Run: 2026-04-24-01KQ091BWMX97FBM32NAR5VQ07

Run Details

Duration:
46.1s
Cost:
$0.007006
Provider:
Xiaomi

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The third deadbolt clicked, and the door swung inward. For a heartbeat, Rory forgot why she’d gotten up from Eva’s cluttered kitchen table. He stood in the dim glow of the landing light, taller than memory allowed. The ozone-tinged scent of a coming storm clung to his overcoat, mixing with the expensive sandalwood that always trailed him like a ghost. His platinum hair was darker in the poor light, slicked back from a face that hadn’t changed—angular, sharp, and unsettlingly composed. “Lucien.” Her voice came out flat. A statement, not a welcome. “Rory.” His gaze swept over her, a quick, clinical assessment that felt like a physical touch. He noted the faded band t-shirt, the threadbare joggers, the way she held the door like a shield. “You’ve changed the locks.” “A lot of things change in two years.” She didn’t step back. “How did you get the address?” “I’m an information broker, *chérie*. It’s what I do.” A faint, humourless smile touched his lips. “Are you going to invite me in, or shall we conduct our reunion in this charming corridor? I can smell Mrs. Patel’s lamb rogan josh from here. It’s making my mouth water.” Rory’s knuckles whitened on the door edge. The old magnetic pull was still there, a low hum beneath her ribs. It made her want to slam the door in his perfect face. “You lost your invitation privilege. What do you want?” His heterochromatic eyes—one amber, one black as a starless night—held hers. The black eye seemed to drink the light. “A conversation. Five minutes. You can hold a weapon, if it makes you feel better. I see you’ve kept your kitchen knives sharp.” He nodded past her shoulder towards the counter. She’d left the chef’s knife she’d been using to chop onions right beside the sink. An oversight. Or maybe not. She sighed, a gust of air that did nothing to loosen the tension in her chest. Stepping back, she gave the door a nudge. “Five minutes. The clock starts now.” Lucien moved with a predator’s grace, folding himself through the doorway. The cramped flat shrank around him. His presence was a gravitational force, pulling everything into its orbit. He didn’t remove his coat. His ivory-handled cane tapped a soft rhythm on the worn floorboards as he took in the chaos of Eva’s domain—books stacked in precarious towers, scrolls tied with twine, maps pinned to every available wall space. “Cozy,” he murmured. “Don’t touch anything.” Rory closed the door, engaging only the single deadbolt. The finality of the click echoed. She leaned against it, crossing her arms. Ptolemy, Eva’s fat tabby, wound between Lucien’s legs, arching his back against the fine wool. Traitor. Lucien watched the cat, a flicker of something softer in his expression before it vanished. “I hear you’re making deliveries. For Yu-Fei.” The words landed like stones. Rory’s jaw tightened. “You had me followed?” “Observed. There’s a difference. Yu-Fei is a good woman. Steady. Her network is solid. But it’s beneath you, Rory. Delivering sweet and sour pork in the rain.” “What I do isn’t your concern. Not anymore.” She pushed off the door, needing movement. She stalked to the counter, putting the solid block of wood between them. The knife was a comforting weight in her peripheral vision. “Why are you really here?” He turned, his amber eye catching the yellow light from the single pendant lamp. “I’m in a bind. A delicate situation has arisen. One that requires a touch… outside the usual channels.” Rory laughed, a short, sharp sound. “No.” “You haven’t heard the details.” “I don’t need to. You show up, unannounced, after two years of absolute silence. You let me think—” She stopped, biting the words off. The hurt was a live thing, still, coiled in her gut. She would not give it voice. “You need something. So you come here. To the one person you think is still stupid enough to help you.” Lucien’s face hardened. The charming veneer cracked. “That is not fair.” “Fair?” She leaned forward, palms flat on the countertop. “You disappeared. Right after the Dulwich job. Right after—” She gestured vaguely between them, a flick of her wrist that encompassed everything: the almost-kiss in the rain-slicked alley, the way he’d looked at her when she’d disarmed the warded lock, the dinner invitation he’d extended and then revoked with a cold professionalism that felt like a slap. “Right after things got complicated. You vanished. Poof. Not a word. Not a call. Nothing.” He was silent for a long moment, his gaze fixed on the scar on her left wrist, a pale crescent moon. She curled her fingers into a fist. “I had to,” he said, his voice lower. “The complication wasn’t just… us. It was larger. The people I deal with, Rory. They don’t forgive liaisons. They don’t forgive attachments. I was protecting you.” “From what? From you?” She shook her head. “Don’t. Don’t dress up your cowardice as chivalry. You were scared. Of something real. So you ran back to your shadows and your information wars, and you left me standing in the rain.” The air in the flat thickened. Ptolemy, sensing the shift, slunk under the sofa. Lucien took a step forward, then another, until he was on her side of the counter. The space between them crackled. She could see the faint, almost invisible lines around his eyes, the signs of strain that two years had etched. “You’re not wrong,” he admitted, and the confession seemed to cost him something. “I was… unprepared for what I felt. It made me predictable. It made *you* a target. I severed the connection to sever the threat.” “And now?” “Now the threat is here anyway.” He reached into his coat pocket. Rory’s hand snapped towards the knife. “Easy.” He withdrew a small, slate-grey tablet, its surface smooth and cool. He placed it on the counter between them. “This is the