Run: 2026-04-24-01KQ0A4TT848Q7D0E7QMFVM68V

Run Details

Duration:
3m 4s
Cost:
$0.009683
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The knock came at half past eleven. Three sharp raps against the door, the kind that demanded an answer rather than requested one. Rory set down Ptolemy's food bowl. The tabby wound between her ankles, complaining about the interruption to his dinner. She crossed the cramped living room, stepping over stacks of Eva's research papers, and peered through the peephole. Her stomach dropped. Three deadbolts. She'd promised Eva she'd use all three. Her fingers hovered over the first, then the second, then the third, each click echoing through the quiet flat. She pulled the door open. Lucien Moreau stood in the dim hallway, platinum hair slicked back as though he'd just stepped from a tailor's shop rather than the rain-soaked streets of East London. Water darkened the shoulders of his charcoal suit. His ivory-handled cane hung from his right hand, and those mismatched eyes—one amber, one black—met hers with an intensity that made her chest tighten. "Rory." "Don't call me that." "Ah." His jaw shifted. "Aurora, then." She leaned against the doorframe. "How did you find this place?" "Finding people is what I do." "And showing up unannounced at half past eleven—is that also what you do?" Ptolemy trotted over to investigate, pressing his orange fur against Lucien's trouser leg. The Frenchman glanced down, and something soft flickered across his features before he composed himself again. "May I come in?" "No." The word hung between them. Rain dripped somewhere outside, the sound filtering through the old building's pipes. Lucien's grip tightened on his cane. "I wouldn't have come if it weren't important." "Important to who? You?" She crossed her arms. "Because the last time we spoke, you made it rather clear that your interests and mine don't align." "That's not—" "What? Not what you meant? When you told me I was a liability? When you said I'd get myself killed if I kept asking questions about Avaros?" She heard her own voice rising and forced it down. "You were pretty explicit, Lucien. No ambiguity there." He removed his hand from the cane and placed it flat against the doorframe, leaning closer. Amber and black held her gaze without flinching. "I was wrong." The admission landed like a stone in still water. "You were—" She huffed. "That's it? Three months of nothing, and you show up at my friend's flat in the middle of the night to tell me you were wrong?" "What would you have me say?" An apology would be a start. The words bubbled up, but she swallowed them. Demanding apologies felt like asking for something she'd already decided she didn't need. Ptolemy meowed, pawing at Lucien's shoe. "You should let me in," Lucien said. "There are things happening in the underworld. Things you need to know." "The underworld can wait until morning." "It can't." She searched his face—the sharp line of his jaw, the tension in his shoulders, the way water clung to his collar. Something had shaken him. Lucien Moreau didn't rattle easily, but tonight he carried an energy she'd never seen in him before. "Five minutes," she said, stepping aside. He entered the flat, and the space seemed to shrink around him. Every surface covered with books and scrolls, the low ceiling, the single window overlooking Brick Lane—it all felt smaller with his presence filling it. Lucien surveyed the chaos of Eva's research. "This is where you've been staying?" "Eva's been kind enough to let me crash here while I figure things out." "And the delivery work? Yu-Fei's restaurant?" She stiffened. "Keeping tabs on me?" "Keeping track." His eyes met hers again. "There's a difference." Ptolemy hopped onto the sofa, settling atop a pile of papers as though claiming territory. Lucien remained standing, his cane planted between his feet, watching her. "So," Rory said. "What's so urgent that it couldn't wait until a reasonable hour?" Lucien reached into his jacket pocket and withdrew a folded paper. He held it out to her. She didn't take it. "What is that?" "A photograph. Taken yesterday evening outside the Golden Empress." Her pulse picked up. She kept her hands at her sides. "And?" "Look at it, Aurora." The way he said her name—full, formal, as though it carried weight—made her stomach flip. She reached for the photograph. The image showed a figure lurking in the shadows across from the Golden Empress. The quality was poor, grainy, clearly taken from a distance, but something about the posture, the breadth of the shoulders— "Evan." The name fell out of her like a curse. "He's been watching the restaurant," Lucien said. "Which means he's watching you." She handed the photograph back, her hand trembling. She curled her fingers into a fist to hide it. "I can handle Evan." "Can you?" The question wasn't dismissive. It was genuine, searching. She turned away, facing the cluttered bookshelves. Eva's notes on Avarosian gateways and demonic hierarchies stared back at her, incomprehensible in her current state. "You didn't come here to warn me about Evan," she said. "You came here because whatever's happening in the underworld involves him somehow. Doesn't it?" Silence stretched behind her. "Lucien." "He's made contact with someone from Avaros. Someone connected to my father's lineage." She spun to face him. "What does that mean?" "It means your ex-boyfriend has aligned himself with forces that could destroy him—and you along with him, if you remain in his orbit." "My orbit?" She barked a bitter laugh. "I left. I'm the one who walked away. If he's circling, that's not my orbit, that's his refusal to accept reality." Lucien set the photograph on top of a stack of books. He moved closer—close enough that she caught the scent of rain and sandalwood emanating from him. "I told you to stop asking questions because I wanted to protect you." "Right. Protection. That's why you cut me off without explanation." "I thought distance would keep you safe." "Well, it didn't." She jabbed a finger toward the window. "Evan's still out there. And now apparently he's tangled up with demons from another realm. So tell me, Lucien—how's that distance working out?" His expression shifted. Hurt surfaced, naked and unguarded, before he masked it again. "Poorly," he admitted. The admission knocked something loose in her chest. Ptolemy chirped from the sofa, demanding attention. Neither of them moved. "You should sit down," she said finally. "You're dripping rain onto Eva's