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Run: 2026-04-24-01KQ08RP773ZR0TBDNCYE4RHEE
Run Details
Model:
MoonshotAI: Kimi K2.6
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Romance: separated couple reunites
Duration:
12m 11s
Cost:
$0.093724
Provider:
Inceptron
Evaluation summary
Score
Evaluator
Details Link
100.00%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism adverb frequency
(details)
80.00%
AI-ism character names
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism location names
(details)
53.52%
AI-ism word frequency
(details)
100.00%
Cliché density
(details)
100.00%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
(details)
100.00%
Filter word density
(details)
100.00%
Gibberish response detection
(details)
100.00%
Markdown formatting overuse
(details)
100.00%
Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
(details)
100.00%
Name drop frequency
(details)
100.00%
Narrator intent-glossing
(details)
100.00%
"Not X but Y" pattern overuse
(details)
100.00%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
(details)
100.00%
Paragraph length variance
(details)
100.00%
Passive voice overuse
(details)
98.22%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
(details)
100.00%
Em-dash & semicolon overuse
(details)
100.00%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
(details)
100.00%
Repeated phrase echo
(details)
100.00%
Sentence length variance
(details)
52.14%
Sentence opener variety
(details)
68.73%
Adverb-first sentence starts
(details)
59.18%
Pronoun-first sentence starts
(details)
37.32%
Subject-first sentence starts
(details)
0.00%
Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
(details)
56.28%
Technical jargon density
(details)
100.00%
Useless dialogue additions
(details)
100.00%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
(details)
86.8460%
Overall
Model input
System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>
Model response
Messages
Meta
AI
"The chain was on, but Lucien Moreau still managed to
look
like he owned the threshold."
Amber and black eyes tracked
me through the gap.
His charcoal suit carried the
faintest smell of bergamot and something darker, something that reminded me of Avarosian summers and poor decisions.
The ivory handle of his
cane glinted, clip-clopping against the frame in a rhythm that scraped at my nerves. "Open the door." "No." "Aurora." "Fuck off."
I moved to close the
gap.
The cane slid through the
crack with a soft scrape, blocking the latch. "I drove past Golden Empress at half eight. Your scooter wasn't chained outside the curry house." "Stalking constitutes a hobby for you now?" "Facts constitute a living. You skipped work."
My knuckles whitened on the
door. Silas' bass line thudded up through the floorboards, a low heartbeat against my soles.
The air in the hall
hung thick with the pub's fryer oil and stale beer, but Lucien still smelled like money and the ash fields of his father's realm. "Evan's in London."
The words knocked the wind
from me. I stopped pushing the door. "You're lying." "I broker truth. I don't invent it."
Lucien's voice dropped to that
velvet
register that used to
unravel
me. "He landed at Heathrow at dawn. He's asking questions in Whitechapel. About you. About where you sleep. About the scar on your wrist." I shut the door. Undid the chain. Opened it again.
Lucien stepped inside without an
invitation.
He closed the door behind
him and leaned his cane against the wall.
The blade concealed inside it
whispered against the plaster.
He surveyed my flat with
the detached interest of a coroner at a crime scene.
Cardboard boxes still lined the
far wall, labelled in my mother's neat script. Digestive biscuits and spare trainers and the remnants of a life I abandoned six months ago.
Law textbooks sat in a
stack in one corner, untouched since I'd traded pupillage for a delivery van.
My Golden Empress jacket hung
from a bent floor lamp, the embroidered dragon half-peeled.
The window above the sink
rattled each time the tube passed two streets over. The single bulb overhead
flickered
. The air smelled of fried rice and the whisky pub below and the faint metallic tang that trailed after him. "You traded a terrace in Cardiff for this." "It keeps the suits out. Usually." "You've lost
weight
." "And you've lost the right to comment on my body." He turned. The bare bulb caught his platinum hair and turned it to wire. One eye burned amber, warm and
treacherous
. The other pooled black, depthless as the void his father called home. He was immaculate. Every button. Every blade-straight seam.
I wore a torn T-shirt
and jogging bottoms with a bleach stain.
I folded my arms across
my chest. The crescent scar on my left wrist itched, a phantom
pulse
I hadn't felt in weeks. I kept it visible. Let him
look
. Let him catalogue every damage he pretended not to cause. "Why are you here, Luc? To warn me? To gloat?" "To correct an error." He moved toward the kitchenette. The flat was barely ten feet across. His presence shrunk the room.
He opened my fridge, peered
inside, closed it again without expression. "You have bin bags and expired milk. Romantic." "I don't entertain." "Evidently."
I tucked my scarred wrist
behind my back. Too late.
His fingers closed around my
forearm with the speed of a striking viper, gentle but immovable. "Still hiding it?" "Still staring at it?" "You got it climbing a fence in Cardiff. You told me the story while you were drunk on tequila and insisting you weren't afraid of my father's realm." "I wasn't drunk. I was enthusiastic." "You were terrified." "And yet I still climbed." He released me. The absence of his grip left my skin colder than before. He turned back.
His gaze lingered on the
scar. Then on my mouth. Then back to my eyes. The inspection felt tactile, as though he
were mapping
coordinates for a knife throw. "You didn't check the peephole before you opened the chain." "Because I thought you were Mrs.
Chen
from next door." "Mrs.
Chen
wouldn't have lived past the first swing." "She might have. She's tougher than she looks." A ghost of something crossed his face. Not quite a smile. "You always did prefer ordinary people to the monsters you knew." "Ordinary people don't sell suffering by the kilo." The barb struck. His shoulders went rigid. Good. I walked to the window. The glass
was smeared
with grease. Below, a man in a puffer jacket argued with a cabbie. Normal. Human. Dull. "Last spring, you told me to run. You gave me an address for a women's shelter in Croydon and a thousand pounds in an envelope. You told me to disappear." "You did anyway." "I didn't go to Croydon." "I know. I checked." "Of course you did." "Yu-Fei Cheung pays you under the table. You rent this flat from Silas in cash. You haven't called your mother in four months." He listed these facts like items on a shopping list. "You were
determined
to become invisible." "And yet here you are. Visible. Loud. In my space." Silence stretched between us, tight as piano wire. The tube rattled past again. The dragon on my jacket swayed. I turned from the window. "He made a deal three years ago. Your first date was six weeks after he signed." I went still. "What?" "In Avaros. Standard procedure for men who want advantages they haven't earned. Wealth. Influence. The kind of
charm
that makes intelligent women ignore warning signs." Lucien's accent thickened, French creeping into the edges of his consonants like blood in water. "I brokered the contract myself. Triple-tiered invocation. Standard penalty clauses." The room tilted. I gripped the windowsill. The scar on my wrist flared, real now, hot against the metal catch. "You knew." "I know every signature that passes through my office." "You knew. When I came to you last spring. With the split lip and the police reports. You looked me in the eye and you handed me that envelope, and you knew what he was." Lucien adjusted his cuffs. The movement was precise, controlled. A gesture he made when he
was buying
time. "Yes." I grabbed the nearest law textbook and hurled it at him. He didn't flinch. The corner caught his shoulder with a dull thud and fell to the floor, pages splayed like broken wings. "You bastard." "I broker property luck and tax evasion. I don't vet the hearts of men who sign." "You sold him whatever he needed to ruin my life!" "I sold him influence. How he used what remained was his choice." "He hit me because of you!" My voice cracked. I hated the sound. Lucien's jaw tightened, a muscle ticking beneath the skin. That black eye of his
seemed to
swallow the light entirely. "He hit you because he's weak. And I'm here because the contract has an expiry clause. He needs you back in Cardiff to renew it. By force if necessary. The terms require your consent, but Evan was never one to ask politely. He'll take you across the border unconscious if he must." I laughed. The sound scraped my throat. "So this is guilt. The great Lucien Moreau, trafficking in regret." "Don't be childish." "Then what? Loyalty? You don't know the meaning." He crossed the distance between us in two strides. I backed against the wall. The plaster was cold through my thin T-shirt. He planted one hand beside my head. His breath smelled of cloves and ash and the faint sweetness of anise. "I know you ran without asking me to follow. I know you changed your number and moved above a pub rather than take my calls. I know you
look
at that scar every morning and tell yourself it was all him." His thumb caught my chin, tilted my face toward the light. "And I know that right now, you want to knee me in the groin almost as much as you want me to stay." "You're wrong." "Am I?" His gaze dropped to my mouth. "Your
pulse
is visible here." His thumb brushed my throat, feather-light. "It always did give you away." My palms flattened against his chest, fingers curling into the wool of his suit. The fabric was immaculate. Expensive. Like everything he touched. Beneath it, his heart beat steady as a war drum. "I hate you." "You hate that I didn't chase you." His thumb
traced
my jaw. "You hate that you expected me to be something better than what I am." "And what's that?" "A fixer. Not a hero." The door to the flat downstairs slammed. Heavy boots pounded on the stairs. Three sharp raps followed on my door. Not Silas' knock. Not the postman's. The handle turned. Lucien's cane was already in his hand. The blade slid free with a
whisper
of steel. "Expecting someone?" "Never am." The handle turned again.
