| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 5 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 7 | | tagDensity | 0.714 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1147 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 17.18% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1147 | | totalAiIsms | 19 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "pulsed" | | 1 | "loomed" | | 2 | "flicked" | | 3 | "perfect" | | 4 | "silence" | | 5 | "echoed" | | 6 | "chill" | | 7 | "warmth" | | 8 | "echo" | | 9 | "footfall" | | 10 | "throbbed" | | 11 | "trembled" | | 12 | "shimmered" | | 13 | "vibrated" | | 14 | "aligned" | | 15 | "synchronized" | | 16 | "pulse" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 133 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 133 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 136 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 34 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1143 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 0 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 83.33% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 27 | | wordCount | 1088 | | uniqueNames | 13 | | maxNameDensity | 1.01 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Heartstone | 2 | | Rory | 11 | | Golden | 1 | | Empress | 1 | | November | 2 | | Bridge | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Evan | 2 | | Cardiff | 1 | | Richmond | 2 | | London | 1 | | Heathrow | 1 | | Silence | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Heartstone" | | 1 | "Rory" | | 2 | "Evan" | | 3 | "Heathrow" | | 4 | "Silence" |
| | places | | 0 | "Bridge" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Cardiff" | | 3 | "Richmond" | | 4 | "London" |
| | globalScore | 0.994 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 71 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 25.02% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 1.75 | | wordCount | 1143 | | matches | | 0 | "neither draining nor" | | 1 | "not bright, but phosphorescent, turning the turf into a bed of grey-green em" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 136 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 30 | | mean | 38.1 | | std | 27.71 | | cv | 0.727 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 83 | | 1 | 22 | | 2 | 4 | | 3 | 82 | | 4 | 62 | | 5 | 69 | | 6 | 13 | | 7 | 5 | | 8 | 97 | | 9 | 14 | | 10 | 5 | | 11 | 8 | | 12 | 22 | | 13 | 24 | | 14 | 15 | | 15 | 80 | | 16 | 23 | | 17 | 51 | | 18 | 31 | | 19 | 11 | | 20 | 5 | | 21 | 56 | | 22 | 77 | | 23 | 53 | | 24 | 24 | | 25 | 43 | | 26 | 41 | | 27 | 65 | | 28 | 38 | | 29 | 20 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 133 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 183 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 37.82% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 4 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 5 | | totalSentences | 136 | | ratio | 0.037 | | matches | | 0 | "It caught monoliths ahead—massive upright oaks turned to stone, bark fossilised into something denser than granite, veined with ridges that resembled frozen ripples or the whorls of a giant's thumbprint." | | 1 | "The temperature didn't drop; it inverted." | | 2 | "The wildflowers glowed—not bright, but phosphorescent, turning the turf into a bed of grey-green embers that emitted no heat." | | 3 | "Then another sound, closer—a patter of footfalls that struck the earth all at once, heel and toe and ball together, too many points of contact for human anatomy." | | 4 | "The screen displayed nothing—no caller ID, no notification banner." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 60 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 0 | | adverbRatio | 0 | | lyAdverbCount | 0 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 136 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 136 | | mean | 8.4 | | std | 7.12 | | cv | 0.847 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 25 | | 1 | 26 | | 2 | 5 | | 3 | 7 | | 4 | 20 | | 5 | 14 | | 6 | 8 | | 7 | 4 | | 8 | 13 | | 9 | 6 | | 10 | 6 | | 11 | 10 | | 12 | 23 | | 13 | 4 | | 14 | 10 | | 15 | 10 | | 16 | 33 | | 17 | 11 | | 18 | 4 | | 19 | 14 | | 20 | 6 | | 21 | 10 | | 22 | 30 | | 23 | 5 | | 24 | 7 | | 25 | 1 | | 26 | 1 | | 27 | 1 | | 28 | 8 | | 29 | 8 | | 30 | 5 | | 31 | 5 | | 32 | 4 | | 33 | 2 | | 34 | 1 | | 35 | 3 | | 36 | 3 | | 37 | 5 | | 38 | 11 | | 39 | 12 | | 40 | 6 | | 41 | 21 | | 42 | 12 | | 43 | 6 | | 44 | 11 | | 45 | 5 | | 46 | 9 | | 47 | 4 | | 48 | 1 | | 49 | 7 |
