| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 27 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 53 | | tagDensity | 0.509 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 97.62% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 2103 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 50.07% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 2103 | | totalAiIsms | 21 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "shimmered" | | 1 | "warmth" | | 2 | "pulse" | | 3 | "perfect" | | 4 | "silence" | | 5 | "vibrated" | | 6 | "pulsed" | | 7 | "imposing" | | 8 | "tracing" | | 9 | "crystalline" | | 10 | "footfall" | | 11 | "traced" | | 12 | "resonated" | | 13 | "footsteps" | | 14 | "intensity" | | 15 | "resonance" | | 16 | "could feel" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 135 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 135 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 161 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 44 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 2133 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 21 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 16.67% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 71 | | wordCount | 1692 | | uniqueNames | 9 | | maxNameDensity | 2.13 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 4.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Heartstone | 4 | | November | 1 | | Rory | 36 | | Nyx | 9 | | Isolde | 17 | | Varga | 1 | | Pre-Law | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Heartstone" | | 1 | "Rory" | | 2 | "Nyx" | | 3 | "Isolde" | | 4 | "Varga" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.436 | | windowScore | 0.167 | |
| 65.73% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 89 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "as if eavesdropping on a conversation at the circle's centre" | | 1 | "quite match their real counterparts" | | 2 | "colour that seemed to glow from within" |
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| 59.35% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 3 | | per1kWords | 1.406 | | wordCount | 2133 | | matches | | 0 | "not in patches or clusters, but in a continuous carpet of colour" | | 1 | "not cut but implied" | | 2 | "no longer random but" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 161 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 65 | | mean | 32.82 | | std | 23.42 | | cv | 0.714 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 72 | | 1 | 33 | | 2 | 37 | | 3 | 13 | | 4 | 30 | | 5 | 90 | | 6 | 10 | | 7 | 59 | | 8 | 5 | | 9 | 27 | | 10 | 15 | | 11 | 93 | | 12 | 13 | | 13 | 36 | | 14 | 58 | | 15 | 36 | | 16 | 4 | | 17 | 32 | | 18 | 70 | | 19 | 34 | | 20 | 7 | | 21 | 22 | | 22 | 2 | | 23 | 5 | | 24 | 27 | | 25 | 1 | | 26 | 3 | | 27 | 59 | | 28 | 37 | | 29 | 8 | | 30 | 38 | | 31 | 34 | | 32 | 45 | | 33 | 69 | | 34 | 30 | | 35 | 6 | | 36 | 36 | | 37 | 41 | | 38 | 15 | | 39 | 23 | | 40 | 51 | | 41 | 34 | | 42 | 53 | | 43 | 3 | | 44 | 3 | | 45 | 60 | | 46 | 59 | | 47 | 35 | | 48 | 48 | | 49 | 9 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 135 | | matches | | 0 | "been expected" | | 1 | "been woven" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 287 | | matches | | 0 | "was holding" | | 1 | "were responding" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 28 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 25 | | totalSentences | 161 | | ratio | 0.155 | | matches | | 0 | "The air between them shimmered — not heat shimmer, something thicker, something that bent the trees beyond into shapes that didn't quite match their real counterparts." | | 1 | "The evening had turned sharp, but the cold felt different here — surgical, precise, as if the temperature dropped in exact increments the closer they got to the oaks." | | 2 | "The standing stones — the oaks — formed no perfect geometry." | | 3 | "Wildflowers clustered around each base in thick, improbable rings — bluebells and foxglove and something with petals like hammered copper that Rory had never seen in any field guide." | | 4 | "Not silence — silence would have been expected, welcome even." | | 5 | "Wildflowers covered every inch of ground — not in patches or clusters, but in a continuous carpet of colour that seemed to glow from within." | | 6 | "A path wound through the wildflowers, not cut but implied — the blooms pressed flat in a winding trail that curved toward the centre of the clearing, where a stone sat." | | 7 | "\"Then we follow.\" Nyx rose without using their knees — one moment crouched, the next standing, their height suddenly imposing." | | 8 | "The hum grew louder with each step, and beneath it, another sound — a rustling like pages turning, though there was no wind." | | 9 | "The shadows around Nyx's face shifted, and she caught the barest impression of a smirk — there and gone, like a fish surfacing." | | 10 | "Up close, the moss wasn't uniform — it grew in patterns, whorls and lines that spiralled outward from the slab's centre." | | 11 | "Deeper hues, almost bruised — plums and midnight blues and a red so dark it registered as black until the light caught its edges." | | 12 | "The hum changed pitch — dropped an octave, rose again, settled into something that resonated in Rory's molars." | | 13 | "Light ones, barely there — and when Rory looked at the wildflower carpet beyond the stone, she saw the reason Isolde left no footprints." | | 14 | "Isolde Varga wore a dress that might have been woven from cobwebs and moonlight — pale, translucent at the edges, shifting with colours that didn't exist outside this place." | | 15 | "The expression moved across her face like weather — clouds parting to reveal brief sun." | | 16 | "Her eyes returned to their normal lavender, and she regarded Rory with something that might have been curiosity or hunger — the distinction felt thin." | | 17 | "Her expression shifted — softer now, something ancient and sad moving behind her eyes." | | 18 | "The fractal branches had shifted their movement, Rory noticed — the chimes were no longer random but patterned, almost melodic, as if the trees were responding to Isolde's presence." | | 19 | "She was shorter — five-five to Rory's five-six — but her presence filled the clearing like sound fills a cathedral." | | 20 | "She placed her hand against one trunk, and the wood beneath her palm shifted colour — pale birch-white bleeding to deep mahogany." | | 21 | "Sound returned in a rush — the hum, the chimes, the rustling pages — and the flowers burst back to their impossible luminescence." | | 22 | "In it lay a blade — slender, leaf-shaped, its surface catching light that wasn't there." | | 23 | "Looked at Nyx, whose violet eyes had gone wide — or wider, the expression conveyed through the subtle widening of the two glowing points." | | 24 | "For a moment, the grove looked different — sharper, every detail rendered in silver and shadow, the colours stripped away to reveal the bones of the place." |
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| 88.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1673 | | adjectiveStacks | 2 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "sad moving behind her" | | 1 | "pale birch-white bleeding" |
| | adverbCount | 50 | | adverbRatio | 0.029886431560071727 | | lyAdverbCount | 8 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.004781829049611476 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 161 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 161 | | mean | 13.25 | | std | 9.39 | | cv | 0.709 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 27 | | 1 | 19 | | 2 | 26 | | 3 | 11 | | 4 | 15 | | 5 | 7 | | 6 | 8 | | 7 | 29 | | 8 | 7 | | 9 | 6 | | 10 | 5 | | 11 | 17 | | 12 | 1 | | 13 | 1 | | 14 | 6 | | 15 | 11 | | 16 | 18 | | 17 | 32 | | 18 | 29 | | 19 | 10 | | 20 | 4 | | 21 | 10 | | 22 | 20 | | 23 | 25 | | 24 | 5 | | 25 | 21 | | 26 | 6 | | 27 | 9 | | 28 | 6 | | 29 | 25 | | 30 | 26 | | 31 | 8 | | 32 | 34 | | 33 | 7 | | 34 | 4 | | 35 | 2 | | 36 | 15 | | 37 | 21 | | 38 | 31 | | 39 | 7 | | 40 | 20 | | 41 | 2 | | 42 | 10 | | 43 | 8 | | 44 | 16 | | 45 | 4 | | 46 | 20 | | 47 | 12 | | 48 | 4 | | 49 | 8 |
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| 51.97% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 13 | | diversityRatio | 0.36024844720496896 | | totalSentences | 161 | | uniqueOpeners | 58 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 114 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead, a low hum vibrated" | | 1 | "Only their eyes remained visible," | | 2 | "Then Isolde smiled again, and" | | 3 | "Then the vision faded, and" |
| | ratio | 0.035 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 27 | | totalSentences | 114 | | matches | | 0 | "They stood two paces behind," | | 1 | "She reached for the Heartstone" | | 2 | "She stepped past the first" | | 3 | "Their trunks spiralled upward in" | | 4 | "She didn't touch them." | | 5 | "She unclasped it and held" | | 6 | "They walked the path." | | 7 | "She looked down and saw" | | 8 | "They reached the stone." | | 9 | "Their form dissolved at the" | | 10 | "They parted and closed behind" | | 11 | "She appeared between two helical" | | 12 | "Her eyes were the colour" | | 13 | "She moved to the stone" | | 14 | "Her eyes returned to their" | | 15 | "Her expression shifted — softer" | | 16 | "She tilted her head" | | 17 | "She was shorter — five-five" | | 18 | "She reached out and took" | | 19 | "Her fingers were cold, impossibly" |
| | ratio | 0.237 | |
| 30.18% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 98 | | totalSentences | 114 | | matches | | 0 | "The oaks stood in a" | | 1 | "Rory counted seven of them," | | 2 | "The air between them shimmered" | | 3 | "Nyx's voice slipped through the" | | 4 | "They stood two paces behind," | | 5 | "Rory pulled her jacket tighter" | | 6 | "The evening had turned sharp," | | 7 | "Nyx's violet eyes caught the" | | 8 | "Rory didn't ask before what." | | 9 | "She reached for the Heartstone" | | 10 | "The standing stones — the" | | 11 | "Another leaned at an angle" | | 12 | "Wildflowers clustered around each base" | | 13 | "She stepped past the first" | | 14 | "The sound hit first." | | 15 | "Nyx had moved without her" | | 16 | "Rory stopped breathing for a" | | 17 | "Wildflowers covered every inch of" | | 18 | "Blues and violets and golds" | | 19 | "The trees beyond the clearing" |
| | ratio | 0.86 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 114 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 65 | | technicalSentenceCount | 15 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory counted seven of them, each one leaning inward as if eavesdropping on a conversation at the circle's centre." | | 1 | "The evening had turned sharp, but the cold felt different here — surgical, precise, as if the temperature dropped in exact increments the closer they got to the…" | | 2 | "Another leaned at an angle that should have sent it toppling decades ago, yet its canopy spread wide and green above, heavy with leaves that hadn't dropped desp…" | | 3 | "Like standing too close to a subwoofer, but organic, resonant, as if the earth itself had a voice and was holding a single sustained note." | | 4 | "Wildflowers covered every inch of ground — not in patches or clusters, but in a continuous carpet of colour that seemed to glow from within." | | 5 | "Blues and violets and golds she didn't have names for, each one luminous in a way that suggested they'd learned to photosynthesise starlight rather than sunligh…" | | 6 | "Their trunks spiralled upward in helices, bark smooth as glass, their branches splitting into fractal patterns that repeated at smaller and smaller scales until…" | | 7 | "The fractal branches above them moved, each twig tracing small circles in the air, and the motion produced a faint chime, crystalline and irregular, as if someo…" | | 8 | "She looked down and saw the moss retreating from her footfall, pulling back like a living thing startled by contact." | | 9 | "Isolde Varga wore a dress that might have been woven from cobwebs and moonlight — pale, translucent at the edges, shifting with colours that didn't exist outsid…" | | 10 | "Her eyes were the colour of pale lavender, and they fixed on Rory with an intensity that made the Heartstone's warmth feel cold by comparison." | | 11 | "Her eyes returned to their normal lavender, and she regarded Rory with something that might have been curiosity or hunger — the distinction felt thin." | | 12 | "The fractal branches had shifted their movement, Rory noticed — the chimes were no longer random but patterned, almost melodic, as if the trees were responding …" | | 13 | "The wildflowers nearest to the seer bloomed wider, their petals unfurling in real time, and the colours brightened to something that hurt to look at directly." | | 14 | "In it lay a blade — slender, leaf-shaped, its surface catching light that wasn't there." |
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| 69.44% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 27 | | uselessAdditionCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "Nyx knelt, their form rippling like disturbed water" | | 1 | "Isolde's voice carried, as if three people spoke in slight offset" | | 2 | "she said, not turning around" |
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| 74.53% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 14 | | fancyCount | 4 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Nyx corrected (correct)" | | 1 | "Nyx whispered (whisper)" | | 2 | "she repeated (repeat)" | | 3 | "Isolde pressed (press)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 53 | | tagDensity | 0.264 | | leniency | 0.528 | | rawRatio | 0.286 | | effectiveRatio | 0.151 | |