| 75.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 8 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "she said aloud [aloud]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 9 | | tagDensity | 0.889 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.125 | | effectiveRatio | 0.125 | |
| 87.06% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1159 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "carefully" | | 1 | "very" | | 2 | "slowly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 9.40% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1159 | | totalAiIsms | 21 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "whisper" | | 1 | "familiar" | | 2 | "silence" | | 3 | "sentinels" | | 4 | "pulsed" | | 5 | "could feel" | | 6 | "footsteps" | | 7 | "ensure" | | 8 | "oppressive" | | 9 | "searing" | | 10 | "footfall" | | 11 | "weight" | | 12 | "throbbed" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 99 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 99.57% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 2 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 99 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 100 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 26 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1153 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 7 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 92.22% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 29 | | wordCount | 1125 | | uniqueNames | 9 | | maxNameDensity | 1.16 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 2 | | Park | 2 | | Aurora | 13 | | Carter | 1 | | Grove | 6 | | Eva | 2 | | Silas | 1 | | Heartstone | 1 | | November | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Aurora" | | 1 | "Carter" | | 2 | "Eva" | | 3 | "Silas" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Grove" |
| | globalScore | 0.922 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 32.35% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 85 | | glossingSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "moonlight that seemed to come from nowhere" | | 1 | "seemed farther away than they had been moments before" | | 2 | "felt like cold fingers" | | 3 | "as if remembering something it had forgotten" |
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| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 4 | | per1kWords | 3.469 | | wordCount | 1153 | | matches | | 0 | "Not words she could understand, but a susurration" | | 1 | "Not the skittering of leaves or the rustle of branches, but a clear, distinct footfall behind her" | | 2 | "Not a branch or a vine, but something" | | 3 | "Not in greeting, but in farewell" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 100 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 99.01% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 37 | | mean | 31.16 | | std | 15.47 | | cv | 0.497 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 74 | | 1 | 52 | | 2 | 47 | | 3 | 40 | | 4 | 19 | | 5 | 50 | | 6 | 50 | | 7 | 34 | | 8 | 49 | | 9 | 32 | | 10 | 51 | | 11 | 14 | | 12 | 34 | | 13 | 7 | | 14 | 38 | | 15 | 13 | | 16 | 39 | | 17 | 42 | | 18 | 30 | | 19 | 32 | | 20 | 13 | | 21 | 29 | | 22 | 3 | | 23 | 36 | | 24 | 8 | | 25 | 22 | | 26 | 11 | | 27 | 22 | | 28 | 26 | | 29 | 21 | | 30 | 19 | | 31 | 35 | | 32 | 12 | | 33 | 42 | | 34 | 29 | | 35 | 33 | | 36 | 45 |
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| 91.09% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 99 | | matches | | 0 | "was deserted" | | 1 | "was illuminated" | | 2 | "was sealed" | | 3 | "were meant" |
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| 25.48% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 5 | | totalVerbs | 191 | | matches | | 0 | "was burning" | | 1 | "was glowing" | | 2 | "was shifting" | | 3 | "was searing" | | 4 | "was shouting" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 6 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 6 | | totalSentences | 100 | | ratio | 0.06 | | matches | | 0 | "The path through the park was familiar enough—she'd made deliveries to the perimeter before." | | 1 | "The air smelled of damp earth and something else—cinnamon and ozone, like after a lightning strike." | | 2 | "She could feel the time distortion immediately—her watch showed midnight, but the stars in the sky were in positions that suggested dawn was hours away." | | 3 | "The base of the oak was marked with a crude carving—a spiral within a circle." | | 4 | "In the sudden silence, Aurora heard something new—a footstep." | | 5 | "The night air felt different here—normal." |
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| 88.18% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1136 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "small crescent-shaped scar" |
