| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 21 | | adverbTagCount | 2 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Nyx announced suddenly [suddenly]" | | 1 | "Isolde interrupted gently [gently]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 58 | | tagDensity | 0.362 | | leniency | 0.724 | | rawRatio | 0.095 | | effectiveRatio | 0.069 | |
| 77.86% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1581 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 7 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "carefully" | | 1 | "suddenly" | | 2 | "precisely" | | 3 | "gently" | | 4 | "completely" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 14.61% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1581 | | totalAiIsms | 27 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | | 20 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "otherworldly" | | 1 | "traced" | | 2 | "familiar" | | 3 | "velvet" | | 4 | "crystal" | | 5 | "scanning" | | 6 | "warmth" | | 7 | "pulsed" | | 8 | "echoing" | | 9 | "whisper" | | 10 | "resonated" | | 11 | "cascading" | | 12 | "dance" | | 13 | "flickered" | | 14 | "racing" | | 15 | "structure" | | 16 | "sense of" | | 17 | "chaotic" | | 18 | "intensity" | | 19 | "trembled" | | 20 | "echoes" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "eyes widened/narrowed" | | count | 1 |
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| 92.11% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 3 | | narrationSentences | 76 | | matches | | 0 | "filled with awe" | | 1 | "d with awe" | | 2 | "f in fear" |
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| 0.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 8 | | narrationSentences | 76 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "seemed to" | | 1 | "seem to" | | 2 | "began to" |
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| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 113 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 44 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1573 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 21 | | unquotedAttributions | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "From behind them, Silas grunted, adjusting the strap of his bag." |
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| 0.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 73 | | wordCount | 908 | | uniqueNames | 12 | | maxNameDensity | 1.98 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 5.5 | | worstWindowName | "Isolde" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 3 | | Park | 3 | | Heartstone | 3 | | Pendant | 1 | | Nyx | 11 | | Silas | 10 | | Aurora | 18 | | Grove | 3 | | Isolde | 16 | | Fae-Forged | 2 | | Blade | 2 | | Dymas | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Nyx" | | 1 | "Silas" | | 2 | "Aurora" | | 3 | "Isolde" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Pendant" | | 3 | "Grove" |
| | globalScore | 0.509 | | windowScore | 0 | |
| 66.67% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 60 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "bark that seemed to contain swirling galaxies" | | 1 | "quite reach her eyes" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1573 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 113 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 52 | | mean | 30.25 | | std | 15.13 | | cv | 0.5 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 80 | | 1 | 22 | | 2 | 16 | | 3 | 30 | | 4 | 26 | | 5 | 67 | | 6 | 15 | | 7 | 41 | | 8 | 31 | | 9 | 48 | | 10 | 24 | | 11 | 45 | | 12 | 42 | | 13 | 22 | | 14 | 47 | | 15 | 5 | | 16 | 47 | | 17 | 31 | | 18 | 16 | | 19 | 44 | | 20 | 26 | | 21 | 13 | | 22 | 22 | | 23 | 36 | | 24 | 21 | | 25 | 13 | | 26 | 28 | | 27 | 33 | | 28 | 15 | | 29 | 27 | | 30 | 36 | | 31 | 26 | | 32 | 21 | | 33 | 26 | | 34 | 15 | | 35 | 23 | | 36 | 40 | | 37 | 34 | | 38 | 20 | | 39 | 35 | | 40 | 19 | | 41 | 34 | | 42 | 32 | | 43 | 13 | | 44 | 51 | | 45 | 15 | | 46 | 37 | | 47 | 13 | | 48 | 16 | | 49 | 28 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 76 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 162 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 5 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 6 | | totalSentences | 113 | | ratio | 0.053 | | matches | | 0 | "The familiar path through Richmond Park dissolved into something else—a clearing where wildflowers bloomed in impossible colors, their petals shimmering with an inner light." | | 1 | "Time here moved differently; the sun hung motionless in the sky, casting a gentle, perpetual twilight." | | 2 | "As they moved deeper into the Grove, Aurora noticed the standing stones Isolde had mentioned—tall oaks with bark that seemed to contain swirling galaxies." | | 3 | "Aurora's fingers tightened around the Fae-Forged Blade at her belt—Isolde's gift, cold as winter even in this unnatural warmth." | | 4 | "Visions swirled within the liquid—images of the old cathedral, its stones blackened with corruption, figures moving between the shadows that writhed like living things." | | 5 | "As they turned to leave the Grove, Aurora's eyes caught one final image in the distance—a glimpse of the cathedral, its shadowed spires reaching toward a sky that glowed with the warm amber light of Dymas." |
