Run: 2026-04-24-01KQ0AJ1PDHAGX2YTRW056RQM7

Run Details

Duration:
32.8s
Cost:
$0.005627
Provider:
Xiaomi

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The amber glow from the bar's pendant lights caught the rim of Aurora's glass as she nursed a whiskey sour. Wednesday nights at the Nest were quiet. Three stools down, a man in a wool coat stared into a pint glass like it owed him money. Near the window, two women murmured over a shared bowl of olives. The green neon sign outside hummed against the rain-slicked glass, casting everything in a faint emerald haze that suited Silas's taste for atmosphere. She'd come down after a shift that had run late — a double order to Paddington, then a broken zipper on her delivery bag that had sent spring rolls tumbling across a stranger's doorstep. Her feet ached. Her hair, still damp from the rain, clung to her neck in dark threads. The crescent scar on her left wrist pressed against the cool wood of the bar as she lifted her glass. The door opened. A gust of cold air carried the smell of wet pavement and diesel. A man stepped in, shaking rain from a canvas jacket, his dark hair slicked flat against his skull. He turned to hang the jacket on the hook by the entrance, and the pendant lights caught the side of his face. Rory set her glass down. He hadn't seen her yet. He was scanning the bar the way people do when they're looking for someone or waiting for a table — eyes moving in measured sweeps, the practiced habit of someone who'd spent years cataloguing rooms. His jaw was harder than she remembered. The softness that had lived in his cheeks during their university years had been carved away, leaving angles she didn't recognize. "Marek." He turned. For a full two seconds, he didn't move. Then his mouth twisted into something that was almost a smile. "Rory Carter." He crossed the bar in four strides and dropped into the stool beside her. Up close, the changes were sharper. A thin white line bisected his left eyebrow. His knuckles were rough, the skin darkened along the edges like he'd spent years gripping things too tightly. He smelled like rain and motor oil. "You look—" He stopped. His gaze traveled over her face, her black hair, the delivery jacket she hadn't bothered to take off. "Different." "You look like you sleep worse than you used to." His almost-smile deepened. "Still reading people for a living?" "Reading menus for a living. Same skill set, lower stakes." Marek flagged down Silas, who was wiping the same spot on the counter he always returned to when he wanted to seem occupied without being involved. Marek ordered a gin and tonic without looking at the menu. Silas brought it without a word, his hazel eyes flicking between them once, brief and calculated, before he drifted back to the far end of the bar. "You're in London?" Rory asked. "Have been for — Christ, six years now? Seven." Marek lifted the glass, turned it in his hand. "After Prague, I bounced around. Berlin for a while. Then a job offer here. Cybersecurity consulting." He took a drink. "Sounds more important than it is." "I know the feeling." "You always did." He set the glass down and looked at her directly. His eyes were darker than she recalled — or maybe that was just the lighting. "Cardiff felt like another country when I left. Then it started feeling like another planet." Rory said nothing. She ran her thumb along the condensation ring her glass left on the bar. "I looked you up, after," he said. "Online. You know how it is. Typed your name into things. Found the university page, the one with all the Pre-Law students." He paused. "Nothing after that." "Nothing much happened after that." She took a sip. The whiskey sour was too sweet. She'd ordered it out of habit, not taste. Marek tilted his head. "You used to be impossible to lie to. You know that, right? You'd sit across from someone in the moot court practice room and just — pick them apart. Every filler word, every eye movement. Dr. Llewellyn said you were the most naturally gifted advocate she'd seen in a decade." "That was a long time ago." "Seven years isn't that long." "Depends on what happens in them." The rain picked up outside. It drummed against the windows in a rhythm that matched the low jazz Silas had queued up — something with a stand-up bass and a saxophone that sounded like it was playing from the bottom of a well. Rory traced the crescent scar on her wrist without thinking. A habit she'd never managed to break. Marek noticed. His gaze dropped to her hand, then lifted back to her face. Neither of them acknowledged it. "I'm sorry about Evan," he said. The name landed between them like a stone dropped into still water. Rory's fingers stilled against her wrist. "You heard about that?" "Small world, small city. Cardiff's a gossip engine." He turned his glass again. "Danny Pryce told me. We still text sometimes. He said you'd gone to London." "Danny always did have a mouth on him." "He was worried about you." "People say that when they mean they were curious." Marek exhaled through his nose. "You were never this cynical." "You were never this careful with your words." The silence between them wasn't empty. It was loaded, packed with the density of years and the particular weight of things neither of them had said when saying them might have mattered. Rory could feel the shape of what he wanted to ask — the bruise-colored curiosity behind his eyes. She could also feel the shape of what she didn't want to answer. "The thing about Cardiff," Marek said slowly, "is that I keep trying to remember if things were always bad. With him. With you two." He scratched the back of his neck. "And I can't. I remember the flat on Cathedral Road. I remember you hosting that dinner party where the smoke alarm went off and you threw the detector out the window into the garden. You were laughing so hard you couldn't breathe." "I remember." "You were—" He stopped again. Picked at the edge of his coaster. "You were someone I recognized." The words sat in the air. Rory lifted her glass, held it near her mouth, but didn't drink. "People change, Marek." "Yeah." He looked at his hands. "People change." Silas drifted back toward them, uninvited, and set a small bowl of salted nuts between them. His signet ring caught the light as he withdrew his hand. He didn't speak, didn't linger. Just the offering, then gone. Rory wondered if he'd overheard. She decided it didn't matter. Silas overheard everything. It was the reason people came to this bar. "Do you still draw?" Rory asked. Marek blinked. "What?" "The architecture sketches. The buildings around Roald Dahl Plass. You used to fill entire notebooks." He stared at her. Then he laughed — a real one, short and surprised, the kind that escapes before someone can catch it. "I have a notebook in my bag right now," he said. "Sketch of the National