Run: 2026-04-24-01KQ06WCRTGQKXY809EXQVC20K

Run Details

Duration:
43.3s
Cost:
$0.006572
Provider:
Xiaomi

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The neon sign outside The Raven’s Nest bled green light into the wet Soho pavement. Inside, the air was thick with the smell of old wood, spilled whiskey, and the quiet hum of a handful of patrons nursing their solitude. Silas Blackwood polished a glass with a linen cloth, his movements practiced and slow, the silver signet ring on his right hand catching the low light. The door chimed. He didn’t look up immediately. A figure paused just inside, letting the door swing shut, her shoulder-length black hair dusted with rain. She wore a simple, dark jacket, the kind meant for utility rather than fashion. Her gaze swept the room—the maps tacked to the walls, the black-and-white photographs of forgotten places, the few shadows hunched over their drinks. It was a professional’s scan, quick and thorough. Then her eyes landed on him behind the bar. Silas saw the recognition hit her. A slight straightening of her spine, a subtle catch in her breath she managed to control. He set the glass down. It made a soft, definitive sound on the polished wood. “Rory.” His voice was rougher than it used to be. Aurora Carter—Rory—walked to the bar. Each step was measured. She didn’t sit. “Silas.” Her voice was low, steady, but there was a thread of something frayed in it. “I didn’t know this was your place.” “Been mine for a dozen years now.” He leaned his forearms on the bar, the motion revealing the slight tension in his shoulders. “You’re a long way from Cardiff.” “And you’re a long way from… wherever it was you disappeared to.” Her bright blue eyes held his. There was a hardness there that hadn’t existed before, a cool shield over whatever lay beneath. “Prague, was it? That was the last I heard.” A muscle twitched in his jaw. “Prague was a long time ago.” “For you, maybe.” She finally pulled out a stool and sat, the movement abrupt. “I only heard the after. The gossip. That you’d gone dark, then resurfaced running a bar in Soho. I thought it was a rumor.” “Most truths start as rumors.” He reached for a bottle of whiskey. The same brand they used to share on the fire escape of her university flat, back when he’d been her unofficial tutor in everything her Pre-Law classes didn’t teach. “You look good, Rory. Tired, but good.” “Tired fits.” A ghost of a smile touched her lips, gone as soon as it appeared. “I work for Yu-Fei Cheung. The Golden Empress. Deliveries.” Silas paused, the bottle hovering over a clean tumbler. “You’re driving for a restaurant.” It wasn’t a question. It was a statement that contained the entire shape of her disappointment. “It pays the rent. The flat upstairs is mine.” She glanced at the ceiling, as if seeing through the floorboards to the cramped space above. “Turns out, a half-finished law degree isn’t worth much out here.” He poured two fingers of whiskey for her, nothing for himself. “Your father?” “He’s still in Cardiff. Still a barrister. Still thinks I’ll ‘come to my senses’.” She picked up the glass but didn’t drink. Her fingers, he noticed, were calloused in a way they never were when she’d been highlighting case law texts. A small, crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist caught the light. He remembered the story—an accident involving a shattered greenhouse pane when she was twelve. “And Eva?” he asked. “She’s why I came to London.” Rory finally took a sip. The whiskey didn’t make her flinch. “She gave me a place to land after… everything.” She didn’t specify what ‘everything’ meant. She didn’t have to. The rumor mill had chewed on that, too. Evan. The boyfriend with a temper that left marks. The reason she’d run. Silas nodded slowly. “I’m glad you had somewhere to go.” “Are you?” Her gaze sharpened. “You’re the one who taught me how to disappear. How to wipe a digital trail, how to spot a tail. You told me to always have an exit strategy. But when I needed an exit… you were already gone.” The accusation, quiet and precise, hung between them like smoke. He didn’t look away. “My exit was… non-negotiable,” he said, his hand unconsciously moving to his left knee beneath the bar. “There was no strategy for what happened in Prague. Just a hole to crawl into.” “So you crawled into a bar.” She gestured to the room, to the old maps and silent ghosts. “This is your hole?” “It’s a listening post,” he corrected, his voice dropping. “People talk when they drink. They forget where they are. Or remember, too much.” Rory looked around again, this time with a different understanding. The patrons weren’t just lonely drinkers. The man in the corner nursing a gin, the couple arguing in whispers by the window—they were currents in a river Silas was still trying to read. “Are you still… in the business?” she asked. “The business doesn’t let you retire. It just changes your office.” He picked up her empty glass, his thumb tracing the rim. “You’re observant as ever. You clocked the room when you came in. You identified the two exit points and the most defensible corner in under three seconds.” “Habit,” she said. “A necessity, these days.” Silence fell. It was a heavy, loaded silence, filled with the things they’d never emailed, never called about. The gap of years was a physical thing, a chasm filled with his disappearance and her survival. He saw the intelligence in her eyes, the cool-headed pragmatism she wore like armor now. The girl who’d debated ethics with such fire had been replaced by a woman who calculated angles and escape routes. “Do you ever miss it?” she asked, her voice barely above a whisper. “The law? The plan?” He saw the question was really about her. Did he miss who she used to be? “I miss the certainty,” he admitted. “The belief that the right argument could fix a broken world. But that was a young man’s game.” He looked at his hands, at the signet ring that held no family crest, just a smooth, unmarked surface. “This game is older. Dirtier.” “And I’m playing it, too.” She finished the whiskey. The burn didn’t show on her face. “Just at a different table.” “You’re not playing, Rory. You’re enduring. There’s a difference.” He leaned closer, his voice dropping further. “That scar on your wrist. You never told me the real story about the greenhouse.” She stiffened. “It was an accident.” “I was MI6, not a fool. Accidents have a specific shape. Yours had a different one.” He let the observation sit. He didn’t push. Pushing had broken things before. “The point is, you got out. You’re here. You’re clear-headed. That’s more than most manage after what you’ve been through.” “Clear-headed and delivering dumplings in the rain.” A flicker of the old, dry humor. “Living the dream.” “Living,” he emphasized. “That’s the part that counts.” She stood, pushing the stool back. The moment was ending. The weight of their past, of his abandonment and her pain, was too dense for one drink in a quiet bar. She pulled a few bills from her jacket and laid them on the bar. “Keep it,” he said, pushing the money back. “Silas—” “Consider it a retroactive apology,” he said. “For not being there when I said I would be.” She looked at the money, then at him. Her expression was unreadable, a perfect mask of control. But her eyes, for a second, held the ghost of the hurt, the raw betrayal she’d carried all the way from Cardiff to this dim, map-lined room in Soho. She took the money back. “Apology noted.” She turned and walked to the door. She didn’t look back. The neon green sign painted her in an alien light as she pushed the door open and stepped back out into the London night. Silas watched her go. He picked up her empty glass, the one he’d poured for her, and held it in his hand. The weight of it, the ghost of her presence, lingered. The unspoken regret wasn’t in the words they’d said. It was in the vast, silent ocean of time that had passed between them, shaping them into strangers who remembered each other’s shadows. He placed the glass in the sink, the soft clink echoing in the empty bar. The listening post had heard one more story, one more quiet tragedy folded into its walls.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags26
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences57
tagDensity0.456
leniency0.912
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
89.45% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1422
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
1
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count1
2
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"barely above a whisper"
2"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
47.26% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1422
totalAiIsms15
found
0
word"measured"
count1
1
word"tension"
count1
2
word"shattered"
count1
3
word"tracing"
count1
4
word"silence"
count2
5
word"calculated"
count1
6
word"whisper"
count1
7
word"flicker"
count1
8
word"weight"
count2
9
word"unreadable"
count1
10
word"perfect"
count1
11
word"unspoken"
count1
12
word"echoing"
count1
highlights
0"measured"
1"tension"
2"shattered"
3"tracing"
4"silence"
5"calculated"
6"whisper"
7"flicker"
8"weight"
9"unreadable"
10"perfect"
11"unspoken"
12"echoing"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"air was thick with"
count1
highlights
0"the air was thick with"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences97
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences97
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"managed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences124
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen39
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1417
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions15
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions20
wordCount968
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity0.62
worstName"Silas"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Soho2
Blackwood1
Aurora1
Carter1
Rory3
Pre-Law1
Silas6
Silence1
Cardiff1
London1
persons
0"Nest"
1"Blackwood"
2"Aurora"
3"Carter"
4"Rory"
5"Silas"
6"Silence"
places
0"Raven"
1"Soho"
2"Cardiff"
3"London"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences65
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"as if seeing through the floorboards to the cramped space above"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1417
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences124
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs46
mean30.8
std21.34
cv0.693
sampleLengths
066
170
29
337
410
535
629
743
812
938
1048
1125
1230
1336
1413
1566
164
1757
1810
1944
2014
2132
2222
2323
2443
258
2649
277
2870
2917
3016
3148
3221
3331
346
3549
3617
378
3845
398
401
4117
4246
437
4435
4595
98.03% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences97
matches
0"were calloused"
1"been replaced"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs169
matches
0"was still trying"
1"was ending"
50.69% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount5
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences124
ratio0.032
matches
0"Her gaze swept the room—the maps tacked to the walls, the black-and-white photographs of forgotten places, the few shadows hunched over their drinks."
