| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 18 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "she called again [again]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 28 | | tagDensity | 0.643 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.056 | | effectiveRatio | 0.056 | |
| 88.74% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1332 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | adverb | "barely above a whisper" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 13.66% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1332 | | totalAiIsms | 23 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "familiar" | | 1 | "silence" | | 2 | "oppressive" | | 3 | "sense of" | | 4 | "pulsed" | | 5 | "warmth" | | 6 | "scanning" | | 7 | "whisper" | | 8 | "trembled" | | 9 | "raced" | | 10 | "dancing" | | 11 | "searing" | | 12 | "footsteps" | | 13 | "racing" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "knuckles turned white" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 111 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 91.38% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 4 | | narrationSentences | 111 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 121 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 36 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1330 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 11 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 50.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 57 | | wordCount | 1223 | | uniqueNames | 9 | | maxNameDensity | 1.88 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3.5 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Heartstone | 2 | | Aurora | 23 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Fae | 1 | | Grove | 1 | | Isolde | 15 | | Isolde-thing | 12 | | Dymas | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Heartstone" | | 1 | "Aurora" | | 2 | "Isolde-thing" | | 3 | "Dymas" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Fae" | | 3 | "Grove" | | 4 | "Isolde" |
| | globalScore | 0.56 | | windowScore | 0.5 | |
| 66.67% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 90 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "symbols that seemed to writhe in the torchlight" | | 1 | "as if listening" | | 2 | "shadows that seemed to reach out for her" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.752 | | wordCount | 1330 | | matches | | 0 | "not her own, but shallow, rapid gasps coming from somewhere nearby" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 121 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 51 | | mean | 26.08 | | std | 14.26 | | cv | 0.547 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 46 | | 1 | 40 | | 2 | 48 | | 3 | 37 | | 4 | 14 | | 5 | 48 | | 6 | 42 | | 7 | 21 | | 8 | 9 | | 9 | 9 | | 10 | 43 | | 11 | 1 | | 12 | 29 | | 13 | 1 | | 14 | 38 | | 15 | 19 | | 16 | 12 | | 17 | 27 | | 18 | 32 | | 19 | 8 | | 20 | 18 | | 21 | 44 | | 22 | 16 | | 23 | 31 | | 24 | 28 | | 25 | 9 | | 26 | 15 | | 27 | 17 | | 28 | 3 | | 29 | 38 | | 30 | 17 | | 31 | 15 | | 32 | 6 | | 33 | 18 | | 34 | 35 | | 35 | 17 | | 36 | 54 | | 37 | 47 | | 38 | 47 | | 39 | 20 | | 40 | 31 | | 41 | 21 | | 42 | 38 | | 43 | 39 | | 44 | 14 | | 45 | 35 | | 46 | 28 | | 47 | 31 | | 48 | 38 | | 49 | 30 |
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| 86.30% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 6 | | totalSentences | 111 | | matches | | 0 | "been bathed" | | 1 | "were wilted" | | 2 | "were pulled" | | 3 | "was sucked" | | 4 | "were gone" | | 5 | "was gone" |
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| 78.23% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 4 | | totalVerbs | 219 | | matches | | 0 | "were watching" | | 1 | "was glowing" | | 2 | "was going" | | 3 | "were closing" |
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| 95.63% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 2 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 2 | | totalSentences | 121 | | ratio | 0.017 | | matches | | 0 | "In that sudden silence, Aurora heard breathing—not her own, but shallow, rapid gasps coming from somewhere nearby." | | 1 | "In the periphery of her vision, she saw movement—shadowy figures flitting between the trees, their forms indistinct but somehow menacing." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 646 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "faint, sickly green light." |
| | adverbCount | 21 | | adverbRatio | 0.032507739938080496 | | lyAdverbCount | 9 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.01393188854489164 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 121 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 121 | | mean | 10.99 | | std | 6.33 | | cv | 0.576 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 16 | | 1 | 16 | | 2 | 14 | | 3 | 11 | | 4 | 29 | | 5 | 15 | | 6 | 17 | | 7 | 7 | | 8 | 6 | | 9 | 3 | | 10 | 6 | | 11 | 9 | | 12 | 1 | | 13 | 21 | | 14 | 14 | | 15 | 11 | | 16 | 14 | | 17 | 12 | | 18 | 11 | | 19 | 12 | | 20 | 15 | | 21 | 15 | | 22 | 4 | | 23 | 17 | | 24 | 9 | | 25 | 2 | | 26 | 7 | | 27 | 11 | | 28 | 15 | | 29 | 17 | | 30 | 1 | | 31 | 14 | | 32 | 8 | | 33 | 7 | | 34 | 1 | | 35 | 5 | | 36 | 11 | | 37 | 22 | | 38 | 17 | | 39 | 2 | | 40 | 12 | | 41 | 11 | | 42 | 13 | | 43 | 3 | | 44 | 10 | | 45 | 22 | | 46 | 8 | | 47 | 8 | | 48 | 10 | | 49 | 8 |