Museum. I was working on it on the tube." "That's something, then." "It's not the same. It's not — I'm not trying to be anything with it. It's just something I do." "Those were always the things worth doing." He studied her. The bar was quieter now. The two women by the window had left. The man in the wool coat had fallen asleep with his chin on his chest, and Silas was quietly shutting off the pendant light above him, as if dimming the room around his unconsciousness would keep him comfortable. "You know what I think about?" Marek said. "That summer. The one before everything. We took the train to Swansea and walked along the promenade, and you said — I think you were half-joking — that we should just keep walking until we hit the sea at the other end." "I remember that." "You were wearing that green jacket. The one with the broken zipper." Rory looked down at her delivery jacket. The zipper on this one worked fine. She'd fixed it herself with needle and thread the week she moved into the flat above the Nest. "People talk about regret like it's a single thing," she said. "Like you can point to one moment and say, that's where it went wrong. But it's not like that. It's — it's like water damage. By the time you see it, the rot's already inside the walls." Marek was quiet for a long time. The bass line on the speakers shifted into a new key. Outside, a siren wailed and faded. "I should have called you," he said. "After Danny told me. I should have found a way to reach you." "You didn't owe me that." "I didn't say I owed you. I said I should have." Rory turned to face him fully. His eyes were wet, though he'd never admit it. The white line through his eyebrow stood out under the light like a seam where something had been stitched back together. "You're here now," she said. "That's not the same thing." "No," she agreed. "It's not." Silas appeared at the far end of the bar, pulling the rag from his back pocket, ready for closing time. The clock above the shelf of whiskey bottles read half past eleven. Rory hadn't noticed the hours dissolving. "I work here most Wednesdays," she said. "When I'm not delivering spring rolls toPaddington." Marek pulled a pen from his jacket pocket — a mechanical one, well-worn — and wrote something on a napkin. He slid it across the bar without looking at it. "That's my number. The London one." Rory looked at the napkin. The numbers were neat, precise, drawn with the same hand that had sketched cathedral facades in Moleskine notebooks. "I'm not good at this," she said. "At what?" "Keeping people." Marek stood. He left a ten-pound note under his glass and pulled his canvas jacket from the hook. The rain had eased to a mist that clung to the neon sign outside, blurring its green edges into the dark. "You don't have to be good at it," he said. "You just have to answer when someone calls." He pushed through the door. The bell above it rang once, thin and clear, and then he was gone — swallowed by the wet London night and the glow of the streetlights reflected in the puddles along the curb. Rory sat with the napkin in front of her. The whiskey sour was watered down, the ice long melted. She folded the napkin once, twice, and slipped it into the pocket of her delivery jacket. Silas appeared beside her, collecting glasses with the economy of someone who'd done it ten thousand times. He didn't ask. He never asked. "Quiet night," he said. Rory stared at the space where Marek had been sitting. A faint ring of condensation marked his glass on the bar, slowly evaporating under the pendant lights. "Yeah," she said. "Quiet night."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags25
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"Marek said slowly [slowly]"
1"He stopped again [again]"
dialogueSentences72
tagDensity0.347
leniency0.694
rawRatio0.08
effectiveRatio0.056
91.85% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1840
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"tightly"
count1
1
adverb"slowly"
count2
highlights
0"tightly"
1"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
70.11% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1840
totalAiIsms11
found
0
word"scanning"
count1
1
word"measured"
count1
2
word"eyebrow"
count2
3
word"calculated"
count1
4
word"traced"
count1
5
word"silence"
count1
6
word"weight"
count1
7
word"could feel"
count1
8
word"comfortable"
count1
9
word"mechanical"
count1
highlights
0"scanning"
1"measured"
2"eyebrow"
3"calculated"
4"traced"
5"silence"
6"weight"
7"could feel"
8"comfortable"
9"mechanical"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences123
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences123
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"managed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences170
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen49
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1855
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions28
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions44
wordCount1248
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity1.2
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Aurora1
Nest2
Silas9
Paddington1
Marek13
Picked1
Rory15
Moleskine1
London1
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Silas"
2"Marek"
3"Picked"
4"Rory"
places
0"Nest"
1"Paddington"
2"Moleskine"
3"London"
globalScore0.899
windowScore0.833
16.67% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences75
glossingSentenceCount4
matches
0"smelled like rain and motor oil"
1"sounded like it was playing from the botto"
2"as if dimming the room around his unconsciousness would keep him comfortable"
3"appeared beside her, collecting glasses with the economy of someone who'd done it ten thousand times"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1855
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences170
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs82
mean22.62
std20.82
cv0.92
sampleLengths
081
171
256
35
468
51
621
72
853
923
1010
119
1210
1364
145
1544
164
1743
1817
1934
2023
2154
226
235
246
2560
2619
276
2818
294
3027
318
325
339
3410
358
3663
3773
382
3917
4018
413
428
4359
446
453
4615
4723
4824
493
93.85% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount4
totalSentences123
matches
0"been carved"
1"been stitched"
2"was gone "
3"was watered"
86.04% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount4
totalVerbs234
matches
0"was scanning"
1"was wiping"
2"was playing"
3"was quietly shutting"
8.40% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount9
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences8
totalSentences170
ratio0.047
matches
0"She'd come down after a shift that had run late — a double order to Paddington, then a broken zipper on her delivery bag that had sent spring rolls tumbling across a stranger's doorstep."
