Run: 2026-04-24-01KQ080G5YP4V0MDTBFJT7NXS6

Run Details

Duration:
48.8s
Cost:
$0.007109
Provider:
Xiaomi

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The green neon glow of The Raven’s Nest sign bled onto the wet pavement. Rory shifted the insulated delivery bag on her shoulder, the scent of garlic noodles and five-spice pork clinging to her clothes. A light mist clung to the air, making the gaslight-style lamps along the street blur. She pushed open the heavy wooden door. The warmth inside was immediate, layered with the smell of old wood, whiskey, and the faint ghost of cigar smoke. The usual Tuesday night hum filled the low-ceilinged space: the murmur of conversations, the clink of glasses, the distant hiss of the espresso machine. Maps and faded monochrome photographs lined every wall, a gallery of forgotten places and faces. She bypassed the main bar, weaving through a cluster of occupied tables toward the back. Her route to the stairs leading to her flat took her past the last booth, tucked in an alcove framed by a large map of Cold War Berlin. A figure sat there, solitary, nursing a tumbler of amber liquid. Not an unusual sight. But something in the posture—the way the shoulders were set, the careful stillness—made her pause. She knew that stillness. It was the kind learned, not natural. The man looked up. Hazel eyes, bright in the dim light, met hers. A neatly trimmed beard, streaked with grey, framed his face. Recognition hit her like a splash of cold water. “Silas?” He didn’t smile. Not exactly. A faint softening at the corners of his eyes was the only indication. “Rory.” She stood there, the delivery bag suddenly heavy. “What… you’re not in Prague anymore. The last I heard…” “Plans change.” His voice was a low rumble, unchanged. He gestured to the seat opposite him. “You’re dripping on the floor.” Rory glanced down. Sure enough, water from her jacket was forming a small puddle on the worn oak boards. She slid into the booth, unzipping the jacket but keeping it on. The space felt smaller, charged. “You own this place?” She didn’t need the question. It had his fingerprints all over it. The curated decay, the sense of being watched but unobserved. “Retirement project.” He took a slow sip. “A place where ghosts can have a drink without troubling the living.” His gaze swept over her, from her damp hair plastered to her temples to the faded delivery logo on her jacket. “Golden Empress. Yu-Fei’s still in business, then.” “He’s a survivor.” She folded her hands on the table, her thumb tracing the small crescent scar on her left wrist. A nervous habit. “How long have you been here?” “Two years. I sent a message. Through the usual channels.” The silence stretched. The usual channels. Dead drops, encrypted emails she no longer checked, the secret life she’d walked away from. She’d ignored them all. “I got it,” she said. The admission cost her. He nodded, as if he’d expected nothing less. “And you’re still running food. Good. Honest work.” The word *honest* sat between them, heavy with implication. “It’s a job, Silas. It pays for the flat upstairs.” She tilted her head. “You look well. The knee?” He shifted his left leg beneath the table. A ghost of the old limp. “It complains when it rains. Which, in London, is always. A constant reminder.” His eyes held hers. “You look tired, Rory.” The directness was so like him it almost hurt. “I close at the restaurant most nights. It’s busy.” “That’s not what I mean.” He set his glass down. The signet ring on his right hand caught the light, a silver flash. “You have the look of someone carrying something they put down a long time ago.” “Maybe I did put it down.” Her voice was firmer now. “That’s what leaving means.” “Leaving a job. Leaving a life. Those are different things.” He leaned back. “I see you. You check exits. You noted the bartender’s shift change at ten-fifteen. You’ve been tracking the reflection in that mirror behind me for the last three minutes.” She had been. A habit as ingrained as breathing. Old training refusing to die. “Force of habit,” she murmured. “Is it?” Silas’s tone was mild, curious. “Or is it the part you can’t excise? The part that still pays attention because the world doesn’t stop being interesting—or dangerous—just because you get a different uniform?” She looked away, at the map of Berlin. So many borders. So many crossings. “I’m not that person anymore.” “And who are you now? Rory Carter, the law school dropout who fled Cardiff. Laila, the name on your lease. Aurora, the name on your birth certificate. Or Carter, the callsign they gave you?” He ticked them off on his fingers. “You’ve had so many names. Which one do you answer to in the dark?” The question landed with surgical precision. “I answer to Rory,” she said, the words tight. “That’s who I am. A delivery person who lives above a bar.” “A delivery person who, in her first week here, identified a tail from the French service on one of my regulars and discreetly led him on a three-block tour of Soho’s alleys before losing him,” Silas said. “I watched the CCTV footage. Clean work. Instinctive.” She flushed. The memory was sharp—the click of her heels on pavement, the calculated feints, the pure, adrenaline-fed clarity of the evasion. She hadn’t even thought about it. “He was bothering a customer.” “He was a low-grade asset recruiter. And you weren’t hired for security.” His gaze was unwavering. “You can change the uniform, Rory. You can’t bleach the instincts out.” The truth of it was a cold weight in her stomach. She’d tried. God, how she’d tried. The ordinary life. The simple transactions. The blissful anonymity. But the world kept whispering to her in a language she’d sworn to forget. “You always did see too much,” she said, her voice low. “It was my job.” He gestured to the bar around them. “It still is, in a way. I see the patterns. The currents. I see a woman with a first-class mind for deception and a reflexive need to protect people, wasting herself on twelve-hour shifts and cheap noodles.” The sting was in the accuracy. She straightened. “It’s not a waste. It’s mine. I chose it. After Evan… after everything… it’s the first thing that felt real.” The mention of Evan, her ex, hung in the air. Silas had been the one who’d warned her about him, years ago, when her world was still all courtrooms and case files. She hadn’t listened then, either. “The things that feel real aren’t always the things that are safe,” Silas said quietly. “Or fulfilling. You’re building a life on the edge of something, Rory. I can feel it. The restlessness.” The bell above the door chimed. A group of students poured in, laughing, their noise filling the space. Rory watched them, their easy, careless joy. A universe away. “My mother calls every Sunday,” she said, almost to herself. “She asks if I’m eating properly. She asks if I’ve met anyone. She doesn’t ask about the scar on my wrist. She doesn’t ask why her daughter, who was top of her class, now delivers kung pao chicken.” She looked back at Silas. “That’s the real life. The one they want for me.” “And what do you want for you?” The question hung in the smoky air. She thought of the flat upstairs. The neat, spartan space. The books on maritime law she still read. The feeling of the city at night, vast and alive and full of secrets, from her bicycle. “I want the silence to stop,” she admitted, the words barely audible. Silas finished his drink. He placed the glass down with a soft click. “The silence never stops, Rory. It just gets filled with different noise.” He slid a small, folded piece of paper across the table. “There’s a back room here. Through the bookshelf. The lock understands the Fibonacci sequence starting with three.” She stared at the paper. She didn’t touch it. “What’s this?” “A key. In case the noise gets too loud. Or too quiet.” He began to rise, his left leg stiffening for a moment before he straightened. “The offer I made two years ago still stands. No pressure. No assignments. Just a seat at a table where you don’t have to pretend you don’t see the things you see.” He placed a few bills on the table, covering his drink and then some. He looked at her, his hazel eyes holding all the years of shared secrets, of botched ops and narrow escapes, of the quiet understanding that had once been her lifeline. “Finish your deliveries, Rory. But think about it. The door is always open.” He turned and walked toward the bar, his slight limp a rhythmic punctuation on the floorboards. Rory sat alone in the booth, the noise of the bar fading to a distant roar. The folded paper sat on the table, stark white against the dark wood. Her fingers, cold from the night air, slowly closed around it.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags21
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"He leaned back [back]"
1"Silas said quietly [quietly]"
dialogueSentences55
tagDensity0.382
leniency0.764
rawRatio0.095
effectiveRatio0.073
93.40% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1516
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"suddenly"
count1
1
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"suddenly"
1"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
47.23% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1516
totalAiIsms16
found
0
word"warmth"
count1
1
word"solitary"
count1
2
word"charged"
count1
3
word"sense of"
count1
4
word"tracing"
count1
5
word"silence"
count3
6
word"implication"
count1
7
word"reminder"
count1
8
word"calculated"
count1
9
word"unwavering"
count1
10
word"weight"
count1
11
word"stomach"
count1
12
word"rhythmic"
count1
13
word"stark"
count1
highlights
0"warmth"
1"solitary"
2"charged"
3"sense of"
4"tracing"
5"silence"
6"implication"
7"reminder"
8"calculated"
9"unwavering"
10"weight"
11"stomach"
12"rhythmic"
13"stark"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences107
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences107
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences138
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen43
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords1
totalWords1511
ratio0.001
matches
0"honest"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions14
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions18
wordCount902
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity0.67
worstName"Silas"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Silas"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Tuesday1
Cold1
War1
Berlin2
Silas6
Evan1
Rory4
persons
0"Raven"
1"Silas"
2"Evan"
3"Rory"
places
0"Berlin"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences61
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1511
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences138
matches
0"knew that stillness"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs51
mean29.63
std16.04
cv0.541
sampleLengths
057
159
243
341
432
51
619
718
821
936
1026
1119
1228
1330
1410
1525
169
1716
189
1919
2035
2118
2238
2315
2442
2514
265
2735
2819
2955
3027
3145
3233
3328
3440
3511
3648
3728
3837
3933
4028
4163
427
4342
4412
4553
4611
4758
4844
4913
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences107
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs138
matches
0"was forming"
1"was unwavering"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences138
ratio0.014
matches
0"But something in the posture—the way the shoulders were set, the careful stillness—made her pause."
1"The memory was sharp—the click of her heels on pavement, the calculated feints, the pure, adrenaline-fed clarity of the evasion."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount909
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"pure, adrenaline-fed clarity"
adverbCount27
adverbRatio0.0297029702970297
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.007700770077007701
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences138
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences138
mean10.95
std8.24
cv0.752
sampleLengths
014
121
215
37
420
524
615
715
828
911
104
1115
124
137
144
159
1610
179
181
193
202
2113
221
238
2410
259
267
275
283
2916
3012
315
329
337
3410
357
3612
3721
387
3921
403
416
4210
433
443
4515
464
475
484
498
42.03% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats11
diversityRatio0.26811594202898553
totalSentences138
uniqueOpeners37
66.67% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences100
matches
0"So many borders."
1"So many crossings."
ratio0.02
40.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount45
totalSentences100
matches
0"She pushed open the heavy"
1"She bypassed the main bar,"
2"Her route to the stairs"
3"She knew that stillness."
4"It was the kind learned,"
5"He didn’t smile."
6"She stood there, the delivery"
7"His voice was a low"
8"He gestured to the seat"
9"She slid into the booth,"
10"She didn’t need the question"
11"It had his fingerprints all"
12"He took a slow sip"
13"His gaze swept over her,"
14"She folded her hands on"
15"She’d ignored them all."
16"He nodded, as if he’d"
17"She tilted her head"
18"He shifted his left leg"
19"His eyes held hers"
ratio0.45
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount92
totalSentences100
matches
0"The green neon glow of"
1"Rory shifted the insulated delivery"
2"A light mist clung to"
3"She pushed open the heavy"
4"The warmth inside was immediate,"
5"The usual Tuesday night hum"
6"Maps and faded monochrome photographs"
7"She bypassed the main bar,"
8"Her route to the stairs"
9"A figure sat there, solitary,"
10"She knew that stillness."
11"It was the kind learned,"
12"The man looked up."
13"Hazel eyes, bright in the"
14"A neatly trimmed beard, streaked"
15"Recognition hit her like a"
16"He didn’t smile."
17"A faint softening at the"
18"She stood there, the delivery"
19"His voice was a low"
ratio0.92
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences100
matches(empty)
ratio0
96.77% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences31
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"A group of students poured in, laughing, their noise filling the space."
1"He looked at her, his hazel eyes holding all the years of shared secrets, of botched ops and narrow escapes, of the quiet understanding that had once been her l…"
53.57% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags21
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"she said, her voice low"
1"she said, almost to herself"
2"she admitted, the words barely audible"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags8
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"she murmured (murmur)"
1"she admitted (admit)"
dialogueSentences55
tagDensity0.145
leniency0.291
rawRatio0.25
effectiveRatio0.073
84.4558%