Run: 2026-04-24-01KQ0926EBB1AASW5TF11SD7QD

Run Details

Duration:
46.4s
Cost:
$0.006912
Provider:
Xiaomi

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The damp chill of the abandoned Camden Town tube station clung to Harlow Quinn’s coat. It wasn’t the usual London chill; this was a cellar cold, a tomb cold, smelling of wet stone and rust. And something else. Copper, thick and sweet, under the sharp ozone tang of recent magic. Sergeant Davies from the SOCO unit met her at the mouth of the tunnel, his face pale in the beam of his torch. “Down here, Detective. It’s… odd.” Odd was an understatement. They’d found a body in what the locals, the ones who’d vanished like smoke before the cordon went up, called the Veil Market. Quinn knew the stories. A ghost market, trading in things that shouldn’t exist. She’d dismissed them as urban folklore, the kind of tales drunks spun in East End pubs. But here she was, descending worn steps into the belly of the city. The station platform was a cavern of shadows. Fairy lights, strung between old pillars and defunct signage, cast a garish, coloured glow over the space. Stalls made of packing crates and pallets were scattered haphazardly, their wares—jars of luminous moss, bundles of dried herbs that seemed to twitch, tarnished silver jewellery—shrouded under heavy cloths. The entire place felt violated, frozen mid-party. And in the centre, under a single, buzzing fluorescent tube someone had jury-rigged to the ceiling, lay the reason for their presence. The victim was a man, mid-thirties, dressed in a sharp, modern suit that looked violently out of place. He was on his back, arms at his sides, palms up. No visible trauma. His face was a mask of perfect, placid calm. Too calm. Quinn’s eyes narrowed. She’d seen dead faces before. They always held some final echo of surprise, pain, or fear. This was the serene mask of a mannequin. “DOA,” Davies stated the obvious, his voice echoing. “No ID. No wallet. No phone. Just this in his pocket.” He held up an evidence bag. Inside was a small, tarnished brass compass, its face etched with symbols that made Quinn’s eyes water if she stared too long. The needle, however, spun in a lazy, continuous circle, utterly useless. Quinn crouched, the worn leather of her watch strap creaking as she rested her hands on her knees. Her gaze swept the scene in a grid pattern, a habit drilled into her over eighteen years. The body was positioned too neatly, too deliberately. It wasn’t dumped; it was arranged. “No defensive wounds,” she murmured. “No signs of struggle. The dust around the stalls is undisturbed. He was placed here, clean.” “The working theory is a heart attack,” Davies offered. “Or a drug overdose. Some of the stuff they flog down here… well, you can imagine. Could be a new synthetic. Makes the heart just… stop.” “Then where’s the injection site? The pills? The paraphernalia?” Quinn’s voice was flat, cutting through the offered theory like a knife. “You don’t get a heart attack and fall into a perfect starfish position in the middle of an empty market. Someone dressed him, laid him out like a sleeping saint, and took everything that could identify him. Except for a compass that doesn’t work.” She stood, her knees popping. “This isn’t a medical event, Sergeant. This is theatre.” A scuff of a shoe on gravel from the tunnel entrance announced another arrival. Eva Kowalski hurried in, her round glasses slightly askew, a heavy satchel banging against her hip. She stopped short at the sight of the body, her hand flying to her mouth. Her freckles stood out starkly against her suddenly bloodless skin. “Oh, Harlow.” “What are you doing here, Eva?” “Detective Inspector Graves called me. He remembered my work on the St. Giles relic theft. He said the location… well, he thought I might be able to contextualize it.” She tucked a stray curl of red hair behind her left ear, a familiar, nervous tic. Her green eyes, wide behind the lenses, scanned the stalls, the lights, the body. “This is the Veil Market. It was here last week. The Bone Token you need for entry… they’re made from the knucklebones of a consecrated saint. Very rare. Very expensive.” “And our victim paid the price,” Quinn said, gesturing to the corpse. Eva crept closer, her gaze not on the man’s face, but on the compass now held in another evidence bag by a technician. “Can I see that? The compass?” Quinn gave a curt nod. The technician handed it over. Eva turned the bag in her hands, peering at the etched brass. “These sigils… they’re wards. Containment sigils, from the Papyri Graecae Magicae. This isn’t just a compass. It’s a Veil Compass. It doesn’t point north. It’s supposed to point toward the nearest breach. A thin spot between… worlds.” She looked up, her expression troubled. “Where was it found?” “Right jacket pocket,” Davies supplied. Eva shook her head. “No. That’s wrong. A shade artisan crafts these. They’re tools for traders here, for navigators of the Veil. You’d never keep one in a pocket like a set of keys. It would go in a lined pouch, protected. Its readings would be skewed by proximity to other charms. To just… have it loose? It’s like keeping a live grenade in your sock.” Quinn watched her friend, then looked back at the body. Eva saw the world through layers of myth and history, a lens Quinn didn’t possess. But her observation was pure, physical logic. A specialist tool, handled incorrectly. “You’re saying it wasn’t his.” “I’m saying it doesn’t fit. It’s like you said, Harlow. Theatre. Someone