| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 6 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 7 | | tagDensity | 0.857 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 883 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 883 | | totalAiIsms | 19 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "loomed" | | 1 | "silence" | | 2 | "pulse" | | 3 | "warmth" | | 4 | "vibrated" | | 5 | "footsteps" | | 6 | "oppressive" | | 7 | "familiar" | | 8 | "pulsed" | | 9 | "echoed" | | 10 | "racing" | | 11 | "pounding" | | 12 | "could feel" | | 13 | "weight" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 2 | | narrationSentences | 82 | | matches | | 0 | "d with fear" | | 1 | "d with urgency" |
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| 55.75% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 5 | | narrationSentences | 82 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 83 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 38 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 1 | | markdownWords | 6 | | totalWords | 880 | | ratio | 0.007 | | matches | | 0 | "Go away. Leave now. They're waiting." |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 6 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 31 | | wordCount | 816 | | uniqueNames | 13 | | maxNameDensity | 0.86 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Grove" | | discoveredNames | | Heartstone | 1 | | Richmond | 2 | | Fae | 3 | | Grove | 6 | | Isolde | 4 | | Golden | 1 | | Empress | 1 | | Moonflowers | 2 | | Tonight | 1 | | London | 1 | | Cardiff | 1 | | Rory | 7 | | Park | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Isolde" | | 1 | "Moonflowers" | | 2 | "Tonight" | | 3 | "Rory" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Fae" | | 2 | "Grove" | | 3 | "London" | | 4 | "Cardiff" | | 5 | "Park" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 59.09% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 55 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "leaves that seemed to form words on the wind" | | 1 | "trees that seemed to shift position, creating a maze with no exit" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 880 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 83 | | matches | | |
| 78.10% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 24 | | mean | 36.67 | | std | 15.52 | | cv | 0.423 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 61 | | 1 | 62 | | 2 | 54 | | 3 | 50 | | 4 | 47 | | 5 | 9 | | 6 | 21 | | 7 | 36 | | 8 | 26 | | 9 | 53 | | 10 | 45 | | 11 | 41 | | 12 | 14 | | 13 | 26 | | 14 | 27 | | 15 | 13 | | 16 | 39 | | 17 | 40 | | 18 | 36 | | 19 | 29 | | 20 | 9 | | 21 | 45 | | 22 | 51 | | 23 | 46 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 82 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 135 | | matches | | |
| 39.59% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 3 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 3 | | totalSentences | 83 | | ratio | 0.036 | | matches | | 0 | "This wasn't her first time at Richmond's Fae Grove, but the air tonight tasted wrong—thick with decay and something ancient stirring beneath the wildflowers that bloomed year-round." | | 1 | "Childhood memories flooded back—falling into rose bushes, her mother's panicked cries, the sharp sting of thorns digging into her skin." | | 2 | "The moon had moved—or perhaps she had been in the Grove longer than she realized." |
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| 88.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 723 | | adjectiveStacks | 2 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "small crescent-shaped scar" | | 1 | "same sickly green light." |
| | adverbCount | 24 | | adverbRatio | 0.03319502074688797 | | lyAdverbCount | 11 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.015214384508990318 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 83 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 83 | | mean | 10.6 | | std | 7.22 | | cv | 0.681 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 14 | | 1 | 20 | | 2 | 27 | | 3 | 21 | | 4 | 13 | | 5 | 24 | | 6 | 4 | | 7 | 10 | | 8 | 22 | | 9 | 22 | | 10 | 14 | | 11 | 16 | | 12 | 11 | | 13 | 9 | | 14 | 4 | | 15 | 13 | | 16 | 20 | | 17 | 7 | | 18 | 1 | | 19 | 2 | | 20 | 9 | | 21 | 2 | | 22 | 13 | | 23 | 2 | | 24 | 2 | | 25 | 2 | | 26 | 22 | | 27 | 14 | | 28 | 11 | | 29 | 3 | | 30 | 2 | | 31 | 10 | | 32 | 10 | | 33 | 16 | | 34 | 13 | | 35 | 4 | | 36 | 10 | | 37 | 8 | | 38 | 1 | | 39 | 11 | | 40 | 4 | | 41 | 21 | | 42 | 5 | | 43 | 4 | | 44 | 17 | | 45 | 15 | | 46 | 14 | | 47 | 6 | | 48 | 6 | | 49 | 14 |
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| 67.87% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 7 | | diversityRatio | 0.4578313253012048 | | totalSentences | 83 | | uniqueOpeners | 38 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 5 | | totalSentences | 72 | | matches | | 0 | "Only the rustle of leaves" | | 1 | "Only the endless expanse of" | | 2 | "Too many faces." | | 3 | "Too many eyes." | | 4 | "All fixed on her." |
| | ratio | 0.069 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 12 | | totalSentences | 72 | | matches | | 0 | "She'd come at Isolde's behest," | | 1 | "She moved deeper into the" | | 2 | "It had been quiet for" | | 3 | "Her voice sounded thin in" | | 4 | "It moved when she moved," | | 5 | "She'd been through this grove" | | 6 | "She stumbled into a small" | | 7 | "They were black, their centers" | | 8 | "Their laughter echoed through the" | | 9 | "She wasn't sure it would" | | 10 | "She turned and fled, the" | | 11 | "She reached the standing stones," |
| | ratio | 0.167 | |
| 98.89% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 52 | | totalSentences | 72 | | matches | | 0 | "The ancient oak standing stones" | | 1 | "Aurora adjusted the strap of" | | 2 | "This wasn't her first time" | | 3 | "She'd come at Isolde's behest," | | 4 | "Isolde had warned, her breath" | | 5 | "Moonflowers only bloomed once a" | | 6 | "Tonight was that night." | | 7 | "Rory stepped between the standing" | | 8 | "The distant sounds of London" | | 9 | "The trees seemed to lean" | | 10 | "She moved deeper into the" | | 11 | "The pendant beneath her shirt" | | 12 | "It had been quiet for" | | 13 | "A twig snapped nearby." | | 14 | "Rory froze, hand instinctively going" | | 15 | "Childhood memories flooded back—falling into" | | 16 | "The sound came again, closer" | | 17 | "Her voice sounded thin in" | | 18 | "The moonflowers should be blooming" | | 19 | "A shadow detached itself from" |
| | ratio | 0.722 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 72 | | matches | | 0 | "Now it vibrated with urgency," | | 1 | "Now nothing looked familiar." |
| | ratio | 0.028 | |
| 65.64% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 37 | | technicalSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "The ancient oak standing stones loomed before her, their bark peeling like old skin." | | 1 | "This wasn't her first time at Richmond's Fae Grove, but the air tonight tasted wrong—thick with decay and something ancient stirring beneath the wildflowers tha…" | | 2 | "The moonflowers should be blooming by now, their petals unfurling in the moonlight, releasing their intoxicating scent that could reveal hidden truths." | | 3 | "The green light from the moonflowers intensified, casting long, distorted shadows that stretched toward her like grasping fingers." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 6 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "Isolde had, her breath ragged with fear" | | 1 | "one whispered, its voice seeming to come from all directions at once" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 4 | | fancyCount | 4 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Isolde had (have)" | | 1 | "one whispered (whisper)" | | 2 | "another voice chimed (chime)" | | 3 | "one hissed (hiss)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 7 | | tagDensity | 0.571 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 1 | |