Run: 2026-04-24-01KQ075QSYZ2B1VA9WAQWHVKY4

Run Details

Duration:
27.7s
Cost:
$0.004566
Provider:
Xiaomi

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The path through Richmond Park narrowed to a dirt track long before Aurora expected it to. The map on her phone had shown it continuing, but the undergrowth here was thick, aggressive, and the screen’s light only illuminated a wall of leaves. She pocketed the phone, letting her eyes adjust. Above, the moon was a chipped porcelain plate, throwing just enough light to paint the world in shades of grey and bruise-purple. She’d come here because of the pendant. For three nights, it had grown warm against her collarbone, the faint, internal pulse a steady thrum against her skin. Yu-Fei had laughed when she’d asked about “old tales” connected to Richmond Park. “Just woods, Rory. Good for a picnic, maybe a ghost story for the tourists.” But his laugh had thinned when she’d described the pendant’s behavior. He’d looked at her then, really looked, and mentioned the Fae Grove in a whisper, like speaking the name aloud might summon something. A hidden place. A pocket. Now, the air smelled wrong. Not the damp earth and rot of a London autumn, but something older, thicker. Like crushed cloves and cold metal. The usual city hum—the distant drone of traffic, a siren’s wail—had been snipped away, leaving a silence so profound it felt like a pressure against her eardrums. She pushed through a final curtain of hawthorn, and the grove opened before her. It was smaller than she’d imagined, a perfect circle perhaps twenty metres across. Ancient oaks, their bark like wrinkled grey skin, stood as sentinels around the perimeter. Between them, wildflowers bloomed in impossible profusion—ghostly white foxglove, crimson campion that looked like fresh blood drops, violets so deep they seemed to drink the moonlight. They should have been wilted, frost-bitten. They were vibrant. And in the centre, the standing stones. Not a grand henge, but five rough-hewn megaliths arranged in a loose ring, their surfaces covered in moss and lichens that shimmered with a faint, pearlescent light. Her boots made no sound on the spongy moss carpet. The Heartstone Pendant pulsed a hard, warm beat against her sternum. A warning, or a welcome? She unclasped it, holding it in her palm. The deep crimson gem seemed to swallow the moonlight, its inner glow intensifying, casting a faint, bloody halo on her fingers. It was definitely pointing toward the stones. A twig snapped somewhere in the dark beyond the oars. Aurora froze, her hand dropping to the folding knife in her jacket pocket. The sound was sharp, precise. Not the casual rustle of a fox. She waited, her breathing controlled, her senses straining. Nothing. Just the silent, staring stones and the impossible flowers. She took a step forward. Then another. The air grew colder, yet her skin prickled with sweat. With each footfall towards the centre, the pendant’s glow brightened, and a low hum started in her teeth, a vibration that seemed to rise from the earth itself. It wasn’t unpleasant, at first. It felt like anticipation. Then she heard the whisper. It wasn’t words. It was the sound of dry leaves skittering across pavement, of a finger tracing the rim of a crystal glass, pitched just at the edge of hearing. It came from everywhere and nowhere, circling her. She stopped at the ring of stones, her hand now gripping the knife. “Hello?” Her voice sounded flat, dead in the thick air. It didn’t echo. It was swallowed instantly. The hum in her teeth deepened. To her left, between two of the oak sentinels, the darkness seemed to… coalesce. Not move, but gather, like ink dropped in water, forming a shape that was almost a silhouette. Tall, too tall, with limbs that bent at angles that suggested wrongness. She stared directly at it, but it remained just a suggestion, a smudge of extra night at the edge of her vision. If she tried to focus on it, it dissolved, leaving only the tree and the shadows. Her heart hammered against her ribs. This was the wrongness Yu-Fei hadn’t warned her about. It wasn’t malevolent. It was indifferent, ancient, and utterly alien. She was a mote of dust in its space. A sound, closer this time. A soft, wet *click*. Like a joint popping, or a beak opening. It came from directly behind the nearest standing stone. Aurora spun, knife now open in her hand. The stone was empty. Moonlight draped over its mossy crown. But the air where it had been seemed to shimmer, like heat haze. The pendant in her other hand flared with sudden, intense heat, searing her palm. She cried out, dropping it. It fell onto the moss with a dull thud, its glow pulsing rapidly now, a frantic, silent heartbeat. Time felt syrupy. She risked a glance at her watch. 11:14 PM. She’d entered the park at 10:30. It felt like hours. The whisper resolved, just for a second, into something almost linguistic. A sibilant hiss that coiled around the word *stay*. The shadows between the oars were busier now. Shapes darted at the periphery of her sight—glimpses of something pale and swift, a flash of an eye that reflected no light, a suggestion of too many fingers trailing through the wildflowers. They never stepped fully into the moonlit circle. They played at the edges, testing. The air grew colder still, seeping through her jacket. Frost began to crystallize on the surfaces of the standing stones, intricate patterns spreading like white fungus. The warmth from the pendant was gone, replaced by a deep, draining chill that seemed to pull at the heat in her veins. She needed to leave. Now. Aurora bent to snatch the pendant. As her fingers closed around the now-cold gemstone, the low hum in her teeth exploded into a shriek of sound, audible and silent all at once, a psychic blast that made her vision swim. The shadows leaped. Not toward her. Around her. They swirled at the edge of the stone circle, a vortex of silent, dark motion, stirring the impossible flowers into a frenzy of colour. The shapes were more defined now—gaunt, elongated, their outlines constantly shifting, like smoke given form. One paused, and she saw a suggestion of a face, smooth and featureless as a river stone, with a mouth that was a black, vertical slit. Aurora backed into the centre of the stone ring, her back against the tallest megalith. The rock was freezing through her jacket. She held the knife before her, a pathetic gesture. Her mind raced, cool-headed analysis warring with primal terror. She was alone in a place where time broke. She was not alone. She had come for answers