Run: 2026-04-24-01KQ071F49FQ6VJMZ0750GWSFN

Run Details

Duration:
29.8s
Cost:
$0.005111
Provider:
Xiaomi

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The rain hammered the pavement in sheets. Quinn's shoes slapped wet concrete as she rounded the corner onto Camden High Street, her breath ragged, the suspect — stocky build, dark hoodie, twenty yards ahead — cutting left toward the old market stalls. The street was empty. Everyone with sense had gone indoors hours ago. She'd spotted him leaving The Raven's Nest forty minutes ago. Had watched him through the condensation-streaked window, nursing a whisky, glancing at the door every ninety seconds. She'd been ready. Had her hand on the car door. But he'd moved faster than she expected, disappearing into the foot traffic around the Tube station. Took her twelve minutes to pick up the trail again. Now she had him. Maybe. He vaulted a newspaper stand. Quinn vaulted it after him. The motion sent a sharp pain through her left knee — the one she'd never had fixed after Morris went down. She swallowed it and kept moving. "Don't make this harder than it needs to be!" she shouted. He didn't look back. He rounded the corner into a narrow alley between a shuttered kebab shop and a brick wall covered in faded graffiti. Quinn drew her weapon. The alley smelled like old grease and rust. Her torch cut a pale cone through the dark. At the far end, he shouldered through a door she hadn't seen — or hadn't existed — five seconds ago. A sliver of amber light spilled out before it slammed shut. She reached the door. Pulled the handle. It didn't budge. "Damn it." She pressed her ear to the wood. Faint sound — music, low and droning. Voices layered over each other. A bell chimed somewhere deeper inside. The door was solid oak, old but reinforced. No visible lock, no keyhole. Just smooth grain and a small symbol carved at eye level: an eye with a crescent beneath it. Quinn holstered her weapon. Ran her hand along the frame. Found nothing. She stepped back and looked up. A fire escape, rusted but intact, climbed the side of the kebab shop. She reached for the lowest rung. Her leather watch caught on the edge as she pulled herself up. She unclasped it, stuffed it in her jacket pocket, and climbed. The roof was slick. She slid twice before reaching the top of the alley wall. The door's building had a flat roof, accessible from here. She crossed the gap — three feet of rain-dark air over a six-storey drop — and landed in a crouch. A single skylight, cracked and yellowed, looked down into a large room below. She knelt. Wiped the condensation with her sleeve. What she saw made her throat tighten. A market. Not a shop, not a stall — a sprawling, chaotic bazaar hidden beneath the city. Stalls lined a vaulted tunnel that stretched back farther than her torch could have reached. Tents of patched canvas and stretched leather glowed from within. Vendors stood behind counters stacked with things that defied her ability to name them. Bottles that hummed. Journals bound in something that looked too much like skin. Jars of suspended light. And people — dozens of them, moving between the stalls, haggling, laughing, carrying bags that seemed heavier than their contents warranted. The suspect was among them. She watched him weave through the crowd, pull his hood down, and disappear behind a tapestry depicting some kind of constellation she didn't recognize. Quinn sat back. Rain pooled around her knees. She pressed her palms flat against the roof and breathed through her nose. Three years ago, Morris had taken a call she hadn't understood. A disturbance at a warehouse in Shoreditch. She'd arrived to find him crumpled against a shipping container, eyes wide open, a look on his face she'd never been able to describe in any report. The paramedics couldn't explain the cause of death. The coroner couldn't explain the cause of death. The case was filed. The case was forgotten. By everyone except her. She'd spent two years building a file. Names. Addresses. Rumours. People who moved through the city's shadows in ways that didn't match any pattern she'd ever seen. This was the first time she'd found a door. She pulled out her phone. No signal. She put it back. The skylight was bolted from the inside, but the bolt was corroded. She found a length of rebar on the roof, wedged it into the frame, and worked it until the metal gave. The glass popped. She lowered it carefully and set it aside. The opening was wide enough to drop through, but there was nothing to land on — just open air and a hard floor ten feet below. She searched the roof again. Found a bundle of old rope behind an air conditioning unit, frayed but thick enough. She tied it to a ventilation pipe, tested the hold with her full weight, and lowered herself through the skylight. Her boots touched stone. The air hit her — warm, humid, thick with the smell of incense and something metallic she couldn't place. The drone of music was louder here. A low, resonant bass note that vibrated in her chest. She released the rope and turned. Nobody had noticed her yet. The skylight was above and behind a row of tall shelving units stacked with old books and glass cases. She moved along the shelf line, using it as cover, and found herself at the edge of the main corridor. Quinn checked her weapon. Full magazine. Twelve rounds. She'd used none. She kept her hand near the holster and walked. The stalls blurred past her. A woman with silver rings on every finger sold vials of dark liquid that moved against gravity inside the glass. A man with no eyebrows offered what he called "memory coins" — medallions that supposedly held other people's recollections. A child, impossibly young, sat on a stool and painted portraits with a brush that left no visible paint. "You're not supposed to be down here." Quinn turned. A heavyset man stood behind a counter covered in feathers — real feathers, arranged in patterns that shifted when she wasn't looking directly at them. He had kind eyes and a scar across the bridge of his nose. "I'm looking for someone," she said. "That's what they all say." He