Run: 2026-04-24-01KQ075A04ED2CJ5FXSQG8NQEZ

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Duration:
1m 5s
Cost:
$0.010143
Provider:
Friendli

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The standing stones rose from the earth like broken teeth, black against the starless sky. Aurora stepped between them and felt the change immediately — a pressure in her ears, as if the air itself had grown thicker. The pendant at her throat pulsed once, warm against her collarbone, then settled into a low, steady heat she couldn't ignore. She pressed her palm over it through her jacket, feeling the heartbeat rhythm of its glow. Richmond Park lay behind her. Ahead, the Grove waited. Wildflowers carpeted the clearing in colours that had no business existing at midnight. Bluebells the shade of drowned things. Foxgloves that gleamed bone-white in the darkness. The air smelled of summer and something older — peat moss, maybe, or the inside of a crypt left too long without ventilation. She’d come for Eva. That was the only thought keeping her feet moving forward. The note had been clear enough: *Richmond. The standing stones. Midnight. Come alone or don’t come at all.* Eva’s handwriting, Eva’s stationary, Eva’s particular brand of dramatic urgency that usually made Aurora roll her eyes. But the note had arrived three days late, and Eva hadn’t answered her phone in a week, and the silence had grown teeth. So here she stood, in a place that shouldn’t exist, surrounded by flowers that bloomed out of season beneath a sky that had forgotten its stars. Her trainers made no sound on the soft earth. That was wrong. She stamped her foot. Felt the impact travel up her leg. Heard nothing. The pendant flared hot against her chest. Aurora stopped walking. Her breath came out in a plume of white vapour, though the night wasn’t cold. She checked her phone — 12:47 AM, according to the screen. She’d entered the stones at midnight. Either time had jumped while she walked, or the Grove had swallowed forty-seven minutes whole. “Eva?” The word left her mouth and died two feet from her lips. Sound refused to travel here. The silence pressed against her eardrums like wet cotton. She tried again, louder. “Eva, if this is some kind of—” A sound cut through. Not behind her. Not in front. Above. Branches creaking. Oak limbs groaning under weight they hadn’t carried moments before. Aurora’s eyes snapped up to the canopy, but the trees stood empty. Dead leaves rustled against each other in a wind she couldn’t feel. The pendant burned. She grabbed it through her shirt, hissing at the heat, and the gemstone’s crimson glow spilled between her fingers like blood from a wound. The light fell on the wildflowers around her feet, and for one horrible second, the petals looked like skin. Aurora backed toward the standing stones. Her shoulder blades met empty air. She spun. The stones had moved. Not far. Ten feet, maybe fifteen. But the gap she’d walked through no longer existed. The ancient oaks stood shoulder to shoulder now, an unbroken ring of bark and moss and deep shadow. She ran her hands along the trunk in front of her, searching for the seam, the gap, the way out. Her fingers found only wood. Cold wood. Wood that pulsed beneath her touch like something living. “Okay.” She made herself breathe. “Okay, think.” The pendant’s glow had grown stronger. She held it up like a lantern, and the red light carved a circle around her — five feet of visibility, ten at most. Beyond that, the darkness didn’t recede. It waited. A rustling sound. Not above this time. To her left. Aurora turned. Nothing. Bluebells nodding in that absent wind. The shadow between two oak trunks, thick as spilled ink. Another rustle. Her right. She spun again. The foxgloves had flattened, as if something had brushed past them. A path of bent stems led deeper into the Grove, then stopped. Just stopped. As if whatever had made the trail had simply ceased to exist. The crescent scar on her wrist throbbed. She rubbed it without thinking, an old habit, and felt the raised edge of skin where the bone had broken through when she was nine. The familiar shape anchored her. Real. Solid. Hers. Unlike the sound that came next. Footsteps. Not her own. Slow. Measured. Coming from everywhere at once. The earth itself seemed to walk, each step vibrating up through the soles of her trainers. Aurora planted her feet and clenched her fists and refused to run, because running was how you died in places like this, running was how you gave them what they wanted— The footsteps stopped. Silence crashed back in. Heavier than before. The quiet of a held breath. Then, from the darkness beyond her circle of red light, a voice. Not Eva. Not anyone she knew. A sound like autumn leaves scraping across a grave, like wind through a ribcage, like the last rattle of a throat that had forgotten how to swallow. “Malphora.” The name hit her like a slap. No one called her that. No one had ever called her that. The word wasn’t English, wasn’t Welsh, wasn’t anything she should recognise, and yet her bones knew it. Knew it the way her bones knew how to make blood, how to grow marrow, how to keep her heart beating without instruction. Her heart was beating too fast now. She could feel it against her ribs, a trapped thing, desperate. “Who’s there?” The pendant’s light flickered. In that half-second of darkness, she saw them. Shapes. Three of them. Maybe four. Standing just beyond the foxgloves, tall and thin and wrong in ways her eyes couldn’t quite parse. Not human. Not tree. Something else. Their outlines rippled like heat above a summer road, and where their faces should have been, there was only deeper shadow. The light returned. They were gone. But the bluebells at their feet still swayed from the displacement of air where they’d stood. Aurora’s hands shook. She pressed them flat against her thighs, forcing them still. Her mind raced through options — the stones, the pendant, the shapes, the name. Eva. She’d come for Eva. Eva had brought her here, or someone using Eva’s name had, and that meant Eva was either in trouble or the source of it. The footsteps resumed. Closer now. Close enough that she could feel them in her teeth. Close enough that the wildflowers bent in concentric rings, moving outward from something that advanced through the dark. The pendant blazed. The crimson light turned the clearing into a wound, raw and wet and shining. And in that light, she saw the hand. Reaching from behind the nearest oak. Pale fingers, too long, too jointed, nails black as the gap between stars. It curled around the bark like a spider, pulling, and the tree groaned as something leaned around its trunk— Aurora didn’t run. She held the pendant out before her like a weapon, like a shield, like the only thing between her and whatever was coming, and the gemstone answered her grip with heat that bordered on pain. The hand retreated. The footsteps faded. The shapes melted back into a darkness that seemed to exhale with relief. Silence returned. True silence, this time. The kind that meant absence, not patience. Aurora stood alone in the Grove, surrounded by flowers that shouldn’t bloom, holding a stone that shouldn’t glow, wearing a name she’d never heard before a moment that felt like a lifetime. Her phone buzzed in her pocket. She pulled it out with numb fingers. One message. From a number she didn’t recognise. *She’s not here. But you are.*
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags1
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences6
tagDensity0.167
leniency0.333
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1254
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
20.26% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1254
totalAiIsms20
found
0
word"pulsed"
count2
1
word"silence"
count5
2
word"weight"
count1
3
word"throbbed"
count1
4
word"familiar"
count1
5
word"footsteps"
count4
6
word"measured"
count1
7
word"grave"
count1
8
word"could feel"
count2
9
word"flickered"
count1
10
word"raced"
count1
highlights
0"pulsed"
1"silence"
2"weight"
3"throbbed"
4"familiar"
5"footsteps"
6"measured"
7"grave"
8"could feel"
9"flickered"
10"raced"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"clenched jaw/fists"
count1
highlights
0"clenched her fists"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences148
matches
0"e with relief"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences148
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences153
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen35
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans2
markdownWords18
totalWords1259
ratio0.014
matches
0"Richmond. The standing stones. Midnight. Come alone or don’t come at all."
