Run: 2026-04-24-01KQ08QMFXCNPAV9JPKTK2FCFR

Run Details

Duration:
9m 5s
Cost:
$0.001821
Provider:
Novita

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Aurora Carter adjusted the strap of her backpack and glanced at her phone. The screen showed 11:37 PM. She was late. Again. Silas would be waiting, probably tapping his foot behind the bar of his establishment, which happened to be directly below the flat she called home. But tonight, the delivery could wait. The note tucked into her pocket felt heavy, its edges sharp against her thigh. The Richmond Park entrance loomed ahead, its iron gates creaking in the night breeze. Most sensible Londoners were tucked up in bed by this hour, but sensible had never been Aurora's strong suit. She slipped through the gates, the latch clicking shut behind her with a finality that made her skin prickle. The path ahead was barely visible in the moonlight, fractured shadows stretching between ancient oaks. Aurora's boots crunched on fallen leaves, the sound unnaturally loud in the stillness. She pulled the Heartstone pendant from beneath her shirt, its crimson gemstone pulsing faintly against her skin. The warmth was comforting, a familiar anchor in the encroaching darkness. According to Eva's frantic message, something had been stolen from the Fae Grove. Something important. Something that belonged to Eva's grandmother, Isolde. And apparently, Aurora was the only person Eva trusted enough to help retrieve it. The pendant had grown warmer as she approached the Grove's boundary, its rhythm picking up like a frantic heartbeat. The standing stones emerged from the gloom, ancient oaks carved with spiral patterns that seemed to shift when she looked directly at them. The air changed here, thickening with the scent of night-blooming jasmine and something else something metallic and electric. The temperature dropped ten degrees in the space of three steps. Aurora hesitated at the threshold. The Grove beyond should have been empty this time of night, but silence pressed against her eardrums, a heavy blanket that muffled the sounds of London she'd just left behind. The wildflowers that supposedly bloomed year-round seemed to writhe in the moonlight, petals curling and unfurling with a slow, deliberate motion. "Hello?" Her voice sounded thin and reedy, swallowed by the unnatural stillness. "Eva? Anyone?" No answer. Just the oppressive silence and the feeling of being watched. Aurora's hand tightened around the Heartstone pendant. Its glow intensified, casting crimson patterns on the moss-covered ground. She stepped forward, leaving the boundary stones behind. Inside the Grove, time seemed to warp. Aurora's phone screen flickered, then went dark. When she tried to restart it, it showed a date three years in the past. She pocketed the phone, her breath catching in her throat. The air hummed now, a low vibration that resonated in her bones. Something rustled in the undergrowth to her left. Aurora spun around, hand reaching into her backpack for the utility knife she kept there. Nothing. Just shadows clinging to the edges of her vision. The rustling came again, closer this time, followed by a soft clicking sound like stone on stone. "Show yourself," Aurora called, her voice steadier than she felt. "I'm not afraid of you." The silence that followed was somehow more menacing than the sounds. The wildflowers parted, revealing a path that hadn't been there before. Aurora hesitated, then started walking. The pendant pulsed against her skin, its rhythm accelerating as she moved deeper into the Grove. The air grew colder with each step. Aurora's breath misted in front of her, though the night wasn't that cold. The clicking sound returned, accompanied by whispering that seemed to come from everywhere and nowhere at once. The words were indistinguishable, but their tone carried a chilling mockery. "You shouldn't be here," the whispers seemed to say. "This place isn't for mortals." Aurora stopped walking, her knuckles white where she gripped the pendant. "I'm just looking for something that was taken. A book, maybe?" The whispering ceased. The wildflowers closed around the path, leaving her standing in a small clearing. The moonlight above seemed to dim, as if clouds had gathered, but when Aurora looked up, the sky was clear and stars burned with an unnatural intensity. Something moved in the corner of her vision—tall and impossibly thin, with limbs that bent at wrong angles. Aurora turned her head, but it was gone. Just another trick of the light, she told herself. The stress was getting to her. That was all. She took a deep breath and resumed walking, following an instinct she didn't know she possessed. The pendant burned now, its heat almost painful against her skin. The clearing opened into a small stone circle, where a book lay on a moss-covered altar. It looked ancient, its leather cover cracked and binding frayed. "Isolde's grimoire," Aurora breathed, taking a step toward it. The ground trembled beneath her feet. The air grew thick enough to chew. Aurora froze, every muscle tensed. She wasn't alone in the clearing anymore. She could feel eyes on her, multiple sets, ancient and hungry. The book on the altar began to glow with a soft blue light. Pages flipped themselves, revealing intricate diagrams and symbols that seemed to writhe on the page. The whispering returned, louder this time, forming words she could almost understand. "Take it," the voices hissed. "Take it and join us." Aurora's hand trembled as she reached for the book. Her fingers brushed against the cover, and the world tilted. The sky above turned blood-red, the trees writhed like serpents, and the standing stones began to move, their spiral patterns glowing with an inner fire. The pendant in her hand pulsed once, twice, then went dark. Aurora snatched her hand back as if burned. The book on the altar slammed shut with a sound like a gunshot. The clearing shrank around her, the walls of trees pressing closer, their branches like skeletal fingers reaching for her. She had to get out. Now. Aurora turned and ran, her boots slipping on the mossy ground. The path behind her had vanished, replaced by a tangle of thorns that seemed to grab at her clothes. The whispers followed her, their laughter echoing in her ears. "Too late," they chanted. "Too late to leave." Aurora burst through the boundary stones, stumbling onto the familiar path in Richmond Park. The night air rushed to meet her, cold and clean. She collapsed against an oak tree, gasping for breath, her heart hammering against her ribs. The pendant in her hand was cold now, its inner light extinguished. Aurora stared at it, then back at the Grove entrance, which was just a dark shape in the distance. The whispers had stopped, but she could still feel them at the edge of her consciousness, watching. Waiting. She pulled out her phone. The screen showed the current date and time. 11:42 PM. Only five minutes had passed. Five minutes inside an eternity of wrongness. Aurora pushed herself to her feet, the weight of the backpack suddenly heavy. She had the book—Isolde's grimoire was tucked safely inside. But at what cost? The pendant's silence worried her. It had always been her guide, her warning system. Now it was just dead metal against her skin. The path back to the park gates stretched ahead, impossibly long in the moonlight. Aurora started walking, her eyes darting to the shadows at the edge of the path. She wasn't sure if she was being followed or if her mind was playing tricks on her. All she knew was that the Fae Grove had marked her, and some doors, once opened, couldn't be closed again.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags6
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences12
tagDensity0.5
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
95.99% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1248
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"suddenly"
count1
highlights
0"suddenly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1248
totalAiIsms25
found
0
word"loomed"
count1
1
word"fractured"
count1
2
word"warmth"
count1
3
word"comforting"
count1
4
word"familiar"
count2
5
word"gloom"
count1
6
word"electric"
count1
7
word"silence"
count4
8
word"oppressive"
count1
9
word"flickered"
count1
10
word"resonated"
count1
11
word"pulsed"
count2
12
word"chilling"
count1
13
word"intensity"
count1
14
word"trembled"
count2
15
word"could feel"
count1
16
word"intricate"
count1
17
word"echoing"
count1
18
word"weight"
count1
highlights
0"loomed"
1"fractured"
2"warmth"
3"comforting"
4"familiar"
5"gloom"
6"electric"
7"silence"
8"oppressive"
9"flickered"
10"resonated"
11"pulsed"
12"chilling"
13"intensity"
14"trembled"
15"could feel"
16"intricate"
17"echoing"
18"weight"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences109
matches(empty)
0.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount12
narrationSentences109
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"happened to"
1"seemed to"
2"tried to"
3"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences115
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen30
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1246
ratio0
matches(empty)
83.33% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions6
unquotedAttributions1
matches
0"Just another trick of the light, she told herself."