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| 50.63% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 16 | | diversityRatio | 0.37593984962406013 | | totalSentences | 133 | | uniqueOpeners | 50 | |
| 58.48% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 114 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead, the pendant yanked east." | | 1 | "Then another sound, closer—a patter" |
| | ratio | 0.018 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 31 | | totalSentences | 114 | | matches | | 0 | "She had intended to climb" | | 1 | "Its silver chain sawed at" | | 2 | "She found the gap near" | | 3 | "Her straight black hair whipped" | | 4 | "She shoved it back and" | | 5 | "It caught monoliths ahead—massive upright" | | 6 | "They formed a perfect ring." | | 7 | "She swallowed, and the sound" | | 8 | "Her breath still plumed, but" | | 9 | "Its warmth had escalated into" | | 10 | "They released a scent of" | | 11 | "She checked her phone." | | 12 | "She glanced at the oaks," | | 13 | "She thumbed the home button." | | 14 | "Her voice died the instant" | | 15 | "She counted her steps." | | 16 | "She moved forward." | | 17 | "It pressed against her eardrums" | | 18 | "She scratched it." | | 19 | "Her nails came away tacky" |
| | ratio | 0.272 | |
| 43.33% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 95 | | totalSentences | 114 | | matches | | 0 | "The Heartstone burned against Rory's" | | 1 | "She had intended to climb" | | 2 | "Its silver chain sawed at" | | 3 | "The crimson gem, no bigger" | | 4 | "Rory's breath plumed white in" | | 5 | "The stone thumped hotter." | | 6 | "Rory chained her bike to" | | 7 | "Putney Bridge flashed beneath her" | | 8 | "Streetlamps gave way to hedge-lined" | | 9 | "Richmond Park loomed ahead, its" | | 10 | "She found the gap near" | | 11 | "Rust snagged her jacket." | | 12 | "Her straight black hair whipped" | | 13 | "She shoved it back and" | | 14 | "Eva had described this place" | | 15 | "A grove in Richmond that" | | 16 | "Rory had blamed psychedelics." | | 17 | "The path vanished beneath frost-killed" | | 18 | "The torch beam carved a" | | 19 | "It caught monoliths ahead—massive upright" |
| | ratio | 0.833 | |
| 87.72% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 114 | | matches | | 0 | "Now the pendant dragged her" | | 1 | "Now it yawned into a" |
| | ratio | 0.018 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 41 | | technicalSentenceCount | 9 | | matches | | 0 | "The Heartstone burned against Rory's sternum, a slow insistent heat that started the moment she hung her delivery helmet on the hook behind Golden Empress." | | 1 | "The crimson gem, no bigger than a thumbnail, pulsed with an inner light that stained her shirtfront wet and dark." | | 2 | "A grove in Richmond that belonged to no ordinance survey map." | | 3 | "It caught monoliths ahead—massive upright oaks turned to stone, bark fossilised into something denser than granite, veined with ridges that resembled frozen rip…" | | 4 | "The wildflowers glowed—not bright, but phosphorescent, turning the turf into a bed of grey-green embers that emitted no heat." | | 5 | "But the flowers ten feet behind her lay flattened in a long depression, as though something heavy had pressed its length among the petals." | | 6 | "Then another sound, closer—a patter of footfalls that struck the earth all at once, heel and toe and ball together, too many points of contact for human anatomy…" | | 7 | "The shape folded into the dark before her eyes could fix its outline, but she caught an impression of limbs that bent backward and a head that pendulumed too lo…" | | 8 | "It filled the space behind her left shoulder with a cold that sank through denim and fleece and skin to clamp around her spine." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 5 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |