Run: 2026-04-24-01KQ085FG0GVN6S6P8KG3MT2C5

Run Details

Duration:
1m 43s
Cost:
$0.000565
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The ancient stones loomed like skeletal sentinels, their bark etched with runes that seemed to drink the late‑afternoon light. Aurora brushed the crescent scar on her wrist, feeling the faint ache of old memory rise. She glanced at the silver chain of the Heartstone pendant, its crimson gem ticking against her skin as if it heard a distant pulse. Nyx hovered at the edge of the clearing, a silhouette of living shade that clung to the roots of the oldest oak. Their violet eyes flickered, catching the glint of the pendant and the leaf‑shaped dagger tucked into Aurora’s belt. “You feel it,” Aurora murmured, voice cutting through the hush. “The Veil thins here.” Nyx’s voice slipped through the wind, a breath that brushed her ear. “The barrier sighs. Mist gathers where worlds meet.” A thin ribbon of mist curled around the stones, spilling out like vapor from a cracked chalice. As it rose, the air grew cooler, the scent of rain mingling with the sweet perfume of wildflowers that never seemed to die. Aurora stepped forward, her boots sinking into a carpet of luminescent moss that glowed a pale jade, each footfall leaving a brief halo that faded like a dying star. The moss whispered beneath her weight, a sound like a thousand tiny bells. Nyx’s form rippled, becoming more solid as they followed, their outline catching the faint violet glow that lingered where the Veil frayed. The group entered a narrow arch formed by two intertwined trunks, and the world narrowed to a tunnel of living shadow and flickering light. Within the tunnel, walls pulsed with a rhythm that matched the heartbeat of the pendant. The stone seemed to breathe, expanding and contracting in slow, measured breaths. Aurora pressed the pendant harder against her chest, feeling the faint warmth surge, a tremor that synced with the pulse of the tunnel. “Forward,” Nyx urged, their voice a rustle of leaves. “The path widens beyond.” When they emerged, the clearing opened onto a vast cavern of crystal. Towers of translucent quartz rose from the ground, each catching the ambient glow and splintering it into shards that danced across the walls. The ceiling arched high, a dome of woven light that resembled a night sky strewn with unfamiliar constellations. A low hum resonated from the crystals, a song without words that vibrated in the bones. Aurora raised the Fae‑forged blade, its moonsilver edge catching the crystalline light. The blade sang a thin note, a sound that seemed to carve a line through the hum. The note lingered, then dissolved into a chorus of whispers that rose from the cavern floor. “Listen,” Nyx whispered, stepping onto a crystal platform that sang with each movement. “The stones remember.” The whisper turned into a murmur of voices, fragments of conversation from ages past. Aurora heard a king’s decree, a child’s laughter, a lover’s promise, all layered together like a river of memory. The voices rose and fell, some bright, some mournful, each carried on the wind that slipped through the cracks of the crystal walls. A thin filament of light descended from the highest dome, spiraling down like a silver thread. It struck the heart of the cavern, where a pool of liquid starlight pooled in a basin of glass. The surface rippled, showing images of a world beyond—fields of amber grapes, banquet tables overflowing with exotic fruit, a prince with a lazy smile lounging among decadent feasts. Aurora stared, the image pulling at something deep inside her. The pendant throbbed, its crimson glow matching the pulse of the pool. She lifted the dagger, its cold blade humming against the stone, and felt the pool’s surface resist her touch, as if recognizing the blade’s purpose. Nyx’s form shifted, their edges blurring into shadow as they slipped into the pool without disturbing its surface. Their eyes glowed brighter, and they spoke without words. Images flooded Aurora’s mind: a gate forged from gluttonous desire, guarded by a Prince who feasted on souls, a pathway that led deeper into Hel’s realm. The vision evaporated, leaving a lingering taste of bitter wine on Aurora’s tongue. A sudden crack split the air, reverberating through the cavern. The crystal towers trembled, shedding shards that rained down like glittering rain. Aurora ducked, the dagger catching a falling piece and sending it spiraling away. Nyx materialized beside her, their silhouette solid for a heartbeat before dissolving back into mist. “Rift,” Nyx said, voice low, eyes scanning the cavern walls. “The Veil tears here.” A fissure opened in the far wall, a jagged scar of darkness that pulsed with the same amber hue as the sky over Dymas. Through it, a river of molten gold flowed, its surface reflecting a banquet of impossible delicacies. The scent of ripe figs, smoked meats, and honeyed wine spilled out, a temptation that tugged at Aurora’s senses. She felt the scar on her wrist tighten, a reminder of a childhood accident that had left a mark both physical and metaphorical. The scar glowed faintly, as if reacting to the presence of the portal. Aurora’s hand moved to the pendant, its warmth now a steady ember against her chest. Nyx stepped forward, their shadow stretching across the fissure, as if testing its depth. “Beyond lies gluttony’s domain,” they whispered. “Prince Belphegor feasts on the unwary.” The cavern’s hum grew louder, the crystal walls resonating with a low, hungry vibration. Aurora tightened her grip on the dagger, the cold metal grounding her. She turned to Nyx, eyes flashing with determination. “Enough,” she said, voice firm. “We step through, we find the source, we close it.” Nyx’s form