Run: 2026-04-24-01KQ09E14Y7Y2E8GZKNG435M24

Run Details

Duration:
27.4s
Cost:
$0.004742
Provider:
Xiaomi

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The body lay face-up in the service tunnel beneath Camden Lock, arms spread wide as though welcoming an embrace. Detective Harlow Quinn crouched beside it, the beam of her torch cutting through the stale air. The victim was male, mid-thirties, dressed in a wool coat that cost more than Quinn's monthly salary. No visible wounds. No defensive marks on his hands. Skin pale but not bloodless, lips faintly bluish at the edges. She tilted her head, studying the angle of the jaw. Relaxed. The tendons in his neck showed no strain. Whatever killed this man, he hadn't fought it. "Time of death?" she asked. DS Rennick hovered at the edge of the light, notebook open but pen idle. "Pathologist reckons between midnight and two. Probably closer to one." "You've spoken to the pathologist already?" "First responder made the call before we arrived. Standard procedure." Quinn pressed her leather watch against her wrist, the strap warm from her skin. She'd been asleep when the call came through—three hours of it, curled on her office couch with a file on her lap. The case number was 2024-0817, assigned to her at half past four in the morning by a dispatch officer who sounded like she'd rather be anywhere else. She stood, knees popping, and surveyed the tunnel. The walls were curved concrete, older than the rest of the station infrastructure. Graffiti tagged the upper reaches—mostly indecipherable scrawls in neon paint—but the lower section was clean. Scrubbed. Someone had maintained this space. "Rennick. How was he found?" "Anonymous tip to the control room. Caller used a burner, location bounced through three towers. We've got nothing on voice either—modulator." "So someone wanted us here but didn't want to be connected to the discovery." Quinn traced the edge of her torch beam along the floor. The concrete was damp. A thin sheen of water reflected the light back at her. She crouched again, closer to the body's left hand. The fingers were curled inward, relaxed in death, but the index finger pointed at something embedded in the grime of the floor. She leaned in. A small brass disc, no larger than a ten-pence piece, pressed into the concrete as though it had been forced there. The surface caught her light—etched lines forming a pattern she didn't recognize. Not a coin. Not a token from any system she knew. "Don't touch that," she said, though Rennick hadn't moved. Rennick shifted his weight from one foot to the other. He was twenty-eight, eager, the kind of detective who believed in neat conclusions. She'd seen a dozen like him over her eighteen years. They burned bright and washed out. "Ma'am, I think this might be connected to the Brixton case. Same MO—found in an abandoned space, no wounds, no struggle. Forensics couldn't find a cause of death on that one either." "The Brixton case was six months ago." "Which means whoever did this has a pattern." Quinn didn't respond. She circled the body slowly, maintaining a distance of three feet. The coat was buttoned all the way to the throat. She hadn't noted that before—a detail buried beneath the shock of the setting. A man doesn't button his coat to the collar in a damp tunnel unless he's cold. But the tunnel wasn't cold. The air was thick, almost humid, carrying a faint sweetness she couldn't place. Incense, maybe. Or something older. She leaned closer to the coat's collar and caught it—lavender, but underneath that something metallic and sharp. Like copper left in rain. "Rennick, what did forensics say about the tunnel?" "Abandoned service corridor. Used for maintenance access to the Northern Line. Decommissioned in the seventies." "Decommissioned." Quinn walked the length of her torch beam to the far wall. The graffiti here was different—not paint but scratches, carved into the concrete with something sharp. Symbols. Three of them, arranged in a vertical line. The top one resembled an eye. The middle, a key. The bottom, a mouth with no lips, just teeth. She'd seen marks like these before. Not exactly these, but the grammar of them—the way they were deliberate, repeated, functional. Three years ago, in a warehouse in Shoreditch, standing over DS Morris's body with blood on her hands and a ringing in her ears that wouldn't stop for weeks. Morris had been alive when she reached him. His last words were nonsense, she'd thought then. She wasn't sure anymore. "You're familiar with this location?" she asked without turning. Rennick's torch beam swung uncertainly. "First time down here, ma'am." "Someone is." Quinn pointed at the symbols. "These aren't random. They're maintained. The grime on the lower walls is cleaned regularly but the upper section is left alone. Someone uses this space." "For what?" "That's the question." She crouched beside the brass disc again, pulling a evidence bag from her coat. The disc resisted when she tried to lift it—stuck fast to the concrete. She applied more pressure, twisting slightly, and it came free with a sound like a crack of knuckles. The surface was warm to the touch through the plastic. She held it up to the torch. The etched lines formed concentric circles around a central point, with radiating marks that resembled compass points. Not a compass, but something adjacent to one. "This didn't come from a craft shop," she said. Rennick peered over her shoulder. "Could be decorative. A prop, maybe. Camden's full of—" "It's not a prop." Quinn stood and handed him the bag. "Bag everything else around the body. I want the floor examined for impressions—there should be footprints in that grime. Multiple sets, if I'm right." "And if you're wrong?" "Then we're no worse off than we are now." She looked down at the body again. The dead man's eyes were open, fixed on the curved ceiling. She moved into his line of sight, studying the pupils. Dilated. Not from darkness—from something else. From whatever he'd seen in the moments before his heart stopped. Her radio crackled. "DCI Graves wants an update at the six o'clock briefing. He's not happy about the press leak." "Tell Graves I'll be there." She clicked off the radio and slipped it back into her pocket. The press leak didn't surprise her. Someone had called in the body, someone who wanted it found but wanted the discovery traced back to the police, not to them. A controlled narrative. Whoever laid this man down had a plan that extended beyond the act itself. She crouched one more time, close enough to the dead man's face that she could see the texture of his skin—pores visible, a three-day stubble on his chin, a small mole below his left ear. She tilted her head, looking at his coat again. The buttons were horn, not plastic. The stitching was hand-finished. This was a man of means, dressed carefully, who had come to this place voluntarily. No ligature marks on his wrists or ankles. No trace of sedation around his mouth. He'd walked in alive. He'd expected to leave. Quinn stood and walked to where the tunnel curved out of sight. Beyond the bend, her torch caught another set of scratches on the wall—this time words, in English, carved shallow into the concrete. *The Veil remembers.* She pressed her thumb against the letters. Fresh dust came away on her skin. Recently carved. Within the last day, maybe less. "Rennick." He appeared at her shoulder, notebook closed this time. "Contact the pathologist again. I want a full toxicology screen—not the standard panel. Run for alkaloids, heavy metals, and anything else the lab can identify in a blood sample. Specifically, I want to know if there's anything in his system that doesn't belong to any known pharmacological category." Rennick opened his mouth, closed it, then opened it again. "You think he was poisoned?" "I think whatever killed him left no mark, no wound, and no visible cause. That means it came from inside." She walked back to the body, her torch steady. The dead man stared at the ceiling. She stared at his hands. The left hand was empty, fingers curled. The right hand was open, palm up, and in the center of that palm was a mark—a brand, burned into the skin in the same concentric-circle pattern as the brass disc. Old. Scarred over. He'd carried this mark for years. She straightened. The tunnel pressed in around her, the curved walls narrowing in her peripheral vision. Somewhere distant, water dripped in a steady rhythm. The sweet smell had faded, replaced by something acrid—ozone, like the air before a storm. "This man knew what he was walking into," she said. Rennick stared at the brand on the palm. "You're saying he came here on purpose. That he was involved in whatever this is." "I'm saying nobody forces a man into a decommissioned tunnel at one in the morning, dresses him in a tailored coat, and leaves him without a mark on his body unless the man wanted to be there." She crouched beside him one final time, studying the brand, the brass disc impression still visible in the concrete beside the body, the symbols on the far wall reflected in the dampness of the floor. Three elements. Three marks. Three connections she couldn't yet name but could feel pressing against the edges of her understanding. She thought of Morris. Of his last words. Of the warehouse and the blood and the ringing. "The Brixton case," she said. "Pull everything. Every photograph, every report, every witness statement. I want it on my desk by noon." "What am I looking for?" Quinn stood. Her knees didn't pop this time. The tunnel was silent around them, and in that silence, she heard something beneath the dripping water—a low hum, almost below the threshold of hearing, vibrating through the concrete and into the soles of her shoes. "I'll let you know when I find it."
created_at"2026-04-24T17:43:35.849Z" 4/24/2026, 5:43:35 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags15
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"She walked back [back]"
dialogueSentences39
tagDensity0.385
leniency0.769
rawRatio0.067
effectiveRatio0.051
91.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1667
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
1
adverb"slightly"
count1
2
adverb"carefully"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"slightly"
2"carefully"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
70.01% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1667
totalAiIsms10
found
0
word"standard"
count2
1
word"traced"
count2
2
word"etched"
count2
3
word"weight"
count1
4
word"familiar"
count1
5
word"could feel"
count1
6
word"silence"
count1
highlights
0"standard"
1"traced"
2"etched"
3"weight"
4"familiar"
5"could feel"
6"silence"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences127
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences127
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences151
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen72
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords3
totalWords1648
ratio0.002
matches
0"The Veil remembers."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions12
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions31
wordCount1217
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity0.82
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Camden1
Lock1
Harlow1
Quinn10
Rennick7
Shoreditch1
Morris3
English1
Veil1
Three5
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Rennick"
3"Morris"
4"Veil"
places(empty)
globalScore1
windowScore1
91.86% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences86
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"as though welcoming an embrace"
1"sounded like she'd rather be anywhere else"
17.96% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches3
per1kWords1.82
wordCount1648
matches
0"not paint but scratches, carved into the concrete with something sharp"
1"Not exactly these, but the grammar of them"
2"Not a compass, but something adjacent to one"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences151
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs54
mean30.52
std26.37
cv0.864
sampleLengths
072
127
25
324
46
510
663
742
85
921
1049
1169
129
1339
1432
157
168
1776
1822
198
2015
2156
2269
239
2410
2532
262
2790
289
2914
3035
314
3254
3320
3463
3584
368
3734
383
3922
401
419
4248
4315
4488
4539
4610
4723
4892
4917
94.21% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount4
totalSentences127
matches
0"were curved"
1"were curled"
2"been forced"
3"was buttoned"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs202
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount15
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences14
totalSentences151
ratio0.093
matches
0"She'd been asleep when the call came through—three hours of it, curled on her office couch with a file on her lap."
