Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences
105
glossingSentenceCount
13
matches
0
"percussion that seemed to echo the ticking of her own heart"
1
"rumble that seemed to soften the tension in the air"
2
"something like remorse"
3
"as if saying them aloud might break something fragile within her"
4
"tasted like rain and danger, the night th"
5
"teacup that seemed to stare at both of them like an accusation"
6
"sound that seemed to drain the air of its weight"
7
"skin that seemed to echo the beat of her heart"
8
"as if urging her forward"
9
"as if approving the truce"
10
"as if acknowledging the small, hopeful shift"
11
"sound that seemed to dissolve the lingering tension—then slipped the parchment into her bag, the scar on her wrist tingling as if acknowledging the small, hopeful shift"
12
"heartbeat that seemed to swell within her chest"
13
"shadows that seemed to knit themselves together, forming a new shape, a new story, waiting to be told"
"She had expected the usual clutter—stacks of tattered spellbooks, a rabbit‑skin notebook bristling with handwritten marginalia, a teacup half‑filled with cold tea that had been forgotten on a low table."
1
"She turned, half‑turned, Eyer—her bright blue ones flashing with a blend of anger and something softer, a undertow she’d never managed to name."
2
"“I thought I was protecting you.” He placed a hand—still in his suit, all crisp—against the edge of the table, fingertips grazing a vellum that bore a faint, faded sigil."
3
"Aurora’s heart kicked up a sudden rhythm, as if the scar on her wrist—long dormant—had been woken by the memory of his touch, the memory of a kiss stolen in a back alley when the city’s neon lights flickered against damp bricks."
4
"Something in his confession—a sliver of honesty—cut through the armor she’d built."
5
"Aurora felt a cascade of memories: late nights studying law together at Cardiff, the way his laugh had filled the cramped library; the taste of cheap wine on a cracked balcony as they argued about fate; the moment their lips had brushed, igniting a fire that both of them had tried to smother with excuses and pride."
6
"Aurora laughed—a soft sound that seemed to dissolve the lingering tension—then slipped the parchment into her bag, the scar on her wrist tingling as if acknowledging the small, hopeful shift."
7
"As he removed his coat, the scent of sandalwood and faint ozone—remnants of his demonic lineage—filled the room, mingling with the lingering curry aromas from below."
8
"Their eyes locked—her bright blue, his amber and black—each reflecting a different story, a different longing."
9
"Inside, the candle flickered, casting dancing shadows on the walls—shadows that seemed to knit themselves together, forming a new shape, a new story, waiting to be told."
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences
80
technicalSentenceCount
20
matches
0
"She had expected the usual clutter—stacks of tattered spellbooks, a rabbit‑skin notebook bristling with handwritten marginalia, a teacup half‑filled with cold t…"
1
"Lucien Moreau lingered in the doorway, a figure of polished menace wrapped in a charcoal suit that seemed cut from night itself."
2
"One eye glittered amber, the other a void of black, and they both fixed on her with a quiet intensity that made her pulse flicker against the scar on her left w…"
3
"He stepped forward, the cane clicking against the floor, an elegant percussion that seemed to echo the ticking of her own heart."
4
"Aurora could feel the scar on her wrist throbbing, as if it sensed the danger in his proximity."
5
"The cat, sensing the shift in the room’s energy, padded back onto the table, its whiskers twitching as it sniffed at the parchment."
6
"He lowered his cane, the ivory handle clicking against the wooden floor, a tiny sound that seemed too loud in the hush that followed."
7
"Aurora’s heart kicked up a sudden rhythm, as if the scar on her wrist—long dormant—had been woken by the memory of his touch, the memory of a kiss stolen in a b…"
8
"She glanced at the scattered books, at the meticulous notes Eva had left about ley lines and shadows, at the empty teacup that seemed to stare at both of them l…"
9
"Her hand brushed over the scar, feeling the faint raised line, a tactile reminder of the small pain that could become a wound if she let it."
10
"Lucien took a slow breath, his chest rising and falling in a rhythm that seemed almost human despite the demon half that lurked beneath his skin."
11
"The cat, unaware of the gravitas, licked its paw, a soft sound that punctuated the charged silence."
12
"The scar on her wrist pulsed, a quiet throb against her skin that seemed to echo the beat of her heart."
13
"Her pulse raced, the bright blue of her eyes reflecting the candlelight, turning it into a storm of sapphire."
14
"Aurora hesitated for a heartbeat, the scar throbbing as if urging her forward."
15
"She lifted her hand, her fingers brushing his, the contact fleeting yet electric."
16
"The cat, Ptolemy, hopped onto the table, padding his furry paws over the vellum, his whiskers twitching as if approving the truce."
17
"Aurora laughed—a soft sound that seemed to dissolve the lingering tension—then slipped the parchment into her bag, the scar on her wrist tingling as if acknowle…"
18
"She also thought of the stranger who had been her enemy, her confidant, her almost‑lover."
19
"Inside, the candle flickered, casting dancing shadows on the walls—shadows that seemed to knit themselves together, forming a new shape, a new story, waiting to…"