Run: 2026-04-24-01KQ09XF5B813SW1N2FYN6P7S8

Run Details

Duration:
45.0s
Cost:
$0.007011
Provider:
Xiaomi

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain slammed against the asphalt, turning the streets of Soho into a slick, black mirror. Detective Harlow Quinn sprinted through the downpour, her worn leather watch pressing against her wrist. The man ahead—Tomás Herrera, olive skin slick with water, the Saint Christopher medallion at his neck a flash of gold—moved with the desperate grace of a cornered animal. He’d bolted the moment her badge flashed, diving out of the noodle shop and into the labyrinth of alleys. “Herrera! Police!” Her voice was a sharp crack swallowed by the storm. He didn’t look back. He ducked into a narrow passage between a vintage clothing store and a shuttered bakery, slipping on discarded pallets. Quinn followed, her trench coat heavy and cold against her legs. The alley smelled of damp brick and rotting vegetables. A dead end. Herrera’s breath came in ragged bursts as he slammed a shoulder against a rusted metal door. It groaned open. He disappeared inside. Quinn drew her Glock, the polymer grip slick. She edged through the doorway into a cavernous, echoing darkness. The roar of the rain faded, replaced by the hum of distant machinery and a low, thrumming murmur of many voices. An abandoned Tube station. The air was thick with the scent of damp earth, old electricity, and something else—copper, ozone, and a faint, cloying sweetness like burnt sugar. She clicked on her torch. The beam cut through the gloom, revealing arched tunnels of Victorian tile, green with age. Graffiti covered the walls, but not the usual tags—these were symbols, complex and strange, some glowing faintly with a residual luminescence. A tattered poster on a pillar advertised a 1999 concert. Deeper in, the tunnel opened into a wider concourse. Herrera was a shadow sprinting toward a makeshift archway of stacked crates and draped velvet. Beyond it, a blaze of light and color spilled out, alive with movement. Quinn’s torch caught a sign above the arch, crudely painted on driftwood: The Veil Market. She’d heard the whispers, the classified files with half-redacted reports. An underground market. Supernatural. The precinct had always laughed it off as an urban legend. Herrera, with his unsanctioned paramedic work, his patients who never appeared in any hospital registry. He was her only lead into that world. And now he was running straight for it. A figure stepped out of the shadows by the archway—a huge man in a battered bowler hat, his face a mask of old scars. He held out a hand. “Token,” he grunted, his voice like gravel. Herrera fumbled in his pocket, producing something small and pale. He pressed it into the bouncer’s palm. The man inspected it, then stepped aside. Herrera vanished into the throng. Quinn holstered her weapon. No use announcing herself here. She approached the arch. The bouncer’s gaze fell on her, flat and dismissive. “No entry without a bone token, copper.” “I’m not police,” Quinn lied, her voice steady. She met his stare. Eighteen years on the force had taught her how to wear a lie like armour. “I’m meeting someone. Herrera. He has something of mine.” The bouncer spat to the side. “Everyone’s meeting someone. Token.” She thought of DS Morris, of the unexplained circumstances that had ended his career and his life. The files that spoke of strange symbols at crime scenes. This was the door. Herrera had walked through it. She could walk away, file a report about a chase into an abandoned station, and let the trail go cold. Or she could step into the unfamiliar. Her hand went to her coat pocket. She had no bone token. But she had Morris’s old police whistle, tarnished silver, she’d kept. She held it out. “Will this do?” The bouncer’s eyes narrowed. He took it, bit down gently on the metal. A flicker of something—not recognition, but consideration—crossed his scarred face. He grunted and handed it back. “One hour. Cause trouble, and they’ll find your bones mixed into the next moon-cycle’s tokens.” He stepped aside. Quinn walked through the arch. The Veil Market assaulted her senses. It sprawled through a vast, vaulted space that might have once been a grand station hall. Stalls were built from salvaged Tube carriages, shipping containers, and stacked televisions. Strings of mismatched bulbs and glowing orbs cast a chaotic, underwater light. The noise was a dense tapestry: haggling in a dozen languages, the chime of bells, the crackle of static, and that low, sub-audible thrum that vibrated in her teeth. The crowd was a press of bodies, but not all of them were human. A woman with shimmering, scaled skin examined potions in crystal vials. A tall figure in a trench coat whose shadow moved independently of its owner haggled over a bundle of dried herbs. The air smelled of exotic spices, metallic tangs, and the ever-present damp of the underground. Quinn moved through the throng, her detective’s eyes cataloguing. She was an anomaly here—plain, human, drenched. A few heads turned, whispers following her like a wake. She ignored them, searching for Herrera. She found him at a stall built from an old library card catalogue, its many small drawers flung open. The vendor was an ancient woman with cataracts, her fingers adorned with rings holding tiny, trapped lights. Herrera was arguing with her, his voice low and urgent, his hands gesturing. The scar along his forearm stood out white. “—can’t pay that. Not tonight, Miriel. I need the remedy now. She’s getting worse.” The old woman’s cloudy eyes slid over Quinn. “You brought a visitor, Tomás. A loud one. The good doctor who patches holes in flesh shouldn’t lead predators to my door.” Herrera turned. His warm brown eyes widened, then hardened with resignation. “Detective Quinn. You don’t know where you are.” “I know exactly where I am.” Quinn stepped closer, lowering her voice. The hum of the market pressed in. “And I know you ran. People run when they have something to hide. Like the truth about what happened to DS Morris.” Herrera flinched, a real, physical reaction. The medallion at his throat swung. “This isn’t the place.” “It’s the only