Run: 2026-04-24-01KQ09A37WAMT9YG5WXZDHQJ4B

Run Details

Duration:
10m 16s
Cost:
$0.032873
Provider:
Parasail

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The third deadbolt clicked. The chain scraped from its track. Rory pulled the door open. The hallway stank of vindaloo and cardamom from the curry house downstairs, a scent that clung to the plaster in perpetuity. Lucien Moreau filled the frame. His charcoal suit hung with surgeon’s precision from his shoulders. Platinum hair slicked back from a face built from marble and bad decisions. One eye burned amber, catching the sixty-watt bulb overhead. The other drank the light whole, black as the bottom of a well. He gripped the ivory-headed cane in his right hand, the silver pommel gleaming. Rory didn’t step aside. “Wrong address.” “Hardly.” His gaze travelled past her to the sprawl of books and parchment behind. “Let me in.” “No.” She held the door, shoulder braced against the jamb. “Go peddle your trauma elsewhere.” Ptolemy, Eva’s tabby, threaded between her ankles. He emitted a rusty purr and blinked up at Lucien with undisguised affection. “Even the cat remembers me,” Lucien said. “The cat’s an idiot. He licks bleach.” She started to close the door. Lucien’s shoe wedged against the threshold. Not forceful. Precise. “Three weeks, Rory. Not a word from you.” “I’ve been busy.” “Delivering prawn crackers for Yu-Fei?” “Fuck off.” She pushed harder. The door didn’t move. He withdrew his foot and stepped over the threshold anyway. The narrow corridor shrank. He stood five-eleven in tailored wool, and the cramped flat hadn’t been built for men with shoulders like his. Rory retreated into the living room. Towers of teetering books hemmed her in on three sides. Eva’s research notes papered every surface, dense with annotations about ley lines and Avarosian sealcraft. The window above the curry house vent let in a greasy, orange-tinted draft that carried the bass thump of Brick Lane nightlife. Rory wheeled on him. “You don’t get to barge in here playing concern. We aren’t doing this.” “What are we doing?” “Nothing. That’s the point.” She jabbed a finger toward the door. “You made it the point six months ago.” Lucien set his cane against the armchair. A bad sign. In unfamiliar spaces, he never relinquished the blade hidden inside the shaft. He unbuttoned his jacket, revealing the empty holster at his ribs. “I needed space.” “You needed space?” She laughed, a sharp note that cracked against the plaster. “You left a note on hotel stationery. Four words. This cannot happen. Then you vanished into whatever shadowy bollocks you call a social life.” He turned, and for a second the amber eye caught the streetlight. “It was five words. You counted.” “Because I memorised it, you absolute—” She broke off. Her chest heaved. She wouldn’t give him the satisfaction of tears. Evan had taken those, two years of her life in Cardiff. Lucien wasn’t getting the leftovers. He moved closer. The floorboard creaked beneath his weight. “My world swallowed my mother whole. I won’t let it do the same to you.” “I’m not your mother. I’m not some fragile—” She shoved at his chest. Hard muscle beneath fine wool. He didn’t rock back. “I survived an abusive prick with a law degree and a temper. I moved to this city with two suitcases and a cracked mobile. I am not a porcelain figurine you need to lock in a cabinet.” “I know.” His voice roughened. He caught her hand before she could withdraw it. His thumb brushed the crescent scar on her left wrist. “I know exactly what you are.” The touch sent a jolt up her arm. She ripped free. “Don’t.” “Rory.” “Don’t say my name like that.” She backed into the kitchenette. The sink overflowed with Eva’s teacups. The tap dripped a relentless rhythm against the steel basin. “You forfeit nicknames when you disappear. You forfeit the right to look at me like I’m the one who hurt you.” Something dark shifted across his face. “You think this is easy? Standing here, inhaling your scent, remembering how your spine fit my palm?” He advanced. “It is not easy. It is excruciating.” Her breath caught. She hated that her body remembered. The wine bar in Soho. The rain plastering her straight black hair to her cheeks. His mouth hot and desperate against hers, his hand at the small of her back, the cane clattering to the wet floor because he’d needed both hands. Then dawn. The ice in the note. The silence after. “Then leave,” she whispered. “No.” He placed one hand on either side of her head, caging her against the cupboard. The position should have felt threatening. It didn’t. It felt like the seconds before lightning struck. “I made a mistake.” “You made a choice.” “The wrong one.” His face lowered to hers. Not touching. A breath apart. The amber eye held flecks of gold she could map from memory. The black one hid everything. “I thought distance would erase the target on your back. Instead, someone in Avaros placed a bounty. Fifty thousand. Alive. They know about you because I was careless. Because I kissed you where my father’s retainers could see.” Rory’s mind raced. Out-of-the-box. Always. She scanned the notes pinned to the fridge. Eva’s scrawl. Avarosian glyphs. Sealcraft. “That’s why Eva’s research spiked last week. She found a name.” “Malphora,” Lucien said. The word dropped between them like a stone into deep water. “It’s not a title,” he continued. “It’s an execution order. And it bears my father’s mark.” She looked up at him. The fear she saw wasn’t for himself. It was for her. The realisation hollowed out her anger, leaving raw, pulsing hurt. “You should have told me,” she said. “I am telling you.” “Six months too late.” He dropped his forehead to hers. The contact scorched. “I am a coward, Rory. Not half-demon. Half-arsed. I thought if I cut you loose, the danger would wither. Instead, it grew. And I have spent twenty-one nights in that bar on Fleet Street, drinking whisky I don’t taste, rehearsing how to apologise without begging.” “So beg.” The word surprised her as much as him. Lucien pulled back. His expression cracked. He reached into his jacket pocket and withdrew a folded square of paper. Hotel stationery. The same cream stock from half a year ago. He pressed it into her palm. “I wrote the first draft the night I left,” he said. “It ran four pages. I burned it. The second draft I tore into pieces and flushed. The third was the lie you received.” He closed her fingers over the paper. “This is the first one. Read it. Burn it. Line Ptolemy’s litter tray with it. But understand—I never stopped wanting you. I only stopped believing I deserved you.” Rory unfolded the page. His handwriting slanted across the sheet, dense and urgent. Words in French and English tangled together. Promises. Apologies. A map of his ruin laid bare in ink. Ptolemy leaped onto the counter and knocked a jar of brushes to the floor. Neither of them flinched. Her eyes burned. She refused to cry. “You hurt me.” “I know.” “You don’t get a free pass because you’re pretty and tragic.” “Never asked for one.” He took her other hand, the scarred wrist, and raised it. His lips hovered over the pale crescent. “Let me earn back the right to stand near you. Let me fix what I broke.” “You can’t fix it in one evening.” “Then I’ll return tomorrow.” “I might throw a book at your head.” “Hardback, I hope.” His breath ghosted her skin. “I heal fast.” She stared at the heterochromatic eyes that had haunted her sleep. The amber dared. The black mourned. “Stay,” she said. The word scraped out. “Tonight. On the sofa. If someone’s coming for me, I’d rather have the blade where I can see it.” His grip tightened. “Rory—” “Don’t make me repeat it.” He released her hand. Stepped back. The space between them cooled, brackish and strange. “I’ll take the armchair,” he said. “The cane stays within reach?” “Always.” She nodded. Her pulse thundered against her throat. Trust wasn’t rebuilt. It was a scaffold, rickety and new. But the air in the flat shifted, the curry smell and the cat hair and the weight of his gaze settling into something she could almost name. She walked to the window. The Brick Lane streetlamps flickered on below, painting the room brass. “Lucien?” “Yes?” “If you leave another note, I’ll use the blade myself.” Behind her, she heard the whisper of steel as he checked the hidden sword. A promise in the sound. “I’m not going anywhere,” he said. She pressed her scarred wrist against the cold glass and breathed.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags25
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences70
tagDensity0.357
leniency0.714
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1440
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
54.86% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1440
totalAiIsms13
found
0
word"marble"
count1
1
word"gleaming"
count1
2
word"affection"
count1
3
word"weight"
count2
4
word"porcelain"
count1
5
word"silence"
count1
6
word"raced"
count1
7
word"scanned"
count1
8
word"pulse"
count1
9
word"thundered"
count1
10
word"flickered"
count1
11
word"whisper"
count1
highlights
0"marble"
1"gleaming"
2"affection"
3"weight"
4"porcelain"
5"silence"
6"raced"
7"scanned"
8"pulse"
9"thundered"
10"flickered"
11"whisper"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences135
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences135
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"started to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences180
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen48
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1439
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions17
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions32
wordCount894
uniqueNames13
maxNameDensity0.89
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Moreau1
Ptolemy2
Eva4
Lucien8
Avarosian2
Brick2
Lane2
Cardiff1
Hard1
Soho1
Rory6
French1
English1
persons
0"Moreau"
1"Ptolemy"
2"Eva"
3"Lucien"
4"Rory"
5"English"
places
0"Brick"
1"Lane"
2"Cardiff"
3"Soho"
4"French"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences65
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"felt like the seconds before lightning"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1439
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences180
matches
0"hated that her"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs72
mean19.99
std18.8
cv0.94
sampleLengths
015
184
26
317
415
520
67
713
817
93
105
119
1233
1353
1417
154
1619
1736
1837
1918
2036
2124
2259
2330
2412
251
2648
2732
2861
294
3036
314
3268
3329
343
3511
3616
3726
387
394
404
4154
422
438
4436
4569
4631
4718
4810
492
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences135
matches
0"been built"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs155
matches
0"wasn’t getting"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences180
ratio0
matches(empty)
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount901
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"greasy, orange-tinted draft"
adverbCount12
adverbRatio0.013318534961154272
lyAdverbCount0
lyAdverbRatio0
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences180
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences180
mean7.99
std6.99
cv0.874
sampleLengths
04
16
25
321
45
510
613
79
813
913
104
112
1214
133
1410
155
167
1713
187
1913
206
212
221
238
243
255
265
274
2810
294
3019
316
3210
3315
3422
354
3613
374
3811
398
407
413
4212
4311
443
4513
4624
4712
486
499
50.93% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats10
diversityRatio0.3388888888888889
totalSentences180
uniqueOpeners61
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences110
matches(empty)
ratio0
34.55% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount51
totalSentences110
matches
0"His charcoal suit hung with"
1"He gripped the ivory-headed cane"
2"His gaze travelled past her"
3"She held the door, shoulder"
4"He emitted a rusty purr"
5"She started to close the"
6"She pushed harder"
7"He withdrew his foot and"
8"He stood five-eleven in tailored"
9"She jabbed a finger toward"
10"He unbuttoned his jacket, revealing"
11"She laughed, a sharp note"
12"He turned, and for a"
13"She broke off"
14"Her chest heaved."
15"She wouldn’t give him the"
16"He moved closer."
17"She shoved at his chest"
18"He didn’t rock back."
19"His voice roughened"
ratio0.464
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount105
totalSentences110
matches
0"The third deadbolt clicked."
1"The chain scraped from its"
2"Rory pulled the door open."
3"The hallway stank of vindaloo"
4"Lucien Moreau filled the frame."
5"His charcoal suit hung with"
6"Platinum hair slicked back from"
7"The other drank the light"
8"He gripped the ivory-headed cane"
9"Rory didn’t step aside."
10"His gaze travelled past her"
11"She held the door, shoulder"
12"Ptolemy, Eva’s tabby, threaded between"
13"He emitted a rusty purr"
14"She started to close the"
15"Lucien’s shoe wedged against the"
16"She pushed harder"
17"The door didn’t move."
18"He withdrew his foot and"
19"The narrow corridor shrank."
ratio0.955
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences110
matches(empty)
ratio0
95.24% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences30
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"The hallway stank of vindaloo and cardamom from the curry house downstairs, a scent that clung to the plaster in perpetuity."
1"The window above the curry house vent let in a greasy, orange-tinted draft that carried the bass thump of Brick Lane nightlife."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags25
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags10
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"She laughed (laugh)"
1"she whispered (whisper)"
2"he continued (continue)"
dialogueSentences70
tagDensity0.143
leniency0.286
rawRatio0.3
effectiveRatio0.086
84.3190%