54.25% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions46
wordCount1201
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity1.92
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Carter1
Richmond2
Park2
Londoners1
Aurora23
Heartstone2
Eva3
Fae2
Grove7
Isolde2
London1
persons
0"Carter"
1"Aurora"
2"Eva"
3"Isolde"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"Fae"
3"Grove"
4"London"
globalScore0.542
windowScore0.667
35.06% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences87
glossingSentenceCount4
matches
0"And apparently, Aurora was the onl"
1"patterns that seemed to shift when she looked directly at them"
2"symbols that seemed to writhe on the page"
3"thorns that seemed to grab at her clothes"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1246
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences115
matches
0"was that the"
75.77% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs31
mean40.19
std16.69
cv0.415
sampleLengths
067
152
256
355
452
556
614
737
851
950
1015
1143
1248
1314
1422
1543
1644
1753
189
1936
2040
2110
2244
2351
2446
258
2639
2749
2827
2949
3066
89.17% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount5
totalSentences109
matches
0"were tucked"
1"been stolen"
2"was gone"
3"was tucked"
4"being followed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs214
matches
0"was comforting"
1"was getting"
2"was playing"
93.17% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences115
ratio0.017
matches
0"Something moved in the corner of her vision—tall and impossibly thin, with limbs that bent at wrong angles."
1"She had the book—Isolde's grimoire was tucked safely inside."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1208
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount48
adverbRatio0.039735099337748346
lyAdverbCount14
lyAdverbRatio0.011589403973509934
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences115
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences115
mean10.83
std5.92
cv0.546
sampleLengths
013
15
23
31
425
56
614
714
819
919
1015
1113
1217
1311
1413
152
167
1714
1819
1923
2018
2111
225
2330
2421
2512
262
272
2810
297
3010
318
327
337
3415
3510
3612
378
3815
391
409
4117
4210
435
4411
4511
465
4716
487
4913
34.20% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats19
diversityRatio0.30434782608695654
totalSentences115
uniqueOpeners35
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount5
totalSentences101
matches
0"Most sensible Londoners were tucked"
1"Just the oppressive silence and"
2"Just shadows clinging to the"
3"Just another trick of the"
4"Only five minutes had passed."
ratio0.05
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount18
totalSentences101
matches
0"She was late."
1"She slipped through the gates,"
2"She pulled the Heartstone pendant"
3"Her voice sounded thin and"
4"Its glow intensified, casting crimson"
5"She stepped forward, leaving the"
6"She pocketed the phone, her"
7"She took a deep breath"
8"It looked ancient, its leather"
9"She wasn't alone in the"
10"She could feel eyes on"
11"Her fingers brushed against the"
12"She had to get out."
13"She collapsed against an oak"
14"She pulled out her phone."
15"She had the book—Isolde's grimoire"
16"It had always been her"
17"She wasn't sure if she"
ratio0.178
29.31% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount87
totalSentences101
matches
0"Aurora Carter adjusted the strap"
1"The screen showed 11:37 PM."
2"She was late."
3"Silas would be waiting, probably"
4"The note tucked into her"
5"The Richmond Park entrance loomed"
6"She slipped through the gates,"
7"The path ahead was barely"
8"Aurora's boots crunched on fallen"
9"She pulled the Heartstone pendant"
10"The warmth was comforting, a"
11"Something that belonged to Eva's"
12"The pendant had grown warmer"
13"The standing stones emerged from"
14"The air changed here, thickening"
15"The temperature dropped ten degrees"
16"Aurora hesitated at the threshold."
17"The Grove beyond should have"
18"The wildflowers that supposedly bloomed"
19"Her voice sounded thin and"
ratio0.861
49.50% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences101
matches
0"Now it was just dead"
ratio0.01
63.49% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences63
technicalSentenceCount7
matches
0"Silas would be waiting, probably tapping his foot behind the bar of his establishment, which happened to be directly below the flat she called home."
1"She slipped through the gates, the latch clicking shut behind her with a finality that made her skin prickle."
2"The Grove beyond should have been empty this time of night, but silence pressed against her eardrums, a heavy blanket that muffled the sounds of London she'd ju…"
3"The moonlight above seemed to dim, as if clouds had gathered, but when Aurora looked up, the sky was clear and stars burned with an unnatural intensity."
4"Pages flipped themselves, revealing intricate diagrams and symbols that seemed to writhe on the page."
5"She collapsed against an oak tree, gasping for breath, her heart hammering against her ribs."
6"Aurora started walking, her eyes darting to the shadows at the edge of the path."
41.67% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags6
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Aurora called, her voice steadier than she felt"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"Aurora breathed (breathe)"
1"the voices hissed (hiss)"
2"they chanted (chant)"
dialogueSentences12
tagDensity0.333
leniency0.667
rawRatio0.75
effectiveRatio0.5
74.8302%