job. It involves a retrieval from a private collector. A very dangerous one. The payout is significant. Enough to get you out of this flat. Enough to fund whatever it is you actually want to do with your life, Rory. Law. Research. Running away again. Whatever you choose.” She stared at the tablet, then back at his face. The longing in his expression was raw, unguarded. It hit her harder than any argument. “You’re offering me a job. After everything, you show up and dangle a payday like a carrot.” “I’m offering you a way out. And I’m offering you a chance to work with me. To see for yourself that my reasons for leaving were not… simple.” “It’s always complicated with you, Lucien. That’s the problem.” Her voice was a whisper now, all the fight draining out, leaving a weary ache. “Complicated reasons. Complicated jobs. Complicated feelings that you pack up and put away in a box when they get inconvenient.” He was close enough now that she could see the exact gradient of his amber eye, the flecks of gold near the pupil. He smelled of rain and ozone and that sandalwood, a scent that haunted her dreams. His hand lifted, not towards the tablet, but towards her face. She flinched, and his fingers stopped, hovering an inch from her cheek. “I put nothing about you in a box,” he said, the words rough. “Do you think I wanted to disappear? Every city I’ve been in for two years, I’ve looked for a flash of black hair. I’ve listened for the sound of a sarcastic retort in a crowded room.” His hand finally brushed her skin, a featherlight touch at her temple that sent a jolt straight down her spine. “I did not come back just for a job, Rory. I came back because I cannot do this anymore. I cannot pretend you were a transaction.” The kitchen was silent except for the hum of the old refrigerator. The onion she’d been chopping sat half-finished on the board. Her breath felt shallow. The hurt was still there, a deep bruise, but beneath it, the old, dangerous attraction surged, vivid and undeniable. She saw the war in his mismatched eyes—the calculating fixer at odds with the man standing in a cluttered kitchen, bleeding emotion. She should tell him to leave. To take his tablet and his complicated reasons and vanish back into the underworld he inhabited. She should pick up the knife and remind him she wasn’t the naive girl he’d left shivering in that alley. Instead, she turned her head, just slightly, so her lips grazed the palm of his hovering hand. The touch was electric. A sharp intake of breath, from one of them, from both. His hand cupped her jaw, fingers sliding into her hair, tilting her face up. The distance between them collapsed. The world narrowed to the heat of his body, the frantic beat of her own heart, the impossible, terrifying weight of a moment two years overdue. “Five minutes,” she breathed against his lips. He closed the final inch.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags18
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"She gestured vaguely [vaguely]"
dialogueSentences44
tagDensity0.409
leniency0.818
rawRatio0.056
effectiveRatio0.045
90.06% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1509
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"really"
count1
1
adverb"very"
count1
2
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"really"
1"very"
2"slightly"
80.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found
0"Patel"
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
43.67% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1509
totalAiIsms17
found
0
word"tinged"
count1
1
word"magnetic"
count1
2
word"perfect"
count1
3
word"tension"
count1
4
word"predator"
count1
5
word"echoed"
count1
6
word"flicker"
count1
7
word"comforting"
count1
8
word"weight"
count2
9
word"silence"
count1
10
word"etched"
count1
11
word"predictable"
count1
12
word"whisper"
count1
13
word"down her spine"
count1
14
word"calculating"
count1
15
word"electric"
count1
highlights
0"tinged"
1"magnetic"
2"perfect"
3"tension"
4"predator"
5"echoed"
6"flicker"
7"comforting"
8"weight"
9"silence"
10"etched"
11"predictable"
12"whisper"
13"down her spine"
14"calculating"
15"electric"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences88
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences88
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences113
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen59
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans2
markdownWords2
totalWords1504
ratio0.001
matches
0"chérie"
1"you"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions6
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions14
wordCount960
uniqueNames3
maxNameDensity0.63
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Rory6
Eva3
Lucien5
persons
0"Rory"
1"Eva"
2"Lucien"
places(empty)
globalScore1
windowScore1
75.37% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences67
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"felt like a physical touch"
1"felt like a slap"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.665
wordCount1504
matches
0"not towards the tablet, but towards her face"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences113
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs45
mean33.42
std22.95
cv0.687
sampleLengths
023
158
21
310
438
518
648
732
89
950
1020
1130
1268
133
1441
1522
1612
1727
1843
1932
207
215
2261
2311
2481
2528
2634
2741
2855
2937
302
3118
3271
3325
3417
3528
3644
3761
3895
3967
4042
4117
4260
437
445
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences88
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs159
matches(empty)
41.72% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount5
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences113
ratio0.035
matches
0"His platinum hair was darker in the poor light, slicked back from a face that hadn’t changed—angular, sharp, and unsettlingly composed."
