Run: 2026-04-24-01KQ07DN5E8K4VH6T9M052760S

Run Details

Duration:
51.6s
Cost:
$0.007435
Provider:
Xiaomi

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The third deadbolt scraped. Rory held her breath, knuckles white on the peeling paint of the door. Lucien Moreau stood on the landing, his tailored charcoal suit a dark stain against the grimy hallway. The single bare bulb above the stairs caught the stark contrast of his eyes—one amber, one black—and the sharp line of his platinum hair. He held his ivory-handled cane loosely, but his posture was a study in relaxed readiness. A ghost from her past, smelling faintly of expensive cologne and damp London night. “Rory.” His voice was a low, familiar rasp. It curled around her name, making it sound like something worth possessing. Her brain, usually quick and out-of-the-box, stalled. She cataloged details in a flinch: the smudge of mud on his left loafer, the faint tremor in the hand not holding the cane, the way his gaze swept past her into the cluttered flat, missing nothing. Books and scrolls teetered on every surface. Ptolemy, Eva’s tabby, arched his back on the sofa. “How did you find this place?” she finally managed, her own voice a clipped thing. “A friend told me you might know the whereabouts of a certain grimoire.” He didn’t move to enter, but his presence filled the doorway, pressing against her. “She failed to mention the… floral ambiance of the neighbourhood.” It was a deflection. They both knew it. The last time she’d seen him, three months ago, she’d thrown a glass of single malt at his head in this very flat. He’d ducked. The amber liquid had soaked a stack of Eva’s notes on astral projection. “I don’t have your book, Lucien.” Her hand stayed on the door. A shield. “I didn’t come for a book.” He shifted his weight, and for a second, the hard mask of the information broker slipped. She saw the man she’d met at a underground auction, the one who’d made her laugh with dry commentary on a counterfeit Babylonian tablet, the one whose hand had felt startlingly right on the small of her back as they navigated a crush of supernatural bodies. “May I come in? It’s rather uncivilized, conducting our history in a corridor that smells of bin runoff and regret.” History. Such a small word for the knot of attraction, betrayal, and cold silence he’d left behind. She’d trusted him with the secret of her mundane life—delivery driver, flat above a bar—and he’d used the information to track a bounty, leading a nest of very angry vampires right to Silas’s doorstep. He’d had his reasons. Lucien always had reasons. They were just never good enough. She stepped back, a grudging surrender. “You have five minutes. Eva’s not here.” He entered, and the flat shrank. He moved with a predator’s grace, the cane a silent counterpoint on the threadbare carpet. He didn’t take the sofa, choosing instead the sturdy wooden chair by the research table, its back to the wall. A strategic position. He rested the cane against the table leg. “Eva is in Prague, chasing whispers of the Freemasons’ ghost map. You know this.” He watched her close the deadbolts, one by one. The clicks were loud in the quiet. Of course he knew. He knew everything. It was his currency. “So you’re here to… what? Check on me? That’s not our arrangement.” “Perhaps I missed your charming disposition.” A faint, mocking smile touched his lips. It didn’t reach his eyes. The black one seemed to absorb the dim light. “Or perhaps I am concerned. You have been… conspicuously absent from the usual haunts. No deliveries to the Golden Empress after dark. No favors called in for your friend, the fixer with the pretty eyes.” Her spine stiffened. “I’ve been busy.” “With what?” He leaned forward, elbows on his knees. The movement pulled his jacket taut across his shoulders. “Rory, the last time I saw you, you were furious. Righteously so. You broke a rather fine crystal tumbler. And then you vanished. It has the unpleasant feeling of a pattern. First the ex in Cardiff—Evan, was it?—who made you run. Now me. Who is making you hide this time?” The mention of Evan was a precise, cruel twist of the knife. He knew how to find the wound. Her left hand instinctively went to her right wrist, rubbing the small, crescent-shaped scar there—a childhood fall from a tree, not Evan’s doing, but the gesture was a nervous habit born from those later days. “Don’t,” she whispered. It came out broken. His expression didn’t soften, but it changed. The analytical mask cracked, and underneath was something raw and frustrated. “Then tell me. Tell me to leave, and I will. But do not lie to me and say you are ‘busy.’ You are scared. And I would like to know of what.” The question hung there, thick and dangerous. The cat, Ptolemy, jumped down from the sofa and wound between Lucien’s ankles. He reached down without looking, stroking the tabby’s head with a sure touch. The contrast—the half-demon, the killer, the liar, gently scratching a purring cat—undid something in her chest. “Not of what,” she said, her voice barely audible. “Of whom.” His hand stilled on the cat. “Tell me.” She sank onto the sofa, the worn springs protesting. “There were… visitors. A week ago. At the restaurant. Asking questions. Not the usual hungry ghouls or curious shifters. Men. Well-dressed. They had a stillness about them. A human stillness, but cold.” Lucien’s jaw tightened. “What did they ask?” “About a woman matching my description. Seen near the Leytonstone circle, the night that wraith was unbound.” She met his gaze, the blue of her own eyes burning with a familiar, defiant anger. “The wraith you were hired to bind. The job you were on when you used my delivery route as a shortcut, and those vamps followed you home.” A muscle flickered in his temple. “I dealt with the vampires.” “Not the consequences.” She leaned forward, mirroring his earlier posture. “These men… they didn’t smell of magic. They smelled of money. Old money. And they were asking for ‘Malphora.’” The name—her old alias, the one she’d used in those early, reckless days dipping her toes into London’s supernatural underbelly—landed between them like a stone. It was a