Run: 2026-04-24-01KQ0A6P84WDETJ6CHTDYSZDWD

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Duration:
39.6s
Cost:
$0.005670
Provider:
Xiaomi

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain sliced through the beam of Harlow Quinn’s flashlight, turning the alley into a strobing tunnel of silver and shadow. Her quarry, a figure in a dark anorak, surged ahead, limbs pumping with a desperate, unnatural grace that defied the slick cobblestones. Quinn’s own breath burned in her lungs, a counterpoint to the rhythmic slap of her boots on wet stone. Eighteen years on the force, and the chase still lit a cold fire in her gut. The suspect—a minor player named Finch from the paperwork, a name that felt flimsy for the fear she’d seen in the eyes of his victims—vaulted a chain-link fence. Quinn followed, the worn leather of her watch strap biting into her wrist as she hauled herself over. The metal groaned under her weight. He was fast, but she was relentless, her path a straight line where his was a panicked zigzag. “Metropolitan Police! Stop!” The order was ripped away by the wind, useless. She didn’t expect compliance. They never stopped. Finch burst out of the alley mouth and into the orange sodium glow of a main road. Traffic hissed by, tires throwing up sheets of filthy water. He didn’t pause, darting between a black cab and a delivery van, horns blaring. Quinn followed, the world narrowing to the anorak’s fluttering back. Her focus was total. The city’s pulse—the thump of distant music, the distant wail of another siren—was a muted backdrop. He ducked under the awning of a closed laundromat, then down a set of steps she knew led to the public toilets and a series of maintenance tunnels. A dead end. Or a trap. Her hand went instinctively to her waistband, the familiar weight of the baton cold comfort. The stairwell swallowed the sounds of the street, replacing them with the dripping of condensation and Finch’s ragged, echoing breaths. Down here, the air changed. It tasted of damp concrete and something older, something metallic and earthy. The fluorescent tubes overhead flickered, casting sickly green light. Finch reached a heavy, steel door stenciled with ‘TFL - Authorized Personnel Only’. He slammed his palm against a rusted panel beside it. A hidden scanner, biometric by the look of it, glowed under his touch. With a shudder and a grind of ancient gears, the door swung open into profound darkness. Quinn slowed, her flashlight cutting a sharp cone into the void. This wasn’t on any city map she’d studied. The space beyond was a cavernous vault, the remains of an abandoned Tube platform. Decrepit advertisements for Brylcreem and cigarettes peeled from the tiled walls. The tracks were gone, buried under rubble and damp earth. It was a ghost of London’s past. Finch didn’t hesitate. He plunged into the darkness, his footsteps fading. Quinn stood at the threshold, the damp cold seeping through her soaked jacket. Going off-grid into an unsecured, unknown location without backup was textbook suicide. Every lesson, every scar earned over eighteen years, screamed at her to call it in, to seal the perimeter, to wait. But DS Morris’s face, drained of color on a sterile hospital sheet, flashed behind her eyes. That case had started with a suspect running into the dark, too. They’d called for backup. They’d followed procedure. And Morris had still ended up dead, the official report a masterpiece of obfuscation that kept her up nights. The supernatural itch in this case—the witnesses who wouldn’t talk, the evidence that degraded under analysis, Finch’s impossible speed—it all prickled at the edges of her understanding. This might be her only thread. The scent hit her then, drifting from the open door. Not just decay. It was a complex miasma: ozone, burnt hair, dried herbs, and something sweetly rotting. The Veil Market. The whispers in the precinct, the hushed stories from underworld snitches—it was here. Right here, beneath her feet. And it moved every full moon. Tonight’s moon was a smudged pearl behind the rain clouds. She stepped through. The air inside was warmer, stagnant, and alive with a low, sub-vocal hum. Her flashlight beam danced over stalls cobbled together from scrap wood and salvaged metal, all arranged in the cavernous space where trains once waited. Silhouettes melted away from the light. Whispers skittered in the gloom, in languages she didn’t recognize and a few she did. She saw the glint of glass jars filled with things that floated and pulsed. A stall piled with bleached bones, articulated into hands and feet. The faint, ethereal glow of jars containing what looked like captured mist. Finch was a ghost in this maze. She moved deeper, her senses on high alert, every shadow a potential threat. The air grew thicker, charged. A figure in a deep hood shuffled past, clutching a bundle wrapped in oilcloth. They didn’t look up. Then she saw him. He was at a stall near the far wall, a rough-hewn counter manned by a figure whose face was wrapped in linen bandages, leaving only dark, gleaming eyes. Finch was frantic, pulling items from his pockets—a roll of cash, a small silver locket—and placing them on the counter. He was