| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 25 | | adverbTagCount | 2 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "she said finally [finally]" | | 1 | "he said quietly [quietly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 95 | | tagDensity | 0.263 | | leniency | 0.526 | | rawRatio | 0.08 | | effectiveRatio | 0.042 | |
| 93.98% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1662 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 63.90% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1662 | | totalAiIsms | 12 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "stomach" | | 1 | "echoing" | | 2 | "intensity" | | 3 | "flickered" | | 4 | "tension" | | 5 | "pulse" | | 6 | "weight" | | 7 | "silence" | | 8 | "aligned" | | 9 | "warmth" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 2 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "stomach dropped/sank" | | count | 1 |
| | 1 | | label | "sent a shiver through" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "stomach dropped" | | 1 | "sent a shiver through" |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 103 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 103 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 173 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 37 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1646 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 30 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 60.91% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 43 | | wordCount | 898 | | uniqueNames | 14 | | maxNameDensity | 1.78 | | worstName | "Lucien" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Lucien" | | discoveredNames | | Ptolemy | 8 | | Eva | 5 | | Moreau | 2 | | East | 1 | | London | 1 | | Lucien | 16 | | Frenchman | 1 | | Brick | 1 | | Lane | 1 | | Golden | 1 | | Empress | 1 | | Avarosian | 1 | | Silence | 1 | | Rory | 3 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Ptolemy" | | 1 | "Eva" | | 2 | "Moreau" | | 3 | "Lucien" | | 4 | "Frenchman" | | 5 | "Silence" | | 6 | "Rory" |
| | places | | 0 | "East" | | 1 | "London" | | 2 | "Brick" | | 3 | "Lane" | | 4 | "Golden" |
| | globalScore | 0.609 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 69.35% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 62 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "felt like asking for something she'd al" | | 1 | "as though claiming territory" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1646 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 173 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 110 | | mean | 14.96 | | std | 12.57 | | cv | 0.84 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 23 | | 1 | 37 | | 2 | 3 | | 3 | 28 | | 4 | 5 | | 5 | 60 | | 6 | 1 | | 7 | 4 | | 8 | 6 | | 9 | 11 | | 10 | 6 | | 11 | 13 | | 12 | 29 | | 13 | 4 | | 14 | 1 | | 15 | 17 | | 16 | 14 | | 17 | 26 | | 18 | 2 | | 19 | 45 | | 20 | 24 | | 21 | 3 | | 22 | 9 | | 23 | 30 | | 24 | 6 | | 25 | 27 | | 26 | 6 | | 27 | 19 | | 28 | 6 | | 29 | 2 | | 30 | 42 | | 31 | 6 | | 32 | 36 | | 33 | 13 | | 34 | 14 | | 35 | 6 | | 36 | 6 | | 37 | 10 | | 38 | 26 | | 39 | 14 | | 40 | 17 | | 41 | 7 | | 42 | 9 | | 43 | 12 | | 44 | 4 | | 45 | 20 | | 46 | 34 | | 47 | 1 | | 48 | 9 | | 49 | 12 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 103 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 177 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 10.73% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 11 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 8 | | totalSentences | 173 | | ratio | 0.046 | | matches | | 0 | "His ivory-handled cane hung from his right hand, and those mismatched eyes—one amber, one black—met hers with an intensity that made her chest tighten." | | 1 | "She searched his face—the sharp line of his jaw, the tension in his shoulders, the way water clung to his collar." | | 2 | "Every surface covered with books and scrolls, the low ceiling, the single window overlooking Brick Lane—it all felt smaller with his presence filling it." | | 3 | "The way he said her name—full, formal, as though it carried weight—made her stomach flip." | | 4 | "The quality was poor, grainy, clearly taken from a distance, but something about the posture, the breadth of the shoulders—" | | 5 | "He moved closer—close enough that she caught the scent of rain and sandalwood emanating from him." | | 6 | "Without the cat as a buffer, Lucien looked almost vulnerable—a look she'd never associated with him." | | 7 | "Lucien's hand lifted—slowly, giving her time to pull away—and touched her cheek." |
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| 96.54% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 910 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 40 | | adverbRatio | 0.04395604395604396 | | lyAdverbCount | 9 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.00989010989010989 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 173 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 173 | | mean | 9.51 | | std | 6.91 | | cv | 0.726 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 7 | | 1 | 16 | | 2 | 6 | | 3 | 13 | | 4 | 18 | | 5 | 3 | | 6 | 2 | | 7 | 7 | | 8 | 19 | | 9 | 5 | | 10 | 28 | | 11 | 8 | | 12 | 24 | | 13 | 1 | | 14 | 4 | | 15 | 4 | | 16 | 2 | | 17 | 5 | | 18 | 6 | | 19 | 6 | | 20 | 13 | | 21 | 13 | | 22 | 16 | | 23 | 4 | | 24 | 1 | | 25 | 5 | | 26 | 12 | | 27 | 6 | | 28 | 8 | | 29 | 8 | | 30 | 18 | | 31 | 2 | | 32 | 37 | | 33 | 8 | | 34 | 16 | | 35 | 8 | | 36 | 3 | | 37 | 9 | | 38 | 4 | | 39 | 26 | | 40 | 6 | | 41 | 6 | | 42 | 8 | | 43 | 13 | | 44 | 6 | | 45 | 7 | | 46 | 12 | | 47 | 6 | | 48 | 2 | | 49 | 21 |
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| 50.48% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 11 | | diversityRatio | 0.34104046242774566 | | totalSentences | 173 | | uniqueOpeners | 59 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 92 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 20.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 46 | | totalSentences | 92 | | matches | | 0 | "She crossed the cramped living" | | 1 | "Her stomach dropped." | | 2 | "She'd promised Eva she'd use" | | 3 | "Her fingers hovered over the" | | 4 | "She pulled the door open." | | 5 | "His ivory-handled cane hung from" | | 6 | "His jaw shifted" | | 7 | "She leaned against the doorframe." | | 8 | "She crossed her arms" | | 9 | "She heard her own voice" | | 10 | "He removed his hand from" | | 11 | "She searched his face—the sharp" | | 12 | "she said, stepping aside" | | 13 | "He entered the flat, and" | | 14 | "His eyes met hers again" | | 15 | "He held it out to" | | 16 | "She didn't take it." | | 17 | "Her pulse picked up." | | 18 | "She kept her hands at" | | 19 | "She reached for the photograph." |
| | ratio | 0.5 | |
| 0.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 88 | | totalSentences | 92 | | matches | | 0 | "The knock came at half" | | 1 | "Rory set down Ptolemy's food" | | 2 | "The tabby wound between her" | | 3 | "She crossed the cramped living" | | 4 | "Her stomach dropped." | | 5 | "She'd promised Eva she'd use" | | 6 | "Her fingers hovered over the" | | 7 | "She pulled the door open." | | 8 | "Lucien Moreau stood in the" | | 9 | "Water darkened the shoulders of" | | 10 | "His ivory-handled cane hung from" | | 11 | "His jaw shifted" | | 12 | "She leaned against the doorframe." | | 13 | "Ptolemy trotted over to investigate," | | 14 | "The Frenchman glanced down, and" | | 15 | "The word hung between them." | | 16 | "Rain dripped somewhere outside, the" | | 17 | "Lucien's grip tightened on his" | | 18 | "She crossed her arms" | | 19 | "She heard her own voice" |
| | ratio | 0.957 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 92 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 34 | | technicalSentenceCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "Three sharp raps against the door, the kind that demanded an answer rather than requested one." | | 1 | "Lucien Moreau stood in the dim hallway, platinum hair slicked back as though he'd just stepped from a tailor's shop rather than the rain-soaked streets of East …" | | 2 | "His ivory-handled cane hung from his right hand, and those mismatched eyes—one amber, one black—met hers with an intensity that made her chest tighten." | | 3 | "Every surface covered with books and scrolls, the low ceiling, the single window overlooking Brick Lane—it all felt smaller with his presence filling it." | | 4 | "Lucien remained standing, his cane planted between his feet, watching her." | | 5 | "The way he said her name—full, formal, as though it carried weight—made her stomach flip." | | 6 | "She should tell him to leave, to stick to his original conviction, to stop confusing things that were already complicated enough." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 25 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 13 | | fancyCount | 3 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "She barked (bark)" | | 1 | "he admitted (admit)" | | 2 | "he continued (continue)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 95 | | tagDensity | 0.137 | | leniency | 0.274 | | rawRatio | 0.231 | | effectiveRatio | 0.063 | |