Run: 2026-04-24-01KQ08HNNKWYXD8SC6TJ6E5WPR

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Duration:
7m 56s
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$0.064936
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SiliconFlow

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Quinn ducked beneath the crime-scene tape and stepped onto the platform of the abandoned Tube station beneath Camden. Moisture beaded the curved tile walls in patterns that resembled old maps. Iron columns rose to a vaulted ceiling lost in shadow, their paint peeling in gray scales. Somewhere in the black throat of the tunnel, water dripped onto disused rails with a metronomic ping that counted off the seconds. The air carried the mineral tang of old brick and beneath it something sweeter, denser, like fruit left to rot in a warm cellar. She adjusted the worn leather watch on her left wrist. Its ticking was the only sound she trusted. A body lay crumpled ten feet from the platform edge. Male. Mid-thirties. An overcoat of charcoal cashmere bunched around his shoulders. His throat gaped. The wound presented a clean, decisive slash from ear to ear. No blood pooled beneath him. None had sprayed the grime-caked tiles. The dust around his body lay pristine, uninterrupted by the frenzied spatter that such an incision should have produced. Quinn approached. Her boots struck the tiles in a clipped rhythm. She stopped two feet from the body and stared down as if reading a map of violence. Her cropped salt-and-pepper hair caught the harsh glare of the portable lights and threw back silver sparks. She crouched. The dust under her boots crunched. She touched the tile near the dead man's shoulder. Bone dry. "Detective Quinn." She did not turn. "Step back from the tape, Miss Kowalski. You're breathing on my evidence." Eva Kowalski hovered at the boundary, round glasses slipping down her freckled nose. Her curly red hair absorbed the sodium light like copper wire stripped of its insulation. She clutched her worn leather satchel to her hip; the buckle strained against the bulk of books inside. She pushed her glasses up and tucked a stray curl behind her left ear. "The superintendent sent me. He said the wall markings suggested an occult component." "There are no wall markings." Quinn stood. Her five-nine frame blocked the glare. "There is a dead man and a complete absence of blood. That isn't occult. That's evidence of relocation." Eva stepped closer. Her satchel thumped against her thigh. "Or ritual exsanguination. The British Museum's restricted archives hold seventeenth-century accounts of alchemical drainings that leave the corpse pale, dry, positioned in—" "Stop." Quinn's voice cut through Eva's lecture. She pointed at the dead man's shoes. Italian leather. Scuffed across the heels. The toe caps gleamed, unmarred by the platform's grime. "Someone dragged him back-first, pulling him by the armpits or ankles across a hard surface." "The platform is stone." "Forty years of industrial dust carpeted the platform." Quinn swept her arm across the gloom. "Where are the drag tracks? There are none leading to this spot. The dust around his shoulders is virgin. Not a sweep mark. Not a footprint." Eva fell silent. She adjusted her glasses and peered at the ground. "Then someone carried him." "By what? The tooth fairy?" Quinn circled the body. Her brown eyes tracked every tile, every shadow. "His coat is bunched at the back. Dust coats the fabric there in a sheet. The front is clean. Someone placed him face-up after death, unwilling to look at the wound while they walked. This served as a dump site. Not a temple." She knelt again. Rigor had locked the dead man's left hand into a rigid fist. She worked the stiff fingers apart. Something small and heavy dropped into her palm. A brass compass no larger than a pocket watch. Verdigris mottled the casing in patches of sickly green-black. The glass face was etched with angular markings—protective sigils that seemed to carve shadows rather than reflect light. The needle did not point north. It trembled and strained toward the tunnel wall at a sharp, impossible angle. Eva gasped. She rushed forward, dropping to her knees without care for the dust or protocol. Her satchel slipped, and a corner of a leather journal poked free. "That's a Veil Compass. Do you understand what you've found?" "I understand it's evidence currently compromised by your knee." Quinn flipped the casing open. The hinge moved with oiled precision, silent despite the patina of age. She tilted it toward the steel rail ten feet away. The needle ignored the iron. She moved it toward her own belt buckle. No response. It pointed at the brickwork as if tugged by a thread. "A Shade artisan crafted those." Eva's voice dropped to a whisper, cracking with excitement. "They point to the nearest supernatural rift. A threshold. The Market moves every full moon, but this station—this matches the cartography the restricted texts describe. Camden. Abandoned. Bone tokens for entry. If that compass is here, the Market was here." "It's pointing at brick." But Quinn rose anyway. She walked to the spot the needle indicated. The wall here revealed its secrets upon close inspection. The mortar between the bricks was fresher than the crumbling lines elsewhere. The bricks themselves held a faint sheen where countless shoulders had brushed against them, wearing away the dust that mantled every other surface in a uniform gray blanket. She placed her palm flat against the masonry. A draft ghosted across her knuckles, carrying the scent of incense, hot wax, and copper. Quinn rapped the wall with her knuckles. The sound was dead. She shifted six inches left and struck again. A hollow note sang back, bright and dangerous. She drew her pen from her coat pocket and traced the mortar line. A vertical seam emerged, camouflaged by grime but absolute once seen. She pressed the pen tip into a rusted bolt head. It sank inward with a heavy click. A section of the wall groaned. Brick scraped against brick. The false partition swung inward, revealing a passage no wider than a coffin stood on end. Beyond lay a cavernous chamber. Wooden stalls lined the uneven floor, draped in rotted velvet the color of old wine. Strings of bone tokens hung from iron hooks, clicking in the draft. Jars of unlabeled liquid sat on trestles, catching the light from the