Run: 2026-04-24-01KQ0A569465447QZSXKZMQYBP

Run Details

Duration:
15m 22s
Cost:
$0.056096
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The green neon above the doorway buzzed like a dying insect. Rory ducked beneath the glow, her shoulders hunched against the wind slicing through Soho. For six weeks she had lived above The Raven's Nest, using the side alley entrance, avoiding the bar itself. Tonight a burst pipe had flooded the narrow passage with bleach-scented water, forcing her through the front. She pushed the heavy door. It exhaled a cloud of warmth laced with pine polish, stale hops, and tobacco ghosts trapped in the wallpaper. Inside, black-and-white photographs swallowed the walls. Men in fedoras held folded newspapers at stiff angles. Harbours glittered with salt. Old maps of European cities peeled at the corners, their edges browned by decades of cigarette smoke. She crossed to the bar. Her trainers stuck to the floorboards. A man stood behind the counter, polishing a glass with a cloth that had seen better decades. Grey-streaked auburn hair caught the low light. A beard, trimmed tight, carried the same steel-and-copper colouring. When he shifted his weight, his left leg dragged, a half-beat behind the rest of him. A silver signet ring glinted on his right hand. He looked up. Hazel eyes. The kind that catalogued details before the mind caught up. "Rory Carter." Something cold moved through her ribs. Not the name she gave the agency. Not the name on her Golden Empress uniform. She stopped three stools from the end. "You've got the wrong—" "I don't." He set the glass down. It clinked against the mahogany. "Last time I saw you, you were twelve. You bled all over my good coat at the Millennium Stadium. Skinned both knees on the concrete steps. You didn't cry. You blamed the architects." Cardiff rushed back in an instant—the grey sky, the roar of a rugby crowd, a tall man in a tweed jacket buying her chips from a paper cone. She had called him Si. Her father's friend from the Home Office. Or that was the lie her father told. "Silas Blackwood." The name settled in her mouth like dust from a long-sealed room. "You disappeared." "Retired." He swept one hand across the room. "Or this is what retirement looks like." She slid onto a stool. The leather sighed beneath her. "My flat is upstairs." "I know." "You own this building." "I own the bar. I own the flat above it." He reached for a bottle of whiskey. His right hand turned the cap; the signet ring caught the lamplight. "Your friend Eva wrote to me. She said you needed somewhere the past couldn't reach." Rory stared at the photograph nearest her—a bridge in Prague, snow thick on the balustrade, a figure half-erased by the camera flash. "You should have said no." "I considered it." He poured two fingers. The liquid burned amber in the glass. "But your father never asked me for anything. Not in twenty years. When he wrote asking if I knew where you'd gone, I figured I owed him one silence." Rory's gaze snapped to his face. "He wrote to you?" "He wanted to know if you were alive." Silas pushed the tumbler toward her. She didn't touch it. "He used words like 'thriving.' He used words like 'safe.' But Brendan Carter was never subtle when he feared the worst. I decoded the sentences between the punctuation." Rory looked at her left wrist. The crescent-shaped scar sat pale against her skin. The doctors in Cardiff had called it a childhood accident. A bicycle chain. She had repeated that story until it became fact. "I left the law." "I know." "I left Evan six months ago." Silas nodded. The muscles along his jaw tightened beneath the beard. "The black eye at your graduation dinner. You wore sunglasses through the whole meal. Your mother poured the wine and pretended the lights were bright. Your father noticed." "He didn't say anything." "He didn't know what to say." Silas braced both hands against the bar. The wood groaned under his weight. "Men like Brendan believe the courtroom can fix anything. Abuse doesn't sit in the dock. It doesn't confess under oath." Rory's fingers found the glass. The whiskey warmed her palm, but she didn't drink. "You became a bartender." "I became a spy who pours drinks." "Same thing." "Not quite." He limped to the far end of the counter, lifted a latch, and came around to her side. His left leg moved with the rigid patience of a man who had taught himself to walk twice. He stopped beside her stool. Up close she smelled pipe tobacco and peppermint on his collar, beneath the gin. "You were going to be a barrister. You argued the dinner table like it was the Old Bailey. You wore your mother's dressing gown and delivered a closing statement against bedtime. Do you remember?" "I remember being stupid enough to think words meant something." "They meant something to you." He reached out. His thumb hovered a centimetre from the scar on her wrist, then dropped to his side. "That wasn't a bicycle." Her lungs emptied. In the photograph behind his head, the Prague bridge looked frozen in perpetual January. She wondered if