1"He was scanning the bar the way people do when they're looking for someone or waiting for a table — eyes moving in measured sweeps, the practiced habit of someone who'd spent years cataloguing rooms."
2"His eyes were darker than she recalled — or maybe that was just the lighting."
3"It drummed against the windows in a rhythm that matched the low jazz Silas had queued up — something with a stand-up bass and a saxophone that sounded like it was playing from the bottom of a well."
4"Rory could feel the shape of what he wanted to ask — the bruise-colored curiosity behind his eyes."
5"Then he laughed — a real one, short and surprised, the kind that escapes before someone can catch it."
6"Marek pulled a pen from his jacket pocket — a mechanical one, well-worn — and wrote something on a napkin."
7"The bell above it rang once, thin and clear, and then he was gone — swallowed by the wet London night and the glow of the streetlights reflected in the puddles along the curb."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1245
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount38
adverbRatio0.030522088353413655
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.004819277108433735
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences170
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences170
mean10.91
std9.12
cv0.835
sampleLengths
020
17
219
312
423
534
63
714
820
93
1013
1118
1222
135
145
1535
167
1721
181
192
208
2111
222
2314
246
258
2618
277
284
2918
301
3110
323
336
3410
3526
3611
3727
385
3918
4020
416
424
4313
4415
4515
463
4714
487
4924
42.94% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats12
diversityRatio0.28823529411764703
totalSentences170
uniqueOpeners49
98.04% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences102
matches
0"Then his mouth twisted into"
1"Just the offering, then gone."
2"Then he laughed — a"
ratio0.029
67.06% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount39
totalSentences102
matches
0"She'd come down after a"
1"Her feet ached."
2"Her hair, still damp from"
3"He turned to hang the"
4"He hadn't seen her yet."
5"He was scanning the bar"
6"His jaw was harder than"
7"He crossed the bar in"
8"His knuckles were rough, the"
9"He smelled like rain and"
10"His gaze traveled over her"
11"His almost-smile deepened."
12"He took a drink"
13"He set the glass down"
14"His eyes were darker than"
15"She ran her thumb along"
16"She took a sip"
17"She'd ordered it out of"
18"It drummed against the windows"
19"His gaze dropped to her"
ratio0.382
4.12% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount93
totalSentences102
matches
0"The amber glow from the"
1"Wednesday nights at the Nest"
2"The green neon sign outside"
3"She'd come down after a"
4"Her feet ached."
5"Her hair, still damp from"
6"The crescent scar on her"
7"The door opened."
8"A gust of cold air"
9"A man stepped in, shaking"
10"He turned to hang the"
11"Rory set her glass down."
12"He hadn't seen her yet."
13"He was scanning the bar"
14"His jaw was harder than"
15"The softness that had lived"
16"He crossed the bar in"
17"A thin white line bisected"
18"His knuckles were rough, the"
19"He smelled like rain and"
ratio0.912
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences102
matches(empty)
ratio0
26.24% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences49
technicalSentenceCount8
matches
0"The green neon sign outside hummed against the rain-slicked glass, casting everything in a faint emerald haze that suited Silas's taste for atmosphere."
1"She'd come down after a shift that had run late — a double order to Paddington, then a broken zipper on her delivery bag that had sent spring rolls tumbling acr…"
2"He was scanning the bar the way people do when they're looking for someone or waiting for a table — eyes moving in measured sweeps, the practiced habit of someo…"
3"Marek flagged down Silas, who was wiping the same spot on the counter he always returned to when he wanted to seem occupied without being involved."
4"It drummed against the windows in a rhythm that matched the low jazz Silas had queued up — something with a stand-up bass and a saxophone that sounded like it w…"
5"The man in the wool coat had fallen asleep with his chin on his chest, and Silas was quietly shutting off the pendant light above him, as if dimming the room ar…"
6"The numbers were neat, precise, drawn with the same hand that had sketched cathedral facades in Moleskine notebooks."
7"Silas appeared beside her, collecting glasses with the economy of someone who'd done it ten thousand times."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags25
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags16
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she agreed (agree)"
dialogueSentences72
tagDensity0.222
leniency0.444
rawRatio0.063
effectiveRatio0.028
79.6216%