platform in murky gleams. The space stood empty of people, but footprints marked the dust in swirls of recent commerce. At the chamber's center, dark stains fanned across the stone in the unmistakable geometry of arterial spray. Pooled there. Dried there. The blood that should have crowned the platform. Eva stared. Her hand rose to her lips. "The Veil Market. It exists." Quinn stepped over the threshold. The compass needle pulled straight ahead, rigid now, certain as a locked gate. She looked at the arterial stains. She looked at the scuff marks on the victim's heels. She looked at the bolt-hole behind her and the clean tiles beyond. "He died in here." Quinn's tone flattened to iron. "They drained him on that stone. They stripped his valuables. Then they dragged the empty husk through this passage and left it on the platform for us to find. The lack of blood out there wasn't magic. It was logistics." Eva clutched her satchel to her chest. Her knuckles whitened. "You need backup. You can't clear a black market alone. There could be—" "Get the superintendent." Quinn closed her fist around the compass. The sigils pressed into her skin like tiny teeth. She moved deeper into the chamber, past the stalls, past the bone tokens. "Tell him his consultant earned her fee." "For what?" "Proving that murder is just commerce with a different currency." Quinn's silhouette dissolved into the rotted velvet dark. The brass compass in her hand strained forward, pointing the way.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1273
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
68.58% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1273
totalAiIsms8
found
0
word"pristine"
count1
1
word"gloom"
count1
2
word"etched"
count1
3
word"trembled"
count1
4
word"whisper"
count1
5
word"traced"
count1
6
word"velvet"
count2
highlights
0"pristine"
1"gloom"
2"etched"
3"trembled"
4"whisper"
5"traced"
6"velvet"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences105
matches
0"g with excitement"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences105
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences132
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen44
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1271
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions4
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
80.92% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions24
wordCount941
uniqueNames5
maxNameDensity1.38
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Tube1
Camden1
Kowalski1
Eva8
Quinn13
persons
0"Kowalski"
1"Eva"
2"Quinn"
places(empty)
globalScore0.809
windowScore0.833
84.21% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences76
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"as if reading a map of violence"
1"sigils that seemed to carve shadows rather than reflect light"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1271
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences132
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs38
mean33.45
std30.08
cv0.899
sampleLengths
0110
135
230
364
42
516
673
75
826
931
101
1143
124
138
1433
1516
165
1755
1884
1938
209
2153
225
2349
244
2584
2694
2793
2813
2946
304
3145
3223
333
3436
352
3610
3719
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences105
matches
0"was etched"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs153
matches(empty)
99.57% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences132
ratio0.015
matches
0"She clutched her worn leather satchel to her hip; the buckle strained against the bulk of books inside."
1"The glass face was etched with angular markings—protective sigils that seemed to carve shadows rather than reflect light."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount950
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount14
adverbRatio0.014736842105263158
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.003157894736842105
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences132
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences132
mean9.63
std7.28
cv0.756
sampleLengths
018
112
216
322
424
510
68
710
81
91
109
113
1211
135
146
1519
162
179
1817
1917
202
216
229
232
242
254
2612
2713
2815
2918
3014
3113
325
332
346
3518
363
376
3822
391
406
417
422
434
449
4515
464
478
487
4926
59.85% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.38636363636363635
totalSentences132
uniqueOpeners51
35.84% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences93
matches
0"Somewhere in the black throat"
ratio0.011
65.16% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount36
totalSentences93
matches
0"She adjusted the worn leather"
1"Its ticking was the only"
2"His throat gaped."
3"Her boots struck the tiles"
4"She stopped two feet from"
5"Her cropped salt-and-pepper hair caught"
6"She touched the tile near"
7"She did not turn."
8"Her curly red hair absorbed"
9"She clutched her worn leather"
10"She pushed her glasses up"
11"Her five-nine frame blocked the"
12"Her satchel thumped against her"
13"She pointed at the dead"
14"She adjusted her glasses and"
15"Her brown eyes tracked every"
16"She knelt again."
17"She worked the stiff fingers"
18"It trembled and strained toward"
19"She rushed forward, dropping to"
ratio0.387
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount86
totalSentences93
matches
0"Quinn ducked beneath the crime-scene"
1"Moisture beaded the curved tile"
2"Iron columns rose to a"
3"The air carried the mineral"
4"She adjusted the worn leather"
5"Its ticking was the only"
6"A body lay crumpled ten"
7"An overcoat of charcoal cashmere"
8"His throat gaped."
9"The wound presented a clean,"
10"None had sprayed the grime-caked"
11"The dust around his body"
12"Her boots struck the tiles"
13"She stopped two feet from"
14"Her cropped salt-and-pepper hair caught"
15"The dust under her boots"
16"She touched the tile near"
17"She did not turn."
18"Eva Kowalski hovered at the"
19"Her curly red hair absorbed"
ratio0.925
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences93
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences41
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"The bricks themselves held a faint sheen where countless shoulders had brushed against them, wearing away the dust that mantled every other surface in a uniform…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
86.4711%