plucked a feather from the counter and twirled it between his fingers. "You got a token?" "A what?" "Bone token. Entry requirement. You don't have one, which means you came in through a way you shouldn't have." He leaned forward. "Which means you're either very brave or very lost." "I'm a detective." His expression didn't change. "Lots of people claim to be lots of things down here." She leaned in too. "I watched a man run through a door that shouldn't have opened. I followed him here. I'm not here to browse." He studied her for a long moment. Then he straightened and jerked his chin toward the far end of the tunnel. "He went that way. Past the tent with the green lantern. You've got about ten minutes before the wardens do their sweep." "Who are the wardens?" "Exactly who you don't want to meet." He turned his attention back to his feathers. "Move." Quinn moved. She pushed through the crowd, ignoring the stares, ignoring the way people stepped back when they saw her badge clipped to her belt. The badge meant nothing here. She could feel it — a weight in her pocket that had no authority. She found the tent with the green lantern. It was larger than the others, its entrance covered by a curtain of woven silver chain. Beyond it, the tunnel narrowed and sloped downward. The walls were rough stone, older than the vaulted ceiling. Older than the station above. She could hear her own breathing. The music had faded. The crowd was behind her now. The suspect's footprints — wet from the rain — tracked across the stone floor and disappeared around a bend. Quinn followed them. The tunnel turned twice, then opened into a small chamber. A dead end. No — not a dead end. There was a crack in the wall, just wide enough for a person to squeeze through. She could feel cold air pushing through it. She holstered her weapon — no room to draw it in there — and wedged herself into the gap. Stone scraped her jacket. The crack narrowed, tightened, then released her into another space — larger, emptier, lit by a single overhead bulb that swung gently in a draft. The suspect stood twenty feet ahead of her, at a wooden door set into the far wall. He was fumbling with a key. "This is the last time I ask," Quinn said. "Turn around. Hands where I can see them." He looked over his shoulder. His face was pale, younger than she'd thought. Twenty-five, maybe. His eyes were red-rimmed. "You don't know what you walked into," he said. "I know you were at The Raven's Nest tonight. I know you've been selling information to at least two people under investigation for trafficking. I know you ran from me, and I know I don't have the patience for this." He laughed — a short, broken sound. He turned back to the door. The key turned. "Stop." He didn't stop. He pushed the door open and stepped through. Quinn closed the distance in four strides and caught the door before it swung shut. She looked inside. Another tunnel. Deeper. The walls glistened with moisture. Somewhere below, she heard water flowing — not a pipe, something natural, something old. The air smelled of earth and copper. The suspect was already moving, his flashlight bobbing ahead of her. Quinn stood in the doorway. Her worn leather watch was in her jacket pocket. She could feel its weight against her ribs. Morris had worn the same model. She'd found his in his locker after the funeral. She stepped through the door.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags8
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences22
tagDensity0.364
leniency0.727
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
87.82% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1642
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"carefully"
count1
1
adverb"very"
count2
2
adverb"gently"
count1
highlights
0"carefully"
1"very"
2"gently"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
72.59% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1642
totalAiIsms9
found
0
word"chaotic"
count1
1
word"tapestry"
count1
2
word"weight"
count3
3
word"vibrated"
count1
4
word"could feel"
count3
highlights
0"chaotic"
1"tapestry"
2"weight"
3"vibrated"
4"could feel"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences166
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences166
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences180
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen40
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1665
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions10
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions22
wordCount1469
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity0.82
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Camden1
High1
Street1
Raven1
Nest1
Tube1
Morris3
Shoreditch1
Quinn12
persons
0"Raven"
1"Morris"
2"Quinn"
places
0"Camden"
1"High"
2"Street"
3"Shoreditch"
globalScore1
windowScore1
99.49% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences99
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"smelled like old grease and rust"
1"seemed heavier than their contents warranted"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1665
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences180
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs49
mean33.98
std23.43
cv0.69
sampleLengths
054
168
237
311
446
541
62
756
837
923
1066
117
1273
1350
1494
1536
1611
1770
1840
1946
2044
2120
2263
237
2440
256
2622
272
2831
293
3015
3125
3243
334
3416
3544
3663
3784
3852
3917
4019
419
4240
4316
441
4529
4640
4737
485
98.92% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences166
matches
0"was filed"
1"was forgotten"
2"was bolted"
3"was corroded"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs265
matches
0"wasn't looking"
1"was fumbling"
2"was already moving"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount22
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences17
totalSentences180
ratio0.094
matches
0"Quinn's shoes slapped wet concrete as she rounded the corner onto Camden High Street, her breath ragged, the suspect — stocky build, dark hoodie, twenty yards ahead — cutting left toward the old market stalls."
