| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 20 | | adverbTagCount | 2 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "I stepped back [back]" | | 1 | "He smiled again [again]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 61 | | tagDensity | 0.328 | | leniency | 0.656 | | rawRatio | 0.1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.066 | |
| 87.36% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1187 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "perfectly" | | 1 | "softly" | | 2 | "suddenly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 53.66% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1187 | | totalAiIsms | 11 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "intensity" | | 1 | "comforting" | | 2 | "predator" | | 3 | "sanctuary" | | 4 | "comfortable" | | 5 | "vibrated" | | 6 | "flickered" | | 7 | "firmly" | | 8 | "whisper" | | 9 | "traced" | | 10 | "facade" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 70 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 61.22% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 4 | | narrationSentences | 70 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 110 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 32 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1185 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 10 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 3 | | wordCount | 714 | | uniqueNames | 3 | | maxNameDensity | 0.14 | | worstName | "London" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 0 | | worstWindowName | (null) | | discoveredNames | | | persons | | | places | | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 55 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.844 | | wordCount | 1185 | | matches | | 0 | "Not painfully, but firmly" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 110 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 54 | | mean | 21.94 | | std | 15.32 | | cv | 0.698 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 42 | | 1 | 22 | | 2 | 1 | | 3 | 49 | | 4 | 1 | | 5 | 56 | | 6 | 17 | | 7 | 32 | | 8 | 8 | | 9 | 20 | | 10 | 18 | | 11 | 51 | | 12 | 9 | | 13 | 25 | | 14 | 20 | | 15 | 31 | | 16 | 6 | | 17 | 3 | | 18 | 20 | | 19 | 17 | | 20 | 32 | | 21 | 19 | | 22 | 41 | | 23 | 4 | | 24 | 42 | | 25 | 35 | | 26 | 38 | | 27 | 5 | | 28 | 27 | | 29 | 3 | | 30 | 21 | | 31 | 15 | | 32 | 16 | | 33 | 30 | | 34 | 5 | | 35 | 39 | | 36 | 7 | | 37 | 29 | | 38 | 5 | | 39 | 26 | | 40 | 22 | | 41 | 25 | | 42 | 2 | | 43 | 9 | | 44 | 23 | | 45 | 53 | | 46 | 4 | | 47 | 17 | | 48 | 2 | | 49 | 27 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 70 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 86.04% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 117 | | matches | | 0 | "was waiting" | | 1 | "was hiding" |
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| 100.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 2 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 1 | | totalSentences | 110 | | ratio | 0.009 | | matches | | 0 | "The scent of his cologne—cedar and something else, something ancient and metallic—filled my senses." |
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| 87.76% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 720 | | adjectiveStacks | 2 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "thin, tight-lipped thing" | | 1 | "thin crescent-shaped scar" |
| | adverbCount | 29 | | adverbRatio | 0.04027777777777778 | | lyAdverbCount | 6 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.008333333333333333 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 110 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 110 | | mean | 10.77 | | std | 7.24 | | cv | 0.672 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 7 | | 1 | 3 | | 2 | 7 | | 3 | 4 | | 4 | 21 | | 5 | 6 | | 6 | 16 | | 7 | 1 | | 8 | 22 | | 9 | 13 | | 10 | 14 | | 11 | 1 | | 12 | 6 | | 13 | 18 | | 14 | 6 | | 15 | 26 | | 16 | 10 | | 17 | 7 | | 18 | 10 | | 19 | 8 | | 20 | 14 | | 21 | 8 | | 22 | 15 | | 23 | 5 | | 24 | 2 | | 25 | 10 | | 26 | 6 | | 27 | 5 | | 28 | 4 | | 29 | 4 | | 30 | 28 | | 31 | 10 | | 32 | 9 | | 33 | 3 | | 34 | 18 | | 35 | 4 | | 36 | 16 | | 37 | 4 | | 38 | 10 | | 39 | 14 | | 40 | 7 | | 41 | 6 | | 42 | 3 | | 43 | 15 | | 44 | 5 | | 45 | 7 | | 46 | 10 | | 47 | 23 | | 48 | 9 | | 49 | 6 |
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| 69.70% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 5 | | diversityRatio | 0.44545454545454544 | | totalSentences | 110 | | uniqueOpeners | 49 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 67 | | matches | | 0 | "Finally, the last bolt clicked" | | 1 | "Of course he'd noticed." | | 2 | "Just a fraction." |
| | ratio | 0.045 | |
| 0.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 39 | | totalSentences | 67 | | matches | | 0 | "My fingers trembling around the" | | 1 | "I pulled the door back" | | 2 | "His platinum blond hair was" | | 3 | "His ivory cane rested against" | | 4 | "He didn't wait for an" | | 5 | "My eyes darted to the" | | 6 | "My voice came out flatter" | | 7 | "His gaze swept past me," | | 8 | "He didn't mean it as" | | 9 | "I stepped back, forcing him" | | 10 | "His hands on my waist," | | 11 | "His smile widened." | | 12 | "He leaned against the wall," | | 13 | "I crossed my arms" | | 14 | "He pushed off the wall," | | 15 | "I forced myself to hold" | | 16 | "His voice dropped, a low" | | 17 | "I stepped back, bumping into" | | 18 | "His gaze flickered down, to" | | 19 | "My hand flew to cover" |
| | ratio | 0.582 | |
| 12.24% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 60 | | totalSentences | 67 | | matches | | 0 | "The three deadbolts turned with" | | 1 | "My fingers trembling around the" | | 2 | "Someone was out there." | | 3 | "Someone who didn't care about" | | 4 | "I pulled the door back" | | 5 | "His platinum blond hair was" | | 6 | "The amber eye and the" | | 7 | "His ivory cane rested against" | | 8 | "He didn't wait for an" | | 9 | "My eyes darted to the" | | 10 | "Downstairs, Silas would be polishing" | | 11 | "My voice came out flatter" | | 12 | "His gaze swept past me," | | 13 | "Every surface covered with books," | | 14 | "Ptolemy the tabby hissed from" | | 15 | "He didn't mean it as" | | 16 | "I stepped back, forcing him" | | 17 | "A thin, tight-lipped thing that" | | 18 | "The air crackled between us." | | 19 | "A memory surfaced, unbidden." |
| | ratio | 0.896 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 67 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 77.92% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 22 | | technicalSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "Downstairs, Silas would be polishing glasses, the pub's low hum a comforting presence if it weren't for the predator who'd just invited himself into my sanctuar…" | | 1 | "A thin, tight-lipped thing that didn't reach his mismatched eyes." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 20 | | uselessAdditionCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "He leaned, the cane clicking softly against the plaster" | | 1 | "He circled, his voice a constant, unsettling hum" | | 2 | "I tried, but his hand shot out, gripping my upper arm" | | 3 | "He leaned in, his breath warm against my ear" | | 4 | "I tried, but his grip tightened" | | 5 | "He paused, not looking back" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |