Run: 2026-04-24-01KQ08WY53Q2D0WNRAQ393EFEA

Run Details

Duration:
30.6s
Cost:
$0.000571
Provider:
SiliconFlow

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Aurora slipped the thin silver chain over her wrist, feeling the sapphire‑gray of the night press against her cheek. The pendant rested against the scar on her left wrist, its deep crimson gem faintly warm, like a breath held inside a stone. She stared up at the ancient oak standing stones that rose from the grass like crooked fingers, their bark blackened by centuries of weather. “You’re late,” a voice whispered from the shadows, not quite human, not quite wind. She stepped forward, the grass brushing the hem of her black jacket. The air smelled of damp earth and something sweet, like the first bloom of wildflowers that never wilted. The grove seemed to hold its breath, the usual sounds of night muffled as though the world had been draped in a blanket. “Who’s there?” Aurora asked, her tone steady even as a tremor rippled through her ribs. She clenched the pendant, feeling its pulse quicken. A rustle cracked through the darkness, a leaf turning over an unseen stone. The sound was louder than any wind could manage, a soft thud that seemed to echo from a place just beyond the edge of her sight. A shape moved—barely a suggestion—between two stones, skimming the ground like a wisp. “You shouldn’t have come,” the voice said again, this time closer, the syllables dragging like a sigh pulled tight. Aurora’s eyes narrowed. The moon filtered through the canopy, silver ribbons spilling over the moss. She saw a glint of something metallic near the base of a stone, a flicker that vanished when she tried to focus. “I’m not leaving until I get what I need,” she replied, voice low. She lifted her hand, the pendant throbbing brighter, a soft red glow spreading over the scar. The glow brushed the surrounding grass, making the blades appear like veins of light. The air shifted, a chill spreading over her skin, as though the temperature had dropped a degree without warning. A low hum rose, indistinct, like a choir of insects humming in unison. It swelled, then fell silent, leaving a hollow echo that vibrated in her ears. A figure stepped out from behind a stone, its silhouette thin and elongated, skin pale as the moonlight. Its eyes were hollow pits, reflecting nothing but the starlit sky. It raised a hand, palm open, and the pendant’s glow dimmed, pulsing slower, as if the stone sensed the presence of the creature. “You think you can steal the heart of the grove?” the creature hissed, its voice a blend of rust and water. Aurora tightened her grip on the pendant. “I didn’t steal anything,” she said. “I’m looking for answers.” The creature tilted its head, a motion that seemed absurdly graceful for something so gaunt. “Answers hide in the darkness, child. In the time you think you have.” The ground trembled faintly, a subtle shiver that lifted the tiny wildflowers in a ripple. Aurora’s breath caught; the grove felt alive, as if the stones themselves were breathing. She heard a faint ticking, like a clock hidden deep within the earth, beating slower than the cadence of her heart. “Do you know why the time here twists?” she asked, voice barely above a whisper. “Why an hour feels like a day outside?” The creature smiled, a curving line that revealed no teeth. “Because the grove does not belong to your world. It belongs to the in‑between. You have been invited, not warned.” Wind rustled through the leaves, carrying a scent she recognized—a scent of tea, of ginger and cloves, the aroma that clung to the dishes she delivered for the Golden Empress. Aurora’s stomach tightened. The memory of Yu‑Fei Cheung’s bustling kitchen threaded through the darkness, a joke she had made with Eva about delivering a “spirit soup” to a fairy. She laughed, a short, nervous sound. “Eva said this would be a quick run. She never mentioned any… spirits.” Silence fell again, heavy as stone. The creature’s eyes glowed faint
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
75.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags8
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"the voice said again [again]"
dialogueSentences13
tagDensity0.615
leniency1
rawRatio0.125
effectiveRatio0.125
92.49% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount666
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count1
highlights
0"barely above a whisper"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
17.42% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount666
totalAiIsms11
found
0
word"pulse"
count1
1
word"echo"
count2
2
word"glint"
count1
3
word"flicker"
count1
4
word"chill"
count1
5
word"vibrated"
count1
6
word"trembled"
count1
7
word"whisper"
count1
8
word"stomach"
count1
9
word"silence"
count1
highlights
0"pulse"
1"echo"
2"glint"
3"flicker"
4"chill"
5"vibrated"
6"trembled"
7"whisper"
8"stomach"
9"silence"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences40
matches(empty)
35.71% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences40
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences45
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen31
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords663
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions9
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
96.81% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions10
wordCount564
uniqueNames5
maxNameDensity1.06
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Aurora6
Golden1
Empress1
Cheung1
Eva1
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Cheung"
2"Eva"
places(empty)
globalScore0.968
windowScore1
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences35
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"not quite human, not quite wind"
1"not quite wind"
2"thud that seemed to echo from a place just beyond the edge of her sight"
3"seemed absurdly graceful for something so gaunt"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount663
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences45
matches(empty)
93.43% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs19
mean34.89
std16.64
cv0.477
sampleLengths
066
114
253
323
452
519
637
743
846
952
1021
1117
1228
1350
1423
1530
1659
1719
1811
96.49% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences40
matches
0"been draped"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs97
matches
0"were breathing"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences45
ratio0.067
matches
0"A shape moved—barely a suggestion—between two stones, skimming the ground like a wisp."
1"Aurora’s breath caught; the grove felt alive, as if the stones themselves were breathing."
2"Wind rustled through the leaves, carrying a scent she recognized—a scent of tea, of ginger and cloves, the aroma that clung to the dishes she delivered for the Golden Empress."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount567
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount16
adverbRatio0.02821869488536155
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.008818342151675485
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences45
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences45
mean14.73
std6.58
cv0.447
sampleLengths
019
123
224
314
412
518
623
715
88
913
1026
1113
1219
133
1412
1522
1613
1716
1814
1919
2013
2114
2218
2311
2423
2521
267
276
284
2915
3013
3115
3214
3321
3415
358
3610
3720
3830
393
4026
416
4213
436
445
52.59% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.35555555555555557
totalSentences45
uniqueOpeners16
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences39
matches(empty)
ratio0
96.92% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount12
totalSentences39
matches
0"She stared up at the"
1"She stepped forward, the grass"
2"She clenched the pendant, feeling"
3"She saw a glint of"
4"she replied, voice low"
5"She lifted her hand, the"
6"It swelled, then fell silent,"
7"Its eyes were hollow pits,"
8"It raised a hand, palm"
9"She heard a faint ticking,"
10"she asked, voice barely above"
11"She laughed, a short, nervous"
ratio0.308
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount39
totalSentences39
matches
0"Aurora slipped the thin silver"
1"The pendant rested against the"
2"She stared up at the"
3"a voice whispered from the"
4"She stepped forward, the grass"
5"The air smelled of damp"
6"The grove seemed to hold"
7"Aurora asked, her tone steady"
8"She clenched the pendant, feeling"
9"A rustle cracked through the"
10"The sound was louder than"
11"A shape moved—barely a suggestion—between"
12"the voice said again, this"
13"Aurora’s eyes narrowed."
14"The moon filtered through the"
15"She saw a glint of"
16"she replied, voice low"
17"She lifted her hand, the"
18"The glow brushed the surrounding"
19"The air shifted, a chill"
ratio1
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences39
matches(empty)
ratio0
28.57% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences25
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"The sound was louder than any wind could manage, a soft thud that seemed to echo from a place just beyond the edge of her sight."
1"The air shifted, a chill spreading over her skin, as though the temperature had dropped a degree without warning."
2"It raised a hand, palm open, and the pendant’s glow dimmed, pulsing slower, as if the stone sensed the presence of the creature."
3"Aurora’s breath caught; the grove felt alive, as if the stones themselves were breathing."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags8
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"a voice whispered, not quite human, not quite wind"
1"she replied, voice low"
2"the creature hissed, its voice a blend of rust and water"
3"she asked, voice barely above a whisper"
7.14% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags7
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"a voice whispered (whisper)"
1"the creature hissed (hiss)"
dialogueSentences13
tagDensity0.538
leniency1
rawRatio0.286
effectiveRatio0.286
66.4194%