that was where his knee had folded, where his life had turned from corridors of power to this dim room. "How did you know?" "I've catalogued enough injuries to recognise intention." He withdrew his hand. "Evan?" She didn't answer. The whiskey trembled in its glass. Silas returned behind the bar. He picked up the cloth again, twisted it around his knuckles until his fingertips reddened. "I spent thirty years making problems disappear. Not murder. Relocation. New papers. A life elsewhere. I could have made him evaporate." "You didn't." "You didn't ask." "I didn't know how." She released the glass. "You were the man who bought me chips. You weren't—this." "Neither were you." The neon sign outside flickered, staining the window green. Rory lifted the whiskey and drank. It scorched her throat. She set the glass down hard. The ring of it bounced off the photographs, the maps, the secrets pinned to the walls. "You changed." "We both did." "You were going to change the world." "I was going to survive it." She looked at him—this man who had once let her steal maraschino cherries from his cocktails, who had carried her on his shoulders above the stadium seats where the air turned thin. Now his shoulders curved under a bartender's apron. Now her shoulders carried takeaway boxes through London rain. "Do you regret it?" "Which part?" "Prague. The knee." She swept one hand toward the room. "Standing behind this bar while people like me come in and try to forget?" Silas set the cloth down. He placed his right hand flat on the bar. The signet ring clicked against the wood, a small metallic punctuation. "I regret that I taught you chess on a rainy Thursday in Cardiff and never asked if you were happy. I regret that I had a telephone number that could have pulled you out six months sooner, and I dialled it twice before hanging up because your father said you were fine. I regret believing that retirement meant stopping, when it only meant becoming invisible to the people who once needed you." Rory's throat tightened. She looked at the scar on her wrist, then at his knee, then at the maps—all those streets in unfamiliar cities, all the routes that had led them here, to this stale room above which she now slept alone. "I don't know how to be her anymore. The girl who wore the dressing gown." Silas looked at her. The lamplight carved new hollows in his face. "She isn't gone. She learned that winning doesn't always look like a verdict. Sometimes it looks like scar tissue. Sometimes it looks like waking up above a bar in Soho." He reached for the whiskey bottle. His sleeve caught the lamplight. "I'll take the third step slow." Silas paused. "The stairwell light?" "It's out." "It has been for a week." She slid off the stool. "I'll manage." "Rory." She stopped. He didn't say anything more. The signet ring tapped once against the bar—a signal, an admission, a full stop. Outside, a siren wailed past Greek Street, rising and falling, dying into the dark.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1384
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
78.32% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1384
totalAiIsms6
found
0
word"warmth"
count1
1
word"weight"
count2
2
word"silence"
count1
3
word"trembled"
count1
4
word"flickered"
count1
highlights
0"warmth"
1"weight"
2"silence"
3"trembled"
4"flickered"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences92
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences92
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences152
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen72
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1378
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions13
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions31
wordCount842
uniqueNames17
maxNameDensity0.83
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Soho1
Raven1
Nest1
European1
Golden1
Empress1
Si1
Home1
Office1
Prague2
Cardiff2
January1
London1
Greek1
Street1
Rory7
Silas7
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Rory"
3"Silas"
places
0"Soho"
1"Home"
2"Prague"
3"Cardiff"
4"London"
5"Greek"
6"Street"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences61
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1378
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences152
matches
0"repeated that story"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs100
mean13.78
std16.18
cv1.174
sampleLengths
085
147
258
33
412
52
621
77
84
92
1010
1133
1248
132
1412
152
161
177
187
1910
204
212
224
2310
2419
2515
2622
275
283
2911
3029
316
324
338
3410
3528
3636
374
382
396
4011
4128
424
436
4413
4520
4614
474
487
492
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences92
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs138
matches(empty)
30.08% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount5
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences152
ratio0.039
matches
0"Cardiff rushed back in an instant—the grey sky, the roar of a rugby crowd, a tall man in a tweed jacket buying her chips from a paper cone."