place,” Quinn countered. “You treat them. The things that hide in the dark. Morris was investigating something that led him to them, didn’t he? Something that got him killed. And you, the paramedic who lost his license for treating ‘unauthorized patients’… you’re in it up to your neck.” The old vendor, Miriel, cackled, a dry, rattling sound. “She sees, Tomás. The hunter’s eye. She’ll chew on your bones until she gets the marrow of it.” Herrera’s jaw clenched. He grabbed Quinn’s arm, his grip firm, and pulled her away from the stall, into the shadow between a container selling jars of bioluminescent insects and a fortune teller’s booth draped in velvet. The noise of the market became a muffled roar. “You think you can just march in here?” he hissed, his accent thickening. “This is a sanctuary. Not a crime scene. The rules are different here. The dangers are different.” “The danger got my partner killed!” Quinn shot back, keeping her voice low and fierce. “That makes it my jurisdiction, by any rules.” A tremor ran through the ground, a deep, subsonic groan. The lights in the market flickered. A few stalls away, something screeched, a high-pitched, inhuman sound. The crowd murmured, a ripple of unease. The bouncer from the entrance was moving through the stalls, his gaze sweeping. Herrera’s eyes darted around, his fear palpable. “Listen to me. Not here. There is a place. A bar, The Raven’s Nest, in Soho. Silas’ bar. There is a back room. Meet me there tomorrow, midnight. I’ll tell you what I know. But you have to leave. Now. You are drawing attention we cannot afford.” He looked past her shoulder, his face pale. Quinn followed his gaze. A figure had emerged from a stall draped in black silk. It was tall and thin, wearing a tailored suit, but its head was concealed by a featureless, polished brass mask that reflected the chaotic lights of the market. It stood perfectly still, observing them. “That’s one of the archivists,” Herrera breathed. “They keep records. Of debts, of breaches, of outsiders who see too much. He’s watching you. For them.” The brass-masked figure tilted its head, a slow, deliberate motion. Quinn’s training warred with the primal urge in her gut. The market was a nest of secrets, the kind Morris died chasing. But she was out of her depth, armed with nothing but a whistle and a badge that meant nothing here. Herrera was a thread, thin and fraying, but it was the only one she had. “Tomorrow,” she said, the word tasting of iron and surrender. “Midnight. If you run, I will find you again. And I won’t come alone.” She didn’t wait for a reply. She turned her back on the archivist, on the market’s alien glow, and walked toward the exit, the thrumming of the Veil Market a pulse against her spine. The decision was made. She’d stepped into the unfamiliar. Now she had to navigate the path back, and plan for the darkness that waited at The Raven’s Nest.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags9
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences26
tagDensity0.346
leniency0.692
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
93.47% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1532
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"gently"
count1
1
adverb"perfectly"
count1
highlights
0"gently"
1"perfectly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
41.25% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1532
totalAiIsms18
found
0
word"echoing"
count1
1
word"gloom"
count1
2
word"complex"
count1
3
word"velvet"
count2
4
word"flicker"
count1
5
word"chaotic"
count2
6
word"tapestry"
count1
7
word"vibrated"
count1
8
word"crystal"
count1
9
word"jaw clenched"
count1
10
word"sanctuary"
count1
11
word"flickered"
count1
12
word"palpable"
count1
13
word"silk"
count1
14
word"pulse"
count1
15
word"navigate"
count1
highlights
0"echoing"
1"gloom"
2"complex"
3"velvet"
4"flicker"
5"chaotic"
6"tapestry"
7"vibrated"
8"crystal"
9"jaw clenched"
10"sanctuary"
11"flickered"
12"palpable"
13"silk"
14"pulse"
15"navigate"
33.33% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches4
maxInWindow3
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count2
1
label"jaw/fists clenched"
count1
2
label"air was thick with"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
1"eyes widened"
2"jaw clenched"
3"The air was thick with"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences118
matches
0"a ripple of unease"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences118
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences135
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen47
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1524
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions7
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions51
wordCount1213
uniqueNames16
maxNameDensity1.24
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Soho1
Harlow1
Quinn15
Tomás1
Herrera15
Saint1
Christopher1
Glock1
Tube2
Victorian1
Veil3
Market3
Morris3
Miriel1
Raven1
Nest1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Tomás"
3"Herrera"
4"Saint"
5"Christopher"
6"Market"
7"Morris"
8"Miriel"
places
0"Soho"
1"Raven"
globalScore0.882
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences88
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.656
wordCount1524
matches
0"not recognition, but consideration"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences135
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs40
mean38.1
std20.44
cv0.537
sampleLengths
077
112
265
370
460
543
656
729
87
929
1022
117
1236
1310
1463
1530
1644
178
1875
1961
2032
2157
2214
2330
2419
2541
2616
2751
2827
2945
3030
3123
3246
3354
3457
3525
3610
3757
3824
3962
96.34% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences118
matches
0"were built"
1"was concealed"
2"was made"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs192
matches
0"was running"
1"was arguing"
15.87% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount8
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences135
ratio0.044
matches
0"The man ahead—Tomás Herrera, olive skin slick with water, the Saint Christopher medallion at his neck a flash of gold—moved with the desperate grace of a cornered animal."