flickered, their violet eyes meeting Aurora’s bright blue stare. The shadow seemed to nod, a ripple of darkness acknowledging the plan. A low, resonant chime echoed, and the standing stones at the cavern’s entrance began to shift, their runes glowing with a pale lavender light. The air shifted, thickening with the perfume of unseen blossoms that seemed to bloom in the dim corners of the cavern. The pool of starlight shimmered, its surface now reflecting the fissure’s darkness. Aurora reached out, the dagger’s tip barely touching the water, and a ripple spread outward, distorting the images of the banquet beyond. The ripple grew, a wave of cold cutting through the warm glow of the portal, as if the blade’s chill tried to sever the link between realms. Nyx stepped into the fissure, their shadow merging with the darkness, and for a heartbeat the cavern held its breath. The amber sky above the portal flickered, stuttering like a candle in wind. The river of gold surged, spilling droplets that fell onto the crystal floor, each droplet turning to dust as it touched stone. Aurora felt a pull at her heart, the pendant’s glow intensifying, a pulse that matched the rhythm of the Veil’s heartbeat. She pressed the dagger deeper into the pool, the cold traveling up the blade, through her hand, into her arm, and finally into the scar, which flared with a bright light that pulsed in time with the pendant. The cave’s hum rose to a crescendo, a choir of crystal voices converging, then dropped into a sudden, reverent silence. The fissure narrowed, the amber sky dimming as if night were drawing a curtain over a stage. Shadow and light balanced at the threshold, a thin line of possibility. Nyx emerged from the darkness, their form less defined, eyes flickering with an ancient knowledge. “The gate opens,” they said, voice echoing off the crystal towers. “Step through, but remember the feast can swallow as easily as it feeds.” Aurora turned toward the fissure, the dagger in hand, the pendant glowing against her skin. The scar on her wrist pulsed one last time, a reminder of the price she’d paid to reach this place. She took a breath, feeling the cool air of the cavern mingle with the warm perfume of the banquet beyond. She stepped forward, the edge of the diamond‑clear floor giving way to the amber river, her foot sinking into the molten gold as if stepping onto a fevered dream. The world tilted, colors blending, sounds overlapping. The crystal walls seemed to stretch, their facets turning inward, forming a tunnel of light and shadow that swallowed her whole. Nyx lingered at the edge, their form a ripple in the darkness, watching as Aurora disappeared into the glimmering mouth of gluttony. The veil trembled, the ancient runes on the stones flashing a final lavender flare before settling into a steady, subdued glow. The cavern fell still, the only movement the slow drift of crystal dust settling on the floor. Nyx turned, their silhouette merging with the shadows that clung to the walls, and vanished, leaving the standing stones to guard the entrance to a realm where desire could become a cage and a key alike.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags7
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences15
tagDensity0.467
leniency0.933
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1475
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1475
totalAiIsms47
found
0
word"loomed"
count1
1
word"sentinels"
count1
2
word"etched"
count1
3
word"pulse"
count4
4
word"flickered"
count3
5
word"glint"
count1
6
word"footfall"
count1
7
word"weight"
count1
8
word"pulsed"
count4
9
word"measured"
count1
10
word"warmth"
count2
11
word"crystal"
count10
12
word"resonated"
count1
13
word"vibrated"
count1
14
word"crystalline"
count1
15
word"whisper"
count1
16
word"throbbed"
count1
17
word"desire"
count2
18
word"trembled"
count2
19
word"scanning"
count1
20
word"reminder"
count2
21
word"echoed"
count1
22
word"shimmered"
count1
23
word"chill"
count1
24
word"silence"
count1
25
word"echoing"
count1
highlights
0"loomed"
1"sentinels"
2"etched"
3"pulse"
4"flickered"
5"glint"
6"footfall"
7"weight"
8"pulsed"
9"measured"
10"warmth"
11"crystal"
12"resonated"
13"vibrated"
14"crystalline"
15"whisper"
16"throbbed"
17"desire"
18"trembled"
19"scanning"
20"reminder"
21"echoed"
22"shimmered"
23"chill"
24"silence"
25"echoing"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences82
matches
0"g with determination"
0.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount9
narrationSentences82
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
2"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences90
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen38
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1474
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions7
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
82.53% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions40
wordCount1408
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity1.35
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Heartstone1
Aurora19
Nyx15
Veil2
Prince1
Hel1
Dymas1
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Nyx"
2"Veil"
places
0"Hel"
globalScore0.825
windowScore0.833
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences80
glossingSentenceCount7
matches
0"runes that seemed to drink the late‑afternoon light"
1"sound that seemed to carve a line through the hum"
2"as if recognizing the blade’s purpose"
3"as if reacting to the presence of the portal"
4"as if testing its depth"
5"blossoms that seemed to bloom in the dim corners of the cavern"
6"as if stepping onto a fevered dream"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1474
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences90