1"His right hand turned the cap; the signet ring caught the lamplight."
2"Rory stared at the photograph nearest her—a bridge in Prague, snow thick on the balustrade, a figure half-erased by the camera flash."
3"She looked at him—this man who had once let her steal maraschino cherries from his cocktails, who had carried her on his shoulders above the stadium seats where the air turned thin."
4"She looked at the scar on her wrist, then at his knee, then at the maps—all those streets in unfamiliar cities, all the routes that had led them here, to this stale room above which she now slept alone."
5"The signet ring tapped once against the bar—a signal, an admission, a full stop."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount857
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount10
adverbRatio0.011668611435239206
lyAdverbCount0
lyAdverbRatio0
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences152
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences152
mean9.07
std9.07
cv1.001
sampleLengths
011
114
219
317
45
519
66
79
84
917
105
116
1217
137
149
1516
169
173
182
1910
202
216
227
238
247
254
262
275
285
2933
3028
315
327
338
342
3512
362
371
387
397
405
415
424
432
444
4510
467
4712
4815
4922
43.42% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats10
diversityRatio0.2894736842105263
totalSentences152
uniqueOpeners44
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences88
matches(empty)
ratio0
47.27% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount38
totalSentences88
matches
0"She pushed the heavy door."
1"It exhaled a cloud of"
2"She crossed to the bar."
3"Her trainers stuck to the"
4"He looked up."
5"She stopped three stools from"
6"He set the glass down."
7"It clinked against the mahogany."
8"She had called him Si."
9"Her father's friend from the"
10"He swept one hand across"
11"She slid onto a stool."
12"He reached for a bottle"
13"His right hand turned the"
14"He poured two fingers."
15"She didn't touch it."
16"She had repeated that story"
17"He limped to the far"
18"His left leg moved with"
19"He stopped beside her stool."
ratio0.432
33.86% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount75
totalSentences88
matches
0"The green neon above the"
1"Rory ducked beneath the glow,"
2"Tonight a burst pipe had"
3"She pushed the heavy door."
4"It exhaled a cloud of"
5"Men in fedoras held folded"
6"Harbours glittered with salt."
7"She crossed to the bar."
8"Her trainers stuck to the"
9"A man stood behind the"
10"A beard, trimmed tight, carried"
11"A silver signet ring glinted"
12"He looked up."
13"The kind that catalogued details"
14"Something cold moved through her"
15"She stopped three stools from"
16"He set the glass down."
17"It clinked against the mahogany."
18"Cardiff rushed back in an"
19"She had called him Si."
ratio0.852
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences88
matches
0"Now his shoulders curved under"
1"Now her shoulders carried takeaway"
ratio0.023
40.82% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences28
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"For six weeks she had lived above The Raven's Nest, using the side alley entrance, avoiding the bar itself."
1"A man stood behind the counter, polishing a glass with a cloth that had seen better decades."
2"She looked at him—this man who had once let her steal maraschino cherries from his cocktails, who had carried her on his shoulders above the stadium seats where…"
3"She looked at the scar on her wrist, then at his knee, then at the maps—all those streets in unfamiliar cities, all the routes that had led them here, to this s…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
85.7924%