Run: 2026-04-24-01KQ0AHV01QZHCM8YC26GTKSYG

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You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The knock came three times. Sharp. Deliberate. The kind that didn't ask permission so much as demand attention. Rory's hand froze on the kettle. No one knocked on her door at this hour. No one knocked on her door at all, not since Eva had started using the fire escape and Silas had a key to the bar below. The second round of knocking was louder. She crossed the tiny flat in four strides, grabbed the umbrella from the stand by the door, and twisted the deadlocks open. The door swung wide, umbrella raised like a sword. Lucien Moreau stood in the hallway, one hand still raised to knock again. His heterochromatic eyes, one amber and one black, tracked from her face to the umbrella and back. "Expecting someone taller?" "What the hell are you doing here?" "May I come in?" "No." He leaned against the doorframe, his ivory-handled cane tucked under one arm. The charcoal suit was immaculate despite the hour, despite whatever had brought him across London to her doorstep. A bruise darkened his jawline, just visible beneath the collar of his coat. "Your face." "It's nothing." "Doesn't look like nothing." His mouth curved, not quite a smile. "You always did notice the small things, Carter." The use of her surname landed like a slap. Three months of silence, and he stood there acting like they were colleagues, like he hadn't vanished without a word after everything that happened between them. "I asked you a question." "And I asked to come in. We seem to be at an impasse." Rory glanced back at her flat. Dishes in the sink. Ptolemy, Eva's cat she'd been watching, sleeping on the sofa. Research papers spread across every surface. Nothing worth hiding. Nothing worth showing him, either. "Five minutes." "Generous." She stepped aside. He entered, and the flat immediately shrank. Lucien had that effect on spaces. He filled rooms not with his body, which was lean bordering on sharp, but with something else. Presence. Weight. The sense that the air itself had to make room for him. Ptolemy lifted his head, sniffed in Lucien's direction, and retreated beneath the coffee table. Smart cat. "You're watching Eva's cat." "She's in Dublin for the weekend. Family emergency." "Her mother?" "You know about that?" "I know things." He set his cane against the wall and removed his coat, folding it precisely over the arm of her battered sofa. White shirt underneath, buttons straining slightly at the collar. The bruise on his jaw looked worse in the lamplight. "That's rather the point of my profession." Rory didn't respond. She watched him examine her living space, his gaze moving across the books stacked on every surface, the takeaway containers she hadn't bothered to throw out, the half-finished crossword on the kitchen counter. Three months, and he showed up like this. Like he had every right. "You're bleeding." His hand went to his side, pressing against the white fabric. A dark stain had spread there, barely visible against the charcoal of his waistcoat. "Observant as ever." "Sit down before you fall down." "I'm fine." "Lucien." The name hung between them. His given name, which she'd only used once before. In a moment considerably less clothed than this one. He sat. Rory went to the kitchen, grabbed the first aid kit she kept under the sink, and tossed it onto the coffee table. "Lift your shirt." "Such forwardness, Carter." "Lift it, or I'll cut it off you." Something flickered in his mismatched eyes. Amusement, maybe. Or something hungrier. She couldn't tell with him, never could. That was part of the problem. His fingers moved to his buttons, slow and deliberate, each one revealing more skin, more bruising, more evidence of whatever fight he'd walked out of. The wound on his side was shallow but bleeding freely. A knife, probably. Something thin and vicious. "Who did this?" "Nobody you need to concern yourself with." "I'm concerned." "You shouldn't be." Rory grabbed the antiseptic and a clean cloth from the kit. She knelt between his spread knees, close enough to smell him. Sandalwood and something darker underneath. Smoke, maybe. Brimstone, if she was feeling poetic about it. The crescent scar on her wrist caught the light as she pressed the cloth to his wound. His gaze dropped to it, then away. She didn't apologise for the sting when the antiseptic hit raw flesh. He didn't flinch. "Hold this." He pressed his hand over the cloth, fingers brushing hers. Warm. Too warm. Half-demon blood ran hotter than human, she'd learned. Had the burns on her palms to prove it. "Why are you here, Lucien?" "Needed somewhere to go." "No. Why here? Why my flat? You have contacts everywhere. Safe houses, I'm sure. People who actually owe you favours." His jaw tightened. "Perhaps I don't want to owe anyone anything tonight." "That's not an answer." "It's the only one you're getting." Rory sat back on her heels. Studied him. The bruise, the wound, the rigid set of his shoulders beneath that pristine shirt. She'd seen him in worse shape, but she'd never seen him like this. Defeated wasn't the right word. Hollowed out, maybe. "Three months," she said. "I'm aware." "Three months of nothing. Not a word. Not a message through Silas. Not even a bloody carrier pigeon." "You made your position clear." "Did I?" "The night we spent together, you said, and I quote, 'Don't make this into something it isn't.'" Rory's hands stilled on the bandage she'd been unwinding. "That's not what I said." "Close enough." "It isn't." She rose to her feet, bandage dangling from her fingers. "I said don't make this into something we'll both regret. Different word. Different meaning entirely." Lucien's eyes narrowed. "Is that supposed to change something?" "I don't know." She turned away, busied herself with washing her hands in the sink. Needed the distance. Needed to think about something other than the heat of his skin, the steadiness of his pulse beneath her fingertips. "You're the one who left." "You asked me to." "I asked you to stay." Silence. She turned around. Lucien was standing now, one hand pressed to his freshly bandaged side, his expression unreadable. The cane stayed against the wall. He swayed slightly. "You should sit back down." "I should go." "Like hell." "There are people looking for me. Dangerous people." "So you came here? To my flat? The one above a bar, with exactly three locks on the door and a cat for protection?" "Four locks, actually. You added one after I left." How he knew that, she had no idea. Didn't want to ask. "They'll trace you here." "Probably." "You absolute arsehole." "Undeniably." Rory threw the bandage at him. He caught it, one-handed, without looking. Show-off. "You can't stay." "I know." "Then why did you come?" Lucien set the bandage on the coffee table. His gaze met hers, and for a moment the mask slipped. She saw exhaustion there. Fear. Something raw and unguarded that made her chest ache. "Because you're the only person in this city whose door I actually wanted to knock on." Another knock came from outside. Heavier this time. More insistent. Lucien's hand moved to his side, where his cane, and the blade hidden within it, leaned against the wall. Just out of reach. "Expecting someone else?"