left a prop.” Eva’s gaze drifted past the body, to a specific stall in the corner. A large, velvet-draped table. The cloth was partially pulled aside, revealing a collection of tarnished mirrors and crystal balls. “Or a message.” Quinn followed her gaze. The stall was in the deepest shadow, just at the edge of the fluorescent light’s reach. She walked toward it, her footsteps silent on the grimy concrete. She didn’t touch the velvet. She didn’t need to. The faint, luminous dust motes dancing in the air around the stall were enough. They weren’t settling. They were moving, slow and deliberate, in a faint, spiralling pattern, like a lazy whirlpool. “The air here is colder,” Quinn said, her breath not misting, which it should have. She held her hand up, palm flat, and felt it—a distinct, sinking sensation, like plunging her hand into cool water. A breeze, coming from nowhere, stirred the fine hairs on her forearm. Davies shifted uncomfortably. “Draft from the tunnels, probably.” “There are no active tunnels here,” Eva said, her voice quiet, intense. She’d come up beside Quinn, her satchel clutched to her chest. “And drafts don’t feel like a drain. They don’t pull.” She pointed a trembling finger at the stall’s table. On its surface, amidst the mirrors, was a perfect circle of what looked like ash, no bigger than a fifty-pence piece. In the centre of the ash circle, a single, perfect white feather stood upright, its tip barely touching the table. Quinn’s sharp jaw tightened. “Nobody touched that. Nobody breathed on it. It’s been here, like that, since before we arrived.” She looked from the impossible feather to the serene body on the platform. “He wasn’t the customer. He wasn’t the merchant.” Her eyes, trained to see the lie in a suspect’s posture, the twitch in a witness’s eye, finally saw the whole, damning picture. “He’s the product. The display. Someone opened a stall, put their merchandise on show, and cleaned up after themselves.” She tapped the evidence bag with the spinning compass. “But they left their calling card. This compass isn’t just pointing to a breach. It’s marking the spot. This entire market… this scene… it’s a declaration.” Eva swallowed hard. “A declaration of what?” Quinn looked at her, then at the gawking, white-faced Sergeant Davies. The ordinary world of procedure and forensics had just been gutted, left neatly arranged on a dirty platform floor. “Of a new shop opening,” she said, the words cold and precise. “And our victim is the window dressing.”
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags18
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences34
tagDensity0.529
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
77.84% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1354
totalAiIsmAdverbs6
found
0
adverb"utterly"
count1
1
adverb"deliberately"
count1
2
adverb"slightly"
count1
3
adverb"suddenly"
count1
4
adverb"very"
count2
highlights
0"utterly"
1"deliberately"
2"slightly"
3"suddenly"
4"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
29.84% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1354
totalAiIsms19
found
0
word"chill"
count2
1
word"perfect"
count4
2
word"echo"
count1
3
word"echoing"
count1
4
word"etched"
count2
5
word"synthetic"
count1
6
word"familiar"
count1
7
word"scanned"
count1
8
word"velvet"
count2
9
word"crystal"
count1
10
word"footsteps"
count1
11
word"dancing"
count1
12
word"amidst"
count1
highlights
0"chill"
1"perfect"
2"echo"
3"echoing"
4"etched"
5"synthetic"
6"familiar"
7"scanned"
8"velvet"
9"crystal"
10"footsteps"
11"dancing"
12"amidst"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences83
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences83
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences99
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen62
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1351
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions12
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions40
wordCount901
uniqueNames13
maxNameDensity1.66
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
Camden1
Town1
Harlow1
Quinn15
London1
Davies6
Veil1
Market1
East1
End1
Kowalski1
Eva8
Sergeant2
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Davies"
3"Market"
4"Kowalski"
5"Eva"
6"Sergeant"
places
0"Camden"
1"Town"
2"London"
3"East"
4"End"
globalScore0.668
windowScore0.667
66.67% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences60
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"herbs that seemed to twitch, tarnished silver jewellery—shrouded under heavy cloths"
1"looked like ash, no bigger than a fifty-p"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.74
wordCount1351
matches
0"not on the man’s face, but on the compass now held in another evidence bag by a technic"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences99
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs26
mean51.96
std30.22
cv0.582
sampleLengths
073
15
269
383
470
558
670
735
879
957
106
1189
1212
1329
1469
155
1666
1742
1850
1972
2047
218
2283
23118
247
2549
88.35% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount4
totalSentences83
matches
0"were scattered"
1"was positioned"
2"was arranged"
3"been gutted"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs138
matches
0"was, descending"
1"weren’t settling"
27.42% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences99
ratio0.04
matches
0"It wasn’t the usual London chill; this was a cellar cold, a tomb cold, smelling of wet stone and rust."