the pendant seemed to pulse with, and instead had found an audience. The black-slit mouth opened. Not with a sound, but with a scent. The smell of ozone and deep water flooded the grove, overpowering the cloves. It smelled of endings. From the dark heart of the vortex, something began to emerge. Not a full body, but a limb. It was pale as birchwood, jointed in too many places, ending in a hand with fingers that were long, delicate, and tipped with what looked like polished obsidian claws. It reached slowly, languidly, toward the pendant on the ground. Aurora’s breath hitched. Every instinct screamed to run, but the path was blocked by the swirling darkness. The limb was inches from the gemstone. She did the only thing her quick, desperate mind could conjure. She stomped down with all her weight, her boot connecting not with the limb, but with the pendant, driving it into the soft moss and earth. She twisted her heel, grinding it down. The reaction was instantaneous. The shriek in her skull became a deafening roar. The reaching limb recoiled as if burned. The vortex of shadows shuddered, contracting violently. The vertical slit mouth snapped shut. The temperature plunged. Frost raced up the trunk of her backing stone, cold seeping into her spine. The wildflowers drooped, their colour fading to grey. The pearlescent light on the standing stones guttered like dying embers. She was alone in the circle. The darkness beyond the oars was just darkness again. The silence returned, heavier than before. Aurora wrenched her foot away. The Heartstone Pendant was gone, buried in the churned earth and moss. The pendant that had guided her here. The pendant that now felt like the bait in a trap. She didn’t wait. She scrambled over the low ring of stones, back the way she’d come, branches scratching at her face, not caring about the noise she made. The wrongness lingered, a taste in her mouth, a chill in her bones. She burst from the treeline onto the main park path, the distant hum of London rushing back in like a physical blow. She leaned against a bench, gasping, the knife still clutched in her white-knuckled fist. Her watch read 11:21 PM. Seven minutes. It had been seven minutes. Her palm was bare where the pendant had been. The air on her skin felt like a violation. Back in the city, under the orange sodium lights, she was utterly, terribly alone. And the grove, she knew, was still there. Waiting. And it had taken something of hers.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags3
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences3
tagDensity1
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
83.75% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1538
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"really"
count1
1
adverb"utterly"
count2
2
adverb"slowly"
count1
3
adverb"languidly"
count1
highlights
0"really"
1"utterly"
2"slowly"
3"languidly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
5.72% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1538
totalAiIsms29
found
0
word"porcelain"
count1
1
word"pulse"
count2
2
word"whisper"
count3
3
word"silence"
count2
4
word"profound"
count1
5
word"perfect"
count1
6
word"sentinels"
count2
7
word"shimmered"
count1
8
word"pulsed"
count1
9
word"footfall"
count1
10
word"anticipation"
count1
11
word"tracing"
count1
12
word"crystal"
count1
13
word"echo"
count1
14
word"searing"
count1
15
word"resolved"
count1
16
word"intricate"
count1
17
word"warmth"
count1
18
word"chill"
count2
19
word"raced"
count2
20
word"weight"
count1
21
word"churned"
count1
highlights
0"porcelain"
1"pulse"
2"whisper"
3"silence"
4"profound"
5"perfect"
6"sentinels"
7"shimmered"
8"pulsed"
9"footfall"
10"anticipation"
11"tracing"
12"crystal"
13"echo"
14"searing"
15"resolved"
16"intricate"
17"warmth"
18"chill"
19"raced"
20"weight"
21"churned"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences148
matches(empty)
27.03% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount10
narrationSentences148
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"tried to"
2"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences148
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen35
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans2
markdownWords2
totalWords1533
ratio0.001
matches
0"click"
1"stay"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions4
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions21
wordCount1516
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity0.46
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Richmond"
discoveredNames
Richmond2
Park2
Aurora7
Fae1
Grove1
London2
Heartstone2
Pendant2
Yu-Fei2
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Pendant"
2"Yu-Fei"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"Fae"
3"Grove"
4"London"
globalScore1
windowScore1
9.81% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences107
glossingSentenceCount6
matches
0"felt like a pressure against her eardru"
1"looked like fresh blood drops, violets so"
2"vibration that seemed to rise from the earth itself"
3"looked like polished obsidian claws"
4"felt like the bait in a trap"
5"felt like a violation"
0.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches6
per1kWords3.914
wordCount1533
matches
0"Not the damp earth and rot of a London autumn, but something older, thicker"
1"Not a grand henge, but five rough-hewn megaliths arranged in a loose ring, their su"
2"Not move, but gather, like ink dropped in water, forming a shape"
3"Not with a sound, but with a scent"
4"Not a full body, but a limb"
5"not with the limb, but with the pendant, driving it into the soft moss"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences148
matches(empty)
97.64% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs36
mean42.58
std20.94
cv0.492
sampleLengths
072
193
252
314
462
544
652
753
854
95
1051
1117
1287
1334
1426
1531
1637
1722
1820
1954
2049
215
2243
2370
2470
2529
2657
2724
2844
2933
3036
3121
3235
3363
3426
3548
86.30% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount8
totalSentences148
matches
0"been snipped"
1"been wilted"
2"was swallowed"
3"been seemed"
4"was gone"
5"was blocked"
6"was gone"
7"been seven"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs243
matches
0"was definitely pointing"
65.64% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount5
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences148
ratio0.027
matches
0"The usual city hum—the distant drone of traffic, a siren’s wail—had been snipped away, leaving a silence so profound it felt like a pressure against her eardrums."
1"Between them, wildflowers bloomed in impossible profusion—ghostly white foxglove, crimson campion that looked like fresh blood drops, violets so deep they seemed to drink the moonlight."
2"Shapes darted at the periphery of her sight—glimpses of something pale and swift, a flash of an eye that reflected no light, a suggestion of too many fingers trailing through the wildflowers."
3"The shapes were more defined now—gaunt, elongated, their outlines constantly shifting, like smoke given form."
99.54% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1530
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount62
adverbRatio0.040522875816993466
lyAdverbCount18
lyAdverbRatio0.011764705882352941
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences148
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences148
mean10.36
std7.34
cv0.709
sampleLengths
016
126
28
322
47
520
613
725
823
93
102
115
1214
136
1427
1514
1613
1714
1826
196
203
217
2227
2310
2411
255
268
2721
287
2910
3013
315
327
338
341
359
365
372
3810
3928
405
414
425
433
4427
458
4613
4710
483
494
32.43% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats26
diversityRatio0.27702702702702703
totalSentences148
uniqueOpeners41
47.96% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences139
matches
0"Just the silent, staring stones"
1"Then she heard the whisper."
ratio0.014
61.73% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount55
totalSentences139
matches
0"She pocketed the phone, letting"
1"She’d come here because of"
2"He’d looked at her then,"
3"She pushed through a final"
4"It was smaller than she’d"
5"They should have been wilted,"
6"They were vibrant."
7"Her boots made no sound"
8"She unclasped it, holding it"
9"It was definitely pointing toward"
10"She waited, her breathing controlled,"
11"She took a step forward."
12"It wasn’t unpleasant, at first."
13"It felt like anticipation."
14"It wasn’t words."
15"It was the sound of"
16"It came from everywhere and"
17"She stopped at the ring"
18"Her voice sounded flat, dead"
19"It didn’t echo."
ratio0.396
64.32% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount110
totalSentences139
matches
0"The path through Richmond Park"
1"The map on her phone"
2"She pocketed the phone, letting"
3"She’d come here because of"
4"Yu-Fei had laughed when she’d"
5"He’d looked at her then,"
6"A hidden place."
7"The usual city hum—the distant"
8"She pushed through a final"
9"It was smaller than she’d"
10"They should have been wilted,"
11"They were vibrant."
12"Her boots made no sound"
13"The Heartstone Pendant pulsed a"
14"A warning, or a welcome?"
15"She unclasped it, holding it"
16"The deep crimson gem seemed"
17"It was definitely pointing toward"
18"A twig snapped somewhere in"
19"Aurora froze, her hand dropping"
ratio0.791
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount3
totalSentences139
matches
0"Now, the air smelled wrong."
1"To her left, between two"
2"If she tried to focus"
ratio0.022
55.14% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences57
technicalSentenceCount7
matches
0"Between them, wildflowers bloomed in impossible profusion—ghostly white foxglove, crimson campion that looked like fresh blood drops, violets so deep they seeme…"
1"With each footfall towards the centre, the pendant’s glow brightened, and a low hum started in her teeth, a vibration that seemed to rise from the earth itself."
2"Shapes darted at the periphery of her sight—glimpses of something pale and swift, a flash of an eye that reflected no light, a suggestion of too many fingers tr…"
3"As her fingers closed around the now-cold gemstone, the low hum in her teeth exploded into a shriek of sound, audible and silent all at once, a psychic blast th…"
4"One paused, and she saw a suggestion of a face, smooth and featureless as a river stone, with a mouth that was a black, vertical slit."
5"It was pale as birchwood, jointed in too many places, ending in a hand with fingers that were long, delicate, and tipped with what looked like polished obsidian…"
6"She stomped down with all her weight, her boot connecting not with the limb, but with the pendant, driving it into the soft moss and earth."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags3
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
77.8999%