| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 16 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 28 | | tagDensity | 0.571 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1053 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 33.52% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1053 | | totalAiIsms | 14 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "chill" | | 1 | "familiar" | | 2 | "constructed" | | 3 | "measured" | | 4 | "pulse" | | 5 | "scanning" | | 6 | "weight" | | 7 | "etched" | | 8 | "tracing" | | 9 | "pulsed" | | 10 | "rhythmic" | | 11 | "stark" | | 12 | "determined" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 58 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 6 | | narrationSentences | 58 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 70 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 35 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1048 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 13 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 70.25% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 36 | | wordCount | 815 | | uniqueNames | 10 | | maxNameDensity | 1.6 | | worstName | "Quinn" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Quinn" | | discoveredNames | | Detective | 1 | | Harlow | 1 | | Quinn | 13 | | Camden | 2 | | Town | 1 | | Tube | 2 | | Danny | 1 | | Lewis | 10 | | Thorne | 3 | | Morris | 2 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Harlow" | | 1 | "Quinn" | | 2 | "Danny" | | 3 | "Lewis" | | 4 | "Thorne" | | 5 | "Morris" |
| | places | | 0 | "Detective" | | 1 | "Camden" | | 2 | "Town" | | 3 | "Tube" |
| | globalScore | 0.702 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 51 | | glossingSentenceCount | 8 | | matches | | 0 | "energy that seemed to vibrate through his entire frame" | | 1 | "looked like ship's rigging" | | 2 | "herbs that seemed to pulse with a faint inner light, and artifacts that defied explanation" | | 3 | "substances that seemed to shift and change when she wasn't looking directly at them" | | 4 | "appeared solid when viewed from the side but flowed like water when she looked straight at it" | | 5 | "sigils that seemed to shift and reform as she watched" | | 6 | "appeared solid but had the faint shimmer of heat haze" | | 7 | "energy that seemed to absorb rather than reflect light" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.954 | | wordCount | 1048 | | matches | | 0 | "not brick and mortar, but a swirling vortex of purple" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 70 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 28 | | mean | 37.43 | | std | 21.49 | | cv | 0.574 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 70 | | 1 | 54 | | 2 | 38 | | 3 | 43 | | 4 | 65 | | 5 | 66 | | 6 | 26 | | 7 | 37 | | 8 | 1 | | 9 | 41 | | 10 | 15 | | 11 | 72 | | 12 | 65 | | 13 | 8 | | 14 | 36 | | 15 | 14 | | 16 | 69 | | 17 | 27 | | 18 | 12 | | 19 | 6 | | 20 | 54 | | 21 | 12 | | 22 | 19 | | 23 | 40 | | 24 | 50 | | 25 | 19 | | 26 | 49 | | 27 | 40 |
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| 87.11% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 58 | | matches | | 0 | "were lined" | | 1 | "been killed" | | 2 | "been broken" |
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| 58.16% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 3 | | totalVerbs | 141 | | matches | | 0 | "wasn't looking" | | 1 | "was heading" | | 2 | "was remembering" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 5 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 5 | | totalSentences | 70 | | ratio | 0.071 | | matches | | 0 | "The market itself was a bizarre collection of curiosities—potion bottles labeled in languages she didn't recognize, bundles of dried herbs that seemed to pulse with a faint inner light, and artifacts that defied explanation." | | 1 | "What disturbed Quinn most was the unnatural stillness of the scene—no overturned potions, no signs of struggle, just a body and odd symbols chalked on the floor around it." | | 2 | "She'd read about such objects in the restricted files—supernatural artifacts that could detect rifts in reality." | | 3 | "He'd been killed—sacrificed, perhaps—to maintain or strengthen this portal." | | 4 | "The symbols weren't protection; they were a lock that had been broken." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 824 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "same gray-green pallor." |
