leaned in closer, lowering"
12"he asked, his eyes flicking"
13"she said softly"
14"She stared at Liam, the"
15"she replied, watching as he"
16"He reached into his wallet"
17"It had been years since"
18"she said, her voice barely"
19"She ran her fingers over"
ratio0.275
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount77
totalSentences80
matches
0"The green neon sign cast"
1"Aurora Carter sipped her gin"
2"She'd finished her delivery shift"
3"The bar was nearly empty"
4"Aurora traced the crescent-shaped scar"
5"Her straight black hair fell"
6"The scent of aging wood"
7"The bar door opened, letting"
8"She glanced up as a"
9"The voice came out as"
10"Aurora turned, her bright blue"
11"Liam approached, a mixture of"
12"He looked older, the carefree"
13"His hair was now peppered"
14"His shoulders seemed broader, the"
15"Liam asked, sliding onto the"
16"Aurora corrected, her voice quiet"
17"Liam ordered a whiskey from"
18"The silence between them stretched,"
19"A couple in the corner"
ratio0.963
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences80
matches(empty)
ratio0
74.83% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences42
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"His shoulders seemed broader, the frame of a man who had endured physical labor rather than intellectual pursuits."
1"Aurora studied his face, seeing the lines that hadn't been there before, the weariness in his eyes."
2"The neon sign cast its green glow across the room, illuminating the walls covered with old maps and photographs that seemed to watch her from their frames."
3"Outside, the London lights blurred into streaks of gold and red as she stared through the bar window, seeing reflections of herself and the ghost of a friendshi…"
5.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags25
uselessAdditionCount6
matches
0"Aurora corrected, her voice quiet"
1"Liam said finally, his gaze appraising her"
2"He leaned, his eyes gleaming with remembered excitement"
3"he asked, his eyes flicking between them"
4"she said, her voice barely above a whisper"
5"he asked, his eyes sympathetic"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags17
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"Aurora corrected (correct)"
1"Liam whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences56
tagDensity0.304
leniency0.607
rawRatio0.118
effectiveRatio0.071
75.0834%