Run: 2026-04-24-01KQ07YWD8MS02908TKX7JED02

Run Details

Duration:
1m 59s
Cost:
$0.008556
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain hammered the pavement in sheets, turning Soho's narrow streets into rivers of reflected neon. Detective Harlow Quinn's boots slapped through puddles as she pushed past a cluster of drunk tourists stumbling from a late-night pub. Her lungs burned. Her sharp jaw clenched against the cold November air that tore at her throat. Twenty meters ahead, the figure in the dark jacket vaulted a railing and disappeared down a service alley. "Stop! Police!" The words vanished into the downpour. The figure never slowed. Quinn's hand found the worn leather watch on her left wrist without thinking—three years of habit, checking the time Morris should have been there to call in backup. The weight of its absence hit her chest like a fist. She pushed harder, legs pumping, salt-and-pepper hair plastered to her skull. The alley twisted left, then right. Overflowing bins lined the walls. The stench of rotting food and something else—something metallic, like pennies left in rain—curled through the damp air. Quinn's flashlight beam caught graffiti she didn't recognize. Symbols that seemed to shift when she looked directly at them. The suspect crashed through a door at the alley's end. Quinn hit it two seconds later. The door groaned open into a stairwell that descended into yellow-tinged darkness. Damp walls pressed close. Water dripped somewhere below, echoing like a metronome counting down to something she couldn't name. She listened. Footsteps. Fast. Descending. Her training screamed at her to call this in. Wait for backup. Follow procedure. But procedure hadn't saved Morris. Procedure had left her standing over his body in that alley three years ago, watching his eyes go glassy while something she couldn't explain ate away at the edges of reality around them. Quinn descended. The stairs spiraled. Old brick gave way to tiled walls—Tube tiles, cream and dirty white, cracked and stained with decades of neglect. The air changed. Warmer. Thicker. The metallic smell intensified, layered now with incense and something sweet that turned her stomach. At the bottom, an archway opened onto what had once been a station platform. The tilework announced "Camden Low" in faded lettering. A station that shouldn't exist on any map she'd ever seen. The suspect stood thirty feet away, chest heaving, face still obscured by the jacket's raised hood. Beyond them, the platform stretched into a cavern that pulsed with low light—lanterns, maybe, or something else. Figures moved in that distant glow. Sounds drifted back: haggling, laughter, the clink of glass and coin. A market. An entire market, hidden beneath the streets of London. "Herrera!" The name echoed off the tiles. The suspect froze. Quinn advanced, closing the distance with measured steps. Her hand hovered near her hip, though she hadn't drawn her weapon. Not yet. "Tomás Herrera. I know it's you. I've seen that medallion catch the light every time you've run from me these past three weeks." The figure turned. Hood fell back. Warm brown eyes met hers—calculating, guarded. Rain had plastered dark curls flat against his olive skin. The Saint Christopher medallion hung outside his shirt now, glinting in the yellowish light. "Detective Quinn." His accent carried traces of Seville, softened by years in London but still present. "You've been busy." "Stop stalling." She stopped ten feet from him, positioning herself between Herrera and the archway behind her. "The Raven's Nest. Three nights ago. You were there when Marcus Ashford died. I have witnesses who saw you leave through that back room." "I didn't kill him." "Then you have nothing to fear from answering my questions." Herrera's laugh held no humor. "You think this is about fear?" He gestured toward the market behind him. "You have no idea what's down here, Detective. What you're walking into." Quinn's gaze followed his gesture. Past the archway, the market sprawled in impossible directions—stalls built from salvaged wood and corrugated metal, awnings made from tapestries that seemed to move on their own. Goods glittered on tables: vials of luminescent liquid, jewelry crafted from materials she couldn't identify, books with spines that shifted like living things. The people browsing those stalls weren't all people. Some moved wrong. Some had too many fingers, or eyes that caught light from angles that shouldn't exist. Her pulse spiked. Not fear—something older. Recognition, maybe. The same wrongness she'd felt in that alley with Morris. "What is this place?" "The Veil Market." Herrera's voice dropped. "And you can't be here without a token. They'll know. They always know." "They?" Quinn stepped forward. "Who are 'they'? Herrera, a man is dead. Whatever—whatever this is, it doesn't change that someone killed Marcus Ashford and left him bleeding out behind that bar." "I was trying to save him." The words hung between them. Herrera's hand went to his left forearm—a gesture so quick Quinn almost missed it. His fingers traced something beneath the jacket sleeve. A scar. She'd seen it in his file. Knife attack, two years ago. The report hadn't mentioned where the knife came from or who'd wielded it. "He came to me," Herrera continued. "Marcus. He was already dying when he found me. Said he'd been poisoned at the Market. Something in a drink someone bought him. I couldn't—" His jaw tightened. "I couldn't save him. By the time I got him to the back room, the poison had reached his heart." "Why not take him to a hospital?" "You saw what was in his system. You read the tox report." Herrera met her eyes again. "You think any doctor in the NHS could