1"Aurora Carter—Rory—walked to the bar."
2"He remembered the story—an accident involving a shattered greenhouse pane when she was twelve."
3"The man in the corner nursing a gin, the couple arguing in whispers by the window—they were currents in a river Silas was still trying to read."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount678
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small, crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount18
adverbRatio0.02654867256637168
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.004424778761061947
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences124
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences124
mean11.43
std7.79
cv0.682
sampleLengths
015
125
226
33
45
517
614
723
88
99
106
1116
125
1310
1410
155
164
173
1816
197
2023
216
2218
2316
249
256
266
2714
2824
2912
3029
317
3216
339
349
359
3612
3725
3811
3911
402
4122
4219
4311
4414
454
4611
476
4815
494
50.00% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.3387096774193548
totalSentences124
uniqueOpeners42
37.88% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences88
matches
0"Then her eyes landed on"
ratio0.011
1.82% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount48
totalSentences88
matches
0"He didn’t look up immediately."
1"She wore a simple, dark"
2"Her gaze swept the room—the"
3"It was a professional’s scan,"
4"He set the glass down."
5"It made a soft, definitive"
6"His voice was rougher than"
7"She didn’t sit."
8"Her voice was low, steady,"
9"He leaned his forearms on"
10"Her bright blue eyes held"
11"She finally pulled out a"
12"He reached for a bottle"
13"It wasn’t a question"
14"It was a statement that"
15"She glanced at the ceiling,"
16"He poured two fingers of"
17"She picked up the glass"
18"Her fingers, he noticed, were"
19"He remembered the story—an accident"
ratio0.545
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount82
totalSentences88
matches
0"The neon sign outside The"
1"Silas Blackwood polished a glass"
2"The door chimed."
3"He didn’t look up immediately."
4"A figure paused just inside,"
5"She wore a simple, dark"
6"Her gaze swept the room—the"
7"It was a professional’s scan,"
8"Silas saw the recognition hit"
9"A slight straightening of her"
10"He set the glass down."
11"It made a soft, definitive"
12"His voice was rougher than"
13"Aurora Carter—Rory—walked to the bar."
14"Each step was measured."
15"She didn’t sit."
16"Her voice was low, steady,"
17"He leaned his forearms on"
18"Her bright blue eyes held"
19"A muscle twitched in his"
ratio0.932
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences88
matches(empty)
ratio0
73.73% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences31
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"There was a hardness there that hadn’t existed before, a cool shield over whatever lay beneath."
1"It was a statement that contained the entire shape of her disappointment."
2"It was in the vast, silent ocean of time that had passed between them, shaping them into strangers who remembered each other’s shadows."
9.62% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags26
uselessAdditionCount6
matches
0"He leaned, the motion revealing the slight tension in his shoulders"
1"She glanced, as if seeing through the floorboards to the cramped space above"
2"he corrected, his voice dropping"
3"He picked up, his thumb tracing the rim"
4"she asked, her voice barely above a whisper"
5"He leaned, his voice dropping further"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags9
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"he corrected (correct)"
1"he admitted (admit)"
dialogueSentences57
tagDensity0.158
leniency0.316
rawRatio0.222
effectiveRatio0.07
78.4158%