name she’d used before she met Lucien, a name she’d retired. The fact that they knew it meant they’d done deep research. It meant they were serious. Lucien was very still. The playful, mocking energy was gone, replaced by a sharp, lethal focus. “Describe them.” She did. The cut of their suits, the signet ring on the leader’s little finger, the way one of them had tapped his glass twice on the bar—a ritualistic gesture, she thought now, in hindsight. When she finished, Lucien didn’t speak. He stood, the movement fluid and silent, and walked to the window, peering down at the bustling street below. He rested his forehead against the cool glass. “The Corben family,” he said, his voice flat. “Old aristocratic line. They believe themselves custodians of certain… arcane lineages. They collect bloodlines. They would see a woman of your… particular talents, wandering unprotected, as either an asset to acquire or a threat to neutralize.” “And the name ‘Malphora’?” Her heart was hammering. “It means ‘twice-touched.’ In their dialect. A human with a flicker of something else. Something latent. Something they would want to study. Or breed.” He turned from the window, and the look in his eyes was one she’d never seen before—a terrible, grim understanding. “They found you because of me. Because I was seen with you. Because I made a point of being seen with you, to mark you as under my protection. It seems I only painted a target on your back.” He didn’t apologize. Lucien never apologized. But the admission, stark and unadorned, was its own form of reckoning. “So what now?” she asked, the anger draining out of her, leaving a weary cold. “Now,” he said, walking back towards her. He stopped just in front of the sofa, looming, his heterochromatic gaze fixed on her face. “Now you do not vanish. Now you do not hide alone in this… book cave.” He gestured vaguely at the chaos of Eva’s research. “Now you accept that you are entangled, Rory. With me. With this world. And that running only makes the hunters faster.” He held out his hand, not to help her up, but as a statement. An offering. Or a demand. She looked at his hand—long fingers, clean nails, the faint scar across his knuckles from that vampire incident. Then she looked at his face, at the fierce, complicated thing burning there that was more than just professional concern. The door was still locked. The city hummed outside. The future had just narrowed to a single, dangerous path, and he stood at the fork, hand outstretched. “Five minutes were up a long time ago, Lucien,” she said, her voice rough. “I know.” His hand didn’t waver. “So tell me to go. Or take my hand and help me figure out what unfinished business the Corben family thinks they have with you. With us.” The ‘us’ hung in the air, charged and unresolved. Her fingers twitched. Ptolemy meowed, a tiny, decisive sound in the silence. Her own hand rose, slow and deliberate, and slid into his. His grip was immediate, firm, and cool. He didn’t pull her up. He just held on, anchoring her in the storm that had just blown through her door. “Alright,” Aurora Carter breathed out. “But I’m going to need a drink.” A ghost of his former smile returned, dangerous and real. “I know where Silas keeps the good stuff.”
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags18
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"He gestured vaguely [vaguely]"
dialogueSentences43
tagDensity0.419
leniency0.837
rawRatio0.056
effectiveRatio0.047
84.61% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1624
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"loosely"
count1
1
adverb"very"
count3
2
adverb"gently"
count1
highlights
0"loosely"
1"very"
2"gently"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
50.74% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1624
totalAiIsms16
found
0
word"stark"
count2
1
word"familiar"
count2
2
word"cataloged"
count1
3
word"weight"
count1
4
word"navigated"
count1
5
word"silence"
count2
6
word"predator"
count1
7
word"sturdy"
count1
8
word"crystal"
count1
9
word"flickered"
count1
10
word"flicker"
count1
11
word"looming"
count1
12
word"charged"
count1
highlights
0"stark"
1"familiar"
2"cataloged"
3"weight"
4"navigated"
5"silence"
6"predator"
7"sturdy"
8"crystal"
9"flickered"
10"flicker"
11"looming"
12"charged"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences104
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences104
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences126
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen51
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1611
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions18
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions22
wordCount1063
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity0.75
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Moreau1
London2
Eva3
Babylonian1
Silas1
Evan2
Ptolemy3
Lucien8
Carter1
persons
0"Moreau"
1"Eva"
2"Silas"
3"Evan"
4"Ptolemy"
5"Lucien"
6"Carter"
places
0"London"
globalScore1
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences70
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
75.85% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.241
wordCount1611
matches
0"not Evan’s doing, but the gesture was a nervous habit born from those later days"
1"not to help her up, but as a statement"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences126
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs47
mean34.28
std22.11
cv0.645
sampleLengths
017
170
220
360
415
537
646
714
888
965
1013
1152
1230
1323
1462
156
1668
1754
187
1950
2049
2111
228
2341
247
2560
2611
2729
2855
2918
3035
3133
3244
338
3483
3518
3615
3768
3819
3938
4027
4114
4233
4321
4439
4512
4618
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences104
matches
0"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs174
matches
0"was hammering"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount12
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences8
totalSentences126
ratio0.063
matches
0"The single bare bulb above the stairs caught the stark contrast of his eyes—one amber, one black—and the sharp line of his platinum hair."