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| 35.12% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 18 | | diversityRatio | 0.2809917355371901 | | totalSentences | 121 | | uniqueOpeners | 34 | |
| 99.01% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 101 | | matches | | 0 | "Just the withered plants and" | | 1 | "Only the sound of breathing" | | 2 | "Then it stepped forward into" |
| | ratio | 0.03 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 25 | | totalSentences | 101 | | matches | | 0 | "She tightened her grip on" | | 1 | "she called again, her voice" | | 2 | "It grew louder, rising to" | | 3 | "She looked down, her torch" | | 4 | "she whispered, her heart hammering" | | 5 | "She forced herself to turn" | | 6 | "It paused, its head tilting" | | 7 | "Her face was gaunt, her" | | 8 | "Her eyes were empty black" | | 9 | "It raised a hand, its" | | 10 | "They were watching." | | 11 | "it replied, taking another step" | | 12 | "She scrambled to her feet," | | 13 | "it snarled, its face contorting," | | 14 | "It was glowing now, pulsing" | | 15 | "She ducked between standing stones," | | 16 | "She heard the creature behind" | | 17 | "Its branches were black and" | | 18 | "It was a wound in" | | 19 | "She had no answers, only" |
| | ratio | 0.248 | |
| 29.31% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 87 | | totalSentences | 101 | | matches | | 0 | "The Heartstone pendant warmed against" | | 1 | "The world shifted around her," | | 2 | "She tightened her grip on" | | 3 | "Aurora called out, her voice" | | 4 | "The grove should have been" | | 5 | "The wildflowers that usually carpeted" | | 6 | "A sense of wrongness prickled" | | 7 | "This wasn't the Fae Grove" | | 8 | "Time moved differently here, but" | | 9 | "this felt frozen." | | 10 | "A twig snapped to her" | | 11 | "Aurora spun around, torch beam" | | 12 | "she called again, her voice" | | 13 | "A low hum began, vibrating" | | 14 | "It grew louder, rising to" | | 15 | "The symbols on the stones" | | 16 | "The air grew colder, despite" | | 17 | "Aurora took a step back," | | 18 | "She looked down, her torch" | | 19 | "The hum stopped abruptly." |
| | ratio | 0.861 | |
| 49.50% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 101 | | matches | | 0 | "Whoever had sent her the" |
| | ratio | 0.01 | |
| 23.81% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 54 | | technicalSentenceCount | 9 | | matches | | 0 | "The grove should have been bathed in moonlight, but the sky above was a void, no stars, no moon, just a heavy, oppressive blackness that pressed down on her." | | 1 | "Just the withered plants and the standing stones, their surfaces covered in unfamiliar symbols that seemed to writhe in the torchlight." | | 2 | "It grew louder, rising to a dissonant chord that set her teeth on edge." | | 3 | "Her eyes were empty black pits, and when she smiled, it was a rictus that split her face from ear to ear." | | 4 | "The standing stones that usually marked the boundary of the grove now seemed to form a cage, their symbols pulsing in time with the humming that had returned, l…" | | 5 | "It was glowing now, pulsing with a bright crimson light that illuminated the clearing." | | 6 | "She ducked between standing stones, her lungs burning, the pendant searing against her chest." | | 7 | "The shadowy figures were closing in, their forms solidifying in the green light, revealing tall, thin bodies with too many joints and eyes that gleamed like wet…" | | 8 | "The Isolde-thing howled, its form dissolving into black smoke that was sucked into the earth." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 18 | | uselessAdditionCount | 8 | | matches | | 0 | "she called again, her voice sounding thin and reedy in the silence" | | 1 | "she whispered, her heart hammering against her ribs" | | 2 | "Isolde's voice whispered, the sound like dry leaves skittering across pavement" | | 3 | "Aurora asked, her voice barely above a whisper" | | 4 | "It raised, its fingers elongated, ending in blackened claws" | | 5 | "Aurora warned, though her voice trembled" | | 6 | "the Isolde-thing hissed, its voice dropping to a conspiratorial whisper" | | 7 | "it snarled, its face contorting, black veins spreading across the skin" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 17 | | fancyCount | 13 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Aurora called out (call out)" | | 1 | "she whispered (whisper)" | | 2 | "Isolde's voice whispered (whisper)" | | 3 | "Aurora warned (warn)" | | 4 | "the Isolde-thing hissed (hiss)" | | 5 | "Aurora demanded (demand)" | | 6 | "the Isolde-thing hissed (hiss)" | | 7 | "Aurora shouted (shout)" | | 8 | "it snarled (snarl)" | | 9 | "the Isolde-thing screeched (screech)" | | 10 | "the Isolde-thing hissed (hiss)" | | 11 | "the Isolde-thing whispered (whisper)" | | 12 | "the Isolde-thing demanded (demand)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 28 | | tagDensity | 0.607 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.765 | | effectiveRatio | 0.765 | |