Run: 2026-04-24-01KQ08953N5ZES7W0PEWPYP3DX

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24.9s
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You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The click of three deadbolts echoed through the cramped hallway, each one louder than the last. Aurora’s hand stilled on the final latch, the cold brass a familiar anchor. The scent of frying onions from the curry house below curled under the door, a permanent companion in this flat. She didn’t look through the peephole. The triple-tap knock hadn’t been a stranger’s. She pulled the door open. Lucien Moreau filled the frame, a slash of charcoal wool and platinum blond against the dingy hallway light. His ivory-handled cane rested against his leg, one polished shoe slightly scuffed. He looked exactly as he had the last time she’d seen him, and nothing like it at all. The tailored suit was immaculate, the slicked-back hair perfect, but the amber eye held a weariness that hadn’t been there before. The black eye, as always, reflected nothing. “Rory,” he said. Just that. Her name, in his low, accented voice, felt like a key turning in a lock she’d forgotten existed. “Lucien.” She didn’t step back. Didn’t widen the door. “This isn’t a social call.” “Is there another kind, with us?” She held his gaze for a heartbeat, then turned, leaving the door open. He followed, his presence immediately overwhelming the small space. Books and scrolls covered every surface of Eva’s flat, a chaotic library of the arcane and the academic. Ptolemy, Eva’s tabby, trotted out from behind a precarious tower of anthropological journals, sniffed once at Lucien’s polished shoe, and then retreated under the sagging sofa. Lucien’s gaze swept the room, cataloguing the chaos with a fixer’s precision. “You’re not here for the books,” she said, moving to the kettle. A reflex. The kitchenette was barely a cupboard, but it was a barrier. “Perceptive as ever.” He didn’t sit. There was nowhere to sit that wasn’t already occupied. He leaned instead against the edge of Eva’s desk, the wood groaning faintly. “I require your unique talents.” “My talents.” She filled the kettle, the sound of water loud in the silence. “You mean my ability to get into places I shouldn’t be and ask questions people don’t want answered.” “A concise summary.” He watched her, his head tilted slightly. “There is a matter requiring discretion. The kind that leaves... minimal mess.” “Minimal mess,” she repeated, flicking the switch. The kettle began its low rumble. She turned, crossing her arms. “Like the matter in Prague? Or Marseille?” A muscle in his jaw tightened. “Prague was unavoidable. Marseille was a mistake.” “Right.” She knew about mistakes. She’d made a monumental one with him. “And this one? What is it?” He reached into his inner pocket and produced a small, folded piece of vellum. It looked old, the edges softened with time. He placed it on the desk, pressing it flat beneath one long-fingered hand. “A ledger. It went missing two nights ago from a private collection in Mayfair. It details certain... transfers. Magical, financial, mortal.” “And you want it back before the owner notices.” “The owner knows. He is, however, unwilling to involve the authorities. Supernatural or otherwise.” Lucien’s heterochromatic gaze was steady. “He is also unwilling to pay my usual fee. Which is where you come in.” “Unwilling to pay.” She snorted. “So you’re doing this pro bono? That’s not like you.” “Sentimentality,” he said, the word sounding foreign in his mouth. The kettle clicked off. She didn’t move for it. “You have sentimentality?” A ghost of a smile touched his lips, gone before it formed. “I have a debt to the collector. A debt I wish to discharge quietly. The ledger was stolen by someone with knowledge of his wards. Someone who bypassed them as if they weren’t there.” “Sounds like you need a thief.” “I need you.” The words hung in the air, simple and direct. “Your methods are... unorthodox. You think sideways. The thief who took this thought sideways. They left no trace of breaking the magical locks. They simply walked through the wall.” A chill prickled her skin, unrelated to the draft from the single-glazed window. “Walked through a wall. And you think I can find them?” “I think you can get to where they operate. I have a location. A starting point.” He tapped the vellum. “But it is protected. Not by magic. By something messier. Human paranoia and very good security systems. It requires a delivery, a reason to be there.” Her part-time job. Of course he knew. He knew everything. “A delivery to whom?” “A Mr. Finch. He runs an import business from a warehouse in Bermondsey. Legitimate front. The ledger passed through his hands.” “And you want me to walk in there, find this ledger, and walk out.” “I want you to find out where it’s gone. Recover it if possible. Discretion is paramount.” He straightened, smoothing his suit jacket. The movement was economical, precise. “I will, of course, compensate you. Generously.” “I don’t do this for the money, Lucien. I do it because Eva asks me to.” “Eva is in Edinburgh for a fortnight. I spoke with her this morning. She suggested I speak with you.” He let that sink in. “She believes you are the only one who can handle this without turning it into a spectacle.” Eva. Of course Eva had spoken to him. Eva, who had introduced them all those years ago at a dusty antiquarian bookshop in Bloomsbury. Eva, who had held her while she sobbed after Lucien had disappeared for six months without a word, only to reappear as if nothing had happened. Eva, who still believed, against all evidence, that some good remained in the spaces between them. Aurora picked up the kettle, poured boiling water over a teabag in a chipped mug. The steam rose, carrying the faint scent of bergamot. “When would this delivery happen?” “Tonight. At nine.” “Of course it would.” She wrapped her hands around the mug, letting the heat seep into her palms. “And if I run into this... thief? What’s my play? Ask nicely?” “Whatever you deem necessary. Short of killing them. The collector wants answers, not corpses.” “Charming.” She took a sip, the tea scalding her tongue. It grounded her. “Fine. I’ll do it. But this is it, Lucien. One job. After that, you go back to your world and you stay out of mine.” He pushed off the desk, stepping closer. The scent of him reached her, something clean and sharp, like cold air and old paper. “My world and yours intersect more often than either of us would like, Rory.” “Then we learn to dance around each other better.” She looked up at him, forcing herself to hold his gaze. The amber eye was warm, almost tender. The black one was a void. It had always unsettled her, how he could look at her with one eye and see everything, while the other saw nothing at all. “Nine o’clock,” he said, his voice dropping. “I’ll have a car waiting. Wear something you can move in.” “I always do.” She turned away, a dismissal. She heard the soft tap of his cane on the floorboards as he moved to the door. “Rory.” She didn’t turn. “The job in Prague. It was not a choice I made lightly.” Her hand tightened on the mug. “Goodbye, Lucien.” She heard the door click shut. Then the sound of all three deadbolts sliding home, one by one. She stood there for a long time, listening to the silence he’d left behind, and the frantic, traitorous pounding of her own heart. The vellum sat on the desk, a silent accusation. She crossed the room and picked it up. The paper felt warm, as if it held the ghost of his touch. She unfolded it. The address was written in elegant, precise script. Below it, a single sentence. *Forgive the intrusion. L.M.* A power surge flickered through the flat, making the lights buzz and dim. Outside, a siren wailed in the distance. The evening was just beginning, and already, the walls of her carefully constructed peace were starting to crack.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags19