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags4
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"She turned away [away]"
dialogueSentences67
tagDensity0.06
leniency0.119
rawRatio0.25
effectiveRatio0.03
87.71% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1221
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"precisely"
count1
1
adverb"slightly"
count2
highlights
0"precisely"
1"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
71.33% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1221
totalAiIsms7
found
0
word"silence"
count2
1
word"weight"
count1
2
word"flickered"
count1
3
word"pristine"
count1
4
word"pulse"
count1
5
word"unreadable"
count1
highlights
0"silence"
1"weight"
2"flickered"
3"pristine"
4"pulse"
5"unreadable"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences104
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences104
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences167
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen34
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1221
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions14
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions23
wordCount866
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity0.92
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Eva2
Silas1
Moreau1
London1
Lucien7
White1
Rory8
Needed2
persons
0"Eva"
1"Silas"
2"Moreau"
3"Lucien"
4"Rory"
places
0"London"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences63
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"not quite a smile"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.819
wordCount1221
matches
0"not with his body, which was lean bordering on sharp, but with something else"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences167
matches
0"had that effect"
1"knew that, she"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs93
mean13.13
std13.25
cv1.009
sampleLengths
018
141
27
331
430
53
67
74
81
943
102
112
124
1315
1435
155
1613
1729
185
192
201
2147
2216
234
248
252
264
2750
2836
2913
302
3128
326
332
341
3523
362
3725
383
398
4024
4142
423
437
442
453
4637
4724
4815
492
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences104
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs146
matches
0"was feeling"
1"was standing"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences167
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount871
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount33
adverbRatio0.03788748564867968
lyAdverbCount10
lyAdverbRatio0.011481056257175661
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences167
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences167
mean7.31
std6.11
cv0.835
sampleLengths
05
11
21
311
46
59
626
77
822
99
1013
1117
123
137
144
151
1612
1718
1813
192
202
214
227
238
249
2526
265
2713
286
294
3010
316
323
335
342
351
363
377
386
3917
401
411
4212
4314
442
454
468
472
484
4924
74.45% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.46107784431137727
totalSentences167
uniqueOpeners77
37.88% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences88
matches
0"Just out of reach."
ratio0.011
97.27% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount27
totalSentences88
matches
0"She crossed the tiny flat"
1"His heterochromatic eyes, one amber"
2"He leaned against the doorframe,"
3"His mouth curved, not quite"
4"She stepped aside."
5"He entered, and the flat"
6"He filled rooms not with"
7"He set his cane against"
8"She watched him examine her"
9"His hand went to his"
10"His given name, which she'd"
11"She couldn't tell with him,"
12"His fingers moved to his"
13"She knelt between his spread"
14"His gaze dropped to it,"
15"She didn't apologise for the"
16"He didn't flinch."
17"He pressed his hand over"
18"His jaw tightened."
19"She'd seen him in worse"
ratio0.307
62.27% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount70
totalSentences88
matches
0"The knock came three times."
1"The kind that didn't ask"
2"Rory's hand froze on the"
3"The second round of knocking"
4"She crossed the tiny flat"
5"The door swung wide, umbrella"
6"Lucien Moreau stood in the"
7"His heterochromatic eyes, one amber"
8"He leaned against the doorframe,"
9"The charcoal suit was immaculate"
10"A bruise darkened his jawline,"
11"His mouth curved, not quite"
12"The use of her surname"
13"Rory glanced back at her"
14"Dishes in the sink."
15"Ptolemy, Eva's cat she'd been"
16"Research papers spread across every"
17"Nothing worth hiding."
18"Nothing worth showing him, either."
19"She stepped aside."
ratio0.795
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences88
matches(empty)
ratio0
96.77% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences31
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"Three months of silence, and he stood there acting like they were colleagues, like he hadn't vanished without a word after everything that happened between them…"
1"He filled rooms not with his body, which was lean bordering on sharp, but with something else."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags4
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences67
tagDensity0.015
leniency0.03
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
90.9233%