matches(empty)
68.11% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs33
mean44.67
std17.35
cv0.388
sampleLengths
059
140
214
320
469
559
650
713
869
945
1016
1156
1263
1347
1466
1550
1614
1759
1851
1926
2034
2115
2223
2345
2461
2555
2659
2749
2839
2955
3057
3143
3253
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences82
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs227
matches
0"were drawing"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences90
ratio0.011
matches
0"The surface rippled, showing images of a world beyond—fields of amber grapes, banquet tables overflowing with exotic fruit, a prince with a lazy smile lounging among decadent feasts."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1409
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount14
adverbRatio0.0099361249112846
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.0028388928317956
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences90
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences90
mean16.38
std6.87
cv0.42
sampleLengths
019
116
224
322
418
510
64
712
88
917
1023
1129
1213
1322
1424
1515
1612
1723
189
194
2012
2123
2218
2316
2412
2517
2616
2713
283
2914
3019
3123
3216
3319
3428
3510
3612
3725
3818
399
4026
4113
4210
4312
4413
4515
4610
474
4824
4916
41.11% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.25555555555555554
totalSentences90
uniqueOpeners23
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences81
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount12
totalSentences81
matches
0"She glanced at the silver"
1"Their violet eyes flickered, catching"
2"It struck the heart of"
3"She lifted the dagger, its"
4"Their eyes glowed brighter, and"
5"She felt the scar on"
6"She turned to Nyx, eyes"
7"she said, voice firm"
8"She pressed the dagger deeper"
9"they said, voice echoing off"
10"She took a breath, feeling"
11"She stepped forward, the edge"
ratio0.148
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount77
totalSentences81
matches
0"The ancient stones loomed like"
1"Aurora brushed the crescent scar"
2"She glanced at the silver"
3"Nyx hovered at the edge"
4"Their violet eyes flickered, catching"
5"Aurora murmured, voice cutting through"
6"Nyx’s voice slipped through the"
7"A thin ribbon of mist"
8"Aurora stepped forward, her boots"
9"The moss whispered beneath her"
10"Nyx’s form rippled, becoming more"
11"The group entered a narrow"
12"The stone seemed to breathe,"
13"Aurora pressed the pendant harder"
14"Nyx urged, their voice a"
15"Towers of translucent quartz rose"
16"The ceiling arched high, a"
17"A low hum resonated from"
18"Aurora raised the Fae‑forged blade,"
19"The blade sang a thin"
ratio0.951
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences81
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences72
technicalSentenceCount17
matches
0"The ancient stones loomed like skeletal sentinels, their bark etched with runes that seemed to drink the late‑afternoon light."
1"She glanced at the silver chain of the Heartstone pendant, its crimson gem ticking against her skin as if it heard a distant pulse."
2"Nyx’s voice slipped through the wind, a breath that brushed her ear."
3"Aurora stepped forward, her boots sinking into a carpet of luminescent moss that glowed a pale jade, each footfall leaving a brief halo that faded like a dying …"
4"Nyx’s form rippled, becoming more solid as they followed, their outline catching the faint violet glow that lingered where the Veil frayed."
5"Towers of translucent quartz rose from the ground, each catching the ambient glow and splintering it into shards that danced across the walls."
6"The ceiling arched high, a dome of woven light that resembled a night sky strewn with unfamiliar constellations."
7"She lifted the dagger, its cold blade humming against the stone, and felt the pool’s surface resist her touch, as if recognizing the blade’s purpose."
8"Nyx’s form shifted, their edges blurring into shadow as they slipped into the pool without disturbing its surface."
9"She felt the scar on her wrist tighten, a reminder of a childhood accident that had left a mark both physical and metaphorical."
10"Nyx stepped forward, their shadow stretching across the fissure, as if testing its depth."
11"The air shifted, thickening with the perfume of unseen blossoms that seemed to bloom in the dim corners of the cavern."
12"Aurora felt a pull at her heart, the pendant’s glow intensifying, a pulse that matched the rhythm of the Veil’s heartbeat."
13"She pressed the dagger deeper into the pool, the cold traveling up the blade, through her hand, into her arm, and finally into the scar, which flared with a bri…"
14"She stepped forward, the edge of the diamond‑clear floor giving way to the amber river, her foot sinking into the molten gold as if stepping onto a fevered drea…"
15"The crystal walls seemed to stretch, their facets turning inward, forming a tunnel of light and shadow that swallowed her whole."
16"Nyx turned, their silhouette merging with the shadows that clung to the walls, and vanished, leaving the standing stones to guard the entrance to a realm where …"
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags7
uselessAdditionCount5
matches
0"Aurora murmured, voice cutting through the hush"
1"Nyx urged, their voice a rustle of leaves"
2"Nyx said, voice low, eyes scanning the cavern walls"
3"she said, voice firm"
4"they said, voice echoing off the crystal towers"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags7
fancyCount4
fancyTags
0"Aurora murmured (murmur)"
1"Nyx urged (urge)"
2"Nyx whispered (whisper)"
3"they whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences15
tagDensity0.467
leniency0.933
rawRatio0.571
effectiveRatio0.533
66.3917%