1"She’s not here. But you are."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions5
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions28
wordCount1245
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity0.88
worstName"Eva"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
Park1
Grove4
Eva11
Aurora10
English1
Welsh1
persons
0"Grove"
1"Eva"
2"Aurora"
places
0"Park"
globalScore1
windowScore0.833
18.42% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences76
glossingSentenceCount4
matches
0"looked like skin"
1"quite parse"
2"darkness that seemed to exhale with relief"
3"felt like a lifetime"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1259
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences153
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs59
mean21.34
std18.76
cv0.879
sampleLengths
015
160
29
349
414
558
626
79
83
913
107
1150
121
1326
1411
1511
1636
173
1843
1914
204
2169
227
2338
2410
2519
264
2740
2840
296
304
3154
323
3313
3412
3533
361
3759
3818
392
4012
4150
426
4316
4456
453
4630
4717
488
4938
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences148
matches
0"were gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs214
matches
0"was beating"
1"was coming"
12.14% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount7
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences7
totalSentences153
ratio0.046
matches
0"Aurora stepped between them and felt the change immediately — a pressure in her ears, as if the air itself had grown thicker."
1"The air smelled of summer and something older — peat moss, maybe, or the inside of a crypt left too long without ventilation."
2"She checked her phone — 12:47 AM, according to the screen."
3"She held it up like a lantern, and the red light carved a circle around her — five feet of visibility, ten at most."
4"Aurora planted her feet and clenched her fists and refused to run, because running was how you died in places like this, running was how you gave them what they wanted—"
5"Her mind raced through options — the stones, the pendant, the shapes, the name."
6"It curled around the bark like a spider, pulling, and the tree groaned as something leaned around its trunk—"
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1243
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount43
adverbRatio0.03459372485921158
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.0056315366049879325
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences153
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences153
mean8.23
std7.54
cv0.917
sampleLengths
015
123
221
316
45
54
613
76
87
923
104
1110
127
133
141
1524
1623
1726
189
193
204
217
222
237
243
2515
2611
276
2815
291
3012
315
329
334
347
354
363
373
381
392
4010
4112
4212
433
4424
4519
466
476
482
494
65.80% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats11
diversityRatio0.43790849673202614
totalSentences153
uniqueOpeners67
28.01% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences119
matches
0"Then, from the darkness beyond"
ratio0.008
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount28
totalSentences119
matches
0"She pressed her palm over"
1"She’d come for Eva."
2"Her trainers made no sound"
3"She stamped her foot."
4"Her breath came out in"
5"She checked her phone —"
6"She’d entered the stones at"
7"She tried again, louder."
8"She grabbed it through her"
9"Her shoulder blades met empty"
10"She ran her hands along"
11"Her fingers found only wood."
12"She made herself breathe"
13"She held it up like"
14"She spun again."
15"She rubbed it without thinking,"
16"Her heart was beating too"
17"She could feel it against"
18"Their outlines rippled like heat"
19"They were gone."
ratio0.235
100.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount83
totalSentences119
matches
0"The standing stones rose from"
1"Aurora stepped between them and"
2"The pendant at her throat"
3"She pressed her palm over"
4"Richmond Park lay behind her."
5"Wildflowers carpeted the clearing in"
6"Bluebells the shade of drowned"
7"Foxgloves that gleamed bone-white in"
8"The air smelled of summer"
9"She’d come for Eva."
10"That was the only thought"
11"The note had been clear"
12"The standing stones."
13"Her trainers made no sound"
14"That was wrong."
15"She stamped her foot."
16"The pendant flared hot against"
17"Aurora stopped walking."
18"Her breath came out in"
19"She checked her phone —"
ratio0.697
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount3
totalSentences119
matches
0"Either time had jumped while"
1"To her left."
2"As if whatever had made"
ratio0.025
98.21% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences48
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"That was the only thought keeping her feet moving forward."
1"So here she stood, in a place that shouldn’t exist, surrounded by flowers that bloomed out of season beneath a sky that had forgotten its stars."
2"Aurora stood alone in the Grove, surrounded by flowers that shouldn’t bloom, holding a stone that shouldn’t glow, wearing a name she’d never heard before a mome…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags1
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
87.5389%