| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 14 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Aurora stepped back [back]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 53 | | tagDensity | 0.264 | | leniency | 0.528 | | rawRatio | 0.071 | | effectiveRatio | 0.038 | |
| 92.68% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1367 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 34.16% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1367 | | totalAiIsms | 18 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "traced" | | 1 | "whisper" | | 2 | "gloom" | | 3 | "warmth" | | 4 | "pulse" | | 5 | "chill" | | 6 | "cascading" | | 7 | "flicker" | | 8 | "shimmered" | | 9 | "comforting" | | 10 | "searing" | | 11 | "etched" | | 12 | "silk" | | 13 | "echoed" | | 14 | "trembled" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 70 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 70 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 108 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 38 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 1 | | markdownWords | 5 | | totalWords | 1349 | | ratio | 0.004 | | matches | | 0 | "Richmond Park. The stones. Sunrise." |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 9 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 16.67% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 56 | | wordCount | 884 | | uniqueNames | 14 | | maxNameDensity | 2.38 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 4.5 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 2 | | Park | 2 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Fae | 3 | | Eva | 2 | | Nyx | 7 | | Aurora | 21 | | London | 1 | | December | 1 | | Seer | 4 | | Isolde | 9 | | Dymas | 1 | | Golden | 1 | | Empress | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Eva" | | 1 | "Nyx" | | 2 | "Aurora" | | 3 | "Seer" | | 4 | "Isolde" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "London" | | 3 | "Golden" |
| | globalScore | 0.312 | | windowScore | 0.167 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 57 | | glossingSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "symbols that seemed to shift beneath her fingertips when she wasn't looking directly at them" | | 1 | "appeared more solid than usual, the faint violet glow of their eyes casting strange reflections on the stone" | | 2 | "something like surprise in the angle of thei" | | 3 | "something like compassion—something like gri" | | 4 | "something like grief" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1349 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 108 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 61 | | mean | 22.11 | | std | 18.29 | | cv | 0.827 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 44 | | 1 | 3 | | 2 | 39 | | 3 | 41 | | 4 | 41 | | 5 | 7 | | 6 | 36 | | 7 | 3 | | 8 | 18 | | 9 | 4 | | 10 | 2 | | 11 | 37 | | 12 | 31 | | 13 | 8 | | 14 | 2 | | 15 | 7 | | 16 | 39 | | 17 | 3 | | 18 | 3 | | 19 | 44 | | 20 | 60 | | 21 | 6 | | 22 | 58 | | 23 | 2 | | 24 | 47 | | 25 | 3 | | 26 | 38 | | 27 | 50 | | 28 | 4 | | 29 | 46 | | 30 | 3 | | 31 | 8 | | 32 | 12 | | 33 | 9 | | 34 | 21 | | 35 | 46 | | 36 | 31 | | 37 | 4 | | 38 | 35 | | 39 | 1 | | 40 | 14 | | 41 | 5 | | 42 | 39 | | 43 | 32 | | 44 | 50 | | 45 | 22 | | 46 | 21 | | 47 | 4 | | 48 | 50 | | 49 | 14 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 70 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 145 | | matches | | 0 | "wasn't looking" | | 1 | "weren't looking" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 15 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 14 | | totalSentences | 108 | | ratio | 0.13 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora traced the carvings along the nearest monolith—spirals and symbols that seemed to shift beneath her fingertips when she wasn't looking directly at them." | | 1 | "Through the crimson gem, she felt something—a pull, like a current tugging at her from beyond the stones." | | 2 | "The park stretched empty in every direction—not even early joggers braving the winter chill." | | 3 | "Not painfully, not dramatically—more like turning a corner and finding the architecture had rearranged itself while you weren't looking." | | 4 | "Wildflowers carpeted the ground in impossible abundance—bluebells and primroses and varieties Aurora had never seen, blooming in defiance of the December cold she'd left behind." | | 5 | "She wore simple clothing—earthy tones that shifted colour as the light caught them—but carried herself like royalty." | | 6 | "\"Exploring.\" Isolde gestured toward the trees, and Aurora glimpsed a flicker of violet between the trunks—Nyx's form blending with shadows that moved independently of any light source." | | 7 | "The sky above wasn't sky at all—it shimmered like the surface of a soap bubble, colours bleeding into each other in patterns that hurt to follow." | | 8 | "She'd heard it before—in whispers from customers at the Golden Empress, in half-remembered dreams that left her gasping in the dark." | | 9 | "The grove deepened as they walked—or perhaps it simply revealed more of itself." | | 10 | "Faint, distant—strings and voices woven into something that made her want to walk toward the trees and never stop." | | 11 | "\"You carry a Fae blade. It will anchor you.