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Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
100.00%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
0
100.00%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount
1506
totalAiIsmAdverbs
0
found
(empty)
highlights
(empty)
80.00%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
0
"Chen"
100.00%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
53.52%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount
1506
totalAiIsms
14
found
0
word
"velvet"
count
1
1
word
"unravel"
count
1
2
word
"flickered"
count
1
3
word
"weight"
count
1
4
word
"treacherous"
count
1
5
word
"pulse"
count
2
6
word
"determined"
count
1
7
word
"silence"
count
1
8
word
"standard"
count
2
9
word
"charm"
count
1
10
word
"traced"
count
1
11
word
"whisper"
count
1
highlights
0
"velvet"
1
"unravel"
2
"flickered"
3
"weight"
4
"treacherous"
5
"pulse"
6
"determined"
7
"silence"
8
"standard"
9
"charm"
10
"traced"
11
"whisper"
100.00%
Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
0
maxInWindow
0
found
(empty)
highlights
(empty)
100.00%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
0
narrationSentences
107
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
1
hedgeCount
1
narrationSentences
107
filterMatches
0
"look"
hedgeMatches
0
"seemed to"
100.00%
Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences
179
gibberishSentences
0
adjustedGibberishSentences
0
longSentenceCount
0
runOnParagraphCount
0
giantParagraphCount
0
wordSaladCount
0
repetitionLoopCount
0
controlTokenCount
0
repeatedSegmentCount
0
maxSentenceWordsSeen
52
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans
0
markdownWords
0
totalWords
1506
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions
11
unquotedAttributions
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions
11
wordCount
825
uniqueNames
5
maxNameDensity
0.85
worstName
"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity
1.5
worstWindowName
"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Avarosian
1
Lucien
7
Golden
1
Empress
1
French
1
persons
0
"Lucien"
1
"French"
places
(empty)
globalScore
1
windowScore
1
100.00%
Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences
60
glossingSentenceCount
1
matches
0
"smelled like money and the ash fields of h"
100.00%
"Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches
0
per1kWords
0
wordCount
1506
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
0
totalSentences
179
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
105
mean
14.34
std
15.53
cv
1.083
sampleLengths
0
16
1
50
2
3
3
1
4
1
5
2
6
19
7
16
8
7
9
7
10
49
11
3
12
12
13
2
14
7
15
12
16
23
17
10
18
43
19
100
20
8
21
6
22
3
23
10
24
53
25
40
26
10
27
4
28
28
29
8
30
3
31
1
32
26
33
3
34
4
35
28
36
6
37
3
38
5
39
46
40
10
41
10
42
9
43
8
44
11
45
11
46
8
47
8
48
25
49
30
100.00%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount
1
totalSentences
107
matches
0
"was smeared"
98.22%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
2
totalVerbs
131
matches
0
"were mapping"
1
"was buying"
100.00%
Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount
0
semicolonCount
0
flaggedSentences
0
totalSentences
179
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
567
adjectiveStacks
0
stackExamples
(empty)
adverbCount
7
adverbRatio
0.012345679012345678
lyAdverbCount
1
lyAdverbRatio
0.001763668430335097
100.00%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
179
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.00%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
179
mean
8.41
std
7.39
cv
0.879
sampleLengths
0
16
1
9
2
22
3
19
4
3
5
1
6
1
7
2
8
6
9
13
10
16
11
7
12
7
13
6
14
14
15
29
16
3
17
7
18
5
19
2
20
7
21
12
22
23
23
4
24
3
25
3
26
6
27
13
28
9
29
15
30
13
31
16
32
18
33
14
34
14
35
5
36
20
37
8
38
6
39
3
40
10
41
2
42
12
43
7
44
12
45
3
46
2
47
3
48
12
49
7
52.14%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
10
diversityRatio
0.3463687150837989
totalSentences
179
uniqueOpeners
62
68.73%
Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount
2
totalSentences
97
matches
0
"Then on my mouth."
1
"Then back to my eyes."
ratio
0.021
59.18%
Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount
39
totalSentences
97
matches
0
"His charcoal suit carried the"
1
"I moved to close the"
2
"My knuckles whitened on the"
3
"I stopped pushing the door."
4
"I shut the door."
5
"He closed the door behind"
6
"He surveyed my flat with"
7
"My Golden Empress jacket hung"
8
"He was immaculate."
9
"I wore a torn T-shirt"
10
"I folded my arms across"
11
"I kept it visible."
12
"He moved toward the kitchenette."
13
"His presence shrunk the room."
14
"He opened my fridge, peered"
15
"I tucked my scarred wrist"
16
"His fingers closed around my"
17
"He released me."
18
"He turned back."
19
"His gaze lingered on the"
ratio
0.402
37.32%
Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount
82
totalSentences
97
matches
0
"Amber and black eyes tracked"
1
"His charcoal suit carried the"
2
"The ivory handle of his"
3
"I moved to close the"
4
"The cane slid through the"
5
"My knuckles whitened on the"
6
"The air in the hall"
7
"The words knocked the wind"
8
"I stopped pushing the door."
9
"Lucien's voice dropped to that"
10
"I shut the door."
11
"Lucien stepped inside without an"
12
"He closed the door behind"
13
"The blade concealed inside it"
14
"He surveyed my flat with"
15
"Cardboard boxes still lined the"
16
"Law textbooks sat in a"
17
"My Golden Empress jacket hung"
18
"The window above the sink"
19
"The single bulb overhead flickered."
ratio
0.845
0.00%
Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount
0
totalSentences
97
matches
(empty)
ratio
0
56.28%
Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences
33
technicalSentenceCount
4
matches
0
"His charcoal suit carried the faintest smell of bergamot and something darker, something that reminded me of Avarosian summers and poor decisions."
1
"The ivory handle of his cane glinted, clip-clopping against the frame in a rhythm that scraped at my nerves."
2
"The air smelled of fried rice and the whisky pub below and the faint metallic tang that trailed after him."
3
"The inspection felt tactile, as though he were mapping coordinates for a knife throw."
100.00%
Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags
0
uselessAdditionCount
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
0
86.8460%