| 75.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 8 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "the voice said again [again]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 13 | | tagDensity | 0.615 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.125 | | effectiveRatio | 0.125 | |
| 92.49% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 666 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | 0 | | adverb | "barely above a whisper" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 17.42% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 666 | | totalAiIsms | 11 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "pulse" | | 1 | "echo" | | 2 | "glint" | | 3 | "flicker" | | 4 | "chill" | | 5 | "vibrated" | | 6 | "trembled" | | 7 | "whisper" | | 8 | "stomach" | | 9 | "silence" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "eyes widened/narrowed" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 40 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 35.71% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 40 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 45 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 31 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 663 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 9 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 96.81% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 10 | | wordCount | 564 | | uniqueNames | 5 | | maxNameDensity | 1.06 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Aurora | 6 | | Golden | 1 | | Empress | 1 | | Cheung | 1 | | Eva | 1 |
| | persons | | | places | (empty) | | globalScore | 0.968 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 35 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "not quite human, not quite wind" | | 1 | "not quite wind" | | 2 | "thud that seemed to echo from a place just beyond the edge of her sight" | | 3 | "seemed absurdly graceful for something so gaunt" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 663 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 45 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 93.43% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 19 | | mean | 34.89 | | std | 16.64 | | cv | 0.477 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 66 | | 1 | 14 | | 2 | 53 | | 3 | 23 | | 4 | 52 | | 5 | 19 | | 6 | 37 | | 7 | 43 | | 8 | 46 | | 9 | 52 | | 10 | 21 | | 11 | 17 | | 12 | 28 | | 13 | 50 | | 14 | 23 | | 15 | 30 | | 16 | 59 | | 17 | 19 | | 18 | 11 |
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| 96.49% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 40 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 97 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 3 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 3 | | totalSentences | 45 | | ratio | 0.067 | | matches | | 0 | "A shape moved—barely a suggestion—between two stones, skimming the ground like a wisp." | | 1 | "Aurora’s breath caught; the grove felt alive, as if the stones themselves were breathing." | | 2 | "Wind rustled through the leaves, carrying a scent she recognized—a scent of tea, of ginger and cloves, the aroma that clung to the dishes she delivered for the Golden Empress." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 567 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 16 | | adverbRatio | 0.02821869488536155 | | lyAdverbCount | 5 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.008818342151675485 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 45 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 45 | | mean | 14.73 | | std | 6.58 | | cv | 0.447 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 19 | | 1 | 23 | | 2 | 24 | | 3 | 14 | | 4 | 12 | | 5 | 18 | | 6 | 23 | | 7 | 15 | | 8 | 8 | | 9 | 13 | | 10 | 26 | | 11 | 13 | | 12 | 19 | | 13 | 3 | | 14 | 12 | | 15 | 22 | | 16 | 13 | | 17 | 16 | | 18 | 14 | | 19 | 19 | | 20 | 13 | | 21 | 14 | | 22 | 18 | | 23 | 11 | | 24 | 23 | | 25 | 21 | | 26 | 7 | | 27 | 6 | | 28 | 4 | | 29 | 15 | | 30 | 13 | | 31 | 15 | | 32 | 14 | | 33 | 21 | | 34 | 15 | | 35 | 8 | | 36 | 10 | | 37 | 20 | | 38 | 30 | | 39 | 3 | | 40 | 26 | | 41 | 6 | | 42 | 13 | | 43 | 6 | | 44 | 5 |
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| 52.59% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 3 | | diversityRatio | 0.35555555555555557 | | totalSentences | 45 | | uniqueOpeners | 16 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 39 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 96.92% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 12 | | totalSentences | 39 | | matches | | 0 | "She stared up at the" | | 1 | "She stepped forward, the grass" | | 2 | "She clenched the pendant, feeling" | | 3 | "She saw a glint of" | | 4 | "she replied, voice low" | | 5 | "She lifted her hand, the" | | 6 | "It swelled, then fell silent," | | 7 | "Its eyes were hollow pits," | | 8 | "It raised a hand, palm" | | 9 | "She heard a faint ticking," | | 10 | "she asked, voice barely above" | | 11 | "She laughed, a short, nervous" |
| | ratio | 0.308 | |
| 0.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 39 | | totalSentences | 39 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora slipped the thin silver" | | 1 | "The pendant rested against the" | | 2 | "She stared up at the" | | 3 | "a voice whispered from the" | | 4 | "She stepped forward, the grass" | | 5 | "The air smelled of damp" | | 6 | "The grove seemed to hold" | | 7 | "Aurora asked, her tone steady" | | 8 | "She clenched the pendant, feeling" | | 9 | "A rustle cracked through the" | | 10 | "The sound was louder than" | | 11 | "A shape moved—barely a suggestion—between" | | 12 | "the voice said again, this" | | 13 | "Aurora’s eyes narrowed." | | 14 | "The moon filtered through the" | | 15 | "She saw a glint of" | | 16 | "she replied, voice low" | | 17 | "She lifted her hand, the" | | 18 | "The glow brushed the surrounding" | | 19 | "The air shifted, a chill" |
| | ratio | 1 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 39 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 28.57% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 25 | | technicalSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "The sound was louder than any wind could manage, a soft thud that seemed to echo from a place just beyond the edge of her sight." | | 1 | "The air shifted, a chill spreading over her skin, as though the temperature had dropped a degree without warning." | | 2 | "It raised a hand, palm open, and the pendant’s glow dimmed, pulsing slower, as if the stone sensed the presence of the creature." | | 3 | "Aurora’s breath caught; the grove felt alive, as if the stones themselves were breathing." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 8 | | uselessAdditionCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "a voice whispered, not quite human, not quite wind" | | 1 | "she replied, voice low" | | 2 | "the creature hissed, its voice a blend of rust and water" | | 3 | "she asked, voice barely above a whisper" |
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| 7.14% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 7 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "a voice whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "the creature hissed (hiss)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 13 | | tagDensity | 0.538 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.286 | | effectiveRatio | 0.286 | |