1"Stalls made of packing crates and pallets were scattered haphazardly, their wares—jars of luminous moss, bundles of dried herbs that seemed to twitch, tarnished silver jewellery—shrouded under heavy cloths."
2"It wasn’t dumped; it was arranged."
3"She held her hand up, palm flat, and felt it—a distinct, sinking sensation, like plunging her hand into cool water."
88.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount910
adjectiveStacks2
stackExamples
0"large, velvet-draped table."
1"single, perfect white feather"
adverbCount28
adverbRatio0.03076923076923077
lyAdverbCount15
lyAdverbRatio0.016483516483516484
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences99
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences99
mean13.65
std10.66
cv0.781
sampleLengths
015
120
23
312
423
55
64
723
84
99
1016
1113
128
1317
1429
157
1622
1718
1811
193
209
212
223
235
2411
258
268
2717
2822
2911
3018
3117
328
336
345
3516
369
3726
3821
3949
409
4114
4216
4315
4410
452
466
4745
4814
4930
63.97% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.41414141414141414
totalSentences99
uniqueOpeners41
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences79
matches(empty)
ratio0
78.23% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount28
totalSentences79
matches
0"It wasn’t the usual London"
1"They’d found a body in"
2"She’d dismissed them as urban"
3"He was on his back,"
4"His face was a mask"
5"She’d seen dead faces before."
6"They always held some final"
7"He held up an evidence"
8"Her gaze swept the scene"
9"It wasn’t dumped; it was"
10"She stood, her knees popping"
11"She stopped short at the"
12"Her freckles stood out starkly"
13"She tucked a stray curl"
14"Her green eyes, wide behind"
15"She looked up, her expression"
16"She walked toward it, her"
17"She didn’t touch the velvet."
18"She didn’t need to."
19"They weren’t settling."
ratio0.354
16.96% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount70
totalSentences79
matches
0"The damp chill of the"
1"It wasn’t the usual London"
2"Copper, thick and sweet, under"
3"Sergeant Davies from the SOCO"
4"They’d found a body in"
5"Quinn knew the stories."
6"A ghost market, trading in"
7"She’d dismissed them as urban"
8"The station platform was a"
9"Fairy lights, strung between old"
10"Stalls made of packing crates"
11"The entire place felt violated,"
12"The victim was a man,"
13"He was on his back,"
14"His face was a mask"
15"Quinn’s eyes narrowed."
16"She’d seen dead faces before."
17"They always held some final"
18"This was the serene mask"
19"Davies stated the obvious, his"
ratio0.886
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences79
matches(empty)
ratio0
86.47% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences38
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"Stalls made of packing crates and pallets were scattered haphazardly, their wares—jars of luminous moss, bundles of dried herbs that seemed to twitch, tarnished…"
1"The victim was a man, mid-thirties, dressed in a sharp, modern suit that looked violently out of place."
2"Inside was a small, tarnished brass compass, its face etched with symbols that made Quinn’s eyes water if she stared too long."
13.89% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags18
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"Davies stated, his voice echoing"
1"She stood, her knees popping"
2"She looked up, her expression troubled"
3"Eva said, her voice quiet, intense"
91.18% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags6
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"Davies stated (state)"
1"she murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences34
tagDensity0.176
leniency0.353
rawRatio0.333
effectiveRatio0.118
76.5160%