trading, desperately. For what? For a way out? For protection? Quinn edged closer, using the clutter of the market as cover. The bandaged vendor slid a small, dark object across the counter. It looked like a compass, but the needle spun wildly. Before Finch could grab it, a heavy hand fell on his shoulder. The hand belonged to a mountain of a man in a stained butcher’s apron. Two others, similarly large and menacing, flanked him. The vendor’s dark eyes slid away, suddenly fascinated with a jar of preserved eyeballs. “Coin’s no good here, little thief,” the butcher’s voice was a deep, gravelly rumble. “You were warned about lifting from the Raven’s stock.” Finch went white. “I brought it back! It’s all here!” “Interest,” one of the other men grunted. The confusion on the street, the breakneck chase—it crystallized. This wasn’t a simple evasion. This was a theft leading to a shakedown in a place where normal laws were as substantial as the gas-lit air. Her authority here was less than zero. The butcher’s crew began to drag Finch away from the stall, towards a darker recess of the market. Finch’s eyes found hers across the room. There was no recognition, no appeal for help. Just pure, animal terror. Quinn’s hand rested on her radio. The button was cold and slick under her thumb. One call. One burst of static and a code word, and the market would either vanish or erupt. But the odds were stacked against her. She was one armed officer in a den of unknowns. Morris’s ghost stood at her shoulder. Finch started to scream. It was cut short, muffled by a hand clamped over his mouth. They were moving fast now, towards a tunnel she hadn’t noticed before, its entrance guarded by a curtain of beaded chains. She took a step forward. Then another. The decision settled in her bones, cold and sharp as the rain outside. She couldn’t let him disappear into the dark. Not again. Not like Morris. She moved, not towards the radio, but towards the disappearing group, her fingers tightening on the baton in her pocket. The shadows of the Veil Market closed in around her.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags2
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences5
tagDensity0.4
leniency0.8
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
91.82% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1222
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"sweetly"
count1
1
adverb"suddenly"
count1
highlights
0"sweetly"
1"suddenly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
26.35% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1222
totalAiIsms18
found
0
word"pumping"
count1
1
word"rhythmic"
count1
2
word"weight"
count2
3
word"pulse"
count1
4
word"familiar"
count1
5
word"echoing"
count1
6
word"flickered"
count1
7
word"profound"
count1
8
word"footsteps"
count1
9
word"complex"
count1
10
word"gloom"
count1
11
word"glint"
count1
12
word"pulsed"
count1
13
word"potential"
count1
14
word"charged"
count1
15
word"gleaming"
count1
16
word"crystallized"
count1
highlights
0"pumping"
1"rhythmic"
2"weight"
3"pulse"
4"familiar"
5"echoing"
6"flickered"
7"profound"
8"footsteps"
9"complex"
10"gloom"
11"glint"
12"pulsed"
13"potential"
14"charged"
15"gleaming"
16"crystallized"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences111
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences111
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
1"started to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences113
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen31
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1213
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions3
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions33
wordCount1182
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity1.1
worstName"Finch"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Finch"
discoveredNames
Harlow1
Quinn8
Finch13
Tube1
Brylcreem1
London1
Morris4
Veil2
Market2
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Finch"
3"Morris"
4"Market"
places
0"London"
globalScore0.95
windowScore0.833
89.02% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences82
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"looked like captured mist"
1"looked like a compass, but the needle spu"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.824
wordCount1213
matches
0"not towards the radio, but towards the disappearing group, her fingers tightening on th"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences113
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs25
mean48.52
std24.8
cv0.511
sampleLengths
077
170
219
371
469
578
661
757
887
964
103
1195
1243
1364
1444
1536
1623
1710
187
1942
2037
2156
2237
2333
2430
92.62% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount4
totalSentences111
matches
0"was ripped"
1"were gone"
2"was wrapped"
3"were stacked"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs183
matches
0"was trading"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount10
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences113
ratio0.053
matches
0"The suspect—a minor player named Finch from the paperwork, a name that felt flimsy for the fear she’d seen in the eyes of his victims—vaulted a chain-link fence."