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"She turned away [away]"
dialogueSentences54
tagDensity0.352
leniency0.704
rawRatio0.053
effectiveRatio0.037
81.36% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1341
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count2
1
adverb"very"
count1
2
adverb"lightly"
count1
3
adverb"carefully"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"very"
2"lightly"
3"carefully"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
55.26% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1341
totalAiIsms12
found
0
word"echoed"
count1
1
word"familiar"
count1
2
word"perfect"
count1
3
word"chaotic"
count1
4
word"silence"
count2
5
word"chill"
count1
6
word"dance"
count1
7
word"unsettled"
count1
8
word"pounding"
count1
9
word"flickered"
count1
10
word"constructed"
count1
highlights
0"echoed"
1"familiar"
2"perfect"
3"chaotic"
4"silence"
5"chill"
6"dance"
7"unsettled"
8"pounding"
9"flickered"
10"constructed"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences88
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences88
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences122
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen34
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords4
totalWords1341
ratio0.003
matches
0"Forgive the intrusion. L.M."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions11
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions16
wordCount823
uniqueNames5
maxNameDensity0.97
worstName"Eva"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
Moreau1
Didn1
Eva8
Lucien5
Bloomsbury1
persons
0"Moreau"
1"Eva"
2"Lucien"
places
0"Bloomsbury"
globalScore1
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences59
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"felt like a key turning in a lock she’d"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1341
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences122
matches
0"let that sink"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs49
mean27.37
std20.23
cv0.739
sampleLengths
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276
323
414
56
678
725
833
932
1022
1125
1213
1318
1456
159
1634
1715
1810
1912
2046
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2241
2324
2446
2514
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2714
2834
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3041
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333
3430
3514
3638
3737
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474
4838
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences88
matches
0"was written"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs145
matches
0"was just beginning"
1"were starting"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences122
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount829
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount32
adverbRatio0.038600723763570564
lyAdverbCount8
lyAdverbRatio0.009650180940892641
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences122
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences122
mean10.99
std6.9
cv0.627
sampleLengths
016
113
220
36
47
55
618
712
818
921
107
113
122
1318
145
154
165
176
1813
199
2018
2126
2212
2312
242
2511
266
279
2813
295
3014
3118
3210
3312
347
356
365
377
386
397
405
417
426
4314
448
4513
4621
479
4819
4915
58.47% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.38524590163934425
totalSentences122
uniqueOpeners47
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences82
matches
0"Of course he knew."
1"Of course Eva had spoken"
2"Then the sound of all"
ratio0.037
15.12% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount42
totalSentences82
matches
0"She didn’t look through the"
1"She pulled the door open."
2"His ivory-handled cane rested against"
3"He looked exactly as he"
4"Her name, in his low,"
5"She didn’t step back"
6"She held his gaze for"
7"He followed, his presence immediately"
8"she said, moving to the"
9"He didn’t sit"
10"He leaned instead against the"
11"She filled the kettle, the"
12"He watched her, his head"
13"she repeated, flicking the switch"
14"She turned, crossing her arms."
15"She knew about mistakes"
16"She’d made a monumental one"
17"He reached into his inner"
18"It looked old, the edges"
19"He placed it on the"
ratio0.512
8.78% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount74
totalSentences82
matches
0"The click of three deadbolts"
1"Aurora’s hand stilled on the"
2"The scent of frying onions"
3"She didn’t look through the"
4"The triple-tap knock hadn’t been"
5"She pulled the door open."
6"Lucien Moreau filled the frame,"
7"His ivory-handled cane rested against"
8"He looked exactly as he"
9"The tailored suit was immaculate,"
10"The black eye, as always,"
11"Her name, in his low,"
12"She didn’t step back"
13"She held his gaze for"
14"He followed, his presence immediately"
15"Books and scrolls covered every"
16"Ptolemy, Eva’s tabby, trotted out"
17"Lucien’s gaze swept the room,"
18"she said, moving to the"
19"The kitchenette was barely a"
ratio0.902
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences82
matches(empty)
ratio0
95.24% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences30
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"The tailored suit was immaculate, the slicked-back hair perfect, but the amber eye held a weariness that hadn’t been there before."
1"Eva, who had introduced them all those years ago at a dusty antiquarian bookshop in Bloomsbury."
19.74% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags19
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"She filled, the sound of water loud in the silence"
1"he said, the word sounding foreign in his mouth"
2"She took, the tea scalding her tongue"
3"he said, his voice dropping"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags5
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she repeated (repeat)"
dialogueSentences54
tagDensity0.093
leniency0.185
rawRatio0.2
effectiveRatio0.037
83.9098%