1"The motion sent a sharp pain through her left knee — the one she'd never had fixed after Morris went down."
2"At the far end, he shouldered through a door she hadn't seen — or hadn't existed — five seconds ago."
3"Faint sound — music, low and droning."
4"She crossed the gap — three feet of rain-dark air over a six-storey drop — and landed in a crouch."
5"Not a shop, not a stall — a sprawling, chaotic bazaar hidden beneath the city."
6"And people — dozens of them, moving between the stalls, haggling, laughing, carrying bags that seemed heavier than their contents warranted."
7"The opening was wide enough to drop through, but there was nothing to land on — just open air and a hard floor ten feet below."
8"The air hit her — warm, humid, thick with the smell of incense and something metallic she couldn't place."
9"A heavyset man stood behind a counter covered in feathers — real feathers, arranged in patterns that shifted when she wasn't looking directly at them."
10"She could feel it — a weight in her pocket that had no authority."
11"The suspect's footprints — wet from the rain — tracked across the stone floor and disappeared around a bend."
12"No — not a dead end."
13"She holstered her weapon — no room to draw it in there — and wedged herself into the gap."
14"The crack narrowed, tightened, then released her into another space — larger, emptier, lit by a single overhead bulb that swung gently in a draft."
15"He laughed — a short, broken sound."
16"Somewhere below, she heard water flowing — not a pipe, something natural, something old."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1452
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount39
adverbRatio0.026859504132231406
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.003443526170798898
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences180
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences180
mean9.25
std6.99
cv0.756
sampleLengths
07
135
24
38
410
517
63
77
816
910
104
111
125
135
1421
156
1611
174
1821
194
208
219
2220
2311
244
253
263
272
287
297
305
316
328
335
3418
354
366
372
386
3913
406
4112
4211
434
4411
4510
4620
4713
482
496
51.67% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats17
diversityRatio0.36666666666666664
totalSentences180
uniqueOpeners66
68.03% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences147
matches
0"Just smooth grain and a"
1"Then he straightened and jerked"
2"Somewhere below, she heard water"
ratio0.02
62.18% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount58
totalSentences147
matches
0"She'd spotted him leaving The"
1"She'd been ready."
2"He vaulted a newspaper stand."
3"She swallowed it and kept"
4"He didn't look back."
5"He rounded the corner into"
6"Her torch cut a pale"
7"She reached the door."
8"It didn't budge."
9"She pressed her ear to"
10"She stepped back and looked"
11"She reached for the lowest"
12"Her leather watch caught on"
13"She unclasped it, stuffed it"
14"She slid twice before reaching"
15"She crossed the gap —"
16"She watched him weave through"
17"She pressed her palms flat"
18"She'd arrived to find him"
19"She'd spent two years building"
ratio0.395
45.03% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount122
totalSentences147
matches
0"The rain hammered the pavement"
1"Quinn's shoes slapped wet concrete"
2"The street was empty."
3"Everyone with sense had gone"
4"She'd spotted him leaving The"
5"She'd been ready."
6"He vaulted a newspaper stand."
7"Quinn vaulted it after him."
8"The motion sent a sharp"
9"She swallowed it and kept"
10"He didn't look back."
11"He rounded the corner into"
12"Quinn drew her weapon."
13"The alley smelled like old"
14"Her torch cut a pale"
15"A sliver of amber light"
16"She reached the door."
17"It didn't budge."
18"She pressed her ear to"
19"Voices layered over each other."
ratio0.83
34.01% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences147
matches
0"Now she had him."
ratio0.007
77.92% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences55
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"Vendors stood behind counters stacked with things that defied her ability to name them."
1"And people — dozens of them, moving between the stalls, haggling, laughing, carrying bags that seemed heavier than their contents warranted."
2"She could feel it — a weight in her pocket that had no authority."
3"The crack narrowed, tightened, then released her into another space — larger, emptier, lit by a single overhead bulb that swung gently in a draft."
4"The suspect was already moving, his flashlight bobbing ahead of her."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags8
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she shouted (shout)"
dialogueSentences22
tagDensity0.182
leniency0.364
rawRatio0.25
effectiveRatio0.091
86.5891%