| | adverbCount | 26 | | adverbRatio | 0.03155339805825243 | | lyAdverbCount | 11 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.013349514563106795 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 70 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 70 | | mean | 14.97 | | std | 7.72 | | cv | 0.516 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 27 | | 1 | 20 | | 2 | 23 | | 3 | 23 | | 4 | 17 | | 5 | 14 | | 6 | 19 | | 7 | 16 | | 8 | 3 | | 9 | 25 | | 10 | 18 | | 11 | 19 | | 12 | 34 | | 13 | 12 | | 14 | 22 | | 15 | 15 | | 16 | 29 | | 17 | 4 | | 18 | 22 | | 19 | 13 | | 20 | 5 | | 21 | 1 | | 22 | 3 | | 23 | 5 | | 24 | 10 | | 25 | 1 | | 26 | 26 | | 27 | 15 | | 28 | 8 | | 29 | 7 | | 30 | 16 | | 31 | 20 | | 32 | 24 | | 33 | 12 | | 34 | 12 | | 35 | 10 | | 36 | 19 | | 37 | 24 | | 38 | 8 | | 39 | 11 | | 40 | 16 | | 41 | 9 | | 42 | 14 | | 43 | 3 | | 44 | 10 | | 45 | 13 | | 46 | 12 | | 47 | 13 | | 48 | 18 | | 49 | 16 |
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| 75.24% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 4 | | diversityRatio | 0.4857142857142857 | | totalSentences | 70 | | uniqueOpeners | 34 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 57 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 86.67% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 19 | | totalSentences | 57 | | matches | | 0 | "Her worn leather watch clicked" | | 1 | "He was young, barely thirty," | | 2 | "Her gaze swept across the" | | 3 | "His eyes were wide open," | | 4 | "She examined his hands first." | | 5 | "she said, more to herself" | | 6 | "She stood, her eyes scanning" | | 7 | "They were lined with jars" | | 8 | "She knotted, her fingers closing" | | 9 | "It was a compass, its" | | 10 | "She'd read about such objects" | | 11 | "She was remembering another case," | | 12 | "Her partner, Morris, had died" | | 13 | "His body had shown the" | | 14 | "They followed him to the" | | 15 | "She turned back to the" | | 16 | "He'd been killed—sacrificed, perhaps—to maintain" | | 17 | "Her partner's death was no" | | 18 | "She stood up, her sharp" |
| | ratio | 0.333 | |
| 30.18% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 49 | | totalSentences | 57 | | matches | | 0 | "The damp chill of the" | | 1 | "Her worn leather watch clicked" | | 2 | "The air carried a strange" | | 3 | "PC Danny Lewis asked, his" | | 4 | "He was young, barely thirty," | | 5 | "This was his first major" | | 6 | "Quinn replied, her voice low" | | 7 | "Her gaze swept across the" | | 8 | "Lewis gestured with his light" | | 9 | "Quinn approached the stall with" | | 10 | "The market itself was a" | | 11 | "Thorne's body lay slumped on" | | 12 | "His eyes were wide open," | | 13 | "Lewis said, confidently" | | 14 | "Quinn crouched beside the body," | | 15 | "She examined his hands first." | | 16 | "she said, more to herself" | | 17 | "She stood, her eyes scanning" | | 18 | "Lewis shifted his weight, his" | | 19 | "Quinn countered, her gaze moving" |
| | ratio | 0.86 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 57 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 40.82% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 35 | | technicalSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "The air carried a strange metallic tang beneath the usual scent of mildew and decay, an odor that set her teeth on edge." | | 1 | "The market itself was a bizarre collection of curiosities—potion bottles labeled in languages she didn't recognize, bundles of dried herbs that seemed to pulse …" | | 2 | "They were lined with jars containing substances that seemed to shift and change when she wasn't looking directly at them." | | 3 | "She'd read about such objects in the restricted files—supernatural artifacts that could detect rifts in reality." | | 4 | "Behind it was not brick and mortar, but a swirling vortex of purple and black energy that seemed to absorb rather than reflect light." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 16 | | uselessAdditionCount | 9 | | matches | | 0 | "PC Danny Lewis asked, his flashlight beam cutting through the darkness" | | 1 | "Quinn replied, her voice low and controlled" | | 2 | "Lewis said, confidently" | | 3 | "she said, more to herself than to Lewis" | | 4 | "She stood, her eyes scanning the symbols on the floor" | | 5 | "Quinn countered, her gaze moving to the shelves behind the stall" | | 6 | "Quinn murmured, her fingers tracing the etched markings" | | 7 | "Quinn said, her voice tight with a mixture of anger and determination" | | 8 | "Quinn murmured, the words barely audible" |
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| 42.86% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 10 | | fancyCount | 3 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Quinn murmured (murmur)" | | 1 | "Lewis whispered (whisper)" | | 2 | "Quinn murmured (murmur)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 28 | | tagDensity | 0.357 | | leniency | 0.714 | | rawRatio | 0.3 | | effectiveRatio | 0.214 | |