Run: 2026-04-24-01KQ09F8V0AKN0NCTBGD3S5V9Q

Run Details

Duration:
44.4s
Cost:
$0.006526
Provider:
Xiaomi

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The deadbolts were still unlocked. Aurora’s hand froze on the third one, the chill of the brass under her fingers. She’d double-checked them. She always did. A flicker of unease coiled in her stomach, cold and sharp. She pushed the door open, her keys held between her knuckles. The air in the flat was different. It carried a scent beneath the usual aroma of old paper and Ptolemy’s fur—something like expensive leather and dry, cold stone, like a cellar in winter. “I was beginning to think you’d decided to sleep at the restaurant.” The voice came from the armchair by the window, nestled in a pool of weak lamplight. He didn’t rise. One leg crossed over the other, the ivory head of his cane resting on his knee. Lucien Moreau looked exactly as out of place here as he had the last time he’d sat in that chair, his charcoal suit refusing to wrinkle, his heterochromatic eyes—one amber, one black—tracking her every move. Ptolemy, the traitor, was curled asleep on the rug at his feet. Aurora didn’t lower her keys. “The door was unlocked. All three locks.” “My dear Rory, you wound me.” A ghost of a smile touched his lips. “You think I’d need to resort to such crude methods? I let myself in. The third deadbolt has a hairline fracture in its mechanism. It’s been giving you trouble for weeks. I simply… persuaded it.” She kicked the door shut behind her. The sound was flat, swallowed by the clutter. Books formed precarious towers on the floor. Scrolls tied with faded ribbon spilled from a overflowing chest. Eva was somewhere in the Middle East, chasing a lead on a lost Syriac codex, and had left Rory the flat and her cat. She hadn’t mentioned leaving it with a half-demon Frenchman. “What do you want, Lucien?” “A conversation. And a moment of your time.” He uncrossed his legs, the movement fluid, precise. The blade hidden in his cane made no sound. “Is that so much to ask after… how long has it been? Six months? Seven?” “Since you sold information that got two people killed. Since you looked me in the eye and called it ‘collateral.’” Her voice was steady, but her knuckles whitened around the keys. The scar on her left wrist, a pale crescent, peeked out from her sleeve. “I’d say that’s plenty of reason for me to not want a conversation.” “I didn’t sell the information. I brokered it. There is a distinction, however fine it may seem to you.” “The dead don’t care about distinctions.” He sighed, a quiet, practiced exhalation. “They were demon-touched. Humans who’d voluntarily opened doors they could not close. The entity that consumed them was already loose in the city. My… transaction merely accelerated an inevitable conclusion. It also provided the key to the binding sigil you used to stop it. A sigil, I might add, you found tucked inside a book I suggested you check out of the British Library.” He leaned forward, the light catching the sharp angle of his jaw. “I saved more lives than were lost that night. You know this. You used the knowledge I gave you.” Aurora walked to the small kitchenette, not turning her back on him. She dropped her keys on the counter with a clatter. The Golden Empress uniform—a red and gold polyester jacket—felt cheap and out of place under his gaze. She poured a glass of water, her hand steady. “You didn’t come here to justify old business.” “No. I didn’t.” He stood. He moved like a shadow detaching itself from the wall, silent and seamless. He was taller than she remembered, or the cramped flat made him seem so. “I came because a situation is developing. One that concerns you. Directly.” He stopped a few feet away. The scent of him grew stronger—cold air, old money, and something else, something metallic and buried. Dried ozone. Danger. “There’s a new player in the city,” he said. “Someone collecting artifacts. Specific artifacts. They’re asking questions about a woman matching your description. A human woman with sharp blue eyes and black hair. A woman who knows her way around sigils. A woman who, according to rumor, once wore the name Malphora.” The water in her glass trembled. Malphora. She hadn’t heard that name since she’d fled Cardiff. Since she’d burned that part of her life and the naive girl who’d dabbled in things she didn’t understand. “Who?” “That I don’t know. Yet. But their methods are… sloppy. Aggressive. They’ve already visited a goblin market in Deptford and a dryad enclave in Hampstead Heath. Asking about you. Leaving broken things behind.” “Why tell me? You could sell this information to them for a premium.” The amber eye seemed to glow in the low light. “Because I am not a monster, Rory. Despite what you believe. And because this collector isn’t just looking for a person. They’re looking for a key. A key that, according to very old and very reliable sources, was entrusted to a woman bearing the Carter family scar, a woman who once held the title ‘Malphora’ under a certain circle.” He let that hang in the air. The flat felt smaller, the stacks of books leaning in. “A key to what?” “To the thirteenth floor of the Brutalist tower in Elephant and Castle that, on every other day, only has twelve floors. To the room that doesn’t exist unless you know the right words. A room, it is said, that holds a way to seal the rift at Greenwich permanently.” Her heart hammered against her ribs. The rift at Greenwich. The bleeding wound in reality that had been seeping minor horrors into London for two years. The