| | adverbCount | 53 | | adverbRatio | 0.04665492957746479 | | lyAdverbCount | 16 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.014084507042253521 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 100 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 100 | | mean | 11.53 | | std | 5.05 | | cv | 0.438 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 10 | | 1 | 14 | | 2 | 12 | | 3 | 20 | | 4 | 18 | | 5 | 18 | | 6 | 16 | | 7 | 18 | | 8 | 14 | | 9 | 4 | | 10 | 8 | | 11 | 21 | | 12 | 9 | | 13 | 21 | | 14 | 10 | | 15 | 11 | | 16 | 8 | | 17 | 17 | | 18 | 17 | | 19 | 16 | | 20 | 6 | | 21 | 16 | | 22 | 25 | | 23 | 3 | | 24 | 16 | | 25 | 2 | | 26 | 16 | | 27 | 12 | | 28 | 9 | | 29 | 11 | | 30 | 17 | | 31 | 10 | | 32 | 11 | | 33 | 11 | | 34 | 15 | | 35 | 18 | | 36 | 18 | | 37 | 14 | | 38 | 10 | | 39 | 10 | | 40 | 14 | | 41 | 7 | | 42 | 3 | | 43 | 12 | | 44 | 10 | | 45 | 13 | | 46 | 13 | | 47 | 10 | | 48 | 10 | | 49 | 19 |
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| 65.33% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 3 | | diversityRatio | 0.41 | | totalSentences | 100 | | uniqueOpeners | 41 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 98 | | matches | | 0 | "Most sensible people were home," | | 1 | "Slowly, she turned." | | 2 | "Just the empty clearing, the" | | 3 | "Only seven minutes had passed." |
| | ratio | 0.041 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 24 | | totalSentences | 98 | | matches | | 0 | "Her breath misted in the" | | 1 | "she muttered to herself, though" | | 2 | "They weren't tall, maybe waist-high," | | 3 | "she whispered, pulling the delivery" | | 4 | "She could feel the time" | | 5 | "She moved toward the designated" | | 6 | "she told herself, though she" | | 7 | "She reached up to touch" | | 8 | "she said aloud, her voice" | | 9 | "It was a whisper, coming" | | 10 | "she decided, taking a step" | | 11 | "It wasn't just one voice" | | 12 | "They spoke in a language" | | 13 | "She stumbled, falling hard on" | | 14 | "she shouted, though she knew" | | 15 | "She could feel it watching" | | 16 | "She whipped her head in" | | 17 | "She made a dash for" | | 18 | "They didn't move, just watched" | | 19 | "Their features were indistinct, as" |
| | ratio | 0.245 | |
| 82.45% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 74 | | totalSentences | 98 | | matches | | 0 | "The entrance to Richmond Park" | | 1 | "The pendant around her neck" | | 2 | "Her breath misted in the" | | 3 | "she muttered to herself, though" | | 4 | "Silas had mentioned the Grove" | | 5 | "Something about a customer who" | | 6 | "The path through the park" | | 7 | "The usual rustle of nocturnal" | | 8 | "An unnatural silence pressed down," | | 9 | "The standing stones emerged from" | | 10 | "They weren't tall, maybe waist-high," | | 11 | "The Heartstone pendant pulsed against" | | 12 | "she whispered, pulling the delivery" | | 13 | "The clearing beyond the stones" | | 14 | "Wildflowers that shouldn't bloom in" | | 15 | "The air smelled of damp" | | 16 | "Aurora stepped through the boundary" | | 17 | "The moment she did, the" | | 18 | "She could feel the time" | | 19 | "The delivery instructions were specific:" |
| | ratio | 0.755 | |
| 51.02% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 98 | | matches | | | ratio | 0.01 | |
| 40.82% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 63 | | technicalSentenceCount | 9 | | matches | | 0 | "Something about a customer who wanted special ingredients delivered to a place that wasn't exactly on any map." | | 1 | "They weren't tall, maybe waist-high, but they radiated an ancient power that made the hairs on Aurora's arms stand at attention." | | 2 | "The clearing beyond the stones was illuminated by an impossible moonlight that seemed to come from nowhere." | | 3 | "Wildflowers that shouldn't bloom in November carpeted the ground, their petals glowing with a faint internal luminescence." | | 4 | "The package contained dried moonpetal and starlight moss, ingredients that had cost Eva a small fortune to acquire." | | 5 | "The path twisted and stretched, as if the very geography of the Grove was shifting to keep her trapped." | | 6 | "Figures standing between the ancient oaks, tall and slender with eyes that glowed like embers." | | 7 | "Their features were indistinct, as if seen through rippling water." | | 8 | "The small crescent-shaped scar from her childhood accident throbbed faintly, as if remembering something it had forgotten." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 8 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "she said aloud, her voice sounding unnaturally loud in the oppressive silence" | | 1 | "Aurora called out, her voice strained" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 7 | | fancyCount | 5 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she muttered (mutter)" | | 1 | "she whispered (whisper)" | | 2 | "Aurora called out (call out)" | | 3 | "she shouted (shout)" | | 4 | "Aurora demanded (demand)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 9 | | tagDensity | 0.778 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.714 | | effectiveRatio | 0.714 | |