1"His heterochromatic eyes—one amber, one black as a starless night—held hers."
2"His ivory-handled cane tapped a soft rhythm on the worn floorboards as he took in the chaos of Eva’s domain—books stacked in precarious towers, scrolls tied with twine, maps pinned to every available wall space."
3"She saw the war in his mismatched eyes—the calculating fixer at odds with the man standing in a cluttered kitchen, bleeding emotion."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount971
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small, slate-grey tablet,"
adverbCount26
adverbRatio0.026776519052523172
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.005149330587023687
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences113
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences113
mean13.31
std10.28
cv0.773
sampleLengths
09
114
214
323
421
51
65
75
816
918
104
1112
126
1316
1432
157
1613
1712
189
1911
208
2131
2215
232
243
2516
268
276
2811
296
3011
315
3235
333
3412
356
367
3715
381
3915
407
415
423
434
4427
4515
4613
4710
485
4914
52.51% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.336283185840708
totalSentences113
uniqueOpeners38
39.22% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences85
matches
0"Instead, she turned her head,"
ratio0.012
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount47
totalSentences85
matches
0"He stood in the dim"
1"His platinum hair was darker"
2"Her voice came out flat."
3"His gaze swept over her,"
4"He noted the faded band"
5"She didn’t step back"
6"It made her want to"
7"His heterochromatic eyes—one amber, one"
8"He nodded past her shoulder"
9"She’d left the chef’s knife"
10"She sighed, a gust of"
11"His presence was a gravitational"
12"He didn’t remove his coat."
13"His ivory-handled cane tapped a"
14"She leaned against it, crossing"
15"She pushed off the door,"
16"She stalked to the counter,"
17"He turned, his amber eye"
18"She stopped, biting the words"
19"She would not give it"
ratio0.553
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount80
totalSentences85
matches
0"The third deadbolt clicked, and"
1"He stood in the dim"
2"The ozone-tinged scent of a"
3"His platinum hair was darker"
4"Her voice came out flat."
5"A statement, not a welcome."
6"His gaze swept over her,"
7"He noted the faded band"
8"She didn’t step back"
9"A faint, humourless smile touched"
10"Rory’s knuckles whitened on the"
11"The old magnetic pull was"
12"It made her want to"
13"His heterochromatic eyes—one amber, one"
14"The black eye seemed to"
15"He nodded past her shoulder"
16"She’d left the chef’s knife"
17"She sighed, a gust of"
18"Lucien moved with a predator’s"
19"The cramped flat shrank around"
ratio0.941
58.82% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences85
matches
0"To take his tablet and"
ratio0.012
65.64% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences37
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"His platinum hair was darker in the poor light, slicked back from a face that hadn’t changed—angular, sharp, and unsettlingly composed."
1"She sighed, a gust of air that did nothing to loosen the tension in her chest."
2"He smelled of rain and ozone and that sandalwood, a scent that haunted her dreams."
3"His hand cupped her jaw, fingers sliding into her hair, tilting her face up."
69.44% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags18
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"he said, his voice lower"
1"he admitted, and the confession seemed to cost him something"
81.82% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags5
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"he murmured (murmur)"
1"he admitted (admit)"
2"she breathed (breathe)"
dialogueSentences44
tagDensity0.114
leniency0.227
rawRatio0.6
effectiveRatio0.136
79.7423%