one the major covens and councils argued about while people got hurt. She’d done her own research. She knew it was growing. “And you think I have this key?” “I know you do.” He took another step closer. The space between them charged, filled with the weight of their history—the arguments in his Mayfair office, the night he’d helped her escape the thing in the Tube tunnels, the coffee they’d shared that had felt like something more before it all went wrong. “It’s in the scar on your wrist. A tattoo only visible under the light of a waning moon. A brand left by your great-grandmother on the night she sealed the last major breach in 1941.” Aurora’s hand went to her wrist, covering the crescent mark. It had always been there. A childhood accident, her mother had said. “You’re lying.” “Am I?” His voice dropped, softer, intimate. “Look at it tonight. At moonrise. But be careful where you do it. You’ll be watched.” She stared at him. He was so close she could see the faint, inhuman pattern beneath the skin of his jaw, like cracks in porcelain. He’d known this. He’d known since before they’d parted, probably. He’d kept it as a card to play when the stakes were high enough. “This is why you came back,” she whispered. “Not to warn me. To get to the room first.” “I came back because you are in danger, and I am the only one who understands the kind of danger it is.” His heterochromatic eyes held hers, the black one depthless. “The collector is not human. They are something else. Something that wants the rift open, not closed. And they will peel the skin from your wrist to get what they think is embedded there.” He reached out, not for her, but for the collar of her uniform jacket. He straightened it, a gesture so oddly domestic it made her breath catch. His fingers brushed the side of her neck, cold as marble. “You can hate me,” he murmured. “You can continue to believe the worst of my nature. But you need me, Rory. Right now, in this, you need me.” The glass in her hand felt fragile. The world outside the window, the sounds of Brick Lane, seemed distant, irrelevant. All that existed was this man, this impossible secret he’d delivered to her doorstep, and the terrifying, exhilarating possibility that he might be telling the truth. “Why?” she asked, the word barely audible. “Why help me?” His smile was thin, self-mocking, and utterly devastating. “Because I am a fool. And because some collateral, it seems, is more costly than others.” He didn’t move away. He stood there, waiting, the smell of cold air and old danger wrapping around her. The choice was hers. The lock was broken. He was inside. And he’d brought a storm with him.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags12
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"her knuckles whitened around [around]"
dialogueSentences39
tagDensity0.308
leniency0.615
rawRatio0.083
effectiveRatio0.051
89.59% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1441
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"very"
count2
1
adverb"utterly"
count1
highlights
0"very"
1"utterly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
72.24% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1441
totalAiIsms8
found
0
word"chill"
count1
1
word"flicker"
count1
2
word"stomach"
count1
3
word"trembled"
count1
4
word"charged"
count1
5
word"weight"
count1
6
word"porcelain"
count1
7
word"marble"
count1
highlights
0"chill"
1"flicker"
2"stomach"
3"trembled"
4"charged"
5"weight"
6"porcelain"
7"marble"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences80
matches
0"A flicker of unease"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences80
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences107
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen77
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1434
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions19
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions21
wordCount789
uniqueNames17
maxNameDensity0.51
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Ptolemy"
discoveredNames
Ptolemy2
Moreau1
Middle1
East1
Syriac1
Rory1
Frenchman1
Aurora4
Golden1
Empress1
Cardiff1
Greenwich1
London1
Mayfair1
Tube1
Brick1
Lane1
persons
0"Ptolemy"
1"Moreau"
2"East"
3"Rory"
4"Aurora"
places
0"Middle"
1"Cardiff"
2"Greenwich"
3"London"
4"Brick"
5"Lane"
globalScore1
windowScore1
16.07% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences56
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"something like expensive leather and dry, co"
1"felt like something more before it all"
2"seemed distant irrelevant"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.697
wordCount1434
matches
0"not for her, but for the collar of her uniform jacket"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences107
matches
0"heard that name"
1"burned that part"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs41
mean34.98
std24.49
cv0.7
sampleLengths
048
133
212
382
412
549
665
75
840
958
1019
116
12101
1348
148
1544
1625
1752
1835
191
2033
2113
2269
2317
244
2549
2649
277
2888
2922
302
3123
3249
3318
3465
3538
3628
3746
3810
3924
4037
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences80
matches
0"was curled"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs129
matches(empty)
9.35% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount7
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences107
ratio0.047
matches
0"It carried a scent beneath the usual aroma of old paper and Ptolemy’s fur—something like expensive leather and dry, cold stone, like a cellar in winter."
1"Lucien Moreau looked exactly as out of place here as he had the last time he’d sat in that chair, his charcoal suit refusing to wrinkle, his heterochromatic eyes—one amber, one black—tracking her every move."
2"The Golden Empress uniform—a red and gold polyester jacket—felt cheap and out of place under his gaze."
3"The scent of him grew stronger—cold air, old money, and something else, something metallic and buried."
4"The space between them charged, filled with the weight of their history—the arguments in his Mayfair office, the night he’d helped her escape the thing in the Tube tunnels, the coffee they’d shared that had felt like something more before it all went wrong."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount799
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount21
adverbRatio0.026282853566958697
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.006257822277847309
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences107
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences107
mean13.4
std12.29
cv0.917
sampleLengths
05
115
23
33
411
511
67
726
812
916
103
1116
1235
1312
145
157
1614
1735
187
198
207
2110
2224
239
245
2516
269
2715
2831
2914
3013
3119
326
336
3476
3519
3612
3710
3817
399
408
415
4213
4314
4412
456
4616
472
481
499
45.17% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats15
diversityRatio0.35514018691588783
totalSentences107
uniqueOpeners38
45.66% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences73
matches
0"All that existed was this"
ratio0.014
11.78% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount38
totalSentences73
matches
0"She’d double-checked them."
1"She always did."
2"She pushed the door open,"
3"It carried a scent beneath"
4"He didn’t rise."
5"She kicked the door shut"
6"She hadn’t mentioned leaving it"
7"He uncrossed his legs, the"
8"Her voice was steady, but"
9"He sighed, a quiet, practiced"
10"He leaned forward, the light"
11"She dropped her keys on"
12"She poured a glass of"
13"He moved like a shadow"
14"He was taller than she"
15"He stopped a few feet"
16"She hadn’t heard that name"
17"He let that hang in"
18"Her heart hammered against her"
19"She’d done her own research."
ratio0.521
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount69
totalSentences73
matches
0"The deadbolts were still unlocked."
1"Aurora’s hand froze on the"
2"She’d double-checked them."
3"She always did."
4"A flicker of unease coiled"
5"She pushed the door open,"
6"The air in the flat"
7"It carried a scent beneath"
8"The voice came from the"
9"He didn’t rise."
10"Lucien Moreau looked exactly as"
11"Ptolemy, the traitor, was curled"
12"Aurora didn’t lower her keys."
13"A ghost of a smile"
14"She kicked the door shut"
15"The sound was flat, swallowed"
16"Books formed precarious towers on"
17"Scrolls tied with faded ribbon"
18"Eva was somewhere in the"
19"She hadn’t mentioned leaving it"
ratio0.945
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences73
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences33
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags12
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"He uncrossed, the movement fluid, precise"
1"He leaned, the light catching the sharp angle of his jaw"
2"she asked, the word barely audible"
98.72% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"she whispered (whisper)"
1"he murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences39
tagDensity0.103
leniency0.205
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.103
76.2860%