1"The air was thick with the scent of damp earth, old electricity, and something else—copper, ozone, and a faint, cloying sweetness like burnt sugar."
2"Graffiti covered the walls, but not the usual tags—these were symbols, complex and strange, some glowing faintly with a residual luminescence."
3"A figure stepped out of the shadows by the archway—a huge man in a battered bowler hat, his face a mask of old scars."
4"A flicker of something—not recognition, but consideration—crossed his scarred face."
5"She was an anomaly here—plain, human, drenched."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1225
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount18
adverbRatio0.014693877551020407
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.007346938775510204
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences135
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences135
mean11.29
std7.68
cv0.68
sampleLengths
015
115
228
319
412
54
619
711
89
93
1016
113
123
138
1410
1521
164
1724
185
1915
2021
2110
229
2315
2413
2515
2610
273
281
2911
3015
318
328
3324
345
357
3610
377
387
395
404
415
424
439
447
458
464
4715
489
496
44.81% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.2740740740740741
totalSentences135
uniqueOpeners37
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences114
matches(empty)
ratio0
90.18% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount37
totalSentences114
matches
0"He’d bolted the moment her"
1"Her voice was a sharp"
2"He didn’t look back."
3"He ducked into a narrow"
4"It groaned open."
5"He disappeared inside."
6"She edged through the doorway"
7"She clicked on her torch."
8"She’d heard the whispers, the"
9"He was her only lead"
10"He held out a hand."
11"he grunted, his voice like"
12"He pressed it into the"
13"She approached the arch."
14"She met his stare."
15"She thought of DS Morris,"
16"She could walk away, file"
17"Her hand went to her"
18"She had no bone token."
19"She held it out."
ratio0.325
8.25% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount103
totalSentences114
matches
0"Rain slammed against the asphalt,"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn sprinted through"
2"The man ahead—Tomás Herrera, olive"
3"He’d bolted the moment her"
4"Her voice was a sharp"
5"He didn’t look back."
6"He ducked into a narrow"
7"Quinn followed, her trench coat"
8"The alley smelled of damp"
9"A dead end."
10"Herrera’s breath came in ragged"
11"It groaned open."
12"He disappeared inside."
13"Quinn drew her Glock, the"
14"She edged through the doorway"
15"The roar of the rain"
16"An abandoned Tube station."
17"The air was thick with"
18"She clicked on her torch."
19"The beam cut through the"
ratio0.904
43.86% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences114
matches
0"Now she had to navigate"
ratio0.009
87.91% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences52
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"She thought of DS Morris, of the unexplained circumstances that had ended his career and his life."
1"The noise was a dense tapestry: haggling in a dozen languages, the chime of bells, the crackle of static, and that low, sub-audible thrum that vibrated in her t…"
2"Herrera was arguing with her, his voice low and urgent, his hands gesturing."
3"It was tall and thin, wearing a tailored suit, but its head was concealed by a featureless, polished brass mask that reflected the chaotic lights of the market."
13.89% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags9
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"Quinn lied, her voice steady"
1"he hissed, his accent thickening"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags5
fancyCount4
fancyTags
0"he grunted (grunt)"
1"Quinn lied (lie)"
2"he hissed (hiss)"
3"Herrera breathed (breathe)"
dialogueSentences26
tagDensity0.192
leniency0.385
rawRatio0.8
effectiveRatio0.308
74.5279%