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| 95.79% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 915 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 41 | | adverbRatio | 0.04480874316939891 | | lyAdverbCount | 16 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.017486338797814208 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 113 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 113 | | mean | 13.92 | | std | 7.24 | | cv | 0.52 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 26 | | 1 | 29 | | 2 | 25 | | 3 | 11 | | 4 | 11 | | 5 | 7 | | 6 | 9 | | 7 | 11 | | 8 | 19 | | 9 | 5 | | 10 | 21 | | 11 | 17 | | 12 | 10 | | 13 | 24 | | 14 | 16 | | 15 | 11 | | 16 | 4 | | 17 | 10 | | 18 | 13 | | 19 | 18 | | 20 | 12 | | 21 | 19 | | 22 | 24 | | 23 | 24 | | 24 | 11 | | 25 | 13 | | 26 | 7 | | 27 | 19 | | 28 | 19 | | 29 | 24 | | 30 | 18 | | 31 | 3 | | 32 | 19 | | 33 | 15 | | 34 | 16 | | 35 | 16 | | 36 | 5 | | 37 | 10 | | 38 | 20 | | 39 | 17 | | 40 | 15 | | 41 | 8 | | 42 | 8 | | 43 | 3 | | 44 | 13 | | 45 | 10 | | 46 | 24 | | 47 | 10 | | 48 | 14 | | 49 | 12 |
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| 63.72% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 8 | | diversityRatio | 0.4247787610619469 | | totalSentences | 113 | | uniqueOpeners | 48 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 69 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 7 | | totalSentences | 69 | | matches | | 0 | "She carefully stepped onto the" | | 1 | "They waited in the strange," | | 2 | "Their petals were a deep" | | 3 | "Her pale lavender eyes held" | | 4 | "Her voice was like chimes" | | 5 | "She gestured to the stone" | | 6 | "She gestured to the stone" |
| | ratio | 0.101 | |
| 39.71% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 58 | | totalSentences | 69 | | matches | | 0 | "The air in Richmond Park" | | 1 | "Aurora traced the silver chain" | | 2 | "Aurora murmured, more to herself" | | 3 | "Nyx made a sound like" | | 4 | "Aurora shot him a look." | | 5 | "Silas just rolled his eyes" | | 6 | "The moment they crossed the" | | 7 | "The familiar path through Richmond" | | 8 | "Silas breathed, his usual cynicism" | | 9 | "Aurora whispered, her voice filled" | | 10 | "She carefully stepped onto the" | | 11 | "The flowers seemed to lean" | | 12 | "Nyx flowed alongside her, their" | | 13 | "Aurora said, scanning the clearing" | | 14 | "They waited in the strange," | | 15 | "Aurora's fingers tightened around the" | | 16 | "The pendant around her neck" | | 17 | "Nyx observed, their voice like" | | 18 | "Aurora ignored him, her attention" | | 19 | "Their petals were a deep" |
| | ratio | 0.841 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 69 | | matches | | 0 | "Before Aurora could answer, Silas" | | 1 | "Before Silas could respond, the" |
| | ratio | 0.029 | |
| 38.33% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 41 | | technicalSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora traced the silver chain of her Heartstone Pendant, the crimson gem warm against her palm as they approached the ancient standing oaks that marked the bou…" | | 1 | "As they moved deeper into the Grove, Aurora noticed the standing stones Isolde had mentioned—tall oaks with bark that seemed to contain swirling galaxies." | | 2 | "A soft melody drifted from them, notes that resonated in her bones rather than her ears." | | 3 | "Isolde moved as if she were floating rather than walking, her silver hair cascading like liquid moonlight down her back." | | 4 | "Her pale lavender eyes held an ageless wisdom that made Aurora feel both insignificant and strangely comforted." | | 5 | "As they turned to leave the Grove, Aurora's eyes caught one final image in the distance—a glimpse of the cathedral, its shadowed spires reaching toward a sky th…" |
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| 5.95% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 21 | | uselessAdditionCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora murmured, more to herself than to her companions" | | 1 | "Silas breathed, his usual cynicism momentarily abandoned" | | 2 | "Isolde finished, her gaze distant" | | 3 | "Aurora demanded, frustration mounting" | | 4 | "Isolde said, her voice growing more urgent" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 16 | | fancyCount | 12 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Aurora murmured (murmur)" | | 1 | "Silas breathed (breathe)" | | 2 | "Aurora whispered (whisper)" | | 3 | "Nyx observed (observe)" | | 4 | "Silas muttered (mutter)" | | 5 | "Nyx announced suddenly (announce)" | | 6 | "Isolde corrected (correct)" | | 7 | "Aurora demanded (demand)" | | 8 | "Isolde interrupted gently (interrupt)" | | 9 | "Isolde explained (explain)" | | 10 | "Nyx observed (observe)" | | 11 | "Aurora agreed (agree)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 58 | | tagDensity | 0.276 | | leniency | 0.552 | | rawRatio | 0.75 | | effectiveRatio | 0.414 | |