1"The city’s pulse—the thump of distant music, the distant wail of another siren—was a muted backdrop."
2"The supernatural itch in this case—the witnesses who wouldn’t talk, the evidence that degraded under analysis, Finch’s impossible speed—it all prickled at the edges of her understanding."
3"The whispers in the precinct, the hushed stories from underworld snitches—it was here."
4"Finch was frantic, pulling items from his pockets—a roll of cash, a small silver locket—and placing them on the counter."
5"The confusion on the street, the breakneck chase—it crystallized."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount358
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount5
adverbRatio0.013966480446927373
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.00558659217877095
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences113
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences113
mean10.73
std6.38
cv0.595
sampleLengths
020
122
219
316
428
518
66
718
812
94
103
1117
1210
1314
1410
154
1616
1728
183
193
2015
2120
225
2312
249
2513
2610
2713
2816
2911
308
3114
3211
3310
347
353
368
3713
3812
3921
4016
4112
424
433
4419
4527
466
4710
483
4914
52.80% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.35398230088495575
totalSentences113
uniqueOpeners40
62.89% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences106
matches
0"Then she saw him."
1"Just pure, animal terror."
ratio0.019
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount30
totalSentences106
matches
0"Her quarry, a figure in"
1"He was fast, but she"
2"She didn’t expect compliance."
3"They never stopped."
4"He didn’t pause, darting between"
5"Her focus was total."
6"He ducked under the awning"
7"Her hand went instinctively to"
8"It tasted of damp concrete"
9"He slammed his palm against"
10"It was a ghost of"
11"He plunged into the darkness,"
12"They’d called for backup."
13"They’d followed procedure."
14"It was a complex miasma:"
15"She stepped through."
16"Her flashlight beam danced over"
17"She saw the glint of"
18"She moved deeper, her senses"
19"They didn’t look up."
ratio0.283
54.34% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount86
totalSentences106
matches
0"Rain sliced through the beam"
1"Her quarry, a figure in"
2"Quinn’s own breath burned in"
3"The suspect—a minor player named"
4"Quinn followed, the worn leather"
5"The metal groaned under her"
6"He was fast, but she"
7"The order was ripped away"
8"She didn’t expect compliance."
9"They never stopped."
10"Finch burst out of the"
11"Traffic hissed by, tires throwing"
12"He didn’t pause, darting between"
13"Quinn followed, the world narrowing"
14"Her focus was total."
15"The city’s pulse—the thump of"
16"He ducked under the awning"
17"A dead end."
18"Her hand went instinctively to"
19"The stairwell swallowed the sounds"
ratio0.811
47.17% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences106
matches
0"Before Finch could grab it,"
ratio0.009
83.33% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences60
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"Her quarry, a figure in a dark anorak, surged ahead, limbs pumping with a desperate, unnatural grace that defied the slick cobblestones."
1"The suspect—a minor player named Finch from the paperwork, a name that felt flimsy for the fear she’d seen in the eyes of his victims—vaulted a chain-link fence…"
2"And Morris had still ended up dead, the official report a masterpiece of obfuscation that kept her up nights."
3"The supernatural itch in this case—the witnesses who wouldn’t talk, the evidence that degraded under analysis, Finch’s impossible speed—it all prickled at the e…"
4"She saw the glint of glass jars filled with things that floated and pulsed."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags2
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"the other men grunted (grunt)"
dialogueSentences5
tagDensity0.2
leniency0.4
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.4
82.7894%