| 75.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 24 | | adverbTagCount | 3 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "She stepped around [around]" | | 1 | "He stepped fully [fully]" | | 2 | "Lucien’s voice softened further [further]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 41 | | tagDensity | 0.585 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.125 | | effectiveRatio | 0.125 | |
| 92.67% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1365 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 4.76% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1365 | | totalAiIsms | 26 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "gloom" | | 1 | "firmly" | | 2 | "throbbed" | | 3 | "echoed" | | 4 | "reminder" | | 5 | "porcelain" | | 6 | "weight" | | 7 | "silence" | | 8 | "pulse" | | 9 | "implication" | | 10 | "scanning" | | 11 | "shimmered" | | 12 | "glint" | | 13 | "flicker" | | 14 | "echo" | | 15 | "tension" | | 16 | "reverberated" | | 17 | "glinting" | | 18 | "familiar" | | 19 | "anticipation" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "clenched jaw/fists" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 68 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 68 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 87 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 36 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1358 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 10 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 14 | | wordCount | 1023 | | uniqueNames | 3 | | maxNameDensity | 0.98 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | | persons | | | places | (empty) | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 74.24% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 66 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "tasted like cheap gin and laughter" | | 1 | "as if waiting for a story to finish" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1358 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 87 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 68.67% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 36 | | mean | 37.72 | | std | 14.72 | | cv | 0.39 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 10 | | 1 | 28 | | 2 | 47 | | 3 | 22 | | 4 | 34 | | 5 | 13 | | 6 | 31 | | 7 | 67 | | 8 | 45 | | 9 | 28 | | 10 | 51 | | 11 | 24 | | 12 | 39 | | 13 | 43 | | 14 | 48 | | 15 | 29 | | 16 | 44 | | 17 | 14 | | 18 | 37 | | 19 | 51 | | 20 | 48 | | 21 | 40 | | 22 | 46 | | 23 | 43 | | 24 | 25 | | 25 | 56 | | 26 | 15 | | 27 | 43 | | 28 | 57 | | 29 | 37 | | 30 | 40 | | 31 | 11 | | 32 | 33 | | 33 | 71 | | 34 | 48 | | 35 | 40 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 68 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 162 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 7 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 6 | | totalSentences | 87 | | ratio | 0.069 | | matches | | 0 | "A muted thud echoed from beneath them—Silas’ bar downstairs, a low bass thrum of an old jukebox." | | 1 | "“‘The curtain lifts at the back of the curry house on Brick Lane. Midnight. Bring the key.’” He didn’t ask for clarification; the implication shimmered between them like a candle flame." | | 2 | "Her fingers tightened around the scar, then relaxed as she remembered the small brass key she’d slipped into her pocket weeks ago—a souvenir from a night when danger had tasted like cheap gin and laughter." | | 3 | "A flicker of something—regret, perhaps—crossed his amber eye." | | 4 | "A sudden crash reverberated from the street below—glass shattering, a scream, the metallic clang of a bike wheel striking a lamppost." | | 5 | "The night held its breath, the air thick with anticipation, as the sound of a single breath—soft, sharp, waiting—filled the cramped space." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 413 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 11 | | adverbRatio | 0.026634382566585957 | | lyAdverbCount | 2 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.004842615012106538 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 87 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 87 | | mean | 15.61 | | std | 7.07 | | cv | 0.453 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 10 | | 1 | 14 | | 2 | 14 | | 3 | 13 | | 4 | 15 | | 5 | 19 | | 6 | 14 | | 7 | 8 | | 8 | 16 | | 9 | 18 | | 10 | 9 | | 11 | 4 | | 12 | 22 | | 13 | 9 | | 14 | 10 | | 15 | 24 | | 16 | 13 | | 17 | 20 | | 18 | 3 | | 19 | 19 | | 20 | 23 | | 21 | 17 | | 22 | 11 | | 23 | 17 | | 24 | 15 | | 25 | 19 | | 26 | 16 | | 27 | 8 | | 28 | 10 | | 29 | 26 | | 30 | 3 | | 31 | 6 | | 32 | 24 | | 33 | 7 | | 34 | 6 | | 35 | 10 | | 36 | 14 | | 37 | 10 | | 38 | 14 | | 39 | 13 | | 40 | 16 | | 41 | 18 | | 42 | 26 | | 43 | 10 | | 44 | 4 | | 45 | 31 | | 46 | 6 | | 47 | 35 | | 48 | 16 | | 49 | 13 |
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| 61.69% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 3 | | diversityRatio | 0.39080459770114945 | | totalSentences | 87 | | uniqueOpeners | 34 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 68 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 43.53% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 30 | | totalSentences | 68 | | matches | | 0 | "She stepped back, her shoulders" | | 1 | "He stood in the gloom," | | 2 | "He tilted his head, the" | | 3 | "he corrected, the edges of" | | 4 | "She stepped around the threshold," | | 5 | "His cane tapped a deliberate" | | 6 | "He let the cane glide" | | 7 | "He leaned against the banister," | | 8 | "she asked, voice low, the" | | 9 | "He stepped fully into the" | | 10 | "she whispered, almost to herself" | | 11 | "He pressed a folded note" | | 12 | "She stared at the note," | | 13 | "His voice softened, a hint" | | 14 | "He didn’t ask for clarification;" | | 15 | "Her fingers tightened around the" | | 16 | "He pushed a hand into" | | 17 | "He leaned closer, the scent" | | 18 | "He stopped, the sentence hanging," | | 19 | "He drew his cane back," |
| | ratio | 0.441 | |
| 0.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 65 | | totalSentences | 68 | | matches | | 0 | "The door swung open before" | | 1 | "Aurora’s voice cracked, a thin" | | 2 | "She stepped back, her shoulders" | | 3 | "He stood in the gloom," | | 4 | "The suit he wore clung" | | 5 | "He tilted his head, the" | | 6 | "Aurora’s fingers tightened around the" | | 7 | "he corrected, the edges of" | | 8 | "She stepped around the threshold," | | 9 | "His cane tapped a deliberate" | | 10 | "He let the cane glide" | | 11 | "The metal caught the weak" | | 12 | "Aurora’s breath hitched." | | 13 | "The scar on her left" | | 14 | "The words fell sharp, her" | | 15 | "He leaned against the banister," | | 16 | "A muted thud echoed from" | | 17 | "The sound slipped through the" | | 18 | "Aurora’s eyes dropped to the" | | 19 | "she asked, voice low, the" |
| | ratio | 0.956 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 68 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 71.43% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 40 | | technicalSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "The small kitchen table held a half‑eaten sandwich, a wilted basil leaf perched on the side as if waiting for a story to finish." | | 1 | "The hallway fell silent but for the distant echo of broken glass and a heartbeat that refused to stop." | | 2 | "She leaned toward the window, the cold wind brushing her cheek, carrying with it the faint scent of cumin and the distant roar of a city that never truly sleeps…" | | 3 | "In the darkness, a shadow moved across the opposite building, a silhouette that mirrored her own nervous energy." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 24 | | uselessAdditionCount | 9 | | matches | | 0 | "he corrected, the edges of his smile sharp" | | 1 | "He stepped fully, the cramped space shrinking as his presence filled it" | | 2 | "she whispered, almost to herself" | | 3 | "The words tasted, the implication of debt lingering in her throat" | | 4 | "He pushed, fingers brushing a hidden pocket" | | 5 | "She tucked, the paper rustling against the fabric" | | 6 | "Lucien’s voice softened further, a sigh escaping his lips" | | 7 | "he called, his voice carrying a blend of warning and invitation" | | 8 | "he whispered, the word hanging like a promise" |
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| 52.44% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 6 | | fancyCount | 4 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "he corrected (correct)" | | 1 | "she whispered (whisper)" | | 2 | "He pressed (press)" | | 3 | "he whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 41 | | tagDensity | 0.146 | | leniency | 0.293 | | rawRatio | 0.667 | | effectiveRatio | 0.195 | |