\" The Seer paused beside a pool that reflected a sky Aurora couldn't see above her—stars wheeling in patterns that spelled out something in a language she almost understood." | | 12 | "\"Because you will need it.\" The Seer looked up, and her lavender eyes held something like compassion—something like grief." | | 13 | "From somewhere deeper in the grove, a sound like laughter echoed—bright and cruel and utterly inhuman." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 900 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 31 | | adverbRatio | 0.034444444444444444 | | lyAdverbCount | 11 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.012222222222222223 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 108 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 108 | | mean | 12.49 | | std | 8.2 | | cv | 0.656 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 20 | | 1 | 24 | | 2 | 3 | | 3 | 13 | | 4 | 26 | | 5 | 16 | | 6 | 18 | | 7 | 7 | | 8 | 17 | | 9 | 21 | | 10 | 2 | | 11 | 1 | | 12 | 7 | | 13 | 26 | | 14 | 10 | | 15 | 3 | | 16 | 18 | | 17 | 4 | | 18 | 2 | | 19 | 14 | | 20 | 23 | | 21 | 6 | | 22 | 7 | | 23 | 18 | | 24 | 8 | | 25 | 2 | | 26 | 7 | | 27 | 13 | | 28 | 14 | | 29 | 12 | | 30 | 3 | | 31 | 3 | | 32 | 19 | | 33 | 10 | | 34 | 15 | | 35 | 25 | | 36 | 13 | | 37 | 22 | | 38 | 6 | | 39 | 2 | | 40 | 29 | | 41 | 17 | | 42 | 10 | | 43 | 2 | | 44 | 14 | | 45 | 15 | | 46 | 18 | | 47 | 3 | | 48 | 27 | | 49 | 11 |
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| 73.46% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 4 | | diversityRatio | 0.46296296296296297 | | totalSentences | 108 | | uniqueOpeners | 50 | |
| 52.91% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 63 | | matches | | 0 | "Just her and the stones" |
| | ratio | 0.016 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 6 | | totalSentences | 63 | | matches | | 0 | "She'd strapped it on without" | | 1 | "She stepped forward." | | 2 | "She wore simple clothing—earthy tones" | | 3 | "Her feet made no sound" | | 4 | "She'd heard it before—in whispers" | | 5 | "She heard music." |
| | ratio | 0.095 | |
| 39.37% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 53 | | totalSentences | 63 | | matches | | 0 | "The standing stones rose from" | | 1 | "Aurora traced the carvings along" | | 2 | "Nyx's whisper came from everywhere" | | 3 | "Aurora stepped back, her breath" | | 4 | "The Heartstone pendant hung heavy" | | 5 | "The Fae blade at her" | | 6 | "She'd strapped it on without" | | 7 | "Eva should have been here" | | 8 | "Nyx drifted toward the gap" | | 9 | "Nyx turned, and despite their" | | 10 | "Nyx moved closer, their voice" | | 11 | "Aurora's hand moved to the" | | 12 | "The warmth had intensified, its" | | 13 | "Nyx passed between the monoliths" | | 14 | "Aurora stood alone in the" | | 15 | "The park stretched empty in" | | 16 | "She stepped forward." | | 17 | "The world folded." | | 18 | "The grey London dawn gave" | | 19 | "Wildflowers carpeted the ground in" |
| | ratio | 0.841 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 63 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 20.41% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 35 | | technicalSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "The standing stones rose from the earth like broken teeth, ancient oak transformed into something that belonged to another age." | | 1 | "Aurora traced the carvings along the nearest monolith—spirals and symbols that seemed to shift beneath her fingertips when she wasn't looking directly at them." | | 2 | "A woman stood where no one had been a moment before, silver hair cascading to her waist, pale lavender eyes watching with an agelessness that made Aurora's skin…" | | 3 | "She wore simple clothing—earthy tones that shifted colour as the light caught them—but carried herself like royalty." | | 4 | "The sky above wasn't sky at all—it shimmered like the surface of a soap bubble, colours bleeding into each other in patterns that hurt to follow." | | 5 | "She'd heard it before—in whispers from customers at the Golden Empress, in half-remembered dreams that left her gasping in the dark." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 14 | | uselessAdditionCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora stepped back, her breath misting in the cold air" | | 1 | "Nyx moved, their voice dropping to something almost reverent" | | 2 | "Aurora's fingers brushed, its cold searing against her palm" | | 3 | "Isolde moved away, her silver hair catching light that had no source" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |