| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 31 | | adverbTagCount | 2 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Miller pointed back [back]" | | 1 | "Quinn said suddenly [suddenly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 69 | | tagDensity | 0.449 | | leniency | 0.899 | | rawRatio | 0.065 | | effectiveRatio | 0.058 | |
| 83.82% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1545 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 5 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "perfectly" | | 1 | "softly" | | 2 | "slightly" | | 3 | "nervously" | | 4 | "suddenly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 44.98% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1545 | | totalAiIsms | 17 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "scanning" | | 1 | "etched" | | 2 | "charm" | | 3 | "otherworldly" | | 4 | "tension" | | 5 | "silence" | | 6 | "unreadable" | | 7 | "shimmered" | | 8 | "wavered" | | 9 | "complex" | | 10 | "electric" | | 11 | "weight" |
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| 66.67% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 2 | | maxInWindow | 2 | | found | | 0 | | label | "eyes widened/narrowed" | | count | 2 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 95 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 95 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 132 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 45 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1541 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 24 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 72 | | wordCount | 1011 | | uniqueNames | 13 | | maxNameDensity | 2.97 | | worstName | "Quinn" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 5.5 | | worstWindowName | "Quinn" | | discoveredNames | | Tube | 1 | | Detective | 1 | | Harlow | 1 | | Quinn | 30 | | Miller | 10 | | Quin | 3 | | Veil | 4 | | Market | 2 | | Morris | 2 | | Compass | 2 | | Thorne | 14 | | Chief | 1 | | Inspector | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Harlow" | | 1 | "Quinn" | | 2 | "Miller" | | 3 | "Quin" | | 4 | "Market" | | 5 | "Morris" | | 6 | "Compass" | | 7 | "Thorne" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.016 | | windowScore | 0 | |
| 75.37% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 67 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "graffiti that seemed to writhe in the dim light" | | 1 | "as if checking for eavesdroppers" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.649 | | wordCount | 1541 | | matches | | 0 | "Not toward the exit, but deeper into the abandoned station" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 132 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 61 | | mean | 25.26 | | std | 13.83 | | cv | 0.547 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 66 | | 1 | 15 | | 2 | 29 | | 3 | 35 | | 4 | 52 | | 5 | 8 | | 6 | 30 | | 7 | 7 | | 8 | 14 | | 9 | 10 | | 10 | 21 | | 11 | 45 | | 12 | 6 | | 13 | 15 | | 14 | 43 | | 15 | 19 | | 16 | 14 | | 17 | 45 | | 18 | 8 | | 19 | 58 | | 20 | 26 | | 21 | 8 | | 22 | 29 | | 23 | 50 | | 24 | 44 | | 25 | 20 | | 26 | 25 | | 27 | 26 | | 28 | 34 | | 29 | 21 | | 30 | 10 | | 31 | 30 | | 32 | 24 | | 33 | 22 | | 34 | 31 | | 35 | 17 | | 36 | 13 | | 37 | 21 | | 38 | 9 | | 39 | 16 | | 40 | 8 | | 41 | 11 | | 42 | 12 | | 43 | 26 | | 44 | 19 | | 45 | 38 | | 46 | 28 | | 47 | 21 | | 48 | 28 | | 49 | 43 |
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| 97.88% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 95 | | matches | | 0 | "been tempered" | | 1 | "been forced" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 185 | | matches | | 0 | "were dealing" | | 1 | "were coming" |
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| 56.28% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 4 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 4 | | totalSentences | 132 | | ratio | 0.03 | | matches | | 0 | "She noticed something Miller had missed—a faint shimmer in the air near the victim, like heat rising off pavement on a summer day." | | 1 | "She called it the Veil Compass—a souvenir from a case two years ago that had left more questions than answers." | | 2 | "\"Not all of them,\" Quinn murmured, her eyes catching something in the corner of her vision—a faint, shimmering trail that led deeper into the abandoned station." | | 3 | "The symbols were unfamiliar to her, but the energy in the air was unmistakable—cold, electric, and thrumming with power." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1018 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 36 | | adverbRatio | 0.03536345776031434 | | lyAdverbCount | 15 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.014734774066797643 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 132 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 132 | | mean | 11.67 | | std | 7.42 | | cv | 0.635 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 17 | | 1 | 25 | | 2 | 24 | | 3 | 15 | | 4 | 15 | | 5 | 14 | | 6 | 19 | | 7 | 12 | | 8 | 4 | | 9 | 21 | | 10 | 8 | | 11 | 23 | | 12 | 3 | | 13 | 5 | | 14 | 11 | | 15 | 6 | | 16 | 13 | | 17 | 4 | | 18 | 3 | | 19 | 14 | | 20 | 4 | | 21 | 6 | | 22 | 11 | | 23 | 6 | | 24 | 4 | | 25 | 45 | | 26 | 3 | | 27 | 3 | | 28 | 3 | | 29 | 12 | | 30 | 3 | | 31 | 9 | | 32 | 5 | | 33 | 19 | | 34 | 2 | | 35 | 5 | | 36 | 12 | | 37 | 7 | | 38 | 2 | | 39 | 12 | | 40 | 22 | | 41 | 23 | | 42 | 8 | | 43 | 9 | | 44 | 22 | | 45 | 20 | | 46 | 7 | | 47 | 16 | | 48 | 10 | | 49 | 8 |
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| 70.45% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 2 | | diversityRatio | 0.4318181818181818 | | totalSentences | 132 | | uniqueOpeners | 57 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 86 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 18 | | totalSentences | 86 | | matches | | 0 | "Her sensible shoes made soft" | | 1 | "His youthful enthusiasm still hadn't" | | 2 | "She pointed with her gloved" | | 3 | "Her eyes were wide open," | | 4 | "She gestured to the victim's" | | 5 | "She stood, pulling out her" | | 6 | "She glanced at her watch," | | 7 | "It felt like a lifetime." | | 8 | "She noticed something Miller had" | | 9 | "She reached into her pocket" | | 10 | "She called it the Veil" | | 11 | "They were tall, with broad" | | 12 | "She knew that voice, though" | | 13 | "he said, his voice softer" | | 14 | "She didn't trust the Chief" | | 15 | "She'd never accepted the official" | | 16 | "It led them to a" | | 17 | "She knew this was only" |
| | ratio | 0.209 | |
| 23.95% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 75 | | totalSentences | 86 | | matches | | 0 | "The air in the abandoned" | | 1 | "Her sensible shoes made soft" | | 2 | "Quinn turned to see DS" | | 3 | "His youthful enthusiasm still hadn't" | | 4 | "Quinn replied, her voice low" | | 5 | "She pointed with her gloved" | | 6 | "A young woman lay sprawled" | | 7 | "Her eyes were wide open," | | 8 | "The coroner would have to" | | 9 | "Miller whistled softly." | | 10 | "Quinn said, crouching down for" | | 11 | "She gestured to the victim's" | | 12 | "Miller leaned in closer." | | 13 | "The younger officer frowned." | | 14 | "Quinn admitted, though she kept" | | 15 | "She stood, pulling out her" | | 16 | "Miller pointed back the way" | | 17 | "Quin's eyes narrowed." | | 18 | "Quin's jaw tightened." | | 19 | "This victim had access to" |
| | ratio | 0.872 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 86 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 37 | | technicalSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "She glanced at her watch, a worn leather timepiece that had been a gift from her late partner, Morris." | | 1 | "This was the work of someone who understood the hidden forces that lurked beneath the surface of their world." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 31 | | uselessAdditionCount | 9 | | matches | | 0 | "Quinn replied, her voice low and raspy from too many sleepless nights" | | 1 | "Quinn murmured, more to herself than to Miller" | | 2 | "Quinn countered, her eyes scanning the platform" | | 3 | "Thorne replied, his eyes scanning the corridor as if checking for eavesdroppers" | | 4 | "Quinn shot back, her voice rising slightly" | | 5 | "Thorne said, though his tone suggested otherwise" | | 6 | "he said, his voice softer now" | | 7 | "Thorne encouraged, though his expression remained unreadable" | | 8 | "Thorne observed, his voice tight with tension" |
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| 19.57% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 24 | | fancyCount | 9 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Quinn admitted (admit)" | | 1 | "Quinn murmured (murmur)" | | 2 | "Quinn ordered (order)" | | 3 | "Thorne encouraged (encourage)" | | 4 | "Quinn conceded (concede)" | | 5 | "Thorne admitted (admit)" | | 6 | "Quinn murmured (murmur)" | | 7 | "Thorne observed (observe)" | | 8 | "Quinn corrected (correct)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 69 | | tagDensity | 0.348 | | leniency | 0.696 | | rawRatio | 0.375 | | effectiveRatio | 0.261 | |