1"Graffiti tagged the upper reaches—mostly indecipherable scrawls in neon paint—but the lower section was clean."
2"The surface caught her light—etched lines forming a pattern she didn't recognize."
3"She hadn't noted that before—a detail buried beneath the shock of the setting."
4"She leaned closer to the coat's collar and caught it—lavender, but underneath that something metallic and sharp."
5"The graffiti here was different—not paint but scratches, carved into the concrete with something sharp."
6"Not exactly these, but the grammar of them—the way they were deliberate, repeated, functional."
7"The disc resisted when she tried to lift it—stuck fast to the concrete."
8"Not from darkness—from something else."
9"She crouched one more time, close enough to the dead man's face that she could see the texture of his skin—pores visible, a three-day stubble on his chin, a small mole below his left ear."
10"Beyond the bend, her torch caught another set of scratches on the wall—this time words, in English, carved shallow into the concrete."
11"The right hand was open, palm up, and in the center of that palm was a mark—a brand, burned into the skin in the same concentric-circle pattern as the brass disc."
12"The sweet smell had faded, replaced by something acrid—ozone, like the air before a storm."
13"The tunnel was silent around them, and in that silence, she heard something beneath the dripping water—a low hum, almost below the threshold of hearing, vibrating through the concrete and into the soles of her shoes."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1239
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount34
adverbRatio0.02744148506860371
lyAdverbCount10
lyAdverbRatio0.008071025020177562
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences151
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences151
mean10.91
std9.33
cv0.855
sampleLengths
019
116
217
33
46
511
610
71
88
98
105
1114
1210
136
1410
1514
1622
1727
188
1913
2015
211
225
235
2421
2525
264
2711
289
2922
303
3121
3212
333
348
359
3610
3713
3810
396
4032
417
428
433
4411
4510
4613
4716
485
4913
61.59% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats12
diversityRatio0.41721854304635764
totalSentences151
uniqueOpeners63
30.03% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences111
matches
0"Somewhere distant, water dripped in"
ratio0.009
93.87% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount35
totalSentences111
matches
0"She tilted her head, studying"
1"She'd been asleep when the"
2"She stood, knees popping, and"
3"She crouched again, closer to"
4"She leaned in."
5"she said, though Rennick hadn't"
6"He was twenty-eight, eager, the"
7"She'd seen a dozen like"
8"They burned bright and washed"
9"She circled the body slowly,"
10"She hadn't noted that before—a"
11"She leaned closer to the"
12"She'd seen marks like these"
13"His last words were nonsense,"
14"She wasn't sure anymore."
15"she asked without turning"
16"She crouched beside the brass"
17"She applied more pressure, twisting"
18"She held it up to"
19"She looked down at the"
ratio0.315
63.60% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount88
totalSentences111
matches
0"The body lay face-up in"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn crouched beside"
2"The victim was male, mid-thirties,"
3"Skin pale but not bloodless,"
4"She tilted her head, studying"
5"The tendons in his neck"
6"Whatever killed this man, he"
7"DS Rennick hovered at the"
8"Quinn pressed her leather watch"
9"She'd been asleep when the"
10"The case number was 2024-0817,"
11"She stood, knees popping, and"
12"The walls were curved concrete,"
13"Graffiti tagged the upper reaches—mostly"
14"Someone had maintained this space."
15"Quinn traced the edge of"
16"The concrete was damp."
17"A thin sheen of water"
18"She crouched again, closer to"
19"The fingers were curled inward,"
ratio0.793
45.05% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences111
matches
0"Whoever laid this man down"
ratio0.009
65.22% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences46
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"The body lay face-up in the service tunnel beneath Camden Lock, arms spread wide as though welcoming an embrace."
1"The victim was male, mid-thirties, dressed in a wool coat that cost more than Quinn's monthly salary."
2"A small brass disc, no larger than a ten-pence piece, pressed into the concrete as though it had been forced there."
3"He was twenty-eight, eager, the kind of detective who believed in neat conclusions."
4"Three years ago, in a warehouse in Shoreditch, standing over DS Morris's body with blood on her hands and a ringing in her ears that wouldn't stop for weeks."
91.67% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags15
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"She walked back, her torch steady"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags6
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences39
tagDensity0.154
leniency0.308
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
83.8689%