floor." "I don't intend to stay long." "Sit down anyway." He hesitated, then lowered himself onto the edge of the sofa. Ptolemy immediately claimed his lap, purring with shameless enthusiasm. Lucien's hand came up to stroke the cat's fur, and the gesture was so unexpectedly tender that Rory had to look away. She perched on the edge of Eva's desk, arms crossed. "Start from the beginning. Who contacted Evan, and what do they want?" "A demon named Vorath. He deals in bargains—specifically, bargains that exploit human weakness." Lucien's mismatched eyes lifted to hers. "Evan made a deal. I don't know the terms yet, but I know Vorath doesn't offer anything without extracting triple the value in return." "And you're telling me this because..." "Because you're in danger. Because Vorath knows you're connected to me, and that makes you a target." "Connected to you?" She tilted her head. "You told me we weren't connected. You told me—" "I know what I told you." His voice sharpened. "I was trying to keep you safe." "And I told you—I don't need protection. I need information. I need to understand what's happening so I can make informed choices." "Like the informed choice you made when you left Cardiff?" The blow landed. She stood, her pulse loud in her ears. "That's low." "I apologise." He said it stiffly, formally, but his hand had stilled on Ptolemy's back. "That was uncalled for." "Damn right it was." They stared at each other. The flat felt airless, the walls pressing inward. "Why are you really here?" she asked. "I told you—" "You told me about Vorath. You told me about Evan. But you didn't tell me why you, specifically, came to tell me in person at eleven-thirty at night." She stepped closer. "You have people who work for you. Messengers. Fixers. You could have sent someone else." "I needed to see you." The words dropped into the space between them. Ptolemy leapt from Lucien's lap, abandoning him for the warmth of the radiator. Without the cat as a buffer, Lucien looked almost vulnerable—a look she'd never associated with him. "I needed to know you were safe," he continued. "I needed to see for myself." "Lucien..." "Three months." He rose, closing the distance until he stood close enough that she could count the water droplets clinging to his eyelashes. "Three months of convincing myself that staying away was the right choice. That leaving you alone was the only way to keep you from the chaos of my world." "And now?" "Now I'm standing in your friend's flat at half past eleven, realising that staying away didn't protect you at all." His voice dropped. "It only kept me from protecting you myself." She should step back. She should tell him to leave, to stick to his original conviction, to stop confusing things that were already complicated enough. She didn't move. "This doesn't change anything," she said. "No?" "You still walked away. You still decided for both of us what was best without asking me." "I did." "And you think you can just show up with a photograph and an apology and—what? Pick up where we left off?" His jaw tightened. "I don't expect anything." "Then what do you want?" The question hung there, demanding an answer. Lucien's hand lifted—slowly, giving her time to pull away—and touched her cheek. His fingers were cool from the rain, and the contact sent a shiver through her. "I want," he said quietly, "to not make the same mistake twice."
created_at"2026-04-24T17:56:03.035Z" 4/24/2026, 5:56:03 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags25
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"she said finally [finally]"
1"he said quietly [quietly]"
dialogueSentences95
tagDensity0.263
leniency0.526
rawRatio0.08
effectiveRatio0.042
93.98% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1662
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"really"
count1
1
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"really"
1"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
63.90% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1662
totalAiIsms12
found
0
word"stomach"
count2
1
word"echoing"
count1
2
word"intensity"
count1
3
word"flickered"
count1
4
word"tension"
count1
5
word"pulse"
count2
6
word"weight"
count1
7
word"silence"
count1
8
word"aligned"
count1
9
word"warmth"
count1
highlights
0"stomach"
1"echoing"
2"intensity"
3"flickered"
4"tension"
5"pulse"
6"weight"
7"silence"
8"aligned"
9"warmth"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"stomach dropped/sank"
count1
1
label"sent a shiver through"
count1
highlights
0"stomach dropped"
1"sent a shiver through"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences103
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences103
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences173
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen37
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1646
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions30
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
60.91% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions43
wordCount898
uniqueNames14
maxNameDensity1.78
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Ptolemy8
Eva5
Moreau2
East1
London1
Lucien16
Frenchman1
Brick1
Lane1
Golden1
Empress1
Avarosian1
Silence1
Rory3
persons
0"Ptolemy"
1"Eva"
2"Moreau"
3"Lucien"
4"Frenchman"
5"Silence"
6"Rory"
places
0"East"
1"London"
2"Brick"
3"Lane"
4"Golden"
globalScore0.609
windowScore0.667
69.35% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences62
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"felt like asking for something she'd al"
1"as though claiming territory"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1646
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences173
matches
0"tender that Rory"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs110
mean14.96
std12.57
cv0.84
sampleLengths
023
137
23
328
45
560
61
74
86
911
106
1113
1229
134
141
1517
1614
1726
182
1945
2024
213
229
2330
246
2527
266
2719
286
292
3042
316
3236
3313
3414
356
366
3710
3826
3914
4017
417
429
4312
444
4520
4634
471
489
4912
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences103
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs177
matches(empty)
10.73% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount11
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences8
totalSentences173
ratio0.046
matches
0"His ivory-handled cane hung from his right hand, and those mismatched eyes—one amber, one black—met hers with an intensity that made her chest tighten."
1"She searched his face—the sharp line of his jaw, the tension in his shoulders, the way water clung to his collar."
2"Every surface covered with books and scrolls, the low ceiling, the single window overlooking Brick Lane—it all felt smaller with his presence filling it."
3"The way he said her name—full, formal, as though it carried weight—made her stomach flip."
4"The quality was poor, grainy, clearly taken from a distance, but something about the posture, the breadth of the shoulders—"
5"He moved closer—close enough that she caught the scent of rain and sandalwood emanating from him."
6"Without the cat as a buffer, Lucien looked almost vulnerable—a look she'd never associated with him."
7"Lucien's hand lifted—slowly, giving her time to pull away—and touched her cheek."
96.54% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount910
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount40
adverbRatio0.04395604395604396
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.00989010989010989
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences173
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences173
mean9.51
std6.91
cv0.726
sampleLengths
07
116
26
313
418
53
62
77
819
95
1028
118
1224
131
144
154
162
175
186
196
2013
2113
2216
234
241
255
2612
276
288
298
3018
312
3237
338
3416
358
363
379
384
3926
406
416
428
4313
446
457
4612
476
482
4921
50.48% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats11
diversityRatio0.34104046242774566
totalSentences173
uniqueOpeners59
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences92
matches(empty)
ratio0
20.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount46
totalSentences92
matches
0"She crossed the cramped living"
1"Her stomach dropped."
2"She'd promised Eva she'd use"
3"Her fingers hovered over the"
4"She pulled the door open."
5"His ivory-handled cane hung from"
6"His jaw shifted"
7"She leaned against the doorframe."
8"She crossed her arms"
9"She heard her own voice"
10"He removed his hand from"
11"She searched his face—the sharp"
12"she said, stepping aside"
13"He entered the flat, and"
14"His eyes met hers again"
15"He held it out to"
16"She didn't take it."
17"Her pulse picked up."
18"She kept her hands at"
19"She reached for the photograph."
ratio0.5
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount88
totalSentences92
matches
0"The knock came at half"
1"Rory set down Ptolemy's food"
2"The tabby wound between her"
3"She crossed the cramped living"
4"Her stomach dropped."
5"She'd promised Eva she'd use"
6"Her fingers hovered over the"
7"She pulled the door open."
8"Lucien Moreau stood in the"
9"Water darkened the shoulders of"
10"His ivory-handled cane hung from"
11"His jaw shifted"
12"She leaned against the doorframe."
13"Ptolemy trotted over to investigate,"
14"The Frenchman glanced down, and"
15"The word hung between them."
16"Rain dripped somewhere outside, the"
17"Lucien's grip tightened on his"
18"She crossed her arms"
19"She heard her own voice"
ratio0.957
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences92
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences34
technicalSentenceCount7
matches
0"Three sharp raps against the door, the kind that demanded an answer rather than requested one."
1"Lucien Moreau stood in the dim hallway, platinum hair slicked back as though he'd just stepped from a tailor's shop rather than the rain-soaked streets of East …"
2"His ivory-handled cane hung from his right hand, and those mismatched eyes—one amber, one black—met hers with an intensity that made her chest tighten."
3"Every surface covered with books and scrolls, the low ceiling, the single window overlooking Brick Lane—it all felt smaller with his presence filling it."
4"Lucien remained standing, his cane planted between his feet, watching her."
5"The way he said her name—full, formal, as though it carried weight—made her stomach flip."
6"She should tell him to leave, to stick to his original conviction, to stop confusing things that were already complicated enough."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags25
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags13
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"She barked (bark)"
1"he admitted (admit)"
2"he continued (continue)"
dialogueSentences95
tagDensity0.137
leniency0.274
rawRatio0.231
effectiveRatio0.063
75.5302%