1"She’d trusted him with the secret of her mundane life—delivery driver, flat above a bar—and he’d used the information to track a bounty, leading a nest of very angry vampires right to Silas’s doorstep."
2"Her left hand instinctively went to her right wrist, rubbing the small, crescent-shaped scar there—a childhood fall from a tree, not Evan’s doing, but the gesture was a nervous habit born from those later days."
3"The contrast—the half-demon, the killer, the liar, gently scratching a purring cat—undid something in her chest."
4"The name—her old alias, the one she’d used in those early, reckless days dipping her toes into London’s supernatural underbelly—landed between them like a stone."
5"The cut of their suits, the signet ring on the leader’s little finger, the way one of them had tapped his glass twice on the bar—a ritualistic gesture, she thought now, in hindsight."
6"“It means ‘twice-touched.’ In their dialect. A human with a flicker of something else. Something latent. Something they would want to study. Or breed.” He turned from the window, and the look in his eyes was one she’d never seen before—a terrible, grim understanding."
7"She looked at his hand—long fingers, clean nails, the faint scar across his knuckles from that vampire incident."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1024
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount35
adverbRatio0.0341796875
lyAdverbCount11
lyAdverbRatio0.0107421875
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences126
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences126
mean12.79
std10.57
cv0.827
sampleLengths
04
113
217
324
415
514
68
712
87
937
107
119
1215
1327
1410
154
164
1723
182
1913
2012
212
2222
2346
2420
251
2616
2734
284
294
306
316
327
336
3415
3520
363
378
3823
397
404
413
424
4312
4413
455
469
4735
483
493
47.88% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.3253968253968254
totalSentences126
uniqueOpeners41
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences97
matches
0"Such a small word for"
1"Of course he knew."
2"Then she looked at his"
ratio0.031
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount57
totalSentences97
matches
0"He held his ivory-handled cane"
1"His voice was a low,"
2"It curled around her name,"
3"Her brain, usually quick and"
4"She cataloged details in a"
5"she finally managed, her own"
6"He didn’t move to enter,"
7"It was a deflection."
8"They both knew it."
9"Her hand stayed on the"
10"He shifted his weight, and"
11"She saw the man she’d"
12"She’d trusted him with the"
13"He’d had his reasons."
14"They were just never good"
15"She stepped back, a grudging"
16"He entered, and the flat"
17"He moved with a predator’s"
18"He didn’t take the sofa,"
19"He rested the cane against"
ratio0.588
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount91
totalSentences97
matches
0"The third deadbolt scraped."
1"Rory held her breath, knuckles"
2"Lucien Moreau stood on the"
3"The single bare bulb above"
4"He held his ivory-handled cane"
5"A ghost from her past,"
6"His voice was a low,"
7"It curled around her name,"
8"Her brain, usually quick and"
9"She cataloged details in a"
10"Books and scrolls teetered on"
11"Ptolemy, Eva’s tabby, arched his"
12"she finally managed, her own"
13"He didn’t move to enter,"
14"It was a deflection."
15"They both knew it."
16"The last time she’d seen"
17"The amber liquid had soaked"
18"Her hand stayed on the"
19"He shifted his weight, and"
ratio0.938
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences97
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences35
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"It curled around her name, making it sound like something worth possessing."
1"Then she looked at his face, at the fierce, complicated thing burning there that was more than just professional concern."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags18
uselessAdditionCount5
matches
0"He didn’t, but his presence filled the doorway, pressing against her"
1"she said, her voice barely audible"
2"he said, his voice flat"
3"she asked, the anger draining out of her, leaving a weary cold"
4"she said, her voice rough"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags7
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"she whispered (whisper)"
1"Aurora Carter breathed (breathe)"
dialogueSentences43
tagDensity0.163
leniency0.326
rawRatio0.286
effectiveRatio0.093
78.0805%