explain that?" The tox report. The one sitting on her desk back at the Met, flagged with three red stamps: INCONCLUSIVE. SUBSTANCES UNIDENTIFIED. REFERRED TO SPECIAL DIVISION. Special Division. The unit nobody talked about. The one Morris had been investigating the night he died. Quinn looked from Herrera to the market. The entrance gaped like a mouth, and beyond it, that wrongness pulsed like a heartbeat. Every instinct forged in eighteen years of policing told her to retreat. Call it in. Let someone else handle the things that moved in shadows she couldn't explain. But Morris had called it in. Morris had followed procedure. And Morris had died alone in an alley while the thing that killed him walked away without a trace. "I'm going in." Herrera's expression shifted—something between alarm and respect. "You can't. Without a bone token, they'll—" "Then get me one." "Quinn—" "A man is dead." She stepped past him, toward the archway. The air against her skin felt electric, alive. "Someone in that market poisoned him. Someone knows why. And I'm not leaving until I find out who." She paused at the threshold. The market's sounds swelled—voices in languages she didn't recognize, music with melodies that curved in directions her ears couldn't follow, the sizzle and pop of things cooking in stalls she couldn't see. Beyond the nearest row of vendors, something large shifted in the shadows. Herrera appeared at her shoulder. His hand closed around her arm, grip firm. "If you go in there without protection, you won't come out. Not intact." His brown eyes held hers, and beneath the calculation, she glimpsed genuine concern. "I can get you a token. It'll cost—there are always costs—but I can do it. Wait here. Five minutes." Quinn weighed her options. Behind her: stairs, rain, a city that made sense. Ahead: a market that shouldn't exist, selling things she couldn't name, where a man had been murdered by means her forensic team couldn't explain. In her pocket, her phone buzzed. Probably her sergeant, wondering why she'd gone dark. Wondering why she'd chased a suspect into Soho without backup, again. Five minutes. Herrera could disappear in thirty seconds if she let him walk into that market alone. But if she followed now, without whatever protection a bone token provided, she might not last long enough to find Ashford's killer. The lantern light flickered. Somewhere in the market's depths, something laughed—a sound like glass breaking. Quinn released a breath she hadn't realized she'd been holding.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags10
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences32
tagDensity0.313
leniency0.625
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1346
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
80.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found
0"Marcus"
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
33.14% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1346
totalAiIsms18
found
0
word"jaw clenched"
count1
1
word"weight"
count1
2
word"pumping"
count1
3
word"tinged"
count1
4
word"echoing"
count1
5
word"footsteps"
count1
6
word"stomach"
count1
7
word"pulsed"
count2
8
word"echoed"
count1
9
word"measured"
count1
10
word"calculating"
count1
11
word"glinting"
count1
12
word"pulse"
count1
13
word"traced"
count1
14
word"electric"
count1
15
word"flickered"
count1
16
word"depths"
count1
highlights
0"jaw clenched"
1"weight"
2"pumping"
3"tinged"
4"echoing"
5"footsteps"
6"stomach"
7"pulsed"
8"echoed"
9"measured"
10"calculating"
11"glinting"
12"pulse"
13"traced"
14"electric"
15"flickered"
16"depths"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"jaw/fists clenched"
count1
highlights
0"jaw clenched"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences117
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences117
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences138
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen33
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1331
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions11
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions42
wordCount1039
uniqueNames14
maxNameDensity1.15
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Herrera"
discoveredNames
Soho2
Harlow1
Quinn12
November1
Morris7
Tube1
London2
Saint1
Christopher1
Seville1
Herrera10
Met1
Division1
Ashford1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Morris"
3"Tube"
4"Saint"
5"Christopher"
6"Herrera"
7"Ashford"
places
0"Soho"
1"London"
2"Seville"
globalScore0.923
windowScore0.667
42.86% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences70
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"Symbols that seemed to shift when she looked directly at them"
1"tapestries that seemed to move on their own"
2"something between alarm and respect"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1331
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences138
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs52
mean25.6
std18.95
cv0.74
sampleLengths
053
118
22
310
450
548
610
737
85
952
102
1142
1233
1350
1411
151
169
1745
1836
1919
2041
214
2210
2330
2481
2518
264
2719
2831
296
305
3148
3254
337
3427
3525
3617
3750
3829
393
4014
414
421
4337
4449
4513
4645
4737
4825
4939
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences117
matches
0"been murdered"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs202
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount12
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences11
totalSentences138
ratio0.08
matches
0"Quinn's hand found the worn leather watch on her left wrist without thinking—three years of habit, checking the time Morris should have been there to call in backup."
1"The stench of rotting food and something else—something metallic, like pennies left in rain—curled through the damp air."
2"Old brick gave way to tiled walls—Tube tiles, cream and dirty white, cracked and stained with decades of neglect."
3"Beyond them, the platform stretched into a cavern that pulsed with low light—lanterns, maybe, or something else."
4"Warm brown eyes met hers—calculating, guarded."
5"Past the archway, the market sprawled in impossible directions—stalls built from salvaged wood and corrugated metal, awnings made from tapestries that seemed to move on their own."
6"Not fear—something older."
7"Herrera's hand went to his left forearm—a gesture so quick Quinn almost missed it."
8"Herrera's expression shifted—something between alarm and respect."
9"The market's sounds swelled—voices in languages she didn't recognize, music with melodies that curved in directions her ears couldn't follow, the sizzle and pop of things cooking in stalls she couldn't see."
10"Somewhere in the market's depths, something laughed—a sound like glass breaking."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1055
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount26
adverbRatio0.024644549763033177
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.0018957345971563982
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences138
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences138
mean9.64
std7.3
cv0.756
sampleLengths
015
121
23
314
418
52
66
74
828
911
1011
116
125
1318
148
1511
1610
176
1812
194
2015
212
221
231
241
259
263
272
285
2933
302
313
3219
333
341
351
3615
3714
388
3911
4016
4117
426
4311
442
459
461
476
483
498
72.71% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.47101449275362317
totalSentences138
uniqueOpeners65
66.01% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences101
matches
0"Probably her sergeant, wondering why"
1"Somewhere in the market's depths,"
ratio0.02
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount16
totalSentences101
matches
0"Her lungs burned."
1"Her sharp jaw clenched against"
2"She pushed harder, legs pumping,"
3"Her training screamed at her"
4"Her hand hovered near her"
5"His accent carried traces of"
6"She stopped ten feet from"
7"He gestured toward the market"
8"Her pulse spiked."
9"His fingers traced something beneath"
10"She'd seen it in his"
11"His jaw tightened"
12"She stepped past him, toward"
13"She paused at the threshold."
14"His hand closed around her"
15"His brown eyes held hers,"
ratio0.158
83.76% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount76
totalSentences101
matches
0"Detective Harlow Quinn's boots slapped"
1"Her lungs burned."
2"Her sharp jaw clenched against"
3"The words vanished into the"
4"The figure never slowed."
5"Quinn's hand found the worn"
6"The weight of its absence"
7"She pushed harder, legs pumping,"
8"The alley twisted left, then"
9"The stench of rotting food"
10"Quinn's flashlight beam caught graffiti"
11"Symbols that seemed to shift"
12"The suspect crashed through a"
13"Quinn hit it two seconds"
14"The door groaned open into"
15"Water dripped somewhere below, echoing"
16"Her training screamed at her"
17"Procedure had left her standing"
18"The stairs spiraled."
19"The air changed."
ratio0.752
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences101
matches(empty)
ratio0
59.80% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences43
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"Her sharp jaw clenched against the cold November air that tore at her throat."
1"The door groaned open into a stairwell that descended into yellow-tinged darkness."
2"Past the archway, the market sprawled in impossible directions—stalls built from salvaged wood and corrugated metal, awnings made from tapestries that seemed to…"
3"Goods glittered on tables: vials of luminescent liquid, jewelry crafted from materials she couldn't identify, books with spines that shifted like living things."
4"The market's sounds swelled—voices in languages she didn't recognize, music with melodies that curved in directions her ears couldn't follow, the sizzle and pop…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags10
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
87.50% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"The tilework announced (announce)"
1"Herrera continued (continue)"
dialogueSentences32